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Fever Days; Konosetsu, Secchan and a love potion
Topic Started: Feb 23 2007, 02:48 PM (15,829 Views)
BAKA NO JITSU
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02:16 PM
“Allow me to help, Konoka-ojousama.” Mana said, swiftly stripping what was left of Setsuna’s clothing while the dumbfounded Asuna gaped at her and Konoka merely blinked. “I have done this before.”

ha lolz, funny. more jealous konoka.
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Annnnnd it out of here!!!!! No really that's just to cool for words. The next part is going to be a hoot! :lol:

Wait? Asuna + kitchen = (for GOD SAKE STOP HER!!!!!) :blink:

Ayaka and Asuna I've been reading Hero and that's looking good to. :blink: :)
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I haven't been following your work much(a bit busy) but I have to say, you're excellent at writing 

Good update indeed

Alucard,
Thank you! ^__^ *bows*



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Awww.. make Secchan wake up! XPP I can't wait to see her reaction!

Aw Kono-chan :[ It's a hard decision, I know... I know :[
*hugs Kono-chan* 

Jessie,
*laughs* It _is_ a hard decision... snuggles or necessities. ;D
Well, Secchan is waking up... though... erm... well I suppose nothing much happens in this chapter, hope you don't mind reading it anyway. ^^;



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*grin*

Nice hinting at Ayaka/Asuna too.

Shanejayell,
*grins* Oh but I couldn't resist. I don't know if I'll manage to hint at them some more in this story though, but we'll see I guess. ;)



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OH MY GOD WE ARE ALL GONNA DIE D8

If she doesn't blow up the kitchen before she finishes cooking. There must be some sort of restraining order on Asuna from the kitchens she's damaged before XDDDDD

Anyways, great update as always and keep this up C:

Dobby,
:D And yet she persists in trying to cook. I can relate. XP
Forget the kitchens though, the school should put a restraining order on Asuna to prevent her from even _thinking_ of cooking... didn't she basically blow out the building in one ep of the anime? :lol:



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ha lolz, funny. more jealous konoka.

Baka no Jitsu,
Heh, maybe, we'll see where things go. If not I might go with that other love potion story where everyone falls for Secchan at some point, too. ;D



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Annnnnd it out of here!!!!! No really that's just to cool for words. The next part is going to be a hoot! 

Wait? Asuna + kitchen = (for GOD SAKE STOP HER!!!!!) 

Ayaka and Asuna I've been reading Hero and that's looking good to. 

Knightwolf1785,
:D Someone really should write The Kitchen Adventures of Asuna. XD
And yes, it will be interesting to see where Shanejayell will take things in "Hero"... Asuna/Ayaka make a neat couple. ^_^


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OK everyone, first off I need to warn you that the next update will likely take a couple of days, because I will probably be a bit too busy to write. I will when I can, of course, but still... just so everyone knows.
I think the end of the story is in sight too, maybe just a chapter or two, but we'll see how that goes. I can never control these things anyway. ^^;









Fever Days (continued)






Quite what it was that woke her up, Konoka couldn’t say. Oh certainly, it was either the loud booming sound coming from the kitchen, or the panicked screams of her roommates, or possibly even the stench of something burning that got her up, but either way an urgent message was passed through Konoka’s system with the warning ASUNA IS COOKING, eliciting the emergency response of shooting to her feet almost as soon as her eyes had opened. She stumbled into the kitchen and grabbed the small emergency fire extinguisher that she always had on hand for just such an occasion.

Moments later a wet, soot-covered and generally bedraggled redhead leaned her head against Konoka’s shoulder and sniffled an apology for damaging their kitchen... again. Konoka absently patted Asuna on the back, muttering some words of comfort as she scanned her domain and assessed the damages. Ahh, another set of pots and pans that were going into the trash... it was fortunate that Konoka had a discount at the store for the things by now. But the soot and smoke...

“Negi-kun,” Konoka addressed the equally dirty and messy little boy that looked like he had yet another year shaved off his life. “could you do something about the smoke? I don’t want Secchan to have to inhale this.”

