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| Swiff Epics | Dec 2 2006, 02:00 PM |
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nice use of vocab as always, nice concepts too. only crit is maybe the lines are longer than they need to be at times but i understand that its cos ur puttin in so much detail. keep it up |
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6:54 PM Nov 25