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| Fever Days; Konosetsu, Secchan and a love potion | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 23 2007, 02:48 PM (15,823 Views) | |
| Ryûchan | Feb 23 2007, 02:48 PM Post #1 |
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This is an attempt at a small konosetsu-fic now that Tenderness is finished. Let me know if I should continue with it? Oh and a small warning about updates... I might not always be able to update each day (provided I should continue with this, that is), although I'll try of course. ---------------------------------------------- Title: FEVER DAYS Author: Ryûchan Rating: T, I think Category: Romance? Pairing: Konoka/Setsuna Disclaimer: Mahou Sensei Negima etc belongs to Ken Akamatsu and possibly a few others, certainly not myself though if someone would feel like giving the series to me I would not object. ![]() As with my previous story (stories) Tenderness, I haven’t read the manga, so please have patience with any and all OOC behaviour. Fever Days --------------------------------------------------------- By Carola “Ryûchan” Eriksson It started as a fairly ordinary day at Mahora, meaning there was a certain level of chaos and mayhem present to begin with, but not so much as to overly concern the three inhabitants of a certain dorm room and their sword-carrying guest. Of course one should bear in mind that whenever things started happening in the area, one or several of the people in that room tended to be involved, one way or another. The group was going to have dinner together before going off on their own things, that day having been the last school day and the long, gloriously free weekend stretching out before them. Asuna helped Negi clear the table of his recent experiments while Setsuna devotedly shadowed Konoka’s footsteps, carrying and lifting and everything else she could think of to aid the smiling brunette that was preparing dinner for all of them. Asuna kicked a certain annoying ermine out from underfoot, and soon three students, one child teacher, and one bedraggled ermine sat down to eat with much complimenting of their talented chef. “...and in the end I promised Iincho that I would bring Negi over so she could spend a little time with him today. I figure as long as I’m with them to make sure she’s not doing anything weird it’ll be ok.” Asuna finished relaying a story to Konoka as dinner was coming to an end, the others listening as well. “And you and Setsuna are going on another date, I gather?” The young warrior that had previously peacefully been eating her food in companionable silence suddenly shot to her feet, blushing furiously at Asuna’s description of the planned shopping trip with Setsuna’s adored ojousama. Setsuna opened her mouth to voice a protest... “Yes we are!” Konoka exclaimed cheerfully, apparently either taking no notice or just having no objection to Asuna assuming that she was dating her childhood friend and protector. “Secchan and I are going to... Secchan? Secchan, what’s wrong?” ...Setsuna, in sheer surprise, inhaled a piece of food that lodged itself in her throat. The raven-haired girl coughed and wheezed, desperately trying to get some air without success. “Secchan!” “Setsuna!” Asuna and Konoka ran to the wheezing girl’s aid, Asuna immediately giving the girl a good pounding on the back. “Negi! Get a glass of water!” The frightened boy scurried away at once to obey, and even the ermine bounced around, worried for the now purple-faced girl. Negi slammed down the glass of water on the edge of the desk at about the same time that Asuna, through a particularly resoundingly good whack, got the offending morsel unstuck and Setsuna sagging over the edge of the desk, greedily sucking air down her lungs. Konoka, worried about her warrior, hovered close to Setsuna, patting her hair and back gently. “Secchan? Are you alright?” Without waiting for an answer Konoka simply pulled the girl leaning over the desk to her, her head into Konoka’s chest. She lightly kissed the top of the raven head and murmured her name. Once more crimson in colour Setsuna bounced away, eyes wide and somewhat frantic. To Konoka’s confused and questioning gaze she croaked weakly “Water!” and just barely turning grabbed a glass off the desk behind her. “NO SETSUNA-NEESAN....” The ermine shouted and Negi looked as if he was about to do the same. “NOT THAT ONE!” Having swallowed the entire glass in one huge gulp Setsuna turned towards the protesting voices with