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Sand Falls: Fallen Stars of the Reborn King; Sands shift and the stars fall
Topic Started: Mar 31 2007, 06:40 PM (8,156 Views)
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Story:
"So many falling stars..." a boy said, floating above nothing, only the sky above him was existant. "i'v never seen so many..."he said to himself.

"The sky is crying, the reason is not important, the tears are," a women's voice said to the boy.

"The falling stars?" the boy asked dazed.

"Yes, they are going to fall to the sands of this world were they shouldn't have, the sky means no harm but it's mistake may cause the world itself to die from being further posioned by the Venom King. one star will fall to the lost kingdom of Sand Falls where it will shatter bringing back the ghosts of the kingdom and the ghost of the venom king. I will be the one to banish the king away from the kingdom but from that point on i am powerless."

The world fliped and the boy landed, his feet slightly deep in the sand. A strange looking sash was rapped around his arm now.

"The venom king will have his minions gather fallen stars for him and search for my kingdom to regain his power and his treasure, you are the one who must stop him" the voice said, it sounded sweet and gentle but was serious and the boy could tell.

"I have to stop a evil who destoryed countless kingdoms? the world is down to 3 and the past remembers far more then that," the boy said, still dazed, he watched a creeping and sinister figure fade into view, but his dazed thoughts could not react properly with fear or bravory.

"you have to fight!" the voice yelled, a sword appearing in the boy's hand as the sinister figure charged quickly, as if the sand wasn't even there.

The boy was startled, the sword came up to block the first blow from the figure, but who ever this person was, he was far stronger then the boy, the sword slowly pressed down upon him making him fall to one knee and even when both hands agenst the sword the boy was being forced to the ground.

"You are not yet strong enough, that sash on your arm is but a dream at the moment, find the real one at the The hope Palace, it will give you the strangth you want, but hurry, it has begun, the first star has already fallen."

The boy watched as the sash around his arm disappeared, along with it the entire world along with the figure attacking him. "You must become strong, you must find allies, you must complete this quest or all things shall disappear, this part of the dream is showing what happens if you fail, you see nothing around you, because there is nothing around you, this is the future if you fail."

Jolting awake as his sister yelled in his ear the boy rubbed his head, that dream was so strange. "Jay! Hurry! there are a bunch of falling stars! more then I've ever seen!"

Jay looked at her for a second before rushing to the window. "The sky really is crying..." he whispered to himself. his sister stared up at the sky amazed, him fearing a dream.
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"Treasure hunters! Story Tellers! Travelers and more! All shall be pleased to find the Tablet of Sand Falls here at our town of Castle Bay! it is the only one of it's kind and gives clues and hints to the greatest treasure in existance! it tells of a legend so great is casts shame on all races for letting a event such as this be forgotten. This is something to tell people! come and see it for yourself and then tell it to your friends!" Was what was written on a bunch of flyers all over the place in every kingdom, and one flyer inperticular was flying though the desert wind twords what seemed like endless sand.

"grab that now!" a ghostly shadow said, a hairy minotaur followed the order to grab a flyer that was blowing in the wind and showed it to the ghost. "Well, that spirit may have managed to send me away from her kingdom, but thanks to these fools, i can have my minions get in some practice and get myself a map to what i seek... this is working out far too well... it seems the gods are rooting me on to oblivion so i can throw this miserable world into it!"

Legend of the venom king and Sand Falls:
A legend surfaces of a lost kingdom called Sand Falls, a place destroyed by a evil king, but as sand falls began to vanish in the sands the people rose and as they sank, they held to the evil king bringing him and his treasure with them. They sealed themselves away with the venom king till they all died, and the kingdom was lost, with the treasure.

The tablet that recorded this event also contains clues to where Sand Falls is and tells of guardians that protect the land. The first is the Gale of Beauty, a spirit that controls the winds around Sand Falls. The second is the Gear Guard, No one knows what it's name means, the tablet doesn't describe it. The third is a door that sealed the kingdom below away, and the 4th is the dead king of Sand Falls.

The guardians of this lost kingdom where placed by the same person who made this tablet originaly to ward off theves by showing the danger and also to keep the world from forgetting the venom king and Sand Falls. It is said that the venom king was the reason so many of the old kingdoms were wiped out.


Setting:
A massive desert, there are 3 main kingdoms, one's culture is based fully off Egyptian culture, the second kingdom's culture is very shabby and broken but they have been creating rifles and bombs for a short time now(old rifles, where you have to reload after every shot), while the last kingdom is based off ancent arabia. The desert contains many hidden secrets under the many grains of sand, the hot sun shinning down on the bandits makes for a good anger. Treasure is a massive part of the desert, as now there are only 3 kingdoms and 3 cultures, though the years has been millions that mysteriously disappeared.

