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The League of Alterus: Protect the Outer Rim; A revised version of my RP(Check it out)
Topic Started: Apr 23 2007, 01:11 PM (185 Views)
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Background: In the Belt of Sorentious a galaxy far away from our own is another solar system and in this system, the planets Alterus and Kantar have been at war almost since the dawn of time. With many skirmishes in between, Total War has oly broken out twice under the current leadership of The League of Alterus, an alliance between a number of nation on the planet. Of the numerous soldiers that lost loved ones to the war, no one on Alterus has been effected more by the pain of war more than ‘Shadow King’, Mirak Licnev. Once the top covert operative of the League’s Military, he had the perfect life, until the day it was all ripped away. He lost everything on one fateful day, his fiancé, mother, older brother and sister, along with the complete annihilation of the entire Vanadei village, the only thing left to him was his twin brother Limak, whom he blames for his absence on that happened tradgic day.
Now he is known as the Shadow King, the most ruthless and brutal being on Alterus. He leads an army almost entirely made up of sentient beings he has killed and resurrected for this purpose. The leader of the Darkface, Hammer, is slowly moving on Alterus, starting on the outer rim of the galaxy, crushing every planet along the way. The Shadow King and his masses have been burdened with the task of stopping Hammer, by any means necessary.

Basically all characters that are initially introduce will be members of Mirak's Army granting them a special ability, one which will be known later.

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Race Descriptions

Creatons – Humanoid beings of various sizes. Creatons have no set beliefs, but rather embrace all of them. Each Creaton has two abilities from birth.

Huracko – Large Creatons with the ability to transform into flying beasts with amplified powers. Each Huracko has six or more special abilities and is the ultimate definition of a super-soldier with not limits except that they are unpredictable and must first learn to control the beast within them before they can move on to learn and master their abilities. They are crafted for war above all else.

Deilvana - Creatons haling from the village Deilvana, in the mountains are by far the most powerful of all Creatons. With a blood trait that allows them to shift into a half-beast state, with strength surpassing that of even the Huracko, the village was the most valuable in all The League's Nations. After there village was destroyed some went to other nations in The League. In their feral state they are almost invincible.

Sages – Magical humanoids consisting of large males and average females. Believing in many gods Sages are often arrogant, snobby and strong, they are highly skilled in the ways of magic and various weapon styles.

Kantarians – Kantarians are large, boarish creatures atheist. Ugly and carnivorous fierce, fearless and have ongoing conflict with Creatons. They have no abilities but are obscenely strong.

Hali – The Hali are an average sized elven-like race. Believing in the goddess of light and/or all gods. Ability adepts, they tend to have three - five powers. Most Hali have been enslaved on Kantar. Their world was overtaken nearly two millennia ago and they have served Kantarian masters since then. Hali are spell-casters, with few fighters. The Hali cannot be harmed by dark energy.

Humans – Haling from earth they come in all different shapes and sizes. Human's beliefs tend to vary. On average they have two abilities. Full blood humans are another rare find on Alterus. This is mainly because immortal humans are not very common. They hold the record for the second greatest number of Sub-Races. Ivory warriors, Shadow Blade victims, half-breeds, natural immortals and mortals are the human Sub-Races.

Lower Darkface – These vampiric henchmen of Hammer are usually large in size. They believe only in themselves. Darkface are band from entering Alterus through a portal. Any Darkface would be alone or in a small group and would have arrived on a ship far away from The League. Darkface are the purest evil there is. They do what the like, when they like, how they like, and almost no one can stop them.

Ro-Tan – Average or Large sized genetically grown humanoids. They believe in Gaea and control one element. Ro-Tan is a planet of scientist; to protect themselves they created elemental warriors. After the alliance was made many of the elementals were sent to Alterus as a gift to the people, they are highly educated in their element, making them extremely aware of their surroundings. To ensure that they are difficult to harm, their skin acts as moderate barrier.

Douroux – Half-beast, Half-humanoid beings of all sizes. They believe in unifying themselves with Rouxas. Three forms. Douroux are beast-shifters from the planet Rouxas. Very reclusive and rarely ask for help from non-Douroux. Separated into Blue-Bloods, Red-Bloods, Black-Bloods, and White-Bloods, each blood controlling a certain element (Water, Fire, Darkness, and Light respectively), the limits on the abilities of a pack is unknown. Any given Douroux may have multiple forms to switch between. (message me with your choices and I’ll more than likely approve them)

Elemental – Average sized spirit-humanoids. Believing in the galaxy itself, Sorentious.They can control up to three elements. Elementals, the oldest race in the galaxy and the basis for the elemental warriors of Ro-Tan. Unlike those of Ro-Tan, these elemental warriors control multiple elements at a time and in various ways. These being are not to be reckoned with by an average fighter or even an exceptional one, only experts should attempt to enter combat with an Elemental.

