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Flaws; A fan comic
Topic Started: Aug 5 2009, 04:44 PM (706 Views)
ASpieboy
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Haha! That's brilliant! lol actually made me laugh.
The reason I didn't take this on is because I didn't think I could match the cleverness and wit that the comic portrayed. But you sir have done so, at least from what I can see.

You took the cleverness, came up with a good punchline, included the bantering factor (as well as putting it in a bit of rant, ala CvS)...well done. And the pictures aren't half bad.


Now in ASpie fashion, I must point out a typo in the 4th panel --- "It doesn't matter who writing our little..." etc., it should be "It doesn't matter who is writing our little..." etc. or something of that variation.
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rarisgod
Aug 5 2009, 11:23 PM
Now in ASpie fashion, I must point out a typo in the 4th panel --- "It doesn't matter who writing our little..." etc., it should be "It doesn't matter who is writing our little..." etc. or something of that variation.
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I'm pretty sure that is panel 3.
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Typo? What typo? :)
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typos isnt a word technically, so doesnt that make it itself typo?

also redo as a png file plox
the compression makes the font hard to read at some points
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Aug 6 2009, 10:16 AM
rarisgod
Aug 5 2009, 11:23 PM
Now in ASpie fashion, I must point out a typo in the 4th panel --- "It doesn't matter who writing our little..." etc., it should be "It doesn't matter who is writing our little..." etc. or something of that variation.
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I'm pretty sure that is panel 3.
Wow I'm an idiot, you're correct....

But I found it humourous that the punchline was made void with any typo throughout..

And typo itself is not a typo. Not to mention that my spell-checker in Opera says it's a word...but a word that isn't a word is not a typo..

For instance, if I type shloombazam, that's not a typo because I intended to type it. Typos are accidental errors. Shloombazam is just nonsense.
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but by that logic there would never be any typos, if people didnt admit to them

stuff like "I meant to write 'teh' instead of 'the'" would be everywhere

therefore id still view it as a typo, regardless of whether it is admitted or not
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But if people didn't admit to them, they would still be typos. It would just be impossible to prove it.
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Aug 10 2009, 05:18 PM
But if people didn't admit to them, they would still be typos. It would just be impossible to prove it.
It would not be impossible. Simply let someone else point them out! That doesn't mean you're admitting to them. Even if you deny that it is a typo, it's still a typo.
If someone is denying that a typo is a typo, they are an idiot. Unless of course it isn't a typo, in which case the accuser is the idiot.

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I must say sir, an excellent, funny, and smart take! I am very proud of this fan comic indeed, and you've got the characters down pat. And would Circle and Square argue about the fact that they are in a fan comic? YES! Of course they would! Very fine show, sir. One circular thumb up, and one squareular thumbs up!
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The Creator's approval, ASpie! And well-deserved, I think.
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