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| <span style=Jak the Savior | Jun 22 2008, 05:07 PM Post #1 |
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Chapter 1: Rebirth It was a dark desolate day. Jak was making his usual announcements. Looking down from his platform he yelled out to the people below. "I demand a statue of myself be built in Oklahoma." He had enslaved the human race and was now our overlord. This wasn't how it always was, but his battle with Jonny and his heart being torn to shreds left him hurt. He started off small destroying cities and killing our leaders. Soon he demanded more, the world sent their armies to kill him but you can't kill a god. Is this oblivion or some kind of hell on earth? After the earth lost more than half of it's population we called upon a different sort of help. Jonny Sevenfold was happy to be given the chance to kill Jak. He was the only one on the planet able to hurt Jak. We needed him and he almost succeeded, but since Jak thrives on emotions Jonny failed. We have given up hope and there is nothing in this world that can save us. Except however, the Eternal Water. The Eternal Water is the only thing that can save us, but Jak knows about it and is looking for it. The Eternal Water has the ability to strengthen anyone to great levels. It turns 10 years of training into a single sip. When the Elders created the water they did not yet foresee the terrible events that would unfold. One of the Elders tested the drink and he grew impatient, stronger, and evil. Because of the way the water works he wanted more and more. The other Elders locked away the unholy liquid on a luscious, green planet. The Elder that drank the water was banished from the great haven of Euravia and sent to rot in a hellish wasteland forever searching for a way out. One day he escaped and formed the only thing that could even stand up to the Elders. They were called the Wraiths, a terrible alliance which made the heavens tremble when near. A great war started between the two groups that lasted thousands of years. In the final battle Elder Retna and three others finished off the last of the Wraiths by sacrificing themselves. This lead to the creation of the Powerful Light and the Blackest Night. Two powers so great, so powerful that if one unlocked the full potential the very universe and all the dimensions would be no more in a vast implosion. These powers were given to the chosen one to either destroy the darkness or embrace the evil. Jak was the chosen one and his darker side took over his feelings, thoughts, and emotions. The Light part of him was separated and now lies dormant in only god knows what part of the world. This story is more than how the darkness was destroyed. It's about the redemption of our Savior. Getting back on track, there are two people walking in a desert somewhere. One of them is a woman about twenty-seven years old. The person she is walking with is about thirty-four years old. They have been searching for four years for a certain thing. Two weeks before this day they were in a town. An old man was telling the woman about the desert. He said many things can be found there. He told her about treasures and artifacts that she might find there. She wasn't interested in either of those things but she still went through the desert. Four days after they started walking through the desert they found something that told them the thing that they were searching for was there. It was a small piece of paper torn and scorched by the desert but still able to read. The paper read "I am becoming so angry lately... just seeing them together pisses me off. I am going to snap soon I can feel it." The woman simply looked at her partner and said, "He's here... I can feel his presence." The man looked confused and replied, "How do you know?" "I was with him in school for six years. We developed a close bond like a brother and sister's." The guy simply said, "Whatever, I seriously doubt that we're ever going to find him." She got a little angry and just continued to walk onward. The man looking confused again caught up a little later. "Hey! What was that about?" he asked. Angrily she looked at him. "Do you have any idea what is going to happen when we find him?!" He backed away a little bit. "No... but i hope it's not going to be bad..." " He could just as well be like the fucking dick hole that's ruling our planet! But I trust him with my life, just as i did back before this." She let a tear drip from her face. The man put his hands on her shoulders, she was now crying very hard. "Look I'm sorry I didn't mean to make you cry." She tore from his embrace. "No it's not that... it's just that I am tired of all of this pain in this world... I would give anything to go back to our school days and just hang out and have it like it used to be." She stopped crying and went walking forward again. For the next few days all they did was walk and search for the person. After two weeks of searching they set up camp and tried to rest. The woman sent the man out to go search for some wood to keep the fire going. As he was walking he decided to mumble to himself. "Damn deserts, hot as hell during the day but cold as the middle of winter at night." He was walking a little more before saying something again. "Jeeze where am I going to find wood in a fucking desert? is it gonna fall out of the sky? Am I going to stumble over it? Or what is goi- whao!" He fell over something rather large and just started to laugh. "Seems I need to be careful of what I say, it may happen." He shined the light over the object he fell on and it seemed to be a piece wood buried in the sand. "I found some wood after all, well time to get it and take it back to camp." He started digging and the piece of wood only got longer, it had a weird shape though. He pulled off more and more sand uncovering more of the wood. At one point he was able to grasp it and tried to pull it out. Twenty seconds after getting a piece of it out he screamed. Startled the woman followed the glow from his lamp light and ran straight toward him. When she got to him he was laying on the ground in shock and horror pointing at the object in the sand. "Samuel what's wrong?!" she looked to what he was pointing at and was just at startled as he was. Samuel got some nerve back and made a statement. "It's a leg... it's a fucking leg." She looked at him again. "Samuel help me get the rest of the body out." He stared at her in horror. "Are you crazy? It's a bo-" she suddenly screamed at him "NOW!" and he got up to help. They spent three hours digging to get the whole body out. Finally when they pulled it out the woman jumped up and screamed. "It's him! It's really him!" Samuel just looked confused again and asked, "Why did we spend 2 years looking for this guy?" She got really angry and yelled at him. "Because he is the only thing that can save us now from Dark Jak!" She pulled some water out from her belt and poured all of it on the man's face. Samuel got infuriated and said, "What the hell did you do that! that was our last jug of water!" The woman still staring at the body in front of her just replied, "Trust me Samuel. He's going to help us." She pulled out something covered and tied but cloth. Unraveling the cloth revealed a glowing liquid. Samuel jumped up in shock and began to yell, "Where in the hell did you get some of the Eternal Water?" Pouring the water down on the body's face she told him, "It was a little trick just incase we would need it." Jenny was still talking to Samuel when something horrible formed right beside them. It screamed startling both of them and summoning others. "What the hell are these things?" Samuel screamed. Jenny looked back at him crying, "Samuel I'm sorry! The water must have attracted them." "Doesn't matter let's just..." He was cut off as one of them appeared right in front of him screaming and raising it's hand. Samuel punched but his fist went right through and he fell to the ground screaming for the icy insides of the beast was too much for him to take. Just then several of them surrounded Jenny. "Help me!" she screamed as one was about to pierce her with it's right arm. Screaming and confused the creature looked at it's arm for it was now missing. A person