Sin Alo: most of it's people are scrambled over their region, the palace resembles a castle and sits by itself with a river running though it, but unlike normal castles many bridges connect the 4 inner towers(there are 10 total towers, 4 inner, 4 outer, and 2 distant). The inner 4 dowers are near the river that runs though the great inner garden in the center of the castle that takes up most of the castle's space. The outer towers are at each corner, and the two distant towers aren't even connected to the castle, they almost out of sight of the castle, they often send signals back to the castle as warnings of sandstorms or attacks, the two towers themselves have been remade millions of times. Sin Alo also, though their people and culture disappearing, have managed to create a explosive powder that they use for rifles(Again, very old, and are made fully of metal and just covered in cloth to block out the sun so it can over heat and explode if you fire it off too fast and too many times) and bombs, which are normally the size of one's head or hand. While some of the culture of Sin Alo has faded, what stands is their main belief of Dragons being gods, they worship dragons and their kingdom it is not rare to sumble upon a real dragon, or a dragon statue.
The location of the tablet that tells the legend, this is also where the story starts, in a town called: Castle Bay. Castle bay contains a river port the leads to Sin Alo's palace. It also is one of the only functioning towns left in Sin Alo,

Amun: another kingdom on the desert world, just look at ancient Egypt's culture for that part of it, it is composed of 3 areas, the pyramids are collected on the edge of the main town, the town is called Rah by the people of Amun, but called Graveyard by the other two kingdoms, it is also called a Necropolis which means a town for the dead. a town a while away from Rah is called Star gaze, famos for a pyramid with a map of the stars at it's tip. Even further away from Rah is the town the pharaoh lives in and has his palace look over, it is called Golden Sparrow.

Agrabah: A kingdom with the culture much like ancent arabia. The made town is Bizarre. Agrabah contains many shops so it would be smart to stop by if you need anything. Unlike the other kingdoms, Agrabah has many walls, it's boarders grew over time so there is one good sized wall around the entire kingdom's borders(though like most of the kingdoms, the kingdom's entire area is mostly sand). Many older walls were left to crumble so you may find one of the older boarders partly standing up or something like that. along with the ruins of old walls there are many hidden underground temples that gold and jewels were hidden in.

Paradise: a hidden land, with many trees and much water, it is beautiful and safe, this place is the home of the angels. Paradise is hidden away. Paradise is a series of tropical islands. Far away from the desert. The ocean takes up about 50% of the while while the desert takes up the other half. Though Paradise is the only land other then the desert in the ocean.
-Wing Island: The island the angels live on, it is infact a paradise. It contains a large lake in the middle which is filled with fish, the trees and such are more as a forest then a jungle layout.
-Great Eye Island: A tropical island covered completely with jungle. The outer island is a giant ring around the inner island making it like a eye in shape, though also the jungle vines and other plants have some of the island hidden. Eye Island is extreamly large, much bigger then wing island.
-Burning Island: a small island composed of many small volcanos, in a few hundred years it will be a good sized island.
-White Island: found far north of the rest of the islands, white island is the only section of paradise that has snow durring winter.
-View Island: A island with a tall mountion that takes up the entire land mass, the mountion is very dangerous but the top of the island can be viewed from any island except white island.
-Broken island: A mysterious island split in half a giant whirl pool sets in the center of the crack and also there is many caves that go far below water level keeping hidden lakes under there was well.

Desert Universe: This universe is empty, and while the planet orbits the sun, alone with it's moon, there are stars seen from the ground, the stars are orbs of light high up in the sky, all but a select few are far and the same distance from the planet as the moon... most of them anyway.

Ruins of Sand Falls: Surrounded by sand storms is the ruins of the lost kingdom, the kingdom that took the venom king with it, it was called sand falls but no one can remember why.

Kinds of beings
-Races you can be-
Humans: Human like, duh, you know about humans, the only difference from earth's humans is that these can learn to use magic, though you have to be born with a curtain trait to be able to use magic as well. So less then half of the humans have the ability to use magic, and far far less then that figure out they can use it and start to (spell books can give people without the ability to use magic the ability to use magic with it). If a human gets the eyes of a demon then they gain the ability to see farther and see clearly, they can also see in the dark and if they try they can see heat so they can track thermal signatures.
Angels: Human like people, their hair is light blue and white and their backs have beautiful white wings. They are often stuck up because their home is Paradise and because humans don't have wings. Angels can not use the shade element, but other then that they all can use magic.
Demons: Do not have complete hearts, each demon looks diffrent then the last. the only common thing is that demons ALWAYS have 2 main eyes, if the main eyes are damaged then teh demon can no longer preform any magic. A demon can also trade his eyes with a human's(if the human agrees) to become a former demon. If a demon drinks the blood of an angel or a lost angel, their strength doubles, so demons are often hunting angels and lost angels and trying to get their blood to strengthen themselves. Demons can preform magic like humans. If demons fall in love then instead normal feeling of love they will feel burst of pain due to their incomplete hearts this causes many demons never to find mates. One would think demons would be wiped out because of this, but Mother Demons are the main sorce of demons, while no two demons look alike most demons are related though mother demons who do not need mates to have children.
Former Demons: Unlike when they were demons, former demons have full hearts and can feel all human emotion, they look human but have a strange looking tail so but that's the only difference from humans at this point. Former Demons may be able to use magic(if they have the trait) but they can't use the element Sun.
Former Demon's Tail(very flexible intill the first extention, the first extention and past that are hard as stone, the tail is very long and as thick as a monkey tail(not counting the large ending area)
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Were-Dragons: creatures who can switch between a dragon form and a human form. Were-Dragons can't use magic.
Dragons: brilliant reptiles as smart as humans, they are 3 versions of dragon, Long Dragons, Power Dragons, and Small dragons. Long dragons have very long bodies the are much smarter the power dragons, long dragons also can talk so this makes them seem even more intelligent since they can share their wisdom. Power dragons are strong dragons, more like dinosaurs then long dragons, their body is muscular and their wing span is great, they eat a kind of stone found in the mines and mountains far north so they can breath fire, though they are the stupidest of all 3 kinds of dragon so the need to eat this mineral is instinct and not intelligence. Small dragons are common dragons, they can look like power dragons or long dragons but can not grow bigger then the size of a horse.
Skeletons: once thought to be walking dead, living skeletons are actually beings that just look like human skeletons, they naturaly hold themselves together with magic and can be rebuild by the very same magic so separating one bone from the other is only a short time solution to them. There is a small glowing orb inside their skulls, if you smash this orb then the magic will shut down and the soul of the skeleton will leave it's body making them dead, like most people expect skeletons to be. They can not use the element River, but other then that they can use magic. Skeletons have children by unknown ways, if two skeletons are in love then sooner or later a baby skeleton will appear as if out of thin air.
Lost Angels: angels who have killed another angel have their beautiful white wings replaced with skeleton versions of themselves, lost angels will often be sent out of paradise to live in the desert with humans. Can use magic.
Dark Angel: a angel with black feathers, a dark angel has the ability to jump back in time a total of 10 seconds every week(REAL week, in our world, not the desert). But they can not use Sun or Gale elements.
Last: A wooden being, they have no face but have a mask that floats around them, they can have it float anywhere or lay on any part of their body, every mask is diffrent for every diffrent lost, though some are very similer and hard to tell the diffrence unless you look at the blank side. Woodens have black wrappings that are part of their bodies, the wrappings are long cloth that come out of some areas of their body and can wrap around things, normaly the lost's wooden body. The black wrappings come out of the following places: Out of the back of their head, out of the shoulder blade area on their backs, and out of their heels on their feet. They do have green hair and have 2 wide toes by the way, just small details. They breed like plants, using seeds and pollin. Lastly they have the ability to store things in pocket dimentions and to control all the energy in their body giving them perfect physical balance and great agility. They can only master one element, that element is diffrent for every last.