Eager to help the boy did one better, and in a flash the kitchen was pristine again, save for the unfortunate pots of course, which earned him a grateful hug from Konoka. Konoka then convinced both of her roommates to go and take a nice long bath while she prepared breakfast for all of them, and even Negi had to agree that he needed to get the soot out of his hair.

Once she had ushered the other two out the door Konoka hurried for the bathroom and a quick cleaning up before she would tackle making breakfast for them all. She raced through her morning routines and tossed her pyjamas in the laundry basket, chuckling a little over the sooty imprints of both Asuna and Negi that she had managed to collect on it.

When Konoka stepped out of the bathroom on light feet she was met with the sight of Setsuna struggling to sit up, eyes blinking owlishly at her surroundings. Needless to say Konoka raced over to the bed to embrace, err, help her Secchan into a better position. “Secchan!”

“O-ojousama?” Secchan sounded about as weak as she looked, so Konoka decided not to scold her for her slip... this time. “What am I... what...”

“Ssshh. We brought you here after Eva-chan helped cure you.” She kissed Secchan lightly on the forehead as she fluffed the pillow and got her better situated, a bit curious at the light blush that followed the act. “You need to rest for a while, just relax and let me take care of you Secchan.”

“Cure?” Secchan sighed and closed her eyes as Konoka brushed the black bangs away from her face. She looked so much smaller and frailer like this, with her hair down and without the usually intense look on her face, Konoka mused.

Out loud she said. “What is the last thing you remember?”

When no answer was forthcoming Konoka took a closer look at her precious warrior, slightly surprised but also encouraged to see that Setsuna was blushing badly and looking at her strangely. Surely that meant that she remembered, now to find out if...

“Kono-chan! B-b-b-buh-b-b...” Setsuna stuttered and stared pointedly at Konoka’s chest.

Quickly looking down at herself and the shirt that she had completely forgotten to button upon seeing Setsuna awake, Konoka blinked a little and suggested mildly “Bra? Or maybe you mean bre...”

“BUTTONS!” Setsuna croaked, desperately cutting off whatever Konoka was about to say next. “Please... button... your shirt.”

Konoka complied, somewhat amused. “You know, there’s no need to be so shy Secchan... you certainly weren’t yesterday.” Unintentionally Konoka touched a few small hickeys that her previously so ardent Secchan had given her as souvenirs. She sighed a little, there would be no passionate embraces anymore, would there?

The girl lying on the bed stared in abject horror, her face so red it was threatening to self-combust. Konoka sighed again.

“Secchan, let me get you some more pillows and a glass of water... and you can relax and save your strength while I cook breakfast, okay?” Knowing she wouldn’t get an answer Konoka set out to do just that, keeping a steady stream of one-sided conversation going even as she prepared the food, stopping once in a while to make sure her precious – and utterly silent – Secchan was doing alright.

She was regaling Setsuna with the story of how Asuna yet again had assassinated their helpless kitchen and cooking equipment when the domestic hazard herself walked in, tailed by a tired-looking Negi. Asuna was complaining something about dirty ears as they both noticed Setsuna being propped up in the bed, tired but awake.

“Setsuna-san!”

“Setsuna!” Asuna charged the girl and hugged her, earning an awkward hug back from the slightly bewildered girl. “You’re ok! Gosh, it’s ever so good to see you back to your old blushing self.” Asuna nodded, apparently pleased with the world, as Setsuna did as suggested and blushed slightly at the enthused greeting.

“Setsuna-san, how do you feel?” Negi sat down at the edge of the bed and looked at her with round, worried eyes.

“Yeah,” Asuna cut in, “do you have any urges to grab Konoka and make out with her while hanging upside-down from the ceiling in the assembly hall?”

“Or to take jouchan’s clothes off while on top of the... OWW!”

Both Asuna and Chamo rubbed their heads as Konoka had appeared as by magic behind them and smacked them both with a twisted but still somewhat functional metal cooking spoon. She cleared her throat. “THAT... we did not do, and stop making Secchan think we did.” Then, more cheerfully. “Breakfast is ready, go eat.”

