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my first battle win
Topic Started: May 28 2006, 03:58 PM (123 Views)
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Angel
ok heres wut happend in my first battle win on anutha forum, as u kno i am not a battle MC but yeh i got dis one eazy.

i go unda the name of Ble$$ on dis otha forum, an the guy i was battelin was called Vexter.
it was 2 verses and 16 barz per verse.

my verse:

vexter about as road as cartoon networks dexter//
i call u unoriginal for simple obvious reasons//
u commit executionable treasons against english//
defaced an killed it lyk the USA mispelt actions//
subtraction of stature from each lines satisfaction//
nota mathematician but ur key stage 1 for rhythem//
u jus keep sinnin repeatedly but im unforgiving//
leave ur whole spine marrowed soft an swiviling//
while u jus sit ther snotty nosed an sniviling//
ur pad ink got blurred and ran blak lyk mascara//
ur hed left leakin from a lyrically sharp barber//
ur whole face left puffed up lyk antonio tarver//
u got repeatedly exposed cuz vex relly ain smarter//
the day u swam into an egg was a world disaster//
if ur brain was ur balls i jus left u imputant//
unsuprising if they were as u resemble a mutant//


His verse:

comin on my spellin when yours in blatantly worse
please i know im street n i know you have a purse
how did u work out me beein unoriginal from my spellin
please if theres any mutant in ere its this gremlin

i would have to believe in the bible to think i sin
your chatin air already what you been drinkin gin?

im smart nuff not to have to carry round a knife
think you the only 1 whos had strife all thier life
if ne1's fake on ere its this biatch chatin ****
aint even worth stayin awake coz this boi's a dyke

when you hold a gun in ya hand u think u a big boi
maturely older than u'll ever be this my only toy
tired of wastemanz who dont realise they arrogant
go home get ready coz 2moro is ya mingin pageant

fek me be real for once your as fake as the rest
have no idea that you have a personality complex


my 2nd verse:

now heres a sarcastic fact of veri little mystery//
u plague us with manure an rottin corpses lyrically//
look here if u were the cat an i was the mouse//
u an i kno i wud humiliate and leave u aroused//
but unluckily i am the cat an u are the mouse//
now ur guts are smeared all around the house//
i wud say uve been doused but ther was no fire//
i wud say uve crumbled but ther was no empire//
id say ur grammer was fresh but den i'd b a liar//
V's needs are special, i pity ur matieral God bless u//
i watch u die from ur own fattening bar cholestoral//
im extraterrestrial and i abducted an conducted//
mysterious words dat trapped probed and tagged ya//
i planned to do mor than tag along an match ya//
if ur lyrics were the spine of a dictionary...//
then son i jus doodled defaced and snapped ya//


his 2nd verse:

heres a true fact for yaself with no mystery
ya lyrix are swag really now i know you fear me
my empire cant crumble because im my own island
this is a waste of my time best go back 2 ireland
you chatin bare crap with nothin to back it up
start speakin sense or just shut the f... up

humiliatin me really that aint ever gona happen
typical tosser bearly saint himself needs a slapin
now heres a question do you know what a chav is
obviously you dont because you go on lavishly

didnt wana have to murk your dumbass erratically
but i cant help if my flows surge electrically

this imature boi's in need of a good spankin
you a virgin n you still aint got past wankin
physically you must be weak to think u need it
lyrically beheaded ill leave you re-readin it



any thoughts?
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merked him bruv
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Angel
lol good to hear, i was goin into a block anyway but nevamind :order:
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umm....it was better than his... congrats, lets drink to the occasion....:drink:
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Angel
yeh i like drinkin to victorys woop :drink:
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Royalty
:drink:
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Angel
i can insult him on this forum without bein banned, dat boi was WACK EL SWAGO FUCKIN PUSSYIO :lol:
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nice battle bruh
"The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous."
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ShyChlo
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lol, ah mr v. We should get him on here lol
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yea thats a nice idea, the more people, the better the forum
"The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous."
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Angel
hes a cock and can't write to save his little weed fueled life
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ShyChlo
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loooooooool I read that half asleep and thought it said he's a cook, I'm thinkin I swear he used to go on about being a joiner, since when was he a cook. haha.
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Angel
hes a genius actually i take it back, he totally killed me.
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lyrical_girlie
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I had a few battles with him and all he writes about is how he does weed.
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i wanna battle him again, i had a block on while i wrote those verses lol.
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