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Fever Days; Konosetsu, Secchan and a love potion
Topic Started: Feb 23 2007, 02:48 PM (15,832 Views)
-fenrir-
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O_o i don't know setsuna could be so aggressive :lol:

write MORE!!![/SIZE=7]
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icha-kun
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Wow!!! :blink:
I like this story soooooo muuucchhhh!!!!!!
Next chapter... Next chapter... :dance:
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poison_pen
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Bad, secchan! bad! Baa--- yes.. YES, YES!! MOOORE! >_<

:P


You never cease to please me, Ryuchan! n_n

Oh, yeah! the fanart I promised..

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49596205/


This is for your "Fever Days" n_n

The one for your "Tenderness" isn't finished yet... :sweat:
eh.. gomen! gomen! :ph43r:
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I'm absolutely loving this fic to bits! There's something tremendously fun about Secchan being forced to act so OOC, and just the way we all wish she would just once allow herself to. Now it's a case of naughty Kono-chan it seems - deliberately making things difficult for everyone... Still, who can blame her? :D

Keep up the good work!
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poison_pen,Feb 25 2007
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Bad, secchan! bad! Baa--- yes.. YES, YES!! MOOORE! >_<

:P


You never cease to please me, Ryuchan! n_n

Oh, yeah! the fanart I promised..

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49596205/


This is for your "Fever Days" n_n

The one for your "Tenderness" isn't finished yet... :sweat:
eh.. gomen! gomen! :ph43r:

kyaa!!! SUGOI SUGOI!! hontoni sugoi desu! ^___^
I love you arts! ^__^
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Jessie,Feb 25 2007
11:38 AM
kyaa!!! SUGOI SUGOI!! hontoni sugoi desu! ^___^
I love you arts! ^__^

Eh?! So glad you like it!!! :D

This is a tribute to ryuchan's "Fever Days" and Konoka and Secchan's perfect match! n_n


Oh yeah, Ryuchan, I really hope you don't mind that I entered this into the coupling art contest on the art contests thread... :sweat:



And yeah, I really need to go and buy kneaded eraser and a technichal pen... :domo:
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poison_pen, I love that picture of yours. Like, "OMG LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE FOR SERIOUS!!!"

However, deviantART is being ridiculous and won't let me comment, so I'll just put what I was going to put in a comment on deviantART here, because you deserve the praise!

It's... so... amazing! And beautiful! Amazingly beautiful!

Gotta love Ryuchan's fics, eh?

Keep drawing, seriously! There needs to be more Konosetsu art goodness on the internet (because lord knows the 50-some pages of it in the Konosetsu artwork thread just aren't enough).
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Kyaa! ^___^ I just love this story! ^___^
*cheers you up to post the next chapter*

I just keep reading this line over and over and can't stop laughing, thinking of how it would look if Asuna was beating Secchan while saying those lines on the series as well... XD

And I guess Kono-chan really is the naughty one XPPPP

Jessie,
*big grin* I'm happy you liked it! And yeah... Kono-chan is a wee bit naughty, isn't she? *winks*



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your second idea seemes incredibly cute btw, jealous konoka, hmm
and now a very determined secchan

ugh its to late, dmn im sleepy

Serai,
*smiles* The second idea you say? Hmm, I think that one appeals to me the most as well. Maybe something to have in mind when this one is finished. ^^;



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*lol*

I ALSO loved the "Vad Setsuna" scolding bit, it was a RIOT. 

Shanejayell,
:D Secchan is a bad, bad puppy! XP *grins* Glad you liked it!



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The following is NOT an illustration

It's just what my demented little mind thought of during the "BAD SETSUNA!" scene (aside from visualizing the scene as it was written, that is). GET OUT WHILE YOU STILL CAN!!!

You have been warned.

Something's probably wrong with my head.

WitchCirce,
*laughs out loud* Oh my goodness! :lol: That is just too funny.
Yup yup, Secchan has been a bad puppy indeed... but Konochan will wrestle Asuna for spanking rights - err, no, wait, that came out wrong... XP



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O_o i don't know setsuna could be so aggressive 

write MORE!!!

Fenrir,
Heh, she probably wouldn't be, which is why I just have to play with that a little. ;D What _would_happen if Secchan accidently drank some of Negi's love potions? Its something I'd love to see, at least.


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Wow!!! 
I like this story soooooo muuucchhhh!!!!!!
Next chapter... Next chapter... 

Icha-kun,
*smiles* Glad to hear it! And the next chapter is... you know it... further down this post. ;D


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Bad, secchan! bad! Baa--- yes.. YES, YES!! MOOORE! >_<

You never cease to please me, Ryuchan! n_n

Oh, yeah! the fanart I promised..