was speaking, it was a man. His voice was soothing and sent out a feeling of safety. "You dare harm her and I'll send you to hell so fast Saiten himself won't know your there!" They all looked at the man who was slowly walking to them. A familiar face gave Jenny hope as all the figures focused on the man. He jumped onto one of them sending it to the ground then ripped off another's leg stabbing it into a third one. The rest of them disappeared in fear as they watched there allies die before them. "Jenny are you ok?" the man asked. Jenny looked up and still in shock and awe that he was here. "Yes," she answered. Looking down to her he asked another question, "What about your friend?" She was a little confused then yelled out, "Oh god Samuel! We need to help Samuel!" "Already on it," he said picking up Samuel. "Let's get back to your camp site." At the camp site Samuel was in his tent with the man giving him a special remedy he made to take off the pain and heal him. Jenny walked in looking at both of them. "I can't believe it's really you. You were gone so long and everyone was giving up hope that they would ever feel freedom again." He looked back at her. "Well if you didn't find me those creatures would have killed you and Samuel." Jenny was silent for a moment and was about to speak when the man began talking again. "If it's about Dark Jak then yes I plan to do something about it. I am a little weak right now so I need to gather some strength, both physically and in numbers." "What do you mean Richie?" Jenny asked. "Sorry Jenny, Richie and I are not infused together. It's just me... Jak." He looked down to the ground in disgust. "I don't know where Richie is or if he is even alive... but that doesn't change the fact that I have to stop Dark Jak." He stood up and started walking out from the tent. Jenny asked another question. "Jak where are you going?" Jak stopped and stood there for a moment. "I don't know... but I have to stop this." He walked out from the tent and looked back at Jenny. Samuel made a groan so she looked at him and when she looked out of the tent Jak was gone. Back at Dark Jak's palace, he awoke from a dream about him with a girl. He stood up and walked to the balcony. Staring below to the people working he laughed at the pain he is causing. "Humans disgust me but their torment amuses me." He heard a voice calling up to the castle and when he looked down a familiar face was yelling at him. He listened as he was floating down to confront the person. "... you piss me off! Making these people work and enslaving them when you used to save them from every threat that ever came close to this planet." Dark Jak smiled. "Spenser." He whispered to himself getting closer and closer to him. "I hate you with every fiber of my being! What happened to the good within you?" Dark Jak appeared beside Spenser startling him. "He died with the rest of my weaknesses." he spoke answering Spenser's question. "I can't believe that you of all people would dare oppose me after what happened to that idiot Cody." Spenser pointed a gun at Dark Jak. "Cody died doing what he believed what right and what needed to be done." Still pointing the gun Spenser asked a question. "Do you feel lucky punk." Laughing Dark Jak replied. "Since we've gone into movie references how about you try this one on. Join me and we'll rule the universe as father and son!" Spenser backed away a little. "Your not my father and I would never join you!." Dark Jak punched Spenser and watched him fly back. "Pity." Dark Jak said rushing toward him. Spenser pulled out another gun and shot it at a near by column. He was now spinning around the column and sent right back to Dark Jak kicking him in the chest making him fly back. Dark Jak caught his balance and flew to Spenser again. "Seems those two months you spent training with me did give you some skills." Spenser landed and pulled out his first gun. He was aiming very carefully but Dark Jak was moving around too much. He put the gun away and pulled out a shotgun. Dark Jak landed near him and was circling him. "Guns don't hurt me, you should know that by know." Spenser fired the gun and flew to the ground. Dark Jak was hit with a powerful ball of energy sending him hurtling at a rock wall a few feet back. When Spenser got up he walked over to Dark Jak and grabbed him by the shirt collar. "This isn't a normal shotgun. It fires an energy ball that can even hurt you." Dark Jak kicked Spenser and dragged him around by his leg. "Yes it hurt, but I am much more than a pitiful human." Spenser pulled out his first gun and began to aim. "I am a go.." Dark Jak was shot in the back. Little needles were sticking out and were glowing a red color. Dark Jak pulled them out and threw Spenser at the same column he swung around earlier. When Spenser got up he pulled out little vials from the back of the gun. Three of the vials were filled with a yellow liquid and Spenser drank them. Dark Jak yelled looking angrily. "So you drained some piss from my body and drank it big deal not like your going to defeat me." When Spenser was done he looked back at Dark Jak. "Well you can call it whatever you want but this is the reason why I'm going to kill you today." Dark Jak smiled. "Stupider ones than you have tried!" Spenser lunged at Dark Jak and jabbed him in the face. Dark Jak recovered and grabbed Spenser by the hair throwing his head into his knee. Spenser bit Dark Jak's knee and kicked him in the face. Dark Jak screamed and grabbed Spenser. He was bending him and Spenser screamed as you heard his spine crack. He pulled out the shotgun and smacked Dark Jak in his chest with it. The shotgun shattered as Dark Jak grabbed his chest letting Spenser go. Spenser threw his knee forward into Dark Jak's face. "How do you like that feeling Dog!" Spenser jumped into the air and did a spinning kick sending Dark Jak flying. As Dark Jak was flying Spenser caught up with him and kicked him straight into the ground. Spenser then jumped on him and began to choke him. Dark Jak was struggling to get up and get Spenser's hands off of him but he was too weak from the beatings he received to do anything. Dark Jak stopped struggling and stopped moving all together. Spenser got up and walked a little ways away from the body. He was staring down to the people. He noticed that they looked horrified and he realized what happened then turned around and just saw Dark Jak smiling before he felt a sharp pain surging through him. Dark Jak whispered into his ear. "You forgot about my sword." He pulled it out and walked away from the body. "Get back to your work or your going to be next!" Everyone started working again as Jak flew back to his palace. Wind was now rushing around Spenser's body as a figure formed. "Don't give up friend it's not yet your time. We need to gather our forces and rise against this menace." Wind started rushing again and both Spenser and this new figure disappeared. Jak was now walking through the ruins of a small town. It was so horrible and terrible that Jak couldn't even stand to be there long, but something was telling him that he had to be there. A small noise was coming from one of the demolished buildings around the center of town. Jak closed his eyes and followed the sound vibrations. He was getting closer and closer before another noise was heard. Jak flung to the left of himself to see that there was a piece of creaked wood. Jak noticed something a little odd about it though. It was crushed and seem to be mash into the ground. Jak suddenly jumped forward barely dodging a blade being swung at him. He turned around and saw a man wearing armor. "Who the hell are you?" The man ran after him and threw three punches at Jak. He dodged them one by one then ran up to the man and threw a punch at him. The hit connected and Jak was sent flying back. "This is magic armor! You can't hit me unless the seal is deactivated!." Lying on his back Jak got up and replied. "I'll just have to turn it off then. By the way who are you." Lunging at Jak he drew a sword and tried to slice him in half. Jak moved out of the way and grabbed a rock. The man ran after Jak again and did a vertical slash. Once again Jak dodged and threw the rock at the man's helmet. The force from the hit knocked the man over. "So something can get through the seal." The man punched Jak and sent him flying toward some rocks. When Jak hit the rocks all of them fell toward him but he quickly moved out of the way. The man again punched Jak knocking him into the rocks behind him. The man was about to preform one final slice when a figure formed between them. Looking at the figure the man fell over and began to cry. "Tim... your alive." The figure looked down on the man and replied. "No. Tim died years ago. My name is Zen." THE COMPLETE FIRST CHAPTER THANK THE LORD ugh this was great and it was weird it took a while to come up with but i hope you guys like it |