a confused look. Then she blinked a little, and went pale. “What?” Asuna sounded irritated as she glared at the ermine. “What’s wrong this time?” Setsuna dropped the glass in her suddenly numb hand. “I feel strange...” “Secchan?” Konoka reached for her precious friend again, steadying her as Setsuna’s knees turned wobbly. “Setsuna-san just drank one of my experiments...” Negi said with wide, worried eyes, causing Asuna to spin around and stare at the stricken Setsuna with horror. Negi’s experiments never boded well for anyone. Chamo scuttled over to the dropped glass and sniffed it with an expert air. “Aa, this is trouble... aniki, she drank the Cupido Primus concentrate!” To Asuna and Konoka’s uncomprehending looks he continued “It is the distilled form of the most important ingredient used for love potions of all kinds.” “It can be used for other things too!” Negi hurried to explain, having been already threatened within an inch of his young life should he ever mess around with love potions at the dorms again. “L-love p-potion...?” Asuna whimpered, slightly panicky, as she was helping Setsuna to get her bearings. As the black-haired girl turned to look at her Asuna blushed darkly and mustered up a wavy kind of smile. “Err, Setsuna...?” “Thank you Asuna.” Setsuna said politely, straightening herself but blinking as if trying to clear her mind. Her lack of reaction to Asuna had the redhead glance over at her youngest roommate with a questioning look. Negi shrugged, he didn’t know either why Setsuna did not react to Asuna. “Setsuna-san, are you feeling alright?” Setsuna focused on her child-teacher and gave a brief, apologetic smile. “I am just feeling a bit strange, and somewhat off-balance.” “Maybe you had better sit down, Secchan.” Konoka spoke up from behind Setsuna, hands already coming up to Setsuna’s shoulders to gently nudge her to take a seat. The black-haired warrior froze. Her eyes grew wide as saucers and she started to tremble visibly all over. “O-ojousama?” Konoka started to move up beside Setsuna, wanting to see her face as they spoke, but a trembling arm stopped her. “Ojousama...” Setsuna’s voice was terribly strained, the girl obviously struggling greatly with herself. “You need to... take Yuunagi... and run!” The warrior panted slightly. “Now!” The others in the room looked at one another in confusion, not quite getting what Setsuna was trying to say. Konoka touched one of Setsuna’s arms as she spoke up. “Secchan, what do you...” “Now, ojou- !” Setsuna turned to face Konoka, but the very instant the young warrior’s eyes fell upon the brown-haired heiress a kind of transformation took place. Already pale, Setsuna’s face grew white, and the pupils in her eyes dilated until her eyes were black as pitch and void of reflection. Her lips were still parted from where her words cut off, and a small strangled sound managed to escape them. Konoka tried to speak again, slightly scared for her Secchan, but she never got that far. The next thing she knew she was pressed tightly against the slender but strong body of her protector while hungry, insatiable lips were devouring her own. A shocked gasp escaped her lips, unintentionally giving way for a hot, electric tongue to caress her own. Instinctively Konoka reached for something to hold on to, her mind going absolutely blank. “OH MY GOD!” Asuna cried in shock and, after a moment, rushed over to try and pry the black-haired girl away from her floundering roommate. Without so much as breaking the heated kissing Setsuna flung Asuna across the room, stunning the redhead ever so briefly. “Negi! Do something!” Quickly unlocking his powers Negi muttered something and tapped Setsuna lightly on the shoulder with the edge of his staff. Instantly the girl grew limp, causing the unprepared Konoka to slide down to the floor with her while Asuna came up to them, rubbing an arm absently. On the floor Konoka lay, stunned into near immobility underneath her unconscious warrior, staring up at the ceiling with wide eyes. Ever so slowly her hand came up to touch slightly wet and kiss-bruised lips. “Wow...” She whispered softly, too softly for her friends to hear. --- |
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| shanejayell | Feb 23 2007, 03:52 PM Post #2 |
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*grin*Oooh, poor Setsuna! Heh. |
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| Jessie | Feb 23 2007, 05:30 PM Post #3 |
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KonoSetsu Fan!