-Other Paradise Races(Can only be these later in the story)
Missing Link: Not exactly the missing link of evolution, though this might be a seperate branch of the evolution chain. Missing links have 30% of their brain active, they can mimic sound and as a secondary memory that takes up 20% of the brain due to it's emmence detail. All data is stored in the second memory and if a missing link consintrates hard enough they can search though the second memory. The remaining 10% is normal brain activity. A missing link acts mostly like a gorrila and is about as strong as one as well. Missing links and gorrilas will sometimes be in the same traveling groups.
Full Werewolf: It is a werewolf that turns into a wolf to every fine detail everytime moon light hits them, if you with for a werewolf to not transform durring then have them avoid moonlight. Durring a full moon though a werewolf can not avoid transforming as the full moon causes effects that makes the transformation inexcapable. Pure sunlight will change a werewolf back to human form.
Half Werewolf: exactly like a full werewolf but they become a hybrid of a wolf and a man when hit by moon light instead of a full wolf.
Blood Werewolf: These are beings who control when they transform into werewolf form, though once they transform they need moonlight to transform them back.
Werecat: Like a blood werewolf these have full control of when they transform into their form and need moon light to take them back out. Werecats varry though from many diffrent big cats allowing a werecat to turn into a tiger or a cheeta or something of that sort.
Burned: A kind of being who's arms are made of volcanic rock and when angry the being will burst into flames. Though burneds don't get hurt by fire and heat, though the cold will often freeze up the movements of thier arms and will force them to fall asleep.
Broken: A broken loves the dark, as their home is the caves of broken island normaly. A broken's eyes can glow and their hands have metal formed into claws on their fingers to allow them to dig. A broken can also see in the dark even if their eyes aren't glowing. Broken's natural can control the element of shade but sun is extreamly hard to master for them.
Stone Guard: A monkey sized creature who has a tail that lets out red ink, where ever the red in is marked on a solid the stone guard gains the ability to teleport there. Stone guards are made of rocks though and can not use magic except for a magic book.

-Minions races of the Venom King-(You can't be these)
Minotaurs: they look like a mix between a buffalo and a human, they are large and powerful but extremely stupid, in their brain is a natural map so they remember everywhere they have been and can use this natural navigation to find their way to anywhere they have been before, but this takes up most of their brain and is one of the reasons the minotaur is so stupid. They also can't use magic.
Venom people: People with 8 large spider legs and snake like fangs in their mouth to inject venom into their pray. Their hair is always purple. They can not use magic.

-Wild animals-(Can't be these)
Desert Wolves: Wolves with fur that magic the color of the sand, they are fast and don't need to eat very often due to their bodies taking in light for food, like plants do. Desert wolves eat cactus for water, they are very smart and take the needles out of the cactus before beginning to eat it, they will often grind up the needles with their teeth since the needles are already in their mouth from taking them out.
Hawks: a kind of bird that eats snakes.
Snakes: duh, snakes.
Spiders: ... do i EVEN need to tell you?
Sand spiders: Giant spiders the size of horses, they are extremely fast and their pray is humans and desert wolves or anything else they can get their fangs on.
Camels:... *doesn't bother telling you*
Silver fish: creatures that eat anything they can, including humans, they are small and fast and can jump right out of the water like a missile. They populate the area of the river between Castle Bay and Sin Alo Castle. They look like small rays of light running over the water intill they attack, their coloring is what gave them their name.