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| <span style=Jak the Savior | Jun 22 2008, 11:30 PM Post #2 |
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Chapter 2: Gathering The man stood up and took off his helmet. "Tim, I thought I was the only one who survived the attack at the base that day." Tim turned to the man and spoke. "I survived the attack by drinking that water I told you about." The man looked at Jak and continued to talk to Tim. "I thought the water was a myth." Jak suddenly looked surprised. He walked over to them and asked a question. "Do you mean the Eternal Water?" Tim looked over at Jak and replied. "Yes, that is what we are talking about. Why?" "Nothing, nothing. I was just wondering." Tim looked at Jak with a puzzled expression then went back to talking to the man. "Stephen, I know you don't like him but this is the better half of Jak. His light side you could say." Jak jumped back and pointed at the man. "Your Stephen?" Stephen smiled. "If you really are the light side then it's nice to see you again Jak." Tim interrupted with an idea. "Look we've wasted enough time here. We need help to defeat Dark Jak and I have a pretty good idea who we could ask." Jak and Stephen both focused on Tim. Jak spoke up asking who it was and Tim looked at them both grimly but replied. "Jonny Sevenfold." Jak was suddenly enraged. "Why do we need his help? He has tried to destroy two dimensions and succeeded with mine!" Tim grabbed Jak and shook him. "He's probably the only chance we've got to kill Dark Jak!" Jak broke free of his grip and turned toward the sunset. He stood there having a small battle with himself and finally came to a conclusion. "Fine, we'll get his help. But if he tries anything I'll send him back in a heart beat." Tim smiled and put his hand on Jak's shoulder. "Thank you friend." Jak Turned toward them. "Stand back this is going to be loud." Tim jumped back with Stephen and summoned a shield to protect them. Seeing as they were safe Jak began to make hand signs and started to say words. "I open the gates of Oblivion. Not to put away but to summon a great evil. I ask that you may put him back if I should decide him to stay there." Jak suddenly jumped back and punched the ground. A crater formed with black energy coming up from it. "I ask that you may bring me!" He then did a flip and drove his leg into the crater. "Jonny Sevenfold!" Lightning struck the crater sending Jak flying back. As the light faded a figure formed in the crater. The figure turned into a man and seven hands came from the middle of his chest. He stood there looking around and feeling happy. He spoke and a strange chill spread through the air. "Destruction." he said. "Such beautiful, destruction." Tim lowered the shield and walked over to Jonny. A hand suddenly stopped him waving it's finger. "I don't care what you need me for. I won't do it. What made you think I would?" Tim tried to speak but every time he did Jonny would interrupt him. "So this is what happened if Ephiney's vessel denied her destiny. Heh heh... wonderful." Jonny was now facing Tim. "What did you need me for anyway?" Tim was angered but still managed to keep a calm attitude. "Your going to help us kill Dark Jak." Jonny gave an evil grin. "Oh really? Well then I hope you understand I'll be killing the rest of Jak too." Jak stood up and looked at Jonny. The essence of pure evil created Jonny, but Jak could never kill Jonny because of the history they had together in Jak's dimension. "Ok Jonny. If you truly think you could kill your best friend then we'll have a fight to the death. Only after we've saved this world." Jonny turned his head toward Jak. "It's really no point, because I'll just destroy this planet after I've killed you anyway." Jak put on a very serious face and replied. "We'll see." Tim could sense the fury between them. "Follow me one of our own needs serious attention and I don't have that kind of power." Stephen who was just staring at this whole incident suddenly sprung back to reality. "Who is it?" Tim looked over at Stephen and replied. "Spenser fought Dark Jak and was hurt really bad. All I can do is transfer energy to him so he won't die. I can't heal him." Jak ran toward Tim and punched him in the face. "Why didn't you tell me about that earlier? I could have fucking used my healing energy on him!" Tim who was recovering from the punch replied. "It slipped my mind." Jak calmed down a little and spoke back. "Look I'm sorry for hitting you but just take us already." The wind began to gather and they were gone again. Dark Jak was standing on his balcony when he felt a fierce energy from far away. He just laughed to himself. "How did Jonny escape Oblivion?" He thought about it for a moment and didn't like his conclusions. One he thought that Jonny somehow transcended beyond him and was looking for revenge. Another he thought the Elders were using Jonny in hopes that they would fight and kill each other off. He thought about how the wind was when he killed Spenser. He looked over and the rubble where Spenser's body lay and saw that it was missing. He smiled and spoke quietly to himself. "If your going to gather people to fight me, then so be it." He opened a small portal and reached inside. When he pulled his hand out he was holding an apple. "I'll just be waiting to kill you." He took a small bite of the apple and continued to watch the people work below. "I bet they don't even know where Richie is." He took another bite and continued. "As long as I have that they'll never be able to defeat me." The wind started churning inside a building of some kind. When the wind stopped all four of them appeared. Stephen fell on his knees holding his chest and began to spew. Tim turned around to look at Stephen. "The first time is always a little harsh on you." Jonny laughed and walked forward. "Weakling." He muttered under his breath. "Jak frowned at Jonny but then walked forward looking around. "I can't believe this." He said in amazement. "This is Richie's high school." Stephen got up to look around and added."Blue building cafeteria I believe." Jonny look around and smiled. "Yes, this is the place where I was sealed in that damned dimension." Jak walked over to Tim. "Where's Spenser?" Tim looked back at Jak and walked forward near a bed where Spenser lay. "I've been slowly transferring energy so he'll live, but now you need to use your healing ability." Jak couldn't believe what he was seeing. Spenser seemed like the last person who would be laying in a bed looking weak. "Jak? Are you ok?" Stephen said looking at Jak. Jonny laughed. "It's obvious that he's grown close to this human." Jak gave Jonny a dirty look. "He's one of Richie's best friends. I would imagine that Richie wouldn't like seeing him like this either." Jonny laughed again. "Being around all these humans has made you weak." Jak just ignored that comment and put his hand on Spenser's chest. Energy glowed from his hand but Jonny stopped him. "Let me heal him, he'll regain more strength." Jak looked confused. "Jonny are you feeling compassion for him?" Jonny put one of his hands on Spenser's forehead and the rest on his chest. "I call upon power to bring this poor soul back to life." Jak got a horrified look on his face. "He's dead?" Tim immediately caught what Jonny was doing. "Jak don't worry, he'll obtain more energy if Jonny uses a revival spell." Jak processed what he heard and felt relieved. "Thank you Jonny." Jonny finished the spell and looked at Jak. "Don't be so grateful. A long time ago we both promised each other that we would do one thing for each other, if you don't