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| Topic Started: Jul 28 2006, 08:08 AM (93 Views) | |
| lyrical_girlie | Jul 28 2006, 08:08 AM Post #1 |
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Here's another verse of mine: *Edited* I don't use multi's that often to be fair, I'd much sooner write somethin' a far lot deeper. |
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| ~ * Gods - Son * ~ | Jul 28 2006, 10:21 AM Post #2 |
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this was pretty nice real deep too my type of ish stay up 1 |
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| ShyChlo | Jul 28 2006, 12:08 PM Post #3 |
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That's real right there, too many peoplr think that multis make a verse, they think that that is the key to a good writer. That bulls**t. It's the content of the verse that's important. |
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| Vintage | Jul 28 2006, 12:14 PM Post #4 |
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I liked it again, simple as u know. |
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| lyrical_girlie | Jul 28 2006, 03:41 PM Post #5 |
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I'd much sooner not use multi's, 'cos at the end of the day what comes through creativity is written down as naturally and as real as it can possibly get, you get me. I'm all about havin' somethin' that comes purely from the soul, rather than writin' shit just to get one over on someone or to fit in a crowd. Thanks for the feedback, people. |
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| Vintage | Jul 28 2006, 05:00 PM Post #6 |
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Multi's are overrated simple as, people forcing multi's into there rhymes come out with a shitty unoriginal product. |
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| supaboy47 | Jul 28 2006, 05:21 PM Post #7 |
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really deep n really good |
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| lyrical_girlie | Jul 30 2006, 02:55 PM Post #8 |
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Thanks. I like writin' somethin' with more substance than spittin' or writin' on somethin' that you've heard times many before, you get me. |
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