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49596205/

This is for your "Fever Days" n_n

The one for your "Tenderness" isn't finished yet...
eh.. gomen! gomen! 

Oh yeah, Ryuchan, I really hope you don't mind that I entered this into the coupling art contest on the art contests thread... 

Poison_pen,
Lovely fanart! :excited: *steals and runs away* Thank you! It is so lovely! And, heh, why would I mind that you enter the contest? I'll just have extra bragging rights that you entered a contest with it too. :D
*laughs at your "yes, yes, mooore"* Maybe I should have given Konoka that line instead... ;D



Unfortunately I've come to the sad conclusion that there just does not exist any grovelling smilie to chose from when posting here, however I still want all of you kind people who send me your lovely, lovely art and comment on my story to know that I grovel in awe and gratitude.
See? I grovel. *grovel grovel* *roll roll* :D


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Fever Days (continued)






The group frantically searching for a way to help their friend stayed up very late that night, stopping only when Asuna noticed that Negi was about to topple over from being half-asleep, at which point she made sure everyone got to bed whether they wanted to or not. After such a long and exhausting day they were all, except Konoka who stayed awake a while longer with her thoughts and her worries, out like lights almost as soon as their heads hit their pillows. Once sleep got them it was unusually deep, so deep in fact that when a figure opened the door and walked in on quiet feet, not one of them so much as stirred.

Konoka stirred slowly to a state of being semi-awake when someone climbed into her bed with her and a warm body was pulled tight against her own. Even in sleep Konoka knew her Secchan, and so she relaxed again and snuggled up to her precious protector, feeling safe and at peace as the other girl merely held her gently and buried her face in Konoka’s hair.

They lay like that for a long time, Konoka drifting along in her half-sleeping state blissfully, until finally something called for her to slowly clear the grasp of her dreams.

“Secchan?” She whispered and shifted so she could look at the face of the girl holding her so lovingly. Setsuna was resting but clearly not sleeping, eyes shining in the dark along with the small gleam of teeth in her smile. “Secchan, what are...?”

She was of course answered by a deep, passionate kiss, and swiftly found herself loosing interest in conversation when she instead could eagerly give Setsuna’s tongue the attention it deserved. Not interrupted for once, Konoka arched in pleasure as Setsuna’s talented hands found sensitive skin and uncharted territory among soft, inviting curves.

Asuna growled silently as she woke, her body protesting that it was much too early even for her. Blinking the redhead tried to figure out why she was awake, checking the little boy snoring slightly by her side first, then checking her alarm clock just in case. Nope, neither of them were the culprit.

There was a sound, and Asuna cocked her head, concentrating to figure out what it was.

Hmm, that sounds like Konoka’s voice, moaning... and that sounds like kissing... hey wait a minute...

“Oh Secchan, yes! Right there!” The gasped words made Asuna’s eyes go wide and a certain heat instantly transfer to the tip of her ears. Ohmyfriggingod!

She threw herself towards the edge of her bed so fast she nearly fell over, leaning past the sleeping Negi to glare down into the lower bunk to confirm her suspicions. It took a moment to make them out properly due to the dark, but all too soon it was clear to Asuna.

Shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit!

Setsuna’s face and hands disappeared into Konoka’s open pyjama shirt, though doing what Asuna’s mind shied away from. Konoka herself seemed far from unwilling about the whole thing, her head thrown back with the kind of expression on her face that Asuna never ever wanted to see on her friend and would spend a long time erasing from her memory, and Konoka’s hands were firmly entangled in Setsuna’s hair holding her close.

None too elegantly Asuna tumbled to the floor, yelling. “OK THAT’S IT! BREAK IT UP YOU TWO!” She stumbled over to hit the lights, earning a startled yelp from Negi and not a twitch from the two girls. “DON’T MAKE ME GET THE HOSE AND TURN IT ON YOU!”

When her words had no effect, Asuna – wincing inwardly – charged the couple to wrestle the black-haired girl off the bed with her. Negi peeked over the edge of the upper bed and, squealing at an impressively high pitch, ducked back under his cover, stuttering out the key to unlock his powers. Setsuna fell unconscious mid-trampling Asuna, sagging to the floor, boneless.

“We’d better hope that spell of yours isn’t giving her brain damage, all the times you’ve used it on her lately.” Asuna grunted as she rolled Setsuna over. Glancing over at Konoka who was getting out of bed to join them Asuna blushed. “Erm, Konoka? Could you, you know, maybe button that up?”

Konoka complied absently, her attention on her Secchan as usual. A horrified look crossed on her usually so sunny features, and Konoka grabbed one of Setsuna’s hands ever so carefully. “Oh Secchan... Asuna, look at her hands! What has she done to herself?”

The paleness of the slender wrists were marred by dark, angry red welts and several scabbing wounds.