Asuna, Negi and Chamo gratefully ran for the table, leaving Konoka to try to calm the girl that was blushing so hard she looked as if she suffered from some strange disease in which a person’s face turned into lava and melted away. “Secchan...”

Setsuna, weak as she was, still managed to flop herself forward in the bed, almost ending up in Konoka’s lap as she did so. “I AM SO TERRIBLY SORRY OJOUSAMA!” She gasped and shook. “I HAVE NO EXCUSE-“

“Well, actually you do.” Asuna commented between bites of food, inadvertently getting Setsuna to look up from her prone position. “Though you know, you’ll sound ridiculous if you insist on calling her ojousama now that half the school saw you push Konoka up against the cafeteria wall and go all the way to second base in public.”

Setsuna and Konoka froze, eyes locked with one another, one increasingly shocked and the other slightly shy and smiling.

“Oh why was I not there!” Chamo sobbed into his breakfast until Asuna smacked him into the bowl head first. Negi just sat eating in silence, trying to make himself as small and as deaf as he possibly could, his face already on fire.

Konoka cleared her throat.

“Breakfast! Lovely breakfast! Mmm, food!” Asuna babbled in a sudden rush, cramming nearly her entire bowl into her mouth. “Mmmffffmmhh! Fffmm!” Negi and Chamo followed her example, though without speaking, hoping to placate Konoka before the wrath of the kitchen implements was upon them.

Seeing that Setsuna was about to begin her frantic apology again, Konoka acted to put a stop to it in the only way that came to mind just then. She darted forward and captured her Secchan’s lips with her own.

Thoroughly enjoying the all too brief kiss even if Secchan was unfortunately frozen solid in shock, Konoka drew back with a sweet smile and a little sigh. She caressed a burning cheek lovingly and leaned in to touch her forehead to Setsuna’s.

“No apologies, Secchan... just don’t call me ojousama anymore, please?”

Giving her precious warrior another bright, beaming smile Konoka then let Setsuna go in order to go fetch the breakfast she had prepared for her. While Konoka got the tray together Setsuna sat there, feeling faint and dizzy and really rather surreal, hesitantly touching fingers to lips that had just been so casually graced by Konoka’s kiss. She could not help but fidget a little as she tried to hide the tiny, very shy but also happy smile that overtook her.

“Here Secchan!” Konoka was back with cushions from the couch, making sure that Setsuna could sit up while propped against them comfortably. Then she pulled out the tray and loaded up a spoon with a sunny full-wattage smile. “Secchan, say aaaahhh!”

In view of recent events Setsuna could not find the strength or the heart in her to refuse, and so, facial blood-vessels still having a field day, she meekly opened up and let Kono-chan spoon-feed her.

“Ooooh, look at the newlyweds!” Asuna whispered none too discreetly to Negi and Chamo.

“Secchan, remind me that I have to ask Honya-chan if we can borrow a pot and a pan for a while, until I have bought some new ones. You see, for some reason we are all out of pots... again...”

“Aaaarrrghh, I’m sorry I’m sorry!”

Konoka winked at Setsuna at Asuna’s guilty cry, giving her a secret little smile. Setsuna smiled as well and ducked her head shyly, obediently accepting being fed another spoonful.

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Ryûchan,Mar 1 2007
04:41 PM
Jessie,
*laughs* It _is_ a hard decision... snuggles or necessities. ;D
Well, Secchan is waking up... though... erm... well I suppose nothing much happens in this chapter, hope you don't mind reading it anyway. ^^;

Nothing much happens?
This chapter was beautiful! just the way I hoped it would be! ^___^
Very sweet, Secchan is back to normal with her shy self ^_^ Just the way I like her lol :P

Can't wait for the next one! :]
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04:41 PM
Baka no Jitsu,
Heh, maybe, we'll see where things go. If not I might go with that other love potion story where everyone falls for Secchan at some point, too. ;D

omfg that would be hilarious. i would pay to read that. well you really are an impressive writer. you update quickly. that's just awesome cuz i'm kinda impatient. anyways continue writing cuz you frickin rock
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*lol*

LOVE Konoka's "Asuna's cooking emergency wake-up" bit. Heh. And now Setchan's gonna get SO teased. heh
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Ryûchan,Mar 1 2007
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“Yeah,” Asuna cut in, “do you have any urges to grab Konoka and make out with her while hanging upside-down from the ceiling in the assembly hall?”