remember." Jak thought for a moment. He thought to a time when he was younger. In this time Jak was seven years old and he was walking to see a friend. Jonny met up with him and they continued walking. Back then he had the two hands and arms. His mouth wasn't sewn together with little slits cut out. He had bright blue eyes with a certain innocence in them, and not a dark coldness and feeling of death. While they were walking Jonny reahed into his pocket and pulled out some money. He gave it to Jak and they walked onward looking for a store. "Hey Jonny." Jak said putting the money into his pocket. "Yes, Jak." He said looking at him. "Do you think we'll be friends forever?" Jonny smiled and patted Jak on the back. "Definately." He said. That thought ended and Jak's mind moved to the day before Jonny left. Jonny was drafted into the military and this was going to be the last time they could be together as friends. Jonny was thinking about his life and how worthless he felt. "Jak." Jak looked over to Jonny and replied. "Yes, Jonny." Jak noticed that Jonny's eyes were beginning to water. "Do you think... I'm going to come back alive." Jak patted Jonny on the back. "Jonny, even if you come back a completely different person your still going to be my best friend." Jonny looked back at Jak and smiled. "Thanks Jak. I needed to hear that." Sadly Jonny and Jak would not stay friends forever. When Jonny was in the war he was captured by the only beings that could scare the Elders. These beings were once Elders but fought for power and were banished from the realm of light where the Elders stay and watch the worlds for heroes. The banished Elders were sent to Oblivion where they gathered and learn the dark arts. They could no longer take on the name of Elders so they remained nameless until they captured Jonny as their villain. They brought Jonny back to Oblivion and chopped off his arms. Jonny screamed but there was nothing he could do. No one who could help. He cried for Jak to save him but Jak was thousands of miles away. They removed his hands from his severed arms. The last thing Jonny saw before passing out was one of the wraiths smiling. When Jonny woke up he had forgotten about everything. Jonny and Jak didn't meet up again for quite some time. Jonny changed completely. He didn't even remember who Jak was until he was defeated and regained some of his memory after the battle. When that happened Jonny went out of control and even more insane. Jonny soon became the essence of pure evil. Jak always blamed himself for what happened to Jonny. He could never understand why they were chosen for this path. "Jak are you ok?" He was suddenly brought back into reality. Jonny was staring at him with a strange look. "The human is going to be ok. He just needs to rest a couple of hours." Jak patted Jonny on the back. Jonny grabbed his hand and threw him across the cafeteria. "Don't ever touch me unless you mean to fight." Jak recovered and landed on his feet. "Sorry, the Jonny I was reaching for died many years ago." Tim stood up and yelled at both of them. "Look no matter what happens we need to stay together on this. I don't care if you two hate each other. Deal with it when we've saved the world not before." Both of them looked at Tim and agreed to put away differences for now. Stephen went off into another room for a while. Jak looked over at Jonny who was doing something with his hands that was intriguing. "Hey Jonny." Jonny continued what he was doing but he answered Jak. "Yes, what do you want." Jak looked over at Spenser. He noticed Spenser was moving as if he were having a dream. "How long do you think it'll be until Spenser wakes up?" Jonny stopped what he was doing and stood up. he walked over to Spenser and pointed at him. "Do you notice him moving." Jak was a little angry but he knew what Jonny was getting at. Spenser would probably wake up soon and they could tell him about what's going on. Tim sat near the bed at all times. He waited and watched for Spenser to get up. He looked at Jak and noticed that Jak was waiting impatiently for him to get up. "Jak, how close were you with Spenser?" Jak looked at him confused but he answered. "Spenser is a nice person. In fact, I would say he and Richie were like Jonny and I." Tim now looked confused. "I thought you and Jonny were mortal enemies." Jak looked at the ground and sighed. "We weren't always like that. We used to be really good friends." Spenser jumped up in shock as if he awoke from a nightmare. He looked around the room and noticed Tim sleeping near the bed. He saw Jonny was staring at him with his evil eyes. This made Spenser a little uncomfortable and it scared him. "Don't worry human. I'm not here to kill you... yet." Spenser suddenly smiled. "If I could take on Jak and survive then I could certainly take on your punk ass." Jonny smiled and shook Jak to wake up. "Your Friend has finally awaken. Get up!" Jak grabbed Jonny's hand and squeezed it with great force. "I don't like to hear your lies Jonny." He said getting on his knees. Jak was now standing up and staring at Jonny. "He'll get up when he's ready." Spenser was staring at Jak in horror. He was backing away and fell on the floor beside the bed. Jak heard the commotion and walked over to the bed. He noticed Spenser was awake but with a horrified expression. "Spenser are you o-" Spenser suddenly cut him off. "You stay away from me! You killed all of my friends and now you want to torture me!" Jak realized what this was all about. Spenser was still sliding on the floor and backed into a corner. He was breathing hard and sweating really bad. Jak looked down to the ground and released a guilty sigh. He walked over to the corner where Spenser was and crouched down. "I am not the Jak that did that to you." Spenser was now infuriated. "What makes you think that I'll trust you." Jak smiled and replied. "Take my hand." He held out his hand to Spenser who reluctantly stared at it. He reached his hand out once but then drew it back. "Spenser, you can trust me." Spenser looked at Jak and noticed a kindness in his eyes. His green eyes made Spenser think of Richie. He place his hand on Jak's and felt like he was speaking to an old friend. "I'm sorry I didn't trust you." Jak smiled softly and replied. "It's o- " Stephen ran into the room and yelled. "Spawns have found us!" Tim woke up and wanted to know what was going on. Stephen said it again. "There are spawns outside the school! We need to be ready!" Jak stood up and looked at Jonny. Jonny grinned and nodded his head. "It's time I had some fun!" He yelled out gathering energy. He was laughing and disappeared in a cloud of black energy. Jak pulled Spenser to his feet and walked over to Tim who already knew what Jak was thinking. Jak stared at Tim seriously. "What are spawns?" Stephen ran to them and told them everything he knew. While they were talking they could hear Jonny laughing and the screams of his victims. Every now and then they could hear Jonny speaking. "You dare think you can kill me!" He said most often. |
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| <span style=Jak the Savior | Jun 22 2008, 11:35 PM Post #3 |
