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Flaws; A fan comic
Topic Started: Aug 5 2009, 04:44 PM (156 Views)
ASpieboy	Aug 5 2009, 04:44 PM Post #1
The Umbrageous Posts: 1,169 Group: Members Member #30 Joined: July 17, 2008



rarisgod	Aug 5 2009, 11:23 PM Post #2
The Greatest of All Beings Posts: 1,106 Group: Members Member #37 Joined: August 11, 2008	Haha! That's brilliant! lol actually made me laugh. The reason I didn't take this on is because I didn't think I could match the cleverness and wit that the comic portrayed. But you sir have done so, at least from what I can see. You took the cleverness, came up with a good punchline, included the bantering factor (as well as putting it in a bit of rant, ala CvS)...well done. And the pictures aren't half bad. Now in ASpie fashion, I must point out a typo in the 4th panel --- "It doesn't matter who writing our little..." etc., it should be "It doesn't matter who is writing our little..." etc. or something of that variation. Edited by rarisgod, Aug 5 2009, 11:30 PM.



Cresent	Aug 6 2009, 10:16 AM Post #3
Shape Posts: 43 Group: Members Member #193 Joined: April 17, 2009	rarisgod Aug 5 2009, 11:23 PM Now in ASpie fashion, I must point out a typo in the 4th panel --- "It doesn't matter who writing our little..." etc., it should be "It doesn't matter who is writing our little..." etc. or something of that variation. I'm pretty sure that is panel 3.



ASpieboy	Aug 6 2009, 01:29 PM Post #4
The Umbrageous Posts: 1,169 Group: Members Member #30 Joined: July 17, 2008	Typo? What typo?



moebius	Aug 6 2009, 01:46 PM Post #5
Shape Posts: 45 Group: Members Member #195 Joined: April 25, 2009	typos isnt a word technically, so doesnt that make it itself typo? also redo as a png file plox the compression makes the font hard to read at some points



rarisgod	Aug 6 2009, 05:15 PM Post #6
The Greatest of All Beings Posts: 1,106 Group: Members Member #37 Joined: August 11, 2008	Cresent Aug 6 2009, 10:16 AM rarisgod Aug 5 2009, 11:23 PM Now in ASpie fashion, I must point out a typo in the 4th panel --- "It doesn't matter who writing our little..." etc., it should be "It doesn't matter who is writing our little..." etc. or something of that variation. I'm pretty sure that is panel 3. Wow I'm an idiot, you're correct.... But I found it humourous that the punchline was made void with any typo throughout.. And typo itself is not a typo. Not to mention that my spell-checker in Opera says it's a word...but a word that isn't a word is not a typo.. For instance, if I type shloombazam, that's not a typo because I intended to type it. Typos are accidental errors. Shloombazam is just nonsense.



moebius	Aug 10 2009, 04:21 PM Post #7
Shape Posts: 45 Group: Members Member #195 Joined: April 25, 2009	but by that logic there would never be any typos, if people didnt admit to them stuff like "I meant to write 'teh' instead of 'the'" would be everywhere therefore id still view it as a typo, regardless of whether it is admitted or not



ASpieboy	Aug 10 2009, 05:18 PM Post #8
The Umbrageous Posts: 1,169 Group: Members Member #30 Joined: July 17, 2008	But if people didn't admit to them, they would still be typos. It would just be impossible to prove it.



rarisgod	Aug 10 2009, 06:42 PM Post #9
The Greatest of All Beings Posts: 1,106 Group: Members Member #37 Joined: August 11, 2008	ASpieboy Aug 10 2009, 05:18 PM But if people didn't admit to them, they would still be typos. It would just be impossible to prove it. It would not be impossible. Simply let someone else point them out! That doesn't mean you're admitting to them. Even if you deny that it is a typo, it's still a typo. If someone is denying that a typo is a typo, they are an idiot. Unless of course it isn't a typo, in which case the accuser is the idiot.



Wakcher	Aug 15 2009, 07:03 PM Post #10
Creator Posts: 222 Group: Admin Member #2 Joined: April 17, 2008	I must say sir, an excellent, funny, and smart take! I am very proud of this fan comic indeed, and you've got the characters down pat. And would Circle and Square argue about the fact that they are in a fan comic? YES! Of course they would! Very fine show, sir. One circular thumb up, and one squareular thumbs up!



rarisgod	Aug 16 2009, 06:27 AM Post #11
The Greatest of All Beings Posts: 1,106 Group: Members Member #37 Joined: August 11, 2008	The Creator's approval, ASpie! And well-deserved, I think.


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