Magics
Magic uses the elements most of the time.
1:Circles can summon commands, diffrent designs do diffrent things, only the steady of hand can use this because mistakes can cause massive back fires.
2: Objects and weapons that are enchanted to control the element, normally there are staffs from paradise that are found due to luck, they randomly appear in the desert in a flurry of the staff's chosen element.
3: Magical books: if you are holding a book with magic words in it, then say the magic words, a spell is cast, though spell books are rare and worth a lot because even one with 0 magical skill can use them. Magic books also allow things that normaly can't use magic to use magic also including desert wolves(if they are given the ability to speak by a spell book) and Were-Dragons.
4: Summoning coins: these are coins that summon monsters to battle with you, though if the monster is destroyed the coin will disappear. (must ASK about having a summoning coin first, so PM me)

Magic's elements:
Sand(earth), Sun(light and fire), River(water and ice), Gale(wind), and Shade(darkness).
The easiest to use is Sand of course, though to get to the point you can shift stone is a diffrent story. thieves and people who run alot use the sand element the most.
Sun is a powerful element of the desert, those who fight often wish to use this element to burn away anyone in their path.
River: Travelers will often use this element to stay alive in the desert as they go along they have a bunch of water magically sealed into small containers so they can carrier more without gaining too much wait. Though River is water and ice, ice is extremely hard to master, like stone of the sand element.
Gale: Used by various people, just as the desert gale varies. The gale can mimic low level sand and is good for traveling just like river can be. It is good for people who dodge more then block and attack since the sand normally gets in the way.
Shade is a very interesting element, most people don't even know this element exists. you use darkness to create cold and such, you use it to block the light and also to make shadows take solid forms and be used as a weapon as they extend past their normal limits. This element needs a shadow most of the time, with no shadows the element will only be able to weaken the light around it.


To join...
Name:
Age:
Gender: (Male or female)
Race:
Weapons:
Home Kingdom: (None, Sin Alo, Amun or Agrabah)
Bio: (Must contain magical prefences if you have any, like what you do, how well you do it, and how you do it(staff, enchanted sword, or circles))
Apperance: (Picture or discription)

My characters...
Name: Jay Legends
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Weapons: A sword he normaly keeps in it's sheath which is held in his hand or held from his belt. He also has a enchanted ring and a bag with a few mini bombs and a spell book. Finaly he has a paint brush used to create circles for magic.
Home Kingdom: Sin Alo
Bio: Jay is a strange guy, he is a noble theif(a theif with a honer system). His honer system is to never take more then he needs to survive and to help others with his skills along with a few other rules. Jay's personality is a little diffrent as when he gets mad he may start to cry and afterwards be extreamly depressed and won't speak to anyone, except his sister. He is very protecitve too, some objects such as an astroglobe given to him by his father and also people, his sister and if he had any friends then them too.
His magic annoys the local law enforcement alot, His ring gives him control over the sand and stone but all it does is form sand and stone around into hands and it has limited amount of power, the ring has to be barried in sand for a while to recharge it's energy after it fizzles out. While his ring does all the work with stone and sand he controls the elements River and Gale very well, his sword boosts this power. His spell book contains many interesting spells such as: Sun Burst(a large blast of fire and light), Spark(makes a small flame, enough to like the fuse on a bomb), Shadow trap(anyone with a body part covered with a shadow gets frozen in time for a short amount of time), Cool breeze(Mixes Gale and Shade elements to cover someone in a cooling breeze and shadow to let them relax away from the desert heat for a while). Speak(Allows anything that can't speak to speak, it brings cactuses to life and talk or gives wolves the ability to talk or it could bring a statue to life for a short amount of time to tell a story of what it has seen), and finaly it has vanish(both shade and sun combined to turn 1 thing invisible(if you cast it twice the second thing you cast it on will be the thing to turn invisible).
Apperance: Jay has dark hair, he wears... the same stuff as this guy... Though jay looks diffrent then him and he doesn't wear anything around his neck, the guy in the picture also holds the exact same sword jay owns. Jay's eyes are blue and i think that about covers it.

Name:Aurora Legends
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Race: human
Weapon: 10 knives(sometimes weilded all at once), a few bombs, and a summoning coin.
Home Kingdom: Sin Alo
Bio: Aurora is silly, though she acts silly she has a temper, if you mess with here she may just blow up(or blow YOU up to be more exact). She normaly does nothing, she is cleaver and can mimic actions to the very pinky movements so if she has trouble fitting in somewhere she just mimics someone.
Her magics are the use of a summoning coin and the use of a enchanted hidden cloth that allows the wind to quicken her movements and reactions causing her to seem faster and stealthier then she would be without it. The summoning coin summons 3 things(it's random what pops up) 1 is a giant gorrila made of sand and rock, another is a strange human like being made of sand also, and the last is large blue long dragon.
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Name: Eric
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Weapons: A sword named "Glory" and magic
Home Kingdom: None
Bio: He is a great warrior, he was born in the desert and brought to paradice by an angel, though they were quickly both sent back to the desert due to humans not being allowed there. The angel and Eric lived together intill a few years ago, eric has been a body guard since then, anyone who needs a body guard would just pay him and he would be able to protect them from anything. At times he dreams of paradice, and a young girl he used to play with as a kid. though out of his dreams he often can't remember paradice or the girl, so he sleeps oftenly unless he is working as a body guard. His spells are all using a book, on the cover and back of the book is a bunch of circles which he uses in combos along with the spells in the book to cast many diffrent spells.
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When there is peace man dreams of more gained by war, When there is war man only dreams of peace and what he has lost.
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The Venom King
One of the most powerful beings in the world, long ago he and his army managed to wipe out all but 3 kingdoms in the giant desert world. The venom king knows the location of paradice but was originaly planning to destory it after Sand Falls. At the moment the Venom King is a ghost, trying to collect the fallen stars and find the location of Sand Falls again and regain his treasure and his 8 legendary swords.

