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TOOKIE
Topic Started: Jul 21 2006, 07:50 PM (750 Views)
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Angel
8 bars, no biting, no recycling none of that shit, same rules as usual.
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looks like a battle callout to me!
"The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous."
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lol no shit sherlock B)
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actually, i jus posted my verse, but ima wait for tookie to accept first.
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wait for him to accept and write his verse first. if he reads your verse before he writes his, he will KILL you guaranteed. he already is a good battle rapper so if he reads your verse before you read his it'll be VERY bad.
"The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous."
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^^haha thanks, Ill take that as a compliment B)

lmao but yeah, Im down I guess ;shifty
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lol shifty look huh? tricks up your sleeve eh.. ;shifty
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lol this should be another good battle, i'm looking forward to it
"The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous."
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well i jus about got a verse now i think, i'll drop in a bit or suttin
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Right *counts bars* yes i got 8, lets get a smooth battle done which doesnt end with any DQ's -_-

Fuck the tourny DQ, i've become impatient, zero revoloutionization//
If u had midget sex with Dupri it wouldnt trigga any 'Emancipation'// :1:
Aint about MiMi its about ME ME, i couldnt figure, manz complacent// :2:
Soakin up your self-proclaimed wordplay like fried bread saturation//
Always talkin about "hoes" in your rhymes *sniff* commercialisation//
Should get knocked the fuck out for biting swiff, Ja teef sensation// :3:
Dude shouldnt be Stealin' this battle even if his name was Gary Payton// :4:
Just call me 'Lucifer' cuz i only need an AK...A so u know im Satan// :5:

Don't get too confused by the long words when u vote. :rolleyes:

:1: - Jermaine Dupri and Tookie are both short, i gotta take advantage of height before he grows more haha. And Mariah Careys latest Album was called "The Emancipation Of MiMi".
:2: - Mariah Careys latest album is titled "The Emancipation of MiMi".
:3: - A line swiff used against tookie in an audio battle: "fake G couldnt load a clip using YouTube" - Swiff Epics. Then in our tourny battle tookie came with: "U aint bust no gats, uploadin movies only time he 'sendin clips'/" - Tookie. Their both the same concept, but been as its a battle i over-exadurated to make it more intresting haha.
:4: - Gary Payton is considered one of the best defenders in NBA history, was known mainly for his ability to get a lot of STEALS and play pressure defense.
:5: - Lucifer is another name for the devil, satan etc. AKA means also known as, i used AK with a pause to give the effect that i meant the Gun for a moment - AK47.
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My punches leave this dude on his back, lyrically fuck em missionary/
Wanna be Nas, kid found his verse in a fuckin dictionary//
EIB a gangsta? please, this sap's soft as a feather/
'Fuck Love'? homie u should just say fuck rap altogether//*
Cant even rhyme, get Swiffs number, call n cry "MORE HELP!!"/
Dudes shook, might as well repeat the tourny, bitch disqualify yourself//**
Its so simple ta see Ima take this, already started the celebration, champ/
The Hip Hop Hitler.....I just put this jew through more hell than a concentration camp//***

* - He got a track called Fuck Love Ft. Me n Swiff
** - He just disqualified himself from our battle for the tourny, lol
*** - Hes talked about his Jewish background b4...so yeah :dance:

lmao let the votin begin...
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supaboy47
Jul 22 2006, 02:36 AM
wait for him to accept and write his verse first. if he reads your verse before he writes his, he will KILL you guaranteed. he already is a good battle rapper so if he reads your verse before you read his it'll be VERY bad.

LMAO are u sure? :rolleyes:
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come on man EIB can hold his own....this is good shit man, you can tell he stepped his shit wayyyy up battlin against tookie in the tourney. that's when battlers are the most deadly in my opinion. Like when ppl start winning alot and go into a battle half-assin then it could result in an upset (like me for example). EIB is hungry!!! ya'll should get it crackin.... Ayooooooo EIB check out the audio section for US.
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aint got time to vote just now but this is a hot battle this is goin in the HOF deffinatly. EIB stepped his game up propa.

back later to vote
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i'll be back later to vote
"The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous."
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lol thanks for that skillz and swiff, i thought u'd left for a minute skillz lol good to see u back.
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well even tho i'm out of school now, the music thing never stops...gotta keep up with the pace...I'm like Dame Dash before all the bullshit he had to go through cuz of Jay...Even tho i know my homie would never do me like that.
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lol life is music B)

and where the fuck are the votes at?
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I think the lack of votes is due to the fact ppl dont wanna vote and get on the wrong side of one of you cos this battle thing has come kinda personal. Me im just voting how i see it so its up to you guys wether u wanna take it or not.