*in tune*
SEEECHAN~! SEEECHAN~!
Kisses Konoka whenever she can!
Breaks a door, any size,
To get to her oujosama's side
LOOK OUT!
Here comes Secchan!
Konoka: *Squee!*
Asuna: Who's that weird girl with the guitar?
Negi: I don't know, but she's been sitting outside our room all day singing that song.

I enjoyed this chapter. *dance* If not for the uber-cute Konosetsuness (which I did enjoy), then just for that one bit there.

Expect to see an illustration of SpiderMan-style kissing tomorrow.
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“Kono-chan! B-b-b-buh-b-b...” Setsuna stuttered and stared pointedly at Konoka’s chest.

Quickly looking down at herself and the shirt that she had completely forgotten to button upon seeing Setsuna awake, Konoka blinked a little and suggested mildly “Bra? Or maybe you mean bre...”

“BUTTONS!” Setsuna croaked, desperately cutting off whatever Konoka was about to say next. “Please... button... your shirt.”

ROFL! It's kinda weird seeing Setsuna back to normal actually. I guess I got attached to Setsuna-Gone-Wild. :lol:
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:o Will if anything we know that there's black mail stuff on Asuna. the way the Konoka holds all the cooking mishaps on her is very evil. ;)
Not to pass on the fact that she is very scary in her own way. Right?
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Waa... My internet is kinda error for 2 days... Finnaly I can read this fanfiction again! That makes me very happy!

Secchan is wake up! She didn't remember what happened... Nice chapter, Ryûchan! Keep on writting! :D
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LOL, very nice update, big mama XD

I hope you're taking good care of yourself, yo! And I hope you get better very, very soon <3

And um, some fanart (kinda) by me for you?
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49981389/

*shot'd*

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LOL, very nice update, big mama XD

I hope you're taking good care of yourself, yo! And I hope you get better very, very soon <3

And um, some fanart (kinda) by me for you?
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49981389/

*shot'd*

funny, makes me wanna say -inserts smokey the bear voice- only you can prevent kitchen fires, make sure asuna doesn't cook
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Nothing much happens?
This chapter was beautiful! just the way I hoped it would be! ^___^
Very sweet, Secchan is back to normal with her shy self  Just the way I like her lol

Can't wait for the next one! :]

Jessie,
*big smile* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, then.^_^
And yeah, Secchan is adorable as her usual shy self... but she's also fun to play around with. ;D



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omfg that would be hilarious. i would pay to read that. well you really are an impressive writer. you update quickly. that's just awesome cuz i'm kinda impatient. anyways continue writing cuz you frickin rock

Baka no Jitsu,
:) You think it might be an ok idea? Heh, I'd love to write it... I guess I'll have to see how things go after finishing this. And thanks for the praise! ^__^


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*lol*

LOVE Konoka's "Asuna's cooking emergency wake-up" bit. Heh. And now Setchan's gonna get SO teased. heh

Shanejayell,
*grins* Is this next bit "teasing" enough? :lol: And Asuna + kitchen = DANGER WILL, err, KONOE KONOKA! XP


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*in tune*
SEEECHAN~! SEEECHAN~!
Kisses Konoka whenever she can!
Breaks a door, any size,
To get to her oujosama's side
LOOK OUT!
Here comes Secchan!
Konoka: *Squee!*
Asuna: Who's that weird girl with the guitar?
Negi: I don't know, but she's been sitting outside our room all day singing that song.

I enjoyed this chapter. *dance* If not for the uber-cute Konosetsuness (which I did enjoy), then just for that one bit there.

Expect to see an illustration of SpiderMan-style kissing tomorrow.

WitchCirce,
Oooo! *sings along**borrows Secchan's little... err, triangle, is it? to play along* :D
And more lovely artsiness? Wai wai! :excited: I'll be waiting patiently. ;D



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ROFL! It's kinda weird seeing Setsuna back to normal actually. I guess I got attached to Setsuna-Gone-Wild. 

