16 Bar Verse

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16 Bar Verse
Topic Started: Jul 27 2006, 08:40 PM (150 Views)
lyrical_girlie	Jul 27 2006, 08:40 PM Post #1
Working-Class Citizen Posts: 157 Group: Members Member #59 Joined: July 27, 2006	Here's one of my many verse's that I wrote: *Edited*



Vintage	Jul 27 2006, 08:43 PM Post #2
Angel Posts: 6,971 Group: Prezident Member #2 Joined: April 1, 2006	Everything has suddenly become all political and insightful now i see.



lyrical_girlie	Jul 27 2006, 08:54 PM Post #3
Working-Class Citizen Posts: 157 Group: Members Member #59 Joined: July 27, 2006	Yeah. :lol: I like to cause a stir with my lyrics, you get me. It not only has to lyrically move the reader, but it has to lyrically move me too, you get me.



Vintage	Jul 27 2006, 08:59 PM Post #4
Angel Posts: 6,971 Group: Prezident Member #2 Joined: April 1, 2006	Exactly, its got to please both sets of people. but that was hot, expect u to be active in these lyric sections eh



ShyChlo	Jul 27 2006, 09:02 PM Post #5
Top Member of Society Posts: 734 Group: AC Authorities Member #18 Joined: April 2, 2006	I've read this one before, actually, you sent me an audio of this, remember?? Still it's always good to have a re-read hehe. Just make sure you never stop writing, coz you got mad talent and above anything else it's all honesty, it's clear that you mean every word you write and that's real. Ahhhh I really wanna write something now!



lyrical_girlie	Jul 27 2006, 09:23 PM Post #6
Working-Class Citizen Posts: 157 Group: Members Member #59 Joined: July 27, 2006	Yeah, I wrote this a few weeks back - it's only one of my verses, I have bare others, but decided to post this one. Yeah, I decided to spit this one, I can remember now.



Vintage	Jul 27 2006, 09:29 PM Post #7
Angel Posts: 6,971 Group: Prezident Member #2 Joined: April 1, 2006	Indeed you did, i've got the audio as you know



lyrical_girlie	Jul 27 2006, 09:35 PM Post #8
Working-Class Citizen Posts: 157 Group: Members Member #59 Joined: July 27, 2006	It was only my first attempt at spittin' my lyrics too.



Vintage	Jul 27 2006, 09:41 PM Post #9
Angel Posts: 6,971 Group: Prezident Member #2 Joined: April 1, 2006	Complicated verse to spit, but u did well



lyrical_girlie	Jul 27 2006, 09:44 PM Post #10
Working-Class Citizen Posts: 157 Group: Members Member #59 Joined: July 27, 2006	Ah, thanks.



ShyChlo	Jul 27 2006, 09:56 PM Post #11
Top Member of Society Posts: 734 Group: AC Authorities Member #18 Joined: April 2, 2006	With you're really cool Midlands accent too My accent sucks, so boring



Vintage	Jul 27 2006, 09:57 PM Post #12
Angel Posts: 6,971 Group: Prezident Member #2 Joined: April 1, 2006	At least your clear accent allows you to prenounce well, mine doesnt.



lyrical_girlie	Jul 28 2006, 05:49 AM Post #13
Working-Class Citizen Posts: 157 Group: Members Member #59 Joined: July 27, 2006	LOL. :lol: Altogether now...... awwwwww.



supaboy47	Jul 28 2006, 05:21 PM Post #14
Da King / AC Prezident Posts: 3,698 Group: AC Prezident Member #1 Joined: April 1, 2006	LG comes hard
	"The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous." [Blazing Heat Dynasty]


lyrical_girlie	Jul 30 2006, 02:57 PM Post #15
Working-Class Citizen Posts: 157 Group: Members Member #59 Joined: July 27, 2006	Thanks.


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