The venom king has control over 2 races completely: The Minotaurs and the Venom People Along with many demons, skeletons, humans, and lost angels.
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General Monshi (Nicknamed Mon' Sir by General sixexthree)

A General of the Venom King's army, he is loyal and proud, when the venom king was beaten he put many of the venom king's followers into a 'Soul Skip' form, their bodies becoming ghosts and skipping from body to body dormantly intill the venom king awakened. General Monshi is a lost angel, though even his skeleton wings have been cut off. He HATES General Sixexthree, who gave him a ridiculous nickname based off the word "Monster" by shortening his name to Mon and always saying Sir right after that.
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General Sixexthree(Actuall name: Jo Jo)

Jo Jo was part of a family of clowns, his family belonged to a traveling circus in Amun's kingdom. The clowns were always mistreated except him due to at the time he was young and the circus manager didn't mind someone young messing up. Jo Jo remained himself Sixexthree due to it meaning Six times 3 or 666, which in the circus was thought to be a number that represented a horrible anti-god who's perpuse is destory all things people have faith in. Jo Jo renamed himself after meeting the Venom king, who came to the circus looking for people to join his army. 3 days after no one joined the venom king wiped everyone out except Sixexthree, who at the last minute smiled, said a stupid joke and agreed to join the king. Durring his grandfather's life time there was a style called: 'Dragon' which was made by people in Sin Alo, it was very popular but now adays he and Jay are the only ones who still have the clothing to form that style.
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General Yin(Has no other names)

Yin had no name, his parents never bothered to name him, from that point one he acted on his own, he found out how to talk walk and so one with little to no help from adults. And from there he began to be more and more intouch with nature. At many points he seems emotionless, he was given his name by Jo Jo because he didn't think anyone could go without a name. Yin's ability with nature is amazing, infact he has gotten grass to grow in the middle of the desert by his will power and strong bond with all things. He can nearly control all low intelegence animals due to his strong connection and can figure out what they want and what they know easily. He can even find out what people want and know if they ARE smarter then normal beasts, and he is smart enough to turn their wants and thoughts agenst them and their team mates. While Yin is still young and he carries no weapon, his ability to mess with minds and control nature is makes up for it and goes beyond the strangth of a normal person
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General Ichigo

Ichigo was born an angel, and was very naive and curious his entire life. He went off from the angel's homeland to learn about the world. One day he met a demon, and because of his immense curiousity and generosity, offered to trade eyes with her. What he gained was very unexpected, from it his eyesight and clarity of what the world. He could then see the corruption, the evils, and attrocities that all races done. Then he went off to the angel world, and trained to forget what he saw. But one day he tried to get an army to go and conquer the foreign lands, and bring order. However they stripped him of his wings and exiled him from there, to forever wander the harsh desert. After years of traveling he came across the Venom King, or at least one of his generals. Soon he met the Venom King, and agreed to join him so he could one day create the utopia he dreams of making.
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General Bosive

General Bosive makes friends with many demons, His missions are normaly tracking missions and gathering information, He is one of the few generals who don't completely like death, though bosive will fight if his target resists being taken in if it's a order, oftenly instead of killing people Big will eat them so bosive doesn't have to do stuff like that. Bosive himself rarely uses any of his weapons. Bosive and Yin are the youngest generals in Venom King's army, the two youngest are also two of the newest, while Monshi is one of the original generals of the venom king. Bosive complains alot, and has 4 demons who are always with him: Big, March, Rings, and Five.
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General Unaru

Unaru, the demon wolf, originally travelled with Jay and the others for a brief time before a clash with Sammael convinced him to meet with the venom king. He lived in the wild for many years, and despises all humans and angels because of his unique viewpoint. His dream is the destruction of all the remaining cities. He's vicious at heart, and will do anything he can to get what he wants, including harming others. He holds being demon as something to be proud of, and between killings, isn't afraid to remind others of how superior he is. He is afraid of no one, but may be afraid of something...
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General Sist(Called Sis by JoJo)

The only current female general, she has a dark past that often haunts her making her act cruel, stubbern, mean, depressed, and mostly negitive stuff. she is a master at magic and her spear is made to teleport when she throws it, it teleports to excelerate it's speed and disappear and charge at diffrent angles making it impossible to prodict except for Sist herself.
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General Necro Santic(JoJo calls him Bob)
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The common minotaur is extreamly strong and it take many blows to take down. While the minotaurs are strong by themselves, there are many of them, leaving only their stupidity to be a weakness.

Most skeletons aren't in the army of the venom king, but the ones that are wear suits of armor to provent broken bones. The suits of armors sink easily in the sand but are well connected and enchanted, so when fighting their stance is rarly altered unless enough strangth to blow a house away is pushed upon them. The skeletons are carried around by minotaurs, usely on their shoulders or their backs.
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Infinity Squad
A team of 3 powerful skeletons who are pros at destroying things and going quick. Long ago Infinity Squad took out a town all by themselves using summon coins that caused expolsions. Now they use rifles, bombs and the summon coins still. Their rifles aren't normal though, they don't need to be reloaded thanks to the bullets being made of sand. The rifles have hidden circles all over them that makes it so all thats needed for them to reload is for the tip of the barrel to be dipped in sand and then pointed at the sun or moon. After that the gun is ready to fire 10 shots.

Infinity squad wears long black pants with various designs on them(Co has outlines of flowers, Go has designs of flames at the bottom with flying embers on the rest, and Lo has lightning bolt like designs). Their jackets are black with gold linning the edges of them. their head are wrapped in black cloth with feathers sticking out of the top bunch(beware of the feathures).