Its Close one to call but heres how i see it..

Punches: Tookie
Personals: Tookie
Creativity: EIB
Wordplay: EIB
Multi's: Tookie
Flow: Tookie

EIB really stepped his game up here and if u used some multis and hit tookie with some real hard personal u woulda had the win here easy, u had some nice vocab also but with using words with big sylibols u gotta break it down and use some multis to make it flow nicely. so right here to me its lookin like tookie got this one Vote = TOOKIE

its whatever u can call me a dickrider but i just vote how i see it. End of

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ShyChlo
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I think this should be the tourney final to be honest, coz you're both equally as good! However, I found this 8 bar battle easier to vote in compared to the semi final. This one wasn't so close. EIB stepped up his game even further. Better punches, nice personals and some better rhymes. Even though Took did have a few nice personals against EIB I don't think it was enough to swing it his way. It was the rhyming that did it for me too on EIB verse, using the same rhyme sceme throughout the entire 8 bars.

Vote: EIB
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... :rolleyes: thanks ShyChlo.
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again, i liked both to a certain degree, i prefered tookies flow and punches but eib stepped up his game n came with good creativity, id vote tookie.
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ShyChlo
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Boy I'm getting confused with how these votes are going...
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Jul 23 2006, 06:16 PM
Boy I'm getting confused with how these votes are going...

u ain the only one.
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its 2-1 2 tookie
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ShyChlo
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hmmmmm
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Jul 23 2006, 12:30 PM
hmmmmm

whats that sposed ta mean? :blink:
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Whatever you want it to mean. Read into it, that's something that people don't do on this forum. They read what's in front of them, not looking at the bigger picture.
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lmao aight, I think I see the big picture here...

ShyChlo
Jul 23 2006, 05:59 AM
I think this should be the tourney final to be honest, coz you're both equally as good!  However, I found this 8 bar battle easier to vote in compared to the semi final.  This one wasn't so close.  EIB stepped up his game even further.  Better punches, nice personals and some better rhymes.  Even though Took did have a few nice personals against EIB I don't think it was enough to swing it his way.  It was the rhyming that did it for me too on EIB verse, using the same rhyme sceme throughout the entire 8 bars.

Vote: EIB


I think u dickridin Joel...I mean, if u gon throw him a vote atleast make it look honest...how u gon say this wasnt close when everyone else comin in here says it is....then u say his punches are betta? aight, I guess I wouldnt've argued wit that...but then u say his personals were betta too? <_< he had 1...the same 1 he used in the tourny...atleast I came wit new shit nd had more of it

nd if thats not big enough for u, what about the battle itself? aight so Joel wanna disqualify himself when even I (his opponent) kept tellin him that 1 bar wasnt such a big deal...but he was determined ta lose on his own terms, so whateva...
but what I didnt realize is how he had this lil battle up his sleeve, he has his lil verse prepared then calls me out, then when I accept he expects me ta write...like he wouldnt drop until I had my shit written nd was ready ta post :huh: aight, so I write a quick verse ta make em happy, but now ppl seem ta think we on the same level <_< LMAO...nd I guess if the situation comes up again where he prepares somethin nd calls me out nd I gotta write somethin quick so hell be happy, then theyre right :rolleyes:
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Different people read battles differently. Alot of people on here read what's on the surface. It's like a Nas "Ether" thing, straight up saying "Fuck Jay-Z" alot of people thought that was so great, but anyone can do that. I like to read deep into battles. Seeing what's beneathe the surface, like Jay's "Takeover" it's so much more in depth. That's probably down to the fact that that is how I write.

Whatever man I'm sorry that I ain't in your little fan club like everyone else. If you had given me the two verses to read and I didn't know who wrote each one I still would have come to the same conclusion. Because I felt that EIB's was a better verse, it was well thought out from beginning to end.

I'm a very deep person and that comes out in the way I write, read and also the music I listen to. A simple diss may seem hot to one person but to me it is just simple and unimaginative you get me? Like some people think it's sick, I think it's just standard.

I hope that explained my vote better, but I thought it was obvious.
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