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Chapter 3: Heartache By the way the sounds were outside the building, Jonny was doing a little more than killing the spawns. He was laughing and yelling out words that pointed to one conclusion. Jak made a small giggle and everyone noticed. Tim looked at him confused. "What's so funny?" Jak smiled and replied. "Nothing, nothing, just listening to an old friend have some fun." Stephen was now looking confused. He tried to ask a question but just as words came out part of a wall blew open from the east side of the cafeteria. Jonny walked through looking triumphant. He gave an evil grin and looked at everyone. "They're gone." He said with a smirk on his face. They watched Jonny walk to the table they were sitting at and pull up a chair. All seven of his hands fell gently to the table. He noticed they were all looking at him and he spoke softly. "What the fuck are you looking at?" Jak started laughing really hard. They could barely understand him when he spoke. "Honestly, did you hear yourself out there?" Jonny put on an angry face and replied. "Hey. Shut your gappling mouth." Everyone now looked confused except for Jak. Stephen said it first. "What does gappling mean?" Jak started laughing even harder. He somehow managed to get out what it meant. "It was a curse word on our planet." Tim was now looking confused. "You mean to tell me you had your own language on your planet?" Jak was cut off before he replied by a loud screaming sound. Jonny smiled. "If it's more spawns I want to kill them." Stephen threw his hand in the air to stop Jonny. "No it sounded like a girl and it sounded familiar." Spenser jumped up and yelled at them. "Well what are we waiting for? Let's go see what's up." The rest of them stood up and walked over to the large gaping hole in the wall to look out. There were two people. One of them was fighting what seemed to be spawns. The other was screaming as it watched the other person fight. Tim ran through the wall to help the people being attacked. "Tim, you idiot!" Stephen said as he ran down to help shortly after Tim did. Jak began to run as well followed by Spenser who suddenly decided to look back at Jonny. He threw his hands to the ground and bent over. "Well are you going to help?" Jonny crossed his legs and looked down at Spenser then at the battle below. "I think I'll stay here. People are dying and I would like to watch." Spenser gave an angry sigh and pulled a gun out from his back. He put a scope on it and went into sniper mode. One of the people was running toward the school to try to get to safety with a spawn running steadily behind the person. Jak jumped into the air and knocked it to the ground by grinding his heel into it's head. He looked at the person and told them to run to the school. He didn't get much of a look but he noticed it was a girl. The spawn grabbed Jak's leg and threw him off of it. Jak landed on the ground hard but he got up and punched the spawn in the gut then threw a kick at it's head. The creature screamed as it fell to the ground. "Got ya." Jak said with a low voice. He turned around to help the others but it got back up and grabbed Jak by the head. Meanwhile Tim and Stephen were fighting back to back. One of the spawns threw a punch at Tim, but he ducked down and hit it twice in the stomach then delivering an uppercut to it's jaw. Stephen jumped on it's back and put it in a headlock. It fell to the ground on Stephen who screamed as the weight of the whole creature was pressing against him. Tim tried to pull it off of Stephen but another grabbed him by the arms and tried to pull him apart. Spenser was taking aim at the one that had Jak. It was flailing around rapidly giving him a hard time. He took a deep breath and fired the gun. The spawn fell over screaming. Jak was released and grabbed it's arm. He swung around several times and threw it right at the spawn that was holding Tim. The spawns collided and Tim was let go. He stopped to feel his arms for a moment and saw that the Spawn that fell on Stephen was now racing toward him. The beast threw it's arm forward to grab Tim but suddenly drew it back and screeched in pain. Tim opened his eyes to look upon what was causing it to scream so loudly. The spawn was on fire. Tim looked to the left of him to see the other person with a steady beam of fire coming from his hands. This person was a man, he stood not too high but he seemed familiar. "Thank you." Tim said under his breath. Another spawn was coming right at him. It roared and screamed as it was getting closer. Tim jumped into the air at the last moment watching it run into the one the man has set aflame. They fell over passing out. Tim smiled and set his sights to Stephen who was knocked out. He ran to Stephen and picked him up. Tim called out to Jak. "Hey Jak can you handle them while I get Stephen into the school?" Jak dodged a spawn and grabbed another by it's tail. "I'll be fine! Just hurry up!" He exclaimed while swinging the spawn into two others. Tim nodded his head and ran back to the school. When he ran through the hole in the wall he yelled for the girl. She skittishly came over. "He needs some help. All I want you to do is make sure he's breathing and make him drink this." He laid Stephen's body down on a table and handed the girl a bottle of water. He saw her and his eyes widened. "Is your name -" He was cut off by Spenser yelling. "Tim! I'm out of bullets and Jak and the other guy need help now!" Tim sighed and walked out of the hole in the wall. "I'm on my way!" He said taking a huge jump. Jak and the man were surrounded by the seven spawns while four of them were heading over to Spenser. Tim was now very high in the air. When he stopped rising he looked down to see Jak and the man. He started to fall gaining speed. Jak looked up to the sky and saw Tim coming down. "Holy shit." He said with a look of surprise. "We need to get out of here." He looked over at the man and grabbed him. He then jumped out of the circle of spawns. Jak watched in horror as Tim came hurdling down to earth. When he hit the ground the spawns flew off into different directions. "You help the guy over there. His name is Spenser." Jak said with a commanding look. The man nodded and ran to him. Jak ran to Tim. He was laying in a crater brought on by the attack. Jak walked into the crater and saw Tim at the center of it. He walked to Tim's body and held him. "Hey Tim." He said with his eyes filling with tears. "You got them, they're gone." Tim barely opened his eyes and smiled. "See..." He was saying in a low voice. Tim closed his eyes. Jak screamed in pain as he held him. He let go of the body and walked out of the crater to see the man and Spenser fighting the spawns that went after him. Jak walked a little forward and stopped. He punched the ground making a small crater. As he did that a bolt of lightning struck him. Jonny watched and smiled. "Seems you've got some of your power back." He said still smiling. When the light cleared Jak was holding a sword. Spenser watched and was confused. "What the hell?" He was saying trying to figure out what Jonny meant. Jonny yelled out. "Now you can see what the Elders' chosen can really do." Jak took a stance and rushed forward to the spawns. "With power returned, he is stronger than ever. This blade is called Absolution ,and with it he can strike down even the most wicked evil." Jonny said still smiling. One spawn jumped at Jak and it grabbed him. Jak retaliated by prying himself open and throwing the spawn at another. They hit and fell to the ground. A third one was trying to impale Jak with it's horn but Jak grabbed it with one hand and twisted his hand. It flip and hit the ground, he then threw it into the pile he was making out of spawns. Another lunged into the air and body slammed Jak. Everyone was watching and let out a huge gasp except for Jonny. He kept smiling and began to laugh. Spenser turned to him. "He might be dead and your laughing?" Jonny replied still laughing. "So what if he is dead, but before if you make false assumptions look upon the spawn." Spenser did as he said. A beam of light rose from the ground and the spawn started screaming. It completely disintegrated from the light and Jak was at the center. He was holding his sword high in the air. The light faded and Jak fell to his knees. He was breathing hard and catching his breath. A final spawn was standing in front of him. "What's the matter? Not gonna finish me off?" One of it's fingers grew and flattened and It looked down at Jak. It launched it's hand forward and Jak smiled. He grabbed the giant creature by the hand and started swinging it around. After a couple seconds of swinging he jumped into the air and did a front flip flipping the spawn as well. He let go and it landed near the pile with it's hand barely touching one of the spawns in the pile. Jak smiled and walked past the pile. He grabbed Tim and started to run toward the school. Spenser saw what he was doing and ran to the school too. The girl was there and giving Stephen CPR. Jak ran up to him and dropped to his knees. "What happened?" He yelled with concern. The girl stopped for a moment and spoke to Jak. "He stopped breathing... I don't know what to do." "Get out of the way!" Jak yelled as he grabbed Tim and set him up on a near by table. "Spenser! Stephen should wake