Lo is the smartest(and leader), Co is the strongest, Go is the fastest. Lo is the only one with something extra, the ability to see auras.
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March

March can see and talk to ghosts, he can not be killed eather, though he can be disabled and hurt. He is known as a Zombie Demon, and is often depressed or calculative, depending on what kind of day it's been. Below is his first appearance in the RP, it will describe him. Along with below, his empty eye sockets are perfect circles.
"A Man with pure white skin and black hair nodded, he had no eyes and parts of him seemed to be stitched back together, he was a demon who could not die, it was a strange power, but he was weak on the other hand and oftenly got cut in half or loosing a limb in a sword fight so he was like that, he doesn't even know where his true eyes are."
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Five

Five is a demon who looks human, he has a single horn on his forehead and dragon arms along with 3 dark tenticals on his back. Five strangely has gained a complete heart unlike normal demons, he gained a complete heart because of a strange trade made with someone that ended up letting him keep his demon form but gain a complete heart, it is known as a perfect trade and it was done out of love. Now five flirts with every girl he meets because the human girl he feel in love with died long ago and he flirts out of habit having flirted with this girl for almost a entire human lifetime.
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Rings

Ring's incomplete heart is diffrent then normal demons, instead of negitve emotions rings can only feel possitive emotions, and he also has trouble talking full sentences. Below describes him.'
"The being had a round head and it's body was small, the end of it's long flappy ears sepperated into 3. His ears were aso used as hands. The beings hair was a darker blue almost black and it's big eyes where wide and yellow. It's small body had small arms and legs, though they where hidden as he was wearing a mini cloak like thing. On his long heres where yellow ring like designs as well. "
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Big

Big eats humans, he is very stupid but can track scents better then any normal animal or demon can. Below will describe him.
"A giant strange demon slamed it's two front legs onto the dock at castle bay and started to sniff the wood. The demon had 6 long arm/legs, 2 were holding up a large black orb above it's back, the other four were being used to walk. It had a total of 30 tails. It's fur was black and white while 2 eyes on it where yellow and the size of human eyes 2 other eyes right under those were large and red, oviously not it's true eyes. It's head was round except for the top of it's head seperated into spike like shapes, 4 of it's teeth were too long to fit in it's mouth 2 pointed up, 2 down, it's nose was hidden as well though it was easy to see it was sniffing with it."
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Full Dragon Outfit-Jay(Ultimatefighter's character)
His ancesters created the dragon suit style, jay knows how to activate it's magical qualities because of that. The magical abilities are 5 speed boosting powers. The dragon style was popular long ago.
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Tabet of Sand falls-Jay(Ultiamtefighter's character)
A tablet that tells the legend of sand falls and the venom king. Also clues to getting to sand falls.
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Infinity rifle-Lilim(Zephos64's character)
A rifle magicaly enhanced, it has many magical circles on it, it reloads by diping it's barrel tip into the sand and then pointing it at the sun. each reload holds 10 shots. The infinity rifle was made for the Infinity squad by General Sist.
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Feather-Unaru(General, owned by Blinking Rune)
A feather droped by Co of the infinity squad, it has three powers. it turns diffrent colors when using the power, it came from a black king phoenix.
Broken wing: yellow, it disables one of your body parts and also one of someone else's, it doesn't work as a curse so when the feature is a mile away the effects no longer work.
Phoenix Flight: red, it allows the ability of flight.
Sparrow Call: Blue, it turns sand into solid blades, very good for making short work swords or something.
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Bones' skull-Jay(Ultimatefighter's character)
A skull from a skeleton that worked for the venom king, he gives information and has a circle on his skull to make him go dormant by sealing him in stone or awakening him.
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Broken Heart Chain-Loden(Loden Van Baruse's character)
A chain that gives power to it's holder, first you say Brake and it activates, then you say eather power or force. Force sends a kenetic energy burst into anything the arm the chain is around is touching. Power causing the arm to be filled with superstrangth for a short while.
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Last words of Dinso-Eric(Ultimatefighter's character)
'I am Dinso, this is most likely my last battle, I do not hold much and i do not live to serve, i broke the rules and i'm proud of it, freedom and balance are far more important then the miner good, the greater evil always seems to lose in the long run, and fire doesn't always burn protected wood. I say this because many people think otherwise, wood burns with fire they would say, i am made of wood, and fire did not burn me this time. I don't agree with what most other lost say about sins of the world, nor do i agree with the current approch to it'
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White Jim Bomb Bags-Loden(Loden Van Baruse's character)
The inner bomb bag altered the size of the bombs and a coin summons a constant stable amount so as long as the entire bomb isn't empty the coin doesn't brake

The outer bag looked like silk and felt like a fusion between iron and leather. The bags got cold easily but heat is turned into stored energy which was ejected into the inner bags to make a third kind of bomb that needed a magical artifact that used kenetic force to weild. though the energy never seemed to over load due to if it got close then it would be sucked into a second hidden coin inside the bag, it was known as a Seal coin, it sucked things in instead of out. The bags each had diffrent designs on them.

The gale bomb bag was brown with the lower quarter of the bag being white with the design of spinning winds coming off(also white). The gale bombs causes a great shockwave of wind, there is a chance the shockwave will create a sand storm. If a spin is put onto the bombs when thrown a twister will from after a weak shockwave. if two gale bombs explode while touching then it will cause a vacume sucking everything around it twords that point for a few seconds.

The normal bomb bag was brown with the lower quarter was red with the design of small yellow explosion on the rim between the two colors. easy to say the bombs blow things up.