Shadows – Average sized beings of darkness. Belief rooted in the god of darkness. Shadows are a dying breed fond of darkness and beauty. They are natural warriors and archivists. Most living shadows take refuge on Alterus. Shadows fall in one of four groups. (Sub-races listed below)

Shadows (All Sizes)
Normal Shadows – These Shadows lived in the center of the Shadow Realm, where Hammer’s main base is now. Most of them were annihilated when Hammer raided the Shadow Realm and killed King Eagle I. Three of his daughters survived, but one daughter and his only son were killed. There were 600,000 Subjects in the kingdom. Just over a third of them managed to survive. Some opted to help the surviving Princesses escape and have scattered throughout the galaxy. Others decided serving Hammer was a better cause.

Necronic Shadows – These Shadows lived in the darkest parts of the Southern Shadowlands. Most remained there and joined with Hammer, but a few refused to be pawns and were either killed or forced out of their homes. These are the most powerful of the Necrons.

Light-Carriers – These Shadows lived in the northernmost regions of the Shadow Realm. This is where all the light goes. They are honorable and just and true. There were 300,000 in the colony before Hammer arrived. Only ten survivors are known. They were the only Shadows who stood a chance against him. He blitzed them and annihilated them before they could assemble.


Shadow Classes (All Races with Shadow Blood)
Shifters – Use their powers and the objects around them to turn external object into weapons or turn a body part into a bludgeoning energy. Shifters are the most useful shadows in battle. More powerful Shifters can use buildings or vehicles instead of simple small objects.

Defenders – Use their powers to form shields or barriers to protect themselves and others. Most Defenders are female. More powerful Defenders can shield entire cities.

Portal-Makers – Use their powers to transport themselves and others from one realm to another. More powerful Portal-Makers can go as far as from Earth to Alterus in a single trip.

Shadow Masters – Use their powers as energy projectiles. They are the only class capable of the Shadow Blast. More powerful Masters can blast farther…much farther.

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Weapon styles

Flat swords - Chinese & European style blades, usually two-handed
Curved swords - Katana, Naginata, and Kodachi
Staves - Bow staff, Wand, Cane, Scepter, Spear, and Scythe
Short - Axe, Mace, Sword, Sickle, and Knife
Projectiles - Bow & Arrow, Kunai, Ninja stars, Knives, and Card-blades(cards with razor-edges)
Chained - Mace, Sickle, Short-sword, and Kunai

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Age (by hundreds)
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Name: Mirak Licnev a.k.a Shadow King
Age: 3200
Race: Creaton (Deilvanan)
Abilities: Shadow Avatar, Mageye(Copy-sight), 2nd form(wingless-dragon)
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"My Lord, the King Milodain of Artisia is hear to see you." Mirak stares at the messenger, then looks at the young lady to his left.
Name: Jayne
Age: 1800
Race: Hali
Abilities: Combustion, Flight, Invisibility, and Telekinesis
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"The king may enter," She says, speaking for Mirak.
"Right away Lady Jayne," the messenger removes himself and immediately following his exit is the entrance of Milodain.
" Hello, Master Mirak, how do you do this day?" King Milodain inquired
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"Right then, straight to business with you as usual. Well the League has requested your assistance with a matter of life and death concerning this galaxy and all it's inhabitants. It has been brought to our attention that Hammer and his forces have been taking control of planets on the outer rim and we have reason to believe that he intend to enslave as many as possible and attack Alterus with an army so large we could not hope to defeat it."
" And what would The League have us do?" Jayne asked.
" Well, my dear The League would ask The Shadow King and his masses to meet Hammer and his Starlit Knights on the battle field and thwart his plans. So Lord Mirak, what say you to this."
"Tell him we will accept this task, but only if The League grants me one request" Mirak sends to Jayne through his thoughts. Jayne repeats Mirak's words and king Milodain replys.
"What request is that sir?"
"You will know my request once our task is done," Jayne tells the king, "Now leave us."

"Yes, Of course, and thank you shadow king." King Milodain exits.
"Shall we go choose the troops that will be accompanying us on this mission sir." Jayne asks. Mirak nods his head. "Very well then." Mirak, Jayne, Nikki, and Grawain all walk out of the throne room, through the main hall and out to the courtyard.
"Assemble the troops immediately Grawiin." Mirak said
"Right away Master Mirak." Grawiin darts off through the courtyard and within moments of her departure Mirak's army begins to form.
"Shadow Assassins. We have been given a task to fulfill by The League," Nikki starts. "It seems that the Darkface and their leader Hammer are taking control of planets on the outer rim The League would have us stop them. Any willing to step up will be given an additional ability by the Shadow King himself. Do we have any volunteers..."
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Name: Limak Licnev
Age: 3200
Race: Creaton (Deilvanan)
Abilities: Master of concealment (Ability Adept), 2nd form (Tiger)

Enter Limak, a small Deilvanan male with white hair and silver eyes. He carries a staff in his right hand and his white cloak hides hides the rest of his equipment. He is an ability adept, one who has several abilities. His kind are rare and he is among the last of them. He reveales himself behind his brother and speaks:

