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My newest verse (i think dis iz hot)
Topic Started: May 7 2006, 03:59 AM (62 Views)
Vintage May 7 2006, 03:59 AM Post #1
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Angel
 ther to take but u gotta kno onli i can havit//
watch words earn mi mor karats than peter rabbit//
ur dry, bar grammer worse than cham-pag-ne//
ur swag illitaracy needs help from el nombre//
heavi punchin catchin action replays lyk pon de//
but i ain rihanna jus colourful lyk an iguana//
spittin cancer lyk southern tobbacco farmers//
lyrical self harmers EIB aka. the da le lama//
u rippers jus pubical waxin used cubical tampons//
no walkin ova u gettin stomped on, verbally raped//
wen im draped im blade u jus goths insecure an dazed//
purple haze shuffilin up words lyk kings an spades//
buckets all thas round here got sexual rage caged//
abuv the rim lyk Wade, u jus goin down on rims for pay//
backstage access, ur waived jus a sub-par free agent//
contagious ur feedbac iz outragous u cant phaze this//
praise this so pretti it leaves hate itself rageless//
ur style is tastless cuz i ripped out ya fukin taste buds//
the onli slugs u seen hav slithered, indecisive u dithered//
u ain delivered so im writing a complaint to royal mail//
love iz blind so i kno all u feelin my words lyk brail//
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Swiff Epics May 7 2006, 08:41 AM Post #2
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 Seems to flow real nice man, and u got some nice metaphores n punches.
keep it up u get better each time
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Vintage May 7 2006, 12:55 PM Post #3
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Angel
 yehhh i went for mor punches in dat 1, i lack punches so i wanted to get sum in der
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~ * Gods - Son * ~ May 11 2006, 09:29 AM Post #4
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 nice ish man gd flow and content

stay up u ARE gettin better
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Vintage May 11 2006, 10:58 AM Post #5
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Angel
 yaay ^_^ go mi im gettin betta B)
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TipZ May 11 2006, 12:05 PM Post #6
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 Nice one man ! , gettin Gd !
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Manz Sit Back Spark Up A Spliff /'/
Juice Nxt To Me So I Dont Get Dry Lipz /'/

Bless x
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Laydee_Tempa May 11 2006, 12:51 PM Post #7
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 serious!! dem barz were big lyk gwarnnnn ;)
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