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Fanfic: Tenderness; My first attempt at a KonoSetsu fic
Topic Started: Feb 3 2007, 06:03 AM (18,442 Views)
Ryûchan
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*happy squeal*

That was CUTE! Good update!

My only complaint is that I would have expected Ayaka to give her a BIT more of a hard time over forgetting. But that's just me.

Shanejayell,
Ahh, sorry about that. :sweat: I had originally intended there to be a bit more there, between the time that Asuna realized what had happened and until they sort of got together (I had intended for Ayaka to get to do her on-her-knees-with-roses-in-hand wooing thing for Asuna, too), but... I'm not sure what happened, as usual. This is unfortunately how it ended up. *sheepish*
Btw... cute smilies. *grins*



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Awesome job!! The last little bit made my teary-eyed and happy as Asuna finally remembered what happened. You're going to be one of the elite few on the net that can write to appeal to almost anyone and their tastes. Even Shanejayell likes your stories! That is something to be proud of!! I hope I can someday rival your skills. Until then, keep writing!!

Nanaimoanimefan,
*blush* Thank you! *bows*



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Woweth, well done well done!!!
^_~ Ayaka and Asuna make a pretty good pair.

You should continue with the side stories (though tenderness has finished) cause, we just love you. *hug* 

I drew something else for you! But scanner is out so I'll have to put it up tomorrow. Kay? 

Yuki,
Ooooo! Artsy stuff? Me loves! :D
*smiles* I'm glad you liked Ayaka/Asuna's story. More sidestories? Err, well, I did have a few ideas for a Sayo/Kazumi one, we'll see if I get going on that one too. For right now though I'm writing a konosetsu fic. ^_^
*can't wait to see what you drew* :excited:



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Nice ending!
What will you write after this? Another sidestory?

Icha-kun,
Thanks! ^_^ For right now I'm writing a little konosetsu thing, but... I suppose I might go back to writing the Sayo/Kazumi sidestory later, too, if inspiration holds and no-one smacks me in the head for going on and on with this story. ^^;



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Hahahaha! you are indeed great n_n

Trouble is, now, each time I see a picture of Ayaka or Asuna... I instantly get a visualization of them making out! O_O A pleasant experience.. Until my girlfriend's nanny told her she got scared of me 'cause she found me grinning for no reason at all... >_<

but, yeah! really nice.. I can imagine them bickering again after the wedding
... which is funny n_n

Poison_pen,
*big grin* What is wrong about picturing Asuna and Ayaka making out? *innocent* Heh, and yeah... those two would always bicker a little, wouldn't they? :P
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Wow, can I draw a picture of a Asuna/Ayaka kiss? X3 funfun.
That pic'll go up soon..... I hope....
Aw...
It's not as nice as at kissing one..... I like this one, but it's not great.
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Wow, can I draw a picture of a Asuna/Ayaka kiss? X3 funfun.
That pic'll go up soon..... I hope....
Aw...
It's not as nice as at kissing one..... I like this one, but it's not great.

Yuki,
Oooo, more fanart? Loveliness! :D I can't wait! :dance:
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Yuki
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Uh, this kinda sucks.
I edited this into my thread ^_^
so it's not good, but well, it's still for ya.

A present for you!!!

I didn't really do it right, Setchan looks weird, I was kinda unsure about what I was going to do with....
Eh. I can put that in my thread later... this is for you.

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Yuki,Feb 25 2007
11:43 PM
Uh, this kinda sucks.
I edited this into my thread ^_^
so it's not good, but well, it's still for ya.

A present for you!!!

I didn't really do it right, Setchan looks weird, I was kinda unsure about what I was going to do with....
Eh. I can put that in my thread later... this is for you.

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Waaah! KAWAII! n_n
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Yuki,Feb 25 2007
11:43 PM
Uh, this kinda sucks.
I edited this into my thread ^_^
so it's not good, but well, it's still for ya.

A present for you!!!

I didn't really do it right, Setchan looks weird, I was kinda unsure about what I was going to do with....
Eh. I can put that in my thread later... this is for you.

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Very nice!
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poison_pen,Feb 26 2007
03:31 AM
Yuki,Feb 25 2007
11:43 PM
Uh, this kinda sucks.
I edited this into my thread ^_^
so it's not good, but well, it's still for ya.

A present for you!!!