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hehe :P Secchan has been a naughty girl XP I'm happy to read a new KonoSetsu Fanfic :] I'm starting to run out of fanfics since I already raid all of the KonoSetsu fics on fanfiction.net >.> |
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| Serai | Feb 23 2007, 06:12 PM Post #4 |
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You should continue wait... i should read it first *reads.... setsuna out of controll? :glomp: DEAR GOD, MORE |
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| poison_pen | Feb 23 2007, 11:14 PM Post #5 |
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kinda reminds me of chapter... what chapter was it again? except it's Secchan and Konoka this time! My every fantasy come true!! :D MORE! MORE! MoOore!! O_O It's killing me.. more... can't wait.. TT_TT |
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| WitchCirce | Feb 24 2007, 12:08 AM Post #6 |
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Oooh, I do believe I'll enjoy THIS fic immensely.... hee hee hee.. But first! Go go, Crappy MS Paint Illustration! Who knows what Secchan's hands are doing, hm? Yes, that is Konoka's head (or rather the back of it). Setsuna's hair is really hard to draw with a laptop mouse. I think tomorrow I'll actually break out pencil and paper and do the actual kiss part. Mwahahahahaha. |
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| Kaly | Feb 24 2007, 01:15 AM Post #7 |
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please update soon, I really really love your fics XD
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| Jessie | Feb 24 2007, 03:56 AM Post #8 |
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KonoSetsu Fan!
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LOL XDDD Sugoi!!! |
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| -fenrir- | Feb 24 2007, 04:58 AM Post #9 |
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hmmm... another konosetsu fic made by you... i'll be waiting for the next update so please continue this one ^^ |
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| icha-kun | Feb 24 2007, 07:07 AM Post #10 |
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Very good fanfic!!! Please continue!!! I'm waiting for the next chapter! :glomp: |
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| Ryûchan | Feb 24 2007, 02:53 PM Post #11 |
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Shanejayell, *grins* Poor Setsuna indeed. ;P
Jessie, I'm thinking maybe Konoka is the naughty girl, considering Setsuna has an excuse. ;P And yeah, I know what you mean... I'm always looking for new Konosetsu fics there, too. Though, did you check out Furu's latest? It is soo cute! :)
Serai, *laughs* Thanks for the vote of confidence! And yes, here's more out-of-control Secchan. :D
Poison_pen, Unfortunately I haven't read the manga, so I don't really know what goes on in that chapter you're thinking of. I did see the ep in the first season of the anime which involves a love potion though, so... blame that and the Star Trek concept of Pon Farr. XD More it is, then, though again only a snippet. ;)
WitchCirce, Ooooooooooo! Lovely fanart! :excited: *hugs the fanart and dances with it* Thank you so much! :D Hope I won't disappoint you.
Kaly, Thank you, I'm glad you like them. :D Here's the next bit, I do try for the once-a-day update when I can.
Fenrir, Yup, another konosetsu story by me... and thanks to all the encouragement I sure will do my best to continue with it. ![]()
Icha-kun, Thank you! I am continuing! Wheeee! *ahem* I mean, here's the next bit. XP------------------------------------------------- While writing this I got a few other ideas on the same theme... and gosh was it hard not to change this story around to fit one of them. ^^;; *writes my ideas down* 1. The love-potion makes Secchan crush on _all_ girls, making for a very jealous Konoka 2. The love-potion makes all girls crush on Secchan, making for a very jealous and possessive Konoka trying to fend them off 3. The love-potion makes Secchan crush on one girl - Asuna or maybe Mana - making for a very jealous and upset little Kono-chan *adds the absolutely no kissing if not konosetsu stamp* :P ------------------------------------------------------ Fever Days (continued) After the stunned friends recovered enough to pick up the prone Setsuna and put her in Konoka’s bed while trying to figure things out before the girl would wake up, an argument started between Asuna, Chamo and Negi. Or rather the redheaded girl, upset and worried about her friends, argued at the other two while they offered weak excuses in hopes of placating her. Konoka did not interfere with the conversation, most of her attention on the still sleeping figure in her bed, and the thoughts spinning around since said girl had pulled the rug out from under their ‘safe’ affection rather effectively albeit unintentionally. “I don’t know, Asuna-san... I’ve never heard of anyone drinking a whole bottle of concentrated Cupido Primus before.” Negi was explaining. “I don’t know what we can expect.” “We’ll