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| Topic Started: Dec 29 2006, 07:03 PM (156 Views) | |
| Dee | Dec 29 2006, 07:03 PM Post #1 |
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[size=2].,;:InTrO;:,. Time to break da scilence, Its ova for you lames, Bring dat beat, Quicker den DJz in da game, ,.:;CHORUS:;,. Stopin da beat is like breakin da thunda, dropin ya six feat, str8 up takin ya unda, satan is complainin cuz im blazin his colors, breakin all da waitin like clocks takin by others. .,;:VERSE 1:;,. Commin on top, To bad I got dem on da blur, Nuttin' must stop, Like a broke condomn under her. Digestin' my lyrics, no more cuz im smashin' guts, Why questin' im finished, Same runs like heads passsin blunts. Take a second, Take a Minute, Cuz Dats ya only climax, Fake my message, breakin limits, and still fellin my tracks. Iz ya crazy, dumb, or just straight up retarded, Blazed conflict, like myspace sluts rapin my comments. Walkin dem thought shame, its over for ya ass, Talkin bout hoes brushin off da sholders to da max. I bring attackin wit a passion from bashin, dat u'd rememba years later, like coke attraction from cackheads. Tell em exaclty, wuts crackin, cuz hell reached its peak, Givin best tracks but what happen, wuz real unique steaks. Break ya neck, but look out for da open lane, Make da next, heavy hitter a broken lame. You watch da cool in me I bring ensured up, Now touch da unity it fell like pure punch. Im sure but, let da power continue to attack tunes, Pack more strength then dem army commercials. .,:;CH0RUS;:.. Stopin da beat is like breakin da thunda, dropin ya six feat, str8 up takin ya unda, satan is complainin cuz im blazin his colors, breakin all da waitin like clocks takin by others. ..::HOoK::.. Judgin da books so im killin da covers, Cuz other den looks I got a million wounders. [/size] |
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| supaboy47 | Dec 29 2006, 08:32 PM Post #2 |
Da King / AC Prezident
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sounds pretty nice |
"The only verdict is vengeance; a vendetta, held as a votive, not in vain, for the value and veracity of such shall one day vindicate the vigilant and the virtuous."  [Blazing Heat Dynasty] | |
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| Vintage | Dec 30 2006, 05:46 AM Post #3 |
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Not bad, the misspelling threw me off at times though lol. How long you been writing? |
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| NoKaiz | Dec 30 2006, 06:18 AM Post #4 |
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| Dee | Dec 30 2006, 07:35 AM Post #5 |
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Thx for da feedback... If da misspelling threw ya off imagine how my MicroSoftWord looked like lol. I been writen for 1 year but not consistant like i stoped for like 2 months started again and stoped for 6 months and now startin again (i might be rusty or i juss suck lol) |
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| Vintage | Dec 30 2006, 09:58 AM Post #6 |
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lol yeah i been writing for about a year now too, well i started in late 2005, december type time. |
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| supaboy47 | Dec 30 2006, 12:06 PM Post #7 |
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nothing wrong wit being rtusty you can polish ur skills here |
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