The Ice Bomb bag was brown with light blue lower quarter, the light blue part extending up with designs of ice crystals and snow. The ice bombs would explode in one of 3 ways, depending on the spin put on them. A horazontal will make it explode sending a freezing gale everywhere along with a few ice spikes. A vertical spin will create a ice wall. No spin will explode with just a burst of ice freezing everything in a giant ball of ice, the ice is temperary and short lived due to the desert weather.

The energy bombs were unlimited but took time to create. They would explode with a shockwave and large amounts of shocking and burning cinders that looks like a deadly sandstorm. If a spin is put on the bomb it won't explode and will hit it's target and attempt to continue to spin causing a grinding, burning, shocking attack. The shockwave is far too large to use close range so if your enemy is near you it's best to put a spin on the bomb.

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Miracle Powers: Some people are born with powers that are natural tied to them, like bosive and his storms and knight George and his ability to comeback from the dead and not age. One of the most dangerous miracle power is currently that of Islan who's complex power allows him to steal magical abilities from people not only with miracle powers but if they used a magical object enough he can copy that ability as well.
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Name: Loden Van Baruse
Age: Quite old
Gender: Male
Race: Former Demon
Weapons: Bombs... Lot's of bombs... He carries them in a Magic Bag that makes them smaller and lights them once pulled out. There's also a coin on the bottom that summons more bombs to keep the bad filled.
Home Kingdom: None, although he stays near Sin Alo... for the bombs.
Bio: A former demon that stayed in hiding, to not be killed, until he found a human to trade eyes with. his first day with emotions, he noticed a fireworks show, and went about collecting money and treasure to obtain he magic bag of bombs. He normally doesn't show emotion (force of habit) but get disturbingly excited when he gets to blow things up.
Apperance: He's tall with dark shaggy hair that covers his black eyes, and loose clothing under a long coat. The only striking things about him is his long tail, which stays mostly hidden under his coat, and how his eyes shine when he takes out a bomb.
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"Stop Theif!" Yell a man, his legs and arms covered in armor. The man worked for the law enforcement, he was followed by 3 others dressed exactly like him.

A boy was ahead of them running quickly, It was jay, he was holding a bag of gold. "Yeah, stop, sure!" jay laughed as he jumped and swated at the air infront of him, his ring activating and a near by sand stone walll morphed quickly, a sticking out and blocking the path.

Jay continued to run and came to a stop. He felt around and noticed his jacket was gone. "third jacket i'v lost, this is getting annoying, at least that one didn't match, i'll just have to get another one some time soon." Jay heard shouts coming from the way he was heading and ran to the side, making the ring waste it's remaining energy by creating a stair case of hands for him to run up, then making them disappear.

He stood on the roof of a building and looked around the town. Jay walked across the building calmly, "No one can catch Jay, the greatest theif of them all."
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Name: Akhet Bayoumi (Nemtyemsaf Merenre Hor Ankh Khaw Nebty Ankh Khaw Hor Nebwy)
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Weapon: dual khopesh (sickle-swords), enchanted dagger
Home Kingdom: Egypt
Bio: Nemtyemsaf Merenre Hor Ankh Khaw Nebty Ankh Khaw Hor Nebwy is a prince of Egypt, fourth in line for the throne. He really isn’t worried about having to rule the kingdom, being so far down in the Succession line, and wanders often, followed faithfully by the were-dragon Sammael Elkannah, who was given to him as blood-servant at birth. He enjoys fighting and living with the “common people,” much to the distress of Sammael, who is constantly trying to keep him out of trouble. Despite this constant protection, Merenre is a skilled caster of Magic Circles, his strongest element being Sun. His khopesh aren’t enchanted, though he has cast temporary marks on them in the past, but he does have a strongly enchanted dagger that he “borrowed” from his father’s hoard. The dagger is River-spelled. If it is stuck in the ground, it will draw water up from beneath the sands to make a small pool around it’s hilt. As a side effect, when the dagger is used as a weapon, blood will immediately be drawn from the body out of the wound, if the dagger is left in the body. On every adventure, Merenre chooses a different alias, and this time he has taken up the name “Akhet Bayoumi.”
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When traveling amongst the “common” people, Merenre does not wear the headdress shown here, but wears a plainer head covering, or simply goes without.

Name: Sammael Elkannah
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Race: Were-dragon
Weapon: Unarmed
Home Kingdom: None
Bio: Sammael was sold to the Pharaoh of Egypt by traders from below the Sahara as a young child. When Merenre was born, Sammael was bound to protect the young prince by a powerful spell-circle, which takes the form of shifting tattoos all over his body. Ever since, he has faithfully protected the prince, growing to enjoy his company despite the metaphysical shackles that held him down. On every adventure the prince enjoys, Sammael has done his best to keep Merenre from being harmed, at the expense of his own safety. Twice he has suffered a mortal blow for the prince, and was saved only by Merenre’s healing magic. When fighting, Sammael transforms into a large, black-scaled dragon. He can spit acid and exhale a poisoned fog, as well as use his claws, teeth, horns, and tail for devastating melee attacks.
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"Treasure hunters! Story Tellers! Travelers and more! All shall be pleased to find copies of the Tablet of Sand Falls here in our City of Rah! It is the only one of it's kind and gives clues and hints to the greatest treasure in existance! it tells of a legend so great is casts shame on all races for letting a event such as this be forgotten. This is something to tell people! come and see it for yourself and then tell it to your friends!"
Walking across town, Akhet and Sammael heard the cry, Sammael immediately giving his master a worried glance, praying to to Aten that the prince wouldn't run off to solve the mystery of Sand Falls. Akhet immediately started moving towards the crowd and the shouting man, knowing from Sammael's worried looks that this would be a good adventure to go on, if only to annoy his were-dragon retainer.
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"What a pleasent town, whoudn't you say General Mon', Sir?" A strange human said, he was standing a good distance away from castle bay, next to him stood a lost angel, who's skeleton wings where broken off leaving stumps where the bones should be.