have to keep an eye on her until you find a cure or this potion thing runs through her system.” Asuna frowned, not liking it one bit that her shy friend would have to suffer through this predicament. “At least we know she doesn’t react to me or you, Negi.” “Yes...” Negi was leafing through some papers while Chamo was doing something or other at his computer. “I wonder why that is?” Asuna snorted and rolled her eyes. “Why? I can think of two reasons... one of which is that in my case love potions don’t work to begin with, and in your case, well, Setsuna doesn’t like boys. The other, well...” Asuna hesitated and tried to ask in a low voice, not realizing that she had already gotten Konoka’s attention. “what happens to someone if they drink that Cup O Domus when they’re already in love with someone?” “Cupido Primus, Asuna-san.” Negi corrected automatically while looking thoughtfully towards the sleeping girl. “Do you think that...” “Yes. I do.” Asuna interrupted curtly, discreetly gesturing to Negi not to voice more of that thought out loud. “What about, you know, her not being entirely human? Will that affect things?” It was Chamo that answered. “It might, but since we don’t know what to expect to begin with...” Everyone looked at the black-haired girl with varying degrees of concern and wariness. “Aniki and I will search until we find a cure, you and Konoka-jouchan just make sure to keep her calm and out of sight while we do.” On the bed Setsuna stirred, groaning softly as she fought her way to consciousness again. Immediately Asuna dashed over and made Konoka – whom had been about to sit down and reach out to her Secchan – step back a ways while she and Negi nervously stood closest to the bed. “S-setsuna-san?” Negi asked carefully, a bit worried that the black-haired warrior would be upset with him for several reasons. “...what happened?” Setsuna groggily, rubbing her forehead and blinking up at the ceiling. “I feel so...” “Are you ok Secchan?” Konoka asked anxiously, having walked up until she was right behind Asuna. “Do you hurt anywhMMMmmmMMmmphh!” Again, this time with Konoka flat on the floor with her very eager Secchan pinning her down with toe-curling kisses. The brunette found herself quite unwilling to offer up any resistance to her friend’s ardour this time. “Oh no you don’t!” Asuna said, bounding back from where Setsuna had shoved her away in her haste to get to Konoka, and tackled the black-haired girl into a roll. “Konoka, get into the bathroom and lock the door!” A pause in which she struggled with the considerably stronger Setsuna. “NOW Konoka!” “Negi, give me a hand here!” As Konoka reluctantly obeyed, Negi aided Asuna in her attempt to subdue the amorous warrior. After a flash of Negi’s power a considerably calmer Setsuna knelt of the floor with a black blindfold and her hands tied behind her back. “Setsuna!” Asuna’s voice was a bit louder than strictly necessary, as if the sheer voice volume alone would make Setsuna able to understand her. “You have swallowed a love-potion and you are out of control, we have to keep you from... err, hurting anyone... until we get a cure! Do you understand?” A terse nod, and then the struggling girl managed to rasp a few strained sentences. “Tie... up, lock in... my room. Leave Yuunagi... with... ojousama...” She gasped as if she had just done something hugely straining physically. “Getting... stronger! Ojousama... must leave... ojousama...” Setsuna’s words turned into a small, almost growling cry. “Secchan!” As if Konoka had pulled a string attached to Setsuna’s head, the dark-haired girl’s head spun towards the bathroom and she attempted to get to her feet. “YOU STAY THERE AND BE QUIET, KONOKA!” Asuna shouted and sat on Setsuna, trying to keep her down as the other girl struggled. “Negi, we have to do something!” Quickly gathering his staff and Setsuna’s sword Negi mumbled something, and while the stricken warrior was dazed from the effects he and Asuna grabbed the girl and hurried off towards Setsuna’s own dorm room. Clearly, if they were to have any hope at all to keep Setsuna calm, she would have to not be able to hear or see Konoka. Once at the right place another sleeping spell was invoked, and Asuna got Setsuna situated on her bed, removing the bindings around her hands though she left the blindfold on after some hesitation. The sword was hidden away under the bed, and a quickly scribbled note stuck to the inside of the door, then they locked the door around the girl. The sleeping spell was going to last for several hours at least, so it was safe enough to leave Setsuna there unsupervised for a while, they would be back long before the she woke up anyway. They failed to take in account the half-demon warrior girl’s stamina and her dedication. Roughly two fairly unproductive hours later Konoka, the girl desperately wanting to see her Secchan but having been scolded enough times by Asuna when voicing this to know to restrain herself, was heading out for refreshments for the little research team back in her room. She did not get further than the first few steps in the staircase. A pair of warm, strong arms