“Aw no...” Asuna made a soft hissing sound of sympathy. “She must have torn her wrists up to get out of the shackles.” She took Setsuna’s other hand and frowned in worry. “You crazy girl.”

Tenderly Konoka lifted first one wrist to her lips and then the one Asuna held, carefully placing a soft, lingering kiss on the wounds that shimmered under her touch and receded, leaving not a mark in their place. A tear found its way down Konoka’s cheek, and then she pulled Setsuna into her arms, the dark head in a protective embrace against her chest.

“...this is just... wrong.” Asuna muttered, trying to hide tears in her own eyes at seeing her precious friends like this. “We’ve got to fix this!”

Negi patted her shoulder, having gotten down to join them. “We will. I will ask Nodoka-san and Yue-san to come with me to the Library tomorrow while Chamo-kun keeps checking his computer... one of us has to find something that helps.”

Asuna nodded. “I’ll keep watch over Setsuna, if you can help me come up with a way to keep her in her room, and Konoka...” She glanced over at the brunette that was rocking Setsuna gently and stroking the black hair. “Konoka will have to be somewhere else, far away from Setsuna.”

A while later they had managed to get Setsuna to her own room, discovering this time that she had forgone the door completely – thus not alerting Negi’s spell – and instead gotten out through a window. Asuna realized to her consternation that they had all completely forgotten about Setsuna’s wings, and remedied the situation this time, making sure Setsuna would not make her escape through them again.

Feeling extremely guilty Asuna and Negi also removed the shattered and bloody remains of the things they had used to restrain Setsuna with, this time only putting the girl to bed comfortably and in no way attempting to tie her down. Other potentially dangerous things were removed from easy access, and finally one of Setsuna’s chairs were pulled outside the door. Asuna sat herself down on it as Negi sealed the locked door again, settling in for a sleepless night of keeping watch over her friend from the hallway.

Konoka wanted to stay, to keep watch along with Asuna, but with joint efforts she was persuaded otherwise. Asuna had to promise to alert Konoka of any change of the situation, and also sneakily appeal to the other girl’s caretaker instincts regarding Negi to get her to leave, but it was safer that way she figured. Before Konoka left though Asuna had something to ask.

“Konoka? Why do you, err, I mean...” Asuna blushed and fidgeted. “Why don’t you... resist when she... uhh...” She trailed off, hoping her friend understood what she was trying to ask anyway.

And Konoka did. She blushed slightly, looking away for a moment. When she met Asuna’s gaze again, Asuna was a bit startled by the intense and knowing look in the other girl’s eyes. “When you are kissed like that sometime, Asuna, you’ll know... that resisting is the last thing on your mind.”

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Night passed and morning came, Negi setting out towards Library Island as promised while Konoka tried to occupy herself with whatever she could think of. It wasn’t much as she was feeling rather depressed, and finally she gave up on lingering in the dorm room and made her way over to the cafeteria for lunch, knowing several of her classmates were going to be there.

Getting her lunch Konoka decided that she would get another double of everything to go and have someone deliver it to Asuna, as Konoka was concerned that Asuna and Setsuna would go hungry. She was just going to go set her tray down next to some friends and return to place her order when she vaguely noticed a commotion coming closer.

Her tray was thrown away and chairs overturned, people stumbling as they hurried to get out of the way, but all Konoka registered was that she was suddenly pressed up against the cafeteria wall, in plain view of any number of shocked and blushing girls, being absolutely kissed senseless by her dark warrior.

Thinking briefly that she felt much better now that Secchan was in her arms, Konoka quickly forgot everything else and responded eagerly, moaning into Setsuna’s kiss. A warm hand slid up the back of a bare thigh, and Konoka willingly lifted said leg to wrap over Setsuna’s hip in order to give better access to the rounded part of her anatomy eagerly squeezed by her Secchan.

The shocked silence of the room bearing unexpected witness to this heated make-out session made the loud slamming of Asuna crashing a few chairs into a table as she skidded to a stop reverberate like a shot from a cannon. Panting the redhead grabbed hold of a nearby fruit bowl and started throwing apples at the moaning couple.

“GET... OFF!” Asuna gasped for air and succeeded to get Setsuna to release Konoka’s lips long enough to look in her direction. Seizing the opportunity Asuna hurled herself in another tackle, getting Setsuna away from Konoka but also succeeding in sending Konoka stumbling into a bunch of their classmates. Setsuna got to her feet a heartbeat before Asuna did, and aimed for Konoka.

“Oh no you don’t!” Asuna growled, tripping Setsuna whom instead of falling turned herself around and started running. “Hey!” Asuna set off after her at a breakneck speed.

Ayaka, having caught the stumbling Konoka together with Chizuru, gave a start at the disappearing Asuna, protesting with a frown. “HEY! Why are you interfering with their relationship anyway? Asuna!” With no answer from the redhead the scowling Iincho ran after them, gaining a few giggling followers on the way.

