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Topic Started: Jul 25 2006, 09:27 PM (98 Views)
Vintage	Jul 25 2006, 09:27 PM Post #1
Angel Posts: 6,971 Group: Prezident Member #2 Joined: April 1, 2006	I don't watch the underestimating, but keep one eye on contemplating// When you go hard and its esculating, they slip out like speed dating// Its no suprise when you meet a guy like me, see the hate in my eyes// They see me rise from each blow i take, and they regret their dispise// They regret the lies and become reasonable and formal like school ties// They scream its alive! like Frankenstein at his playing God monster// I have last evil laugh, now hes crying and praying to God like he lost her// Like he lost his love, like i raped her corpse after her soul went above// But no, i have a sick mind but i don't carry out the sick actions within// I keep trying to follow my religion but then i keep getting the urge to sin// The urge will win, 95% of the time, i make sure i really shine 5% of the time// But i try to stay thirsty like i got Five Alive on my mind// But you know your really fucked when you don't even care enough to grind// And you know you got hate from when the hand that feeds u, u rudely decline// And you straight up know your a fake faggot when u hate a verse like mine// You know your DEAD blind when you can't see the textual herse that is mine//



ShyChlo	Jul 25 2006, 09:30 PM Post #2
Top Member of Society Posts: 734 Group: AC Authorities Member #18 Joined: April 2, 2006	Very nice Joel, that's deep. Said what you want to say and expressed your feelings effectively! You getting really good now you know that lol! We'll do our track soon, I'm just collecting beats together for my next project so it won't be long!



Vintage	Jul 25 2006, 09:36 PM Post #3
Angel Posts: 6,971 Group: Prezident Member #2 Joined: April 1, 2006	Thank you, and yes we'll get that done when your ready.



supaboy47	Jul 26 2006, 12:43 PM Post #4
Da King / AC Prezident Posts: 3,698 Group: AC Prezident Member #1 Joined: April 1, 2006	dose raps r straight bruh
	"The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous." [Blazing Heat Dynasty]


SkiLLzSince85'	Jul 27 2006, 03:52 PM Post #5
Top Member of Society Posts: 805 Group: AC Authorities Member #41 Joined: May 10, 2006	that was pretty good mayne...just advice tho if you post a topic like this on other forums, don't post how long it took you to do something. Because if ppl think it's wak, then they don't want to hear excuses about i only did this in 10 minutes ya know? Even if it was really 10 minutes keep that on the hush if you post on major sites like rapbattles.com or rapmusic.com.
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Vintage	Jul 27 2006, 05:19 PM Post #6
Angel Posts: 6,971 Group: Prezident Member #2 Joined: April 1, 2006	yeh no doubt, i tend to never bother to mention that on a big site, but it doesnt matter here.



lyrical_girlie	Jul 27 2006, 08:51 PM Post #7
Working-Class Citizen Posts: 157 Group: Members Member #59 Joined: July 27, 2006	I like that, you've got some dope lyrics right there.



Swiff Epics	Jul 27 2006, 08:53 PM Post #8
Top Member of Society Posts: 926 Group: Prezident Member #4 Joined: April 1, 2006	this is really a step up fro u man, ur rhyme scheme on this is way better. i likes it keep it up



Vintage	Jul 27 2006, 08:55 PM Post #9
Angel Posts: 6,971 Group: Prezident Member #2 Joined: April 1, 2006	Thanks everybody :ph43r:



Lay	Jul 31 2006, 01:26 PM Post #10
Hey i got my green card Posts: 67 Group: Members Member #62 Joined: July 31, 2006	Pretty goood Joel. The vocab was good in parts, some lines were shaky i thought. decent drop however



Vintage	Jul 31 2006, 01:45 PM Post #11
Angel Posts: 6,971 Group: Prezident Member #2 Joined: April 1, 2006	Yeah thanks, it was far from perfect but i think it was worth posting up


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