up if you give him this."He threw a bottle at Spenser and then he put his left hand on Tim's head and his right one on the center of his chest. "When he does inform him of what happened." Spenser nodded and walked over to Stephen's body. The person with the fire abilities just walked into the school. "Hey what can I do?" Jak opened Tim's shirt and pushed down on his chest. "Just go through the wall and stand near Jonny. Watch for anymore spawns. We can't risk another attack like that unprepared." The person said "Yes" and walked through hole. Jak's hands began to glow a bluish color and he was saying some strange words. The girl was watching this confused. "How is this helping?" She said in a strange voice. Jak's hands began to glow intensely and they faded within a few seconds. Tim sprung to life. He was coughing terribly as the air was rushing into his lungs. Jak smiled and replied. "That's how." Jak looked over at the girl. "You remind me of someone, but that doesn't matter. Can I count on you to watch him?" She nodded and watched Jak walk over to Spenser. He was kneeling down holding Stephen's head up and shaking him a little. "Hey Stephen... wake up... we're safe." Jak watched and sat down next to him. "Is he breathing?" Spenser was shaking a little more replied. "Yes but he's not waking up." Jak stood up and looked a little concerned. "Just as long as he's breathing... he's fine." After he said that a loud crackling sound was heard. Everyone was looking around the cafeteria and Tim spoke up. "What the hell was that?" Spenser stood up and looked outside a window. "I don't know but I think we should be on our guard." He looked away from the window and a large foot came down. The person came running inside through the hole. His face was pale and he started to scream. "There is something out there you guys need to see!" He ran to the other side of the cafeteria and was holding his chest. Jak and Spenser both moved their heads and stared at each other. Then they ran toward the hole and looked outside. It was huge. It stood over one hundred sixty feet and it's head was covered with a helmet of bone. Tim slowly walked over to the hole. His jaw dropped and his face was as white as snow. "It's a Giga... we're going to die." Spenser and Jak looked over at him. Spenser spoke up. "Your being a little dramatic don't you think?" Spenser looked away from Tim and looked at Jak. "Do you remember what your sword did to that one spawn?" Jak looked back and replied. "Yes." He realized what Spenser was getting at and reached to his back to find that he didn't put his sword away. He turned around and looked around the cafeteria for a brief moment and then back to where he was when he was outside of the school. The spawn was moving around a little making it hard to see but Jak noticed it near it's feet. "Fuck." Jak said as he turned to the rest of them. Spenser realized as well and gathered a plan. "Since we aren't going to do this in a safe way." Jonny interrupted with a laugh and Spenser glared at him. "Jak your going to have to get your sword. Tim and the flamer over there are going to distract it." The man heard what was said and yelled. "Hey what does that mean?" Spenser was yelling at him back and Tim stopped them. "This is not time to argue, we have to finish this thing." Jonny started to laugh and flew at the creature. He punched it in the lower jaw and watched it fall. Everyone was watching in awe and Jonny looked back at the school. "How's that for a distraction?" He yelled down to them. Jak pointed and yelled back. "Jonny behind you!" But before he could turn around a humongous tail smacked him back to the school. He flew through the top of the building and landed inside making a huge thud. Jak decided to make a dash for Absolution. The spawn looked down and tried to step on him. It missed and Jak kept running. He dodged another attack from a tail swipe by jumping over it. "I'm almost there." He said to himself under his breath. Jak reached his sword and was making a roll to grab it. The spawn threw it's fist down right on top of it trying to hit Jak and it began to scream. Jak was confused and stared up at the spawn's hand. Absolution was sticking out of it's middle knuckle. Jonny finally got up and flew back at the spawn. With one hand he grabbed it's left hand and with four others he formed beams of energy in his hands and stabbed them into the creature's knees. The spawn lost it's ground and began to kneel and scream. This gave way for him to start swinging it around. "Jonny don't let go! I've got an idea!" Jak screamed. Jonny smiled and replied. "Whatever. Just make it quick before I change my mind." Jonny yelled back. Jak flew into the air higher than Jonny. He flew above the clouds and could see the sun. Jak smiled a0s he put his foot out and started to fall. Jonny saw what Jak was doing and threw it up at him. "Here's a little help." He said and watched Jak and the spawn collide. Jak hit it right in the stomach and drug it down to earth with him at a greater speed. Jak jumped off before it hit ground. He landed near and ran to it's left hand. He saw Absolution in it's knuckle and ripped it out. The spawn screamed and got up with the little strength it had left. Jak walked to it and stared. It was breathing hard and could barely hold itself up. "Be gone." Jak said as he stabbed it between it's eyes breaking through the bone helmet. Light started to glow all around the creature and it grew bright. The spawn slowly started to fade away along with the light. When it was gone Jonny landed near Jak. "Good job. You actually killed something." He said in a sarcastic tone. Jak started to walk back to the school and replied. "Yes I did." Jonny was feeling a little unsatisfied with Jak's comment and just decided to walk back with him. When they reached the school Stephen had awakened. Spenser filled him in on everything that happened while he was asleep. When Jak walked through the hole he fell to his knees and laid down for a moment. "This battle took a lot out of me. I'm not at full strength unless Richie is with me." The man came over and stared at Jak. "Do you mean the Richie that went to this school with you guys?" Jak was a little agitated. "He went here and I didn't, but yes that's him." The woman came over and spoke. "Do you know where he is?" Jak replied again. "No, I don't know where he is or if he's even alive." The woman started to cry and went into another room of the building. "Spenser could you go after her to make sure it's safe?" Spenser started to walk the way she went and replied. "Sure." He left the cafeteria and Jak spoke to the man. "How do you know us?" He said as he got up from the ground. The man looked down at the ground. "I used to know you a while back." Stephen looked surprised and then superstitious. "Who were you?" He said with a little anger in his voice. The man looked back at Stephen and replied. "I'm Tommy. I didn't know if it were you guys, but if I did I would have spoken up sooner." Jak walked over to Tommy and grabbed his by his shirt collier. His face had a serious tone and he spoke. "Who's the girl?" Tommy looked a little scared but he replied. "It's Nikki don't you remember what she looked like?" Jak let go and his anger was rising. She walked into the room and he set off. He walked over to her and grabbed her by her throat. Everyone was looking confused and was telling him to let her go. He didn't listen and his eyes began to glow. Tim just heard who it was and walked over to them. Jak pushed her into a wall and held her in the air. She let out a small scream and tried to speak. "Why are you doing this?" Jak replied with his anger getting the best of him. "The question isn't why am I doing this. The question is how the fuck are you still alive?" Tears ran down her face and she couldn't breathe. Tim became enraged and punched Jak in the face. He let go and fell to the ground along with Nikki. After Jak regained his composer he stood up and put his face close to Tim's. "This whole thing is her fault and you want her to live?" Tim pushed him a little away and replied. "She is a person and we need to save the people and this planet." Jak looked furious and punched the near by wall putting a hole in it. "Fine! She can stay