wrapped around her and picked her up, the sheer safety and belonging Konoka instantly felt telling her whom they belonged to even before she rested in Setsuna’s arms facing her raven-haired protector. When Setsuna this time leaned in to take possession of Konoka’s lips, Konoka responded eagerly, arms flung tightly around the dark-haired girl’s neck. Deep, hungry kisses that made Konoka’s heart race and her head spin, all in the strong, alluring sweetness that was her Secchan... With a deafening crash a girl coming down the stairs opposite Konoka and Setsuna stumbled over her own feet and throwing the impossibly large stack of books she had been carrying like a mass of leather-bound projectiles down the hallway. Setsuna did not break the kiss as she deftly spun away with Konoka in her arms, however Konoka did, turning her head towards the unfortunate noise-maker. “Honya-chan! Did you hurt yourseeEEeeecchan, oooohh!” The concerned question turned into a loud moan as Setsuna, denied Konoka’s lips, found places along Konoka’s neck in need of devouring. Konoka bit her lip and arched her neck to give Setsuna better access. There was another slamming noise, this time from a door, and the sound of someone running. “What the freaking...!” Asuna’s voice registered with Konoka, and she briefly glanced in the redhead’s direction. “Can’t you be left alone for five minutes?!” Attaching herself to Setsuna’s back, Asuna smacked her in the head with one of Nodoka’s books. “BAD SETSUNA! Let Konoka go!” She smacked her a few more times, causing them to stagger. “Bad bad Setsuna!” The furiously blushing Nodoka was quickly sworn to secrecy, and together with Negi they managed to get the out-of-control swordswoman to go back to her room by having a reluctant Konoka dashing ahead of them and calling for her Secchan. As they reached the room in question it became readily apparent why it was such a bad idea to leave Yuunagi in the room with Setsuna; the warrior had simply shredded the door. Negi quickly fixed the door, and Nodoka was given Setsuna’s precious blade for safe-keeping, but actually getting the warrior to stay in the room while also getting Konoka out of it was a difficult task. On the plus side Setsuna appeared not to care less about what anyone else in her surroundings were up to, as long as she had Konoka in her arms, or in that specific instance, pushed up on Setsuna’s desk. On the downside whatever reason Setsuna had still held was swiftly vanishing, making any attempt at removing Konoka from her be met with increasing levels of threat and violence. It did not help much that Konoka also seemed somewhat reluctant to let go of her Secchan, but in the chaos that ensued Asuna decided to take that up with her roommate later. Finally, not seeing any other alternative at hand, and Negi’s own strength waning with worry and fatigue, he hit Setsuna with a much stronger version of the sleeper spell. The protesting Konoka was banished from the room while Negi and Asuna tied the black-haired girl’s arms and feet to the bed, feeling bad about it but not sure what else could be done. Asuna tried to make Setsuna a bit more comfortable, and muttered an apology for the treatment before they left the room. The door was sealed with a spell on the lock as well as just being locked, making sure that if somehow Setsuna woke up and even more unlikely got out of her fetters to try to force the lock, Negi would be alerted. Tired to the bone and, at least in Asuna’s case, aching from various bruises, they made their way back to their own room where the still rather fruitless search for a way to cure their friend carried on until late into the night. --- |
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| Jessie | Feb 24 2007, 03:10 PM Post #12 |
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Kyaa! ^___^ I just love this story! ^___^ *cheers you up to post the next chapter*
I just keep reading this line over and over and can't stop laughing, thinking of how it would look if Asuna was beating Secchan while saying those lines on the series as well... XD And I guess Kono-chan really is the naughty one XPPPP |
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| Serai | Feb 24 2007, 07:06 PM Post #13 |
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your second idea seemes incredibly cute btw, jealous konoka, hmm and now a very determined secchan ugh its to late, dmn im sleepy |
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| shanejayell | Feb 24 2007, 07:54 PM Post #14 |
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*lol* I ALSO loved the "Vad Setsuna" scolding bit, it was a RIOT. :) |
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| WitchCirce | Feb 24 2007, 09:06 PM Post #15 |
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The following is NOT an illustration It's just what my demented little mind thought of during the "BAD SETSUNA!" scene (aside from visualizing the scene as it was written, that is). GET OUT WHILE YOU STILL CAN!!! You have been warned. ![]() Something's probably wrong with my head. |
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