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| Topic Started: Apr 1 2006, 09:02 PM (59 Views) | |
| Vintage | Apr 1 2006, 09:02 PM Post #1 |
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eres suttin dat i jus writ, mayB for spittin wen i edited it an dat rush of fresh adreniline// murderin the pad an pen again// left the detectives purplexed// makin white paper look red vexed// leave by-standers pale an hexed// heavily sufferin from lyrical terrets// mad fast lyk red bull fueled sex// ooo spooky u got 6th sense// u kno y cuz im alreadi dead hence..// U CANT KILL MI!// unstoppable, weird an ghostly// fuked the devils broad mad unholy// highly unsavoury and controversial// fuk bein simple an murkle lyk urkle// im the ringleader an my beasts will circle// |
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| Swiff Epics | Apr 1 2006, 09:06 PM Post #2 |
Top Member of Society
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Nice man, the way its written deffinatly seems like it could be spit on a beat providing u find a beat to match the flow of it. Vocab seem pretty good man, not just basic words, cos alot of ppl when they start off use some simple ass vocab. This seemed a little poetic to me too at some points overall good drop tho man keep it up |
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| Vintage | Apr 1 2006, 09:09 PM Post #3 |
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Angel
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niiiceee... yehhh thx 4 the feedbac man, i always appreciate it whetha itz constructive or i did suttin dat wuz nice, both wayz itz taken with grace..
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| supaboy47 | Apr 1 2006, 09:15 PM Post #4 |
Da King / AC Prezident
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nice bro we needa make a song 4real |
"The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous."  [Blazing Heat Dynasty] | |
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| ~ * Gods - Son * ~ | Apr 3 2006, 03:26 PM Post #5 |
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nice man the way it was written wa slike an audio track lol ud be pretty good at multies if u went for them mor ei think keep at it man u have potencial peace |
 <select name=which style="font-family:arial;font-size: 9pt;background-color:Gray;font-weight:Bold;color:Blue" > <option> ~ * Gods - Son * ~ <option> Battles: , Wins: , Losses: <option> Next Opponent: Your Mother <option> Current Battle: Tookie and ShyClo <option> Last Battled: Swiff Epics <option>----------------------- <option>MC Styles: A Pervert With a Pencil <option>Text: <option>Audio: <option>Last Thing Dropped: Just A Keystyle <option>----------------------- <option>Title: Id Be Rookie Of The Year If Tookie Wasnt Here lmao <option>----------------------- </select ><center> | |
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| Vintage | Apr 3 2006, 04:58 PM Post #6 |
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Angel
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thx man, i jus been spittin dat a few hours ago, sounded aite put in sum emotion bu the mor emotion u put in the crappier my mic comes off :lol: |
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| Km0n3y_da_Gr3at | Apr 3 2006, 10:25 PM Post #7 |
Working-Class Citizen
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Lol DAT FREESTYLES WHATS UP YO FAREAL!!!!!!!!! |
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Statement: A lot of females dislike and cant stand me. Reason: Im not gon stop bein me, I like how I look, and they hate to see a thick girl doin ha thing. My message to them: I wasnt put on earth to please nobody but the HIM, Im thick and I can do it betta fuhget what u think cuz ya man thinks otha wise get you some bidness and stay outta mine. funny how when im around dem brawdz theres nothin to talk about when I turn around dey mouth'z start to open and words magically begin to fly out | |
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