alive I don't give a damn." He walked through the first hole in the wall and stood outside. Later that night there was a little bit of commotion. Some spawns had gotten into the cafeteria, but they weren't much of a bother. After they were gone everyone could still hear the screech of dying spawns. Jak walked outside of the school and saw a person surrounded by a couple spawns. He was equipped with a huge sword and started killing off the spawns very easily. Jak could hear the man screaming something while killing them but he wasn't completely sure of what they were. The sword he was carrying started to glow and Jak realized something. He ran toward the person hoping to be able to talk to him. The spawns he was fighting posed no threat as he took them out with a single swing of his blade. Jak was close and was about to speak when the man swung at him. Jak dodged and spoke. "Hey don't swing I'm a friendly." The man disregarded his words and swung at Jak again. Jak dodged and heard the man talk. "They killed her... they killed her!" He didn't know what the person was talking about and tried to figure out more. "Who did they kill? Jak asked. The man turned around and stabbed the sword into the ground. A red light came up and several spawns died. "They killed... they killed Devanne!" He yelled out as he did a vertical slice cutting a spawn in half. Jak heard what the man said and knew who he was. |
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Chapter 4: Guardians Jak ran to the man and tackled him to the ground. "Chill out!" He screamed as the man was flailing around under him. Red energy started to glow from his eyes and mouth. Jak was stupefied and didn't know what to do. The man rolled and knocked Jak off sending him into a near by tree. As Jak collided with the tree he saw a glimpse of the man rushing toward him with the blade. "No!" Jak screamed and kicked the blade aside ducking to the ground. The man reacted and flung his arm behind his back grabbing Jak and pushing him to the ground. Jak wondered on how he could be so powerful. The battle raged on as many more kicks and punches were thrown. Jak was a little distracted by the thinking that was going on and he wasn't doing too well in the battle. He kept trying to figure it out but nothing made sense. He finally noticed how the blade was and saw the excellent craftsmanship. The man did a downward vertical slice at Jak and he barely managed to catch it before he was cut in half. As he was holding onto the blade the man was pushing it down. It started to glow again and Jak got a close up view of it. "It's time to end this." Jak slowly turned the blade slightly to the left of him so that it wasn't facing him anymore. He held on a little longer to make sure what he was thinking would work. Jak smiled then let go. He ducked quickly to the right as the sword now buried itself in the ground. The man started grunting and tried to pull it out, but by the time he got it Jak unleashed a powerful kick to the right side of his face knocking him out. He put the man on his back and started dragging the sword back to the school. Jonny saw Jak coming and saw what he was carrying. "So you decided to keep the trash." He turned his head. "Why not just waste him?" Jak walked through the hole in the wall. "Shut up Jonny." Jak saw everyone that was asleep and just decided to lay the man on top of a near by table. "Ok Raymond, while you sleep I'm going to examine your sword." He took the behemoth of a sword and sat down in a corner with it in his hand. He stared at it deeply and it began to glow. "Tell me your secrets." He whispered quietly. A bright light flashed and Jak passed out. In another place there were people screaming and dying. It was inside a castle and there were two great forces battling for the fate of the universe. Jonny Sevenfold and Jak had just powered up to the highest level they possessed with Jonny's being stronger. The battle went off and they flew at each other. The castle was crumbling around them. Right before they collided Jonny ducked and grabbed Jak's torso. He flew into a pillar and let Jak go sitting on his chest holding his head with two hands and punching him repeatedly with the other five. "Face it Jak." He held him in the air by the throat. "I'm always going to be stronger than you." He said grinning. He punched Jak one more time in the side of the face and threw him to the ground into another pillar. It fell over with the rubble covering Jak. Jonny walked over to it and began to scream. "Is that it? Is that all of it? You do not deserve this power!" Jak flew out of the rubble punching Jonny really hard in the gut. All of the air rushed out of him and Jak struck again with a quick kick to the upper jaw. Jonny flipped into the air and came down hard, several pieces of the castle landed near him. "I don't deserve this power? What about you? I use my power to save the innocent! All you do is kill and bring pain to others! How dare you tell me what I don't deserve!" Jak said standing above Jonny. A wall near them cracked and pieces came crumbling out. Jak started raising his energy more and you could see it seeping out of his pure white eyes. "You want my all? Well here it is!" One of Jonny's hand rushed toward Jak, but he caught it. Jonny rose and laughed at him. "I wouldn't expect any less from the Elder's chosen!" An energy blast came from the hand and it hit Jak directly. He closed his eyes and started kneeling in pain. Jonny stared down and threw a punch, but Jak disappeared and formed behind him. He put Jonny in a headlock and rose into the air. "What are you doing?" Jak squeezed harder and replied. "You killed Odate! You killed Chinook! Now I'm going to kill you!" Jonny laughed and grabbed him raising his knee and pushing Jak's backside down on it. A loud crack echoed throughout the falling castle. Jak started to scream from the pain. "Music to my ears!" He let go, letting Jak fall to the ground. Unable to move he lied there, tears coming from his eyes. "What was that part about killing me?" He grabbed Jak's leg near his foot and started swinging and slamming him into everything that was nearby. "I'm going to have fun with this!" Jonny then grabbed all of his limbs with a different hand and started pulling. Jak was screaming again and something awakened inside of him. A blast of black energy hit Jonny and he was sent backward. This was the first record of Jak ever unleashing his darker side. Jonny recovered confused and angered. He ran toward Jak and used one hand to punch him and knock him down. "So it's a fight is it!" Jak stood up. Everything on him had gone a really dark blue except for his eyes. They were pure white with large amounts of energy seeping out. "Fight m-" Jak had punched him in his mouth and then he quickly went behind him and gave another punch in the back. In another place close to the wrecking castle. There was a man and he just felt the immense rise in power. This person was the Guardian of Wisdom. He put his hand on his head and sent out a psychic message to the other guardians. "Jak and Jonny are fighting but something's wrong. I think Jonny has unleashed some kind of power, Jak might be in trouble!" Every other Guardian got the message and ran toward the castle. Back at the castle, Jak was disappearing and reappearing in different locations. Each one he hit Jonny a different way. He did this many times not stopping or even thinking about what he was doing. One time he kicked Jonny into the air and reappeared again. He clamped his hands together and screamed thrusting them into Jonny's stomach launching him into the ground. Every hand lay there, twitching and unable to do anything else. Jak stomped his foot on Jonny's neck pushing into the ground creating a crater. Rocks raised into the air floating from the excess amount of energy. Every Guardian was making their way to the castle as quickly as they could, they each had a horrible feeling about what they would find. Many of them were thinking Jak would be dead but that was much the opposite. Jak took his foot off and bent down. He whispered in a very low tone, "Get up." Jonny's raised one hand and flipped him off. "S- suck on it..." Jak grabbed Jonny's head and snapped it. His eyes wide open with the slits for