I didn't really do it right, Setchan looks weird, I was kinda unsure about what I was going to do with....
Eh. I can put that in my thread later... this is for you.

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Waaah! KAWAII! n_n

OMG!!! *___*
This is... this is...... *____*
(Sparkling eyes)

It's so beautiful *____*
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*dies*

THAT IS GORGEOUS.
:)
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Wow Yuki, that is just beautiful! *loves*
An adorable picture, thank you very much. :dance:
*gets all silly picturing Konoka and Setsuna walking hand-in-hand among the falling cherry blossoms* Awwww~
I don't know if this makes any sense to you, but I particularly like the way you have managed to give Konoka mass in this picture. Very very nice :D
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I did like drawing Konoka there....
^_^ Eheh. I've been super busy lately, but I'll be sure to keep on illustrating.... maybe go for an Ayaka Asuna picture. X3
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Hello, I'm new here and I just gotta say, I've read your stories Ryûchan and I absolutely love them. Though I am a little dissapointed that you didn't go into a little more detail the pregnancy. I mean, how did Konoka get pregnant? What about all the experiences Setsuna and Konoka went through during the pregnancy? You know, like the mood swings [Konoka- You think I'm fat, don't you?!], the morning sickness, the "feeling the baby kick under your hand" [such a cute scene ^_^]? It would just be lovely if you could maybe go into that. A little one-shot, perhaps? ^_^
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I did like drawing Konoka there....
Eheh. I've been super busy lately, but I'll be sure to keep on illustrating.... maybe go for an Ayaka Asuna picture. X3

Yuki,
*grins* Hope you do go for an Ayaka/Asuna one, that would be awesome. ^_^



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Hello, I'm new here and I just gotta say, I've read your stories Ryûchan and I absolutely love them. Though I am a little dissapointed that you didn't go into a little more detail the pregnancy. I mean, how did Konoka get pregnant? What about all the experiences Setsuna and Konoka went through during the pregnancy? You know, like the mood swings [Konoka- You think I'm fat, don't you?!], the morning sickness, the "feeling the baby kick under your hand" [such a cute scene ]? It would just be lovely if you could maybe go into that. A little one-shot, perhaps? 

Manori,
I'm glad to hear that you like my "Tenderness" stories :) , though I am sorry to have disappointed you regarding the pregnancy. As for the means, well, in a world where there exist magicians, vampires, robots and people from the future, it seemed to me that the ways would be many and therefore not that important really, at least not for this story. The pregnancy itself, yes, I agree, it would have been neat to have the whole morning sickness, growing big, mood swings, baby kicks etc, but I truly have no control over what I write and this is what decided to come out at that time. I had originally planned a few scenes even further ahead in time where Konoka and Setsuna's firstborn would be big enough to play around with her favorite "auntie" Evangeline, even learning the imperious look to her parents' dismay, while Konoka and Setsuna would be expecting a second child. As you can see, that scene did not make it into the story either, and neither has the whole story about Kazumi/Sayo for that matter.
I reserve the right to go back and write any potential side-story/oneshot at some point though, so you never know. ^_^
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just write as long as your heart desires


dmn thats corny,

anyway, so far i love every fic of yours, and if you would make more, im ALWAYS willing to read em
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Ryûchan,Mar 5 2007
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I agree, it would have been neat to have the whole morning sickness, growing big, mood swings, baby kicks etc, but I truly have no control over what I write and this is what decided to come out at that time. I had originally planned a few scenes even further ahead in time where Konoka and Setsuna's firstborn would be big enough to play around with her favorite "auntie" Evangeline, even learning the imperious look to her parents' dismay, while Konoka and Setsuna would be expecting a second child.
I reserve the right to go back and write any potential side-story/oneshot at some point though, so you never know. ^_^

Ah, it's okay. Though it would have been nice seeing that part, the ending was nice. Though for future ideas...you can probably go with both ideas. You know? Little Kimi-chan playing with her auntie, while at the same time Konoka and Setsuna remembering the pregnancy as well as looking to the future.
Eh, I'm just saying, is all. You know, to get it off my chest :)
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Yuki,
*grins* Hope you do go for an Ayaka/Asuna one, that would be awesome. happy.gif


Um.... it looks a little STRANGE... to say the least XD Ayaka and Asuna together the way I drew them, I mean....
XD
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