"I told you, stop stop using that stupid "mon' sir" thing, idiots who would find it funny aren't smart enough to get the joke, and those who do get the joke hate your guts for speaking it out loud." The lost angel said staring at the human slightly angry.

"Yeah yeah, you just have no sence of humer, like Bob."

"HIS name isn't Bob you know, and if you keep calling him that he's going to kill you," the lost angel laughed. "The truth, now that is funny."

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Name: Zeldana (Zel)
Age: unknown
Gender: Female
Race: Angel
Weapons: Silver Staff
Home Kingdom: None
Bio: Zel is in exile from Paradise. She wears an overcoat all the time, no matter the weather. This garment allows her to hide her wings, which wrap around her shoulders like a cape.She never wears shoes, for they inhibit her sense of the earth. She carrries only her staff, which she uses to cast sun, sand, gale, and river magic. She arives in Castle Bay on a cargo ship, and begins walking around, looking for a group to join in an atempt to take down the Venom King, hoping that this act will bring her back in graces with her people.
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Every girl wants one guy she can go to in her sweats, hair a mess, makeup running down her face, eyes all red from crying, and the first think he says to her is "baby your beautiful"






......and means it.
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Zel steped off the boat and walked silently down the dock, her staff clicking each time it hit a plank. Aside from her beauty and the staff, most people cast her off as a normal human. As she entered the town she picked up a flyer off the ground and read it. interesting she thought, then began to walk around, examining the people, and the town.
Every girl wants one guy she can go to in her sweats, hair a mess, makeup running down her face, eyes all red from crying, and the first think he says to her is "baby your beautiful"






......and means it.
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Jay flipped around and landed on a dirt road, a smile on his face as he began to walk twords the hut the Tablet of Sand Falls was being kept at. He had been going there alot since his dream. Even stranger he has heard a rumers of Minotaurs being seen, every seems to think this means the race has finaly resurfaced from hidding while select few believe it means the venom king never died at all and was just waiting for a nice chance to strike.


((Enemy database updated, 2 people added))
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Name: Lilim
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Race: Former Demon
Weapons: Dark magic, sword
Home Kingdom: Agrabah
Bio: Lilim was born a demon near Agrabah and was a demon for most of her life. She trained with dark magic, potent because of the constant shadows the walls around Agrabah would cast. Recently she managed to convince a human to exchange eyes with her, so now she is a former demon, her tail always hidden under her clothes. Her new emotions has a tendency to overwhelm her, but she tries her best to keep them under control. Most commonly she will experience a very...deadly mood swing to everyone around her. Recently she has been training with a sword, which makes her feel superior to humans with her abilities in both. She also seems to hate skeletons for some unknown reason...
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Name: Kaitos
Age: 21 I guess >.>
Gender: He inisists that he's a guy
Race: skeleton
Weapons: body, summoning coin (bones), magic circle (sun), small amulet (sand), magical book
Home Kingdom: None
Bio: Kalas has been wandering for many years through the desert, only possible because he doesn't requier nourishment (being a skeleton). When he enters towns he likes to mingle as best he can in the crowd, insisiting that he is a gentleman. An old friend of his helped to carve magic circles onto his skull, his only permanent bone, so he can help defend himself. He also has a small amulet mostly used to construct bones out of sand if he loses a bone and can't replace it readly, and has a book of wind magic, which he has been studying from. He likes to use magic instead of physical attacks, because his body isn't very suited for physical battles. However he is very adapt at reconfigure himself into a variety of shapes and structures, which he uses in congunction with his magical abilities to make up for his lack of physical strength.
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A skeleton with a large backpack, which he almost always has with him. On his skull are various circles and other markings, used for most of his spells
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"We should take it by force now! the skeletons are in posision, the Minotaurs are set to charge, and even Jen is ready to go, and we ALL know how long it takes for jen to do anything important," General Sixexthree said walking forward quickly with a smile on his face.

"No! this town is the most popular stop in Sin Alo nowadays! you expect it to be a good idea to do something as stupid as that? we need stealth, and we need to wait for the minotaur army to GET here before we can charge them forward, if we tell them to charge now the stupid beasts might hit the wrong town ruining the entire operation. Stealth and time is what we need," General Monshi said grabing hold of Sixexthree's shoulder.

"Force and now!" Jo Jo said turning around and knocking Monshi's hand away.

"Stealth and later!" Monshi yelled back.
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Name:Ki naraku(called twilight)
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Race: lost angel
Weapons:magic,a sword enchanted with sun and shade magic
Home Kingdom: None
Bio: ki was a good angel and was powerfull as well but after he killed someone for insulting his sister he was exiled from paradise and became a lost angel.Ki after leaving paradise shanged his name to twilight a strange being obsesed with balance. he uses any magic but is fond of sun,shade,and river.Twilight is relaxed and acts cool.
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Aurora stared out of the window, bored, having nothing to do. Like Jay she had no friends in this town even if they were born here and currently live here, no one ever seemed to be nice enough to them to take notice. Jay's reason was because he's a theif and no one trusts a theif. Aurora's reason was because jay was a theif... and no one trust the sister of a theif.
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