his mouth completely stretched. The Guardian of Strength just entered the room and watched what had just happened. He knew what was going on and ran toward Jak. He drew his sword and stabbed him in the chest impaling him. "Return!" He yelled out as a bright light came from the hilt and surged into Jak. Jak screamed and he returned to normal. The Guardian pulled the blade out and the wound was gone. Jak fell to the floor passed out and the Guardian ran over to make sure he was ok. Two more Guardians arrived and walked near Jak and Strength. The Guardian of Water bent down next to Strength. "Rhizaka what happened?" Not even looking at her he answered, "Jak lost control of his darker side and killed Jonny." The Guardian of Light noticed Water looking weird. "Jewel, what's wrong?" He said shaking her a little bit. "Well it's just that Jak killed him. I can't say I'm not happy he's gone, but did he have to kill him?" Strength looked up at Light. "Where's Phantom (Shadows), Steruto (Wisdom), Tanshu (Fire), Mucork (Wrath), Cuzad (Earth), and Duke (Plasma)?" "They should be here soon," he replied. Wisdom had walked past much of what was the castle and saw the other Guardians. "Am I too Late?" He said with a confused look. Light looked at Wisdom and spoke. "Steruto! Good to see ya!" He said walking over putting a hand on Wisdom's shoulder. Wisdom knocked it off and replied. "Shut up Spurn, I want to know what happened." Light walked back to the other Guardian's and told him to come look. Wisdom saw Jonny and then looked at Jak. He already knew what had happened and had a terrible look. "We have a stale victory my friends, Jonny may be defeated but... Jak is now a murderer." Water stood up and looked toward Wisdom noticing four other Guardians arrive. "Do we have to hand him over to the Elder's?" Wisdom stared at the ground shaking his head. "No, but we need to tell them about what happened." Wrath, Shadows, Plasma, and Earth were told everything that had just happened. Wrath looked around at all of the guardians and noticed something. "Hey where's Tanshu?" Plasma and Shadow looked around and both asked the same question. Earth replied, "He's late like he always is. Has the raw power of Fire at his command and he's late." Strength smacked Earth in the back of the head and spoke angrily at him. "He's saved your ass on more than one occasion, you know." In the crater where Jonny lay there was his seventh hand. It lay there unmoving and with energy drained and it began to twitch. Wisdom put his hand on his head and spoke aloud to the other Guardians. "I'm sending him a message to get here as quickly as he can." Light looked back at Jak and spoke. "Well there's nothing going on here so he doesn't really need to take time. Jonny rose into the air bent over. "You think you can kill me?" He stood straight up with every hand in the air. "You dare think you can kill me?!" The Guardians turned to look at him and were surprised. Strength yelled out to him. "How are you still alive?" Wisdom drew his sword. "Everyone! Swords out now!" They all drew their swords and prepared for battle. Jonny's seventh hand raised into the air and the other six made different hand signs. They began gathering energy and Jonny screamed again. "If I can't kill you! Then I'll destroy the whole damned universe!" Energy was gathering rapidly and Wisdom stepped back. "We need Tanshu right now! Rhizaka! Jewel! Cuzad! Attack him while I find Jak a safe place to hide!" All three of them yelled out at the same time. "Understood!" Each of them flew at Jonny separate times slashing when they could, But they never hit him. A shield was stopping them from hurting him. Strength punched the ground and yelled out. "Damn! Our attacks are useless!" A giant ball of energy began to form in his seventh hand. Light clenched his teeth and knew what was going on. He called out to the other Guardians. "If that thing touches the planet this whole universe will be destroyed!" Some of the Guardians gasped and they all looked at him. Shadows yelled out. "Are you sure?" Light still looking up replied. "Yes, I've encountered something like this before! Same ball of energy just different color and not as strong!" Earth then put up a barrier of rock under Jonny. "This can stop the blast for only so long! Jewel I'm going to need you to freeze it so we can get rid of it!" Water nodded her head and raised her sword. Liquid flowed from it ready to freeze and grab the energy on command. Wisdom put a small energy field around Jak and spoke lowly. "You'll be ok my friend... you'll be ok." He stood back up and ran to the other Guardians. When he arrived there was a barrier around Jonny. "Why is there a barrier?" Strength stabbed his sword into the ground and did a hand sign. At that moment the barrier had gained more strength. Light ran to Wisdom. "Jonny's trying to destroy the whole universe and we are trying to stop it." Shadows yelled out with a bleakness in his voice. "I don't think we can stop it." He flew again at Jonny trying to break through the shield, but it's still useless. "Jonny is even stronger than the Wraiths and the Elders combined!" Water yelled out still holding her liquid barrier out. Wisdom thought of something and decided to go with it. "Everyone listen, though it pains me there is nothing more we can do. The people and this universe are forfeit." They lowered their heads in defeat. "If that's what we must do," Wrath said. Wisdom did some hand signs and Jak formed inside a bubble in front of them. They all raised their swords and transferred an energy into Jak. A bright light consumed him and he was gone. He was sent to a world that had not been touched by magic and heroes for a long time. The dimension jump had disintegrated his body and all that was left was his spirit and energy. He came down in a meteor like crash and landed in the back yard of a small boy. The boy was no more than five and his life was about to change forever. The boy walked over to the surging mess of energy. It was in the shape of a ball and the boy touched it. Back on Threa, the Guardians were about to do the same thing when the realized something. Light looked around and yelled, "Where's Tanshu?" "That arrogant punk still isn't here!" Earth replied. Just then, Jonny started to laugh and was done gathering energy. He was ready to release it and destroy everything. Fire quickly entered and slashed him in the back with Jonny letting go of the great ball. It fell to the the ground and one thing was heard before everything was completely obliterated. It was the the voice of Wisdom and he said with tears in his eyes, " All is lost." Jak grabbed his heart and reawakened from his nightmarish dream. He started to breathe really hard as if it were the first breath he had ever taken. He then looked back at the sword that Raymond had and figured something out. Jak stood up and grabbed the sword. After that, he walked over to Raymond and gave him something to drink. Raymond awakened and started flailing around in fear. He had no memory of how he was there or even why. "What the hell is going on here?" He said as he examined the room. Just then he noticed Jak standing next to him. Raymond jumped and fell off the table. He was about to scream when a voice inside of him started to talk. Everything went black and Raymond saw a figure standing in front of him. It move it's head up and began to speak. "Raymond, There's no need to fear me. There is no reason to fear Jak either." He seemed to glide closer to Raymond. "My name is Rhizaka and I am the Guardian of Strength. I need you to tell Jak that his quest is about to make a drastic detour." Raymond finally replied, "Sure, I'll do anything." Rhizaka smiled. "Tell Jak that like you, the other Guardians' spirits have been transferred into certain humans on this planet. Sadly one of us is already dead so our power may not be as strong." Raymond nodded and accepted to do anything Rhizaka told him to do. Raymond snapped back into reality and looked around the room. Jak was still standing there with a confused look. Raymond stood up and grabbed Jak by the shoulders. "We need to find the other Guardians' spirits." Jak smiled and replied, "Then let's go get them." |
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