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eastinglandboi vs Zone Dark OPEN FOR VOTING
Topic Started: Apr 25 2006, 05:44 PM (178 Views)
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Text Battle
16 lines max - 1 verse each
first to 5 votes wins
3-0 is a KO
verses due in 5 days

ok i'll go first, i ain fukin with personals an all dat bizzness, jus a verse an thas it.

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i kno dat u used to b strait till Sov sexed u rite//
the S-O-V left u with crabs an mutation of semi-dyke//
basicly it duznt take deep insight to c u lackin fight//
the pussy used to b tyte but now opend wide in fright//
u workin a club at nite cuz u gave birth to a Sprite//
am i rite so far? izit all tru? lookin practictly ova//
u been churned an turned yellow quicka than Clover//
these ain rhetorical, but u ain answer anyway cuz u neva sober//
every mornin vommitin hangova, consider urself ruptured//
ZD the sex change got butcherd, hate to b in ur position//
partyly male from the dik pon ur hed, prepare for circumcision//
no choice in the decision, about as virgin as mary with acid visions//
speakin in tounges? nah u jus ain undastanderble from all the lickin pum pum//
lungs shot an weezy, all im expectin iz anutha snooze ZD aka. young cheezy//
ima start callin u double ZD, cuz thas kinda cup size in 10 years ur tits gon b//
saggy, suckin noises louder than maggie, u jus the hag of a club of fassys//

Explanations: "Sov" - Lady Sovereign, UK femcee known lesbian. "Sprite" - a soft drink in which the commercials state a small hairy goblin type thing is also called a "less refreshing sprite" "Clover" - a type of butter that states how well its churned in ads.
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hm, i luv u ZD :wub:
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lookin forward to the outcome

uppin waitin for ZD
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ROTFL haha that was jokes... n yeah no beef thing ya know....

Boy I see that vicodin must be kickin’ in cos ur gettin’ delirious//
Serious, thinkin’ those lyrics were something that were gonna impress, what a mess//
Here I’ll give you the knife to do that thing u do when u feel depress//
I’ll say it straight up, ya I make my pay in a club and see more pussy then a gynecologist//
But to be remembered I’m just a playa so I keep my game tight... anyway lemmi relay what I heard from your psychologist//
u make ur pay sellin rocks to ur pops, pickin ya mums locks to take her pills for pms//
n ur so buttaz I’m shocked u didn’t steal her best dress n tell the cops to call u fox//
Imma start callin u popz drop the pressure, watch u explode//
another node, dude u gotta thing for hood rats that look like boys from frats//
Twink boy should really be calling u tinker bell u donno the sounds of gats u’re living in a fairytale//
U ain’t ghetto, u ain’t hood, u ain’t even a lyricist u’re just a manic pessimist//
I called u out for a battle, n all I got was crack tard prattle, your shit is dismissed//

Popz is an over buttered microwave popcorn.
Fox is a name that most trannies over here use.
... uh I think the rest is self explanatory :lol:


Big ups EIB
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lmaoo :lol:
dis battle shit iz funni.
aite vote now an so on :stupid:
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Flow: EIB
Punches: ZD
Perosnals: Tie
Multies: tie
Wordplay: tie
Creativty: ZD
Overall Winner: ZD

it was very close but overall ZD used more elements of battle so i give her my vote. EIB i understant this is ur second battle, nice verse u got potential just need to understand battle format a little better. keep it up both of u
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yehhh tru tru, i gotta agree, mostly ther 2 totally different verses so alotta itz gon b on taste. but experience pays off alotta the time
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bump
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how dare u imply sucha thing... we need mor votes :blink:
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in the neighborhood so i thought i vote on this one
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Flow: EIB
Punches: ZD
Personals: Tie
Multies: tie
Wordplay: tie
Creativty: EIB
Overall Winner: EIB
"The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous."
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wait... now who the fuck is winning lol :o
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