"My my aren't we bold to address the king of Artisia in such a manner. I would think my brother would be a bit more respectful to those he holds allegiance with."
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Mirak turns and grips Limak at the throat, " I hold allegiance with no one, those who seek my assistance and are willing to pay the proper price will find my service to their liking," Mirak releases his brother, "Now tell me why are you here, I regret to inform you that I have no remaining loved ones for you to take from me, unless you would have information that proves otherwise."
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"Sadly, no," Limak sighs and shakes his head. "Same old Mirak," he scoffs. "I don't have time for this arguement. General Sport summons our mutual agent. He needs Grawiin. 2nd, the League summons you. I'm sure you're aware of the Admiral's war on Earth. You and your men are instructed to report to Lord Yuthir in four weeks. At which time you will be assigned missions to complete. Your honor rests on your appearance, Brother. The League always pays well. I will entertain any questions you have."
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" So be it, first, how many men would you suspect I'll need? two, I know the league won't trust just my men alone to handle this so, who else will we be working with, three, do I have free reign as far as battle goes, and four, what is Grawiin needed for?"
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"So many questions all at once," Limak raises his eyebrows. "Slow down, little Brother. I'll answer all of your questions in due time. I'm told all of your men are requested but it matters not how many you bring. Lord Yuthir needs all the help he can get. As to who you'll be working with, you've got my men, Frok, the Hunter, Victan, the Huracko and a host of volunteers under Cyndei Scepter. You'll be allowed to discuss rules of engagement with Lord Yuthir and as for Grawiin, you'll have to go to her father to get that answer."
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" So you really don't have any information about her?" Mirak asks, there was a great deal of disappointment in his voice. "Very well, I will speak with Master Yuthir as soon as i can." He looks to Jayne then to Grawiin, and nods his head. They knew what to do.

"All right Blacklist to your stations." Jayne yelled.

"Bluelist to the tower." Grawiin shouted.

"Redlist to your ships." Christi barked.

"Greylist, portals." Wingo roared. Mirak masses heard the orders and began to scramble as Mirak and his brother walked back into the throne room.
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Limak follows his brother humbly, trying (and miserably failing) to hide the warmth he feels in once more being at his younger brothers side. He doesn't say it, but he's waited for this day for centuries. His brother still hasn't forgiven him, but he's glad to see that at least now they can put aside their differences for the sake of their home. "Lord Yuthir humbly requests that i be allowed to travel with you and your men until you report to Pract," Limak continues as they near their destination. "He's heard that your most recent mission may leave you a bit open with Grawiin gone and offers my services in return for hers."
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"Only until we reach Pract you wouldn't stay any longer? Surely you would stay with your little brother longer than that" he said sarcastically. He looked at his brother dressed in his white robes. "You may travel with us as long as you wish, but if you cross me I will not hesitate to kill you, as you did not hesitate to sever me from Ydolem."
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Limak forgets himself. "You want to go?" he asks his brother. "Alright. Let's do this." He stands right in front of Mirak and stands his ground. "We all fought to protect that village, Mirak. Not just you. Just like you weren't the only person who lost family or a love there. I'm sorry for your loss, Mirak. I really am. But 'm not a time manipulator and I can't go back and save her so don't put it on me. You had just as much a chance of saving her as I did."
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" You know that's not true if I recall correctly you were shouting 'save the young and the elderly' and while I was following orders she called to you for help, I'm sure you could've done something other than stare as I ran to her aid when you were much closer than I, big brother." Mirak said as his cape hit the floor.
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Limak is angry now and everyone within twenty miles can feel it. Mirak's claims had never upset him so badly until those words were first uttered to his face. Now he's simply reached his breaking point. His silver eyes turn yellow, the first sign of his Change. "Now you listen to me Mirak Eniotus Licnev. I never leave a man who calls for help," he growls at his brother. "I was up to my elbows in Katarians just like you were. I fought my way to her just like you did and I was just as shocked as you were when I arrived three seconds too late to make a difference. If you want to blame me for being mortal, go ahead but don't you ever accuse me of standing by and doing nothing when my brother's betrothed is fighting for her life! I will not allow you to challenge my honor that way!"
His voice cracks at having shouted so much. He's fihghting now. If he changes here he can't avoid an all out battle and he knows it. Instead, he breaks his stare and and turns his back in attempt to calm himself.
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"Does the truth hurt that much brother? So much that you feel your precious honor code has been challenged. I was two times farther away than you were with an old lady on my back and still managed to make it there before you! You supposed to be our best swordsman, you had no one to carry but yourself and you expect me to believe that you tried you hardest to reach her. HA! don't make me laugh I'm no fool. With your powers you could've reached her no problem. You know it, I know it, and I think that's why you hang your head around me because you know you let her die"
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Limak laughs. His brother is right on several points. He was the best. He should have made it. But there was more to it than that. He was not where his brother thought he was. He had saved a dozen or more people. He did try his best. However, he knew telling Mirak this would be the same as anything he told him: an excuse. Mirak wanted to blame Limak. This would never change. It had to be Limak's fault. "Very well, Brother," he nods his head and turns around. "I see now," he smiles and puts his hand firmly on Miraks shoulder as if to support himself. "I am ashamed. My honor is compromised. I'll tell you what. I will return to General Sport with Grawiin. I'm of no use to you here. I shall have Lord Yuthir choose the best man among all of the forces and have him sent to you."
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