Chizuru got help from Haruna in trying to get the slightly wobbly Konoka back on her feet, intending to ask her what in the world was going on. The brown-haired girl just looked at them unseeing with heavy-lidded eyes and wet her slightly swollen lips, clearly not in a state of mind to answer any kind of question just yet.

“Wow.” Chizuru said softly, admiration in her voice.

“Yeah...” Haruna added, looking stunned. “It’s always the quiet ones.”

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Ryûchan,Feb 25 2007
05:11 PM
Konoka complied absently, her attention on her Secchan as usual. A horrified look crossed on her usually so sunny features, and Konoka grabbed one of Setsuna’s hands ever so carefully. “Oh Secchan... Asuna, look at her hands! What has she done to herself?”

The paleness of the slender wrists were marred by dark, angry red welts and several scabbing wounds.

“Aw no...” Asuna made a soft hissing sound of sympathy. “She must have torn her wrists up to get out of the shackles.” She took Setsuna’s other hand and frowned in worry. “You crazy girl.”

Tenderly Konoka lifted first one wrist to her lips and then the one Asuna held, carefully placing a soft, lingering kiss on the wounds that shimmered under her touch and receded, leaving not a mark in their place. A tear found its way down Konoka’s cheek, and then she pulled Setsuna into her arms, the dark head in a protective embrace against her chest.

“...this is just... wrong.” Asuna muttered, trying to hide tears in her own eyes at seeing her precious friends like this. “We’ve got to fix this!”

I felt really sad after reading this part :[ It made me think that it ain't funny at all ;-; poor Secchan ;-;

Ryûchan,Feb 25 2007
05:11 PM
The shocked silence of the room bearing unexpected witness to this heated make-out session made the loud slamming of Asuna crashing a few chairs into a table as she skidded to a stop reverberate like a shot from a cannon. Panting the redhead grabbed hold of a nearby fruit bowl and started throwing apples at the moaning couple.

Oh, but the sad feeling disappeared after I raid this part XD since the first sentence that popped in to my mind when I raid it was "Don't feed the animals" XDDD

I can't tell you how long I've been waiting for this chapter XP You're posting the chapters when it's already night in here, so these are sort of a 'good night sleep story' for me XP
Helps me to have some nice KonoSetsu dreams when I do fall asleep XPP
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10:11 PM
The shocked silence of the room bearing unexpected witness to this heated make-out session made the loud slamming of Asuna crashing a few chairs into a table as she skidded to a stop reverberate like a shot from a cannon. Panting the redhead grabbed hold of a nearby fruit bowl and started throwing apples at the moaning couple.

“GET... OFF!”

Hehehe for some reason, I can totally picture Asuna pelting apples at Setsuna... and her completely ignoring them :sweat:

Awesome work, this is very entertaining :lol: And you got some excellent update habits, very on point haha.
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Ryûchan,Feb 25 2007
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Konoka complied absently, her attention on her Secchan as usual. A horrified look crossed on her usually so sunny features, and Konoka grabbed one of Setsuna’s hands ever so carefully. “Oh Secchan... Asuna, look at her hands! What has she done to herself?”

The paleness of the slender wrists were marred by dark, angry red welts and several scabbing wounds.


Before I got to the part directly under it, this part made me think: "Oh my god! Secchan went emo! She was denied her Konoka for a few hours and she went EEEEEEMOOOOOO!"


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I have another non-illustration demented crack image for you all, this time based off of the "DON'T MAKE ME GET THE HOSE AND TURN IT ON YOU!" line. It's only funny if you've ever seen The Silence of the Lambs. But it's disturbing no matter what!

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Ryûchan,Feb 25 2007
10:11 PM
“It’s always the quiet ones."

Yup, they turn into either rabbits or love machines. Both have the same outsome 8DD

AND OMG! SECCHAN'S AN ANIMAL! GO SECCHAN GO! RAAWR! XDDD

You know I love this XD You better keep this up!
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EDIT:
I have another non-illustration demented crack image for you all, this time based off of the "DON'T MAKE ME GET THE HOSE AND TURN IT ON YOU!" line. It's only funny if you've ever seen The Silence of the Lambs. But it's disturbing no matter what!

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You're crazy XDDDD
(Which is not a bad thing XDD )
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EDIT:
I have another non-illustration demented crack image for you all, this time based off of the "DON'T MAKE ME GET THE HOSE AND TURN IT ON YOU!" line. It's only funny if you've ever seen The Silence of the Lambs. But it's disturbing no matter what!

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I see Secchan and Konoka are being bad...and the question is...
WHO IS ON WHO!? XD
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Just LOVING this fic. Heh.
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