Tsubasa,
Heh, well, she was fun to write, but she had to be "cured" at some point didn't she? ^_^ Now Konoka-gone-wild, that would be something too... ;)


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Will if anything we know that there's black mail stuff on Asuna. the way the Konoka holds all the cooking mishaps on her is very evil. 
Not to pass on the fact that she is very scary in her own way. Right?

Knightwolf1785,
Hehe, yes, someone who smiles like that jus HAS to be scary once on the "bad" side. ;P And is it just me or does Asuna seem more than just a bit gullible when it comes to Konoka's jokes in the anime? She gets her _every_ time. ^~^;



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Waa... My internet is kinda error for 2 days... Finnaly I can read this fanfiction again! That makes me very happy!

Secchan is wake up! She didn't remember what happened... Nice chapter, Ryûchan! Keep on writting! 

Icha-kun,
Ahh, hope you don't have any more problems with your Internet connection. ^^;; And... Secchan does remember, she just didn't right away. ;D I had intended to write something that cleared that up but I guess I forgot... sorry about that.



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LOL, very nice update, big mama XD

I hope you're taking good care of yourself, yo! And I hope you get better very, very soon <3

And um, some fanart (kinda) by me for you?
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/49981389/

*shot'd*

Jisatsu,
^_^ Thanks, that's sweet of you. And also thank you for the lovely art! Wheeee! I loved it, as you know (since I told you before :P )... what an adorable little Secchan. *wants to squeeze her to see if she is a beanie* :D


Hmm, it just hit me: we know Asuna can't cook, but what about the other 'suna? Can Setsuna cook? (the two sunas, A and Set XP )

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Here's another snippet, sorry for the wait. The same thing applies for the next chapter btw, please bear with me if it takes me a couple of days to write it. ^.^;








Fever Days (continued)






After the breakfast activities Setsuna fell asleep again, still exhausted from the spell that had cured her, and she slept most of the day, awakening only for short periods of food and other things. Towards the evening she was finally strong enough to take a shower and sit up in bed – Konoka refused to let her out of it for anything short of emergency matters – and so it was decreed that a few visitors would be allowed to drop by. Konoka took her caretaking duties very seriously, especially since it was her precious Secchan that was in need of a little love and care.

The first visitor was strictly speaking not a visitor for Setsuna but rather for Asuna, as Ayaka made an unusual appearance in their room. As Asuna opened the door, a bit surprised that someone actually knocked for once, and found the tall blonde on the other side, an involuntary blush stole across her features.

“Negi’s not here, he has already left for his training with Eva-chan.” Asuna sounded a bit brusque as she tried to fight her unwanted blush. What was wrong with her lately?

Ayaka eyed her a bit but let it slide for once. “I know, I’m not here for him right now... actually I came to ask you if you would mind coming with me for a while. I could use your help.”

“S-sure. Konoka, I’ll be helping Iincho for a bit, are you guys going to be ok by yourselves?”

“It won’t take long.” Ayaka assured although Konoka just beamed and nodded, perhaps just a tiny bit too eager to send her roommate on her way. Ayaka opted not to mention anything about any possibly strange behaviour, instead she scrutinized the girl in front of her some more. She leaned in close.

“Asuna, you look flushed. Do you have a fever?” For once not bothering to hide her concern for her long-time sparring partner Ayaka first put a hand to Asuna’s forehead to check, but dissatisfied with that quickly replaced it with her own forehead. Asuna blushed crimson.

“Hmm, it doesn’t seem like you are having a fever... are you feeling ok?”

There was no answer from Asuna, whom was somewhat dazedly staring at Ayaka’s lips with wide, unblinking eyes.

Ayaka noticed, and so did Konoka. The blonde blushed and glanced at Asuna’s roommate in confusion, but was only met with a widening and amused smile that seemed to hint at something. A long moment of silence stretched out, broken only when Setsuna, not knowing what was going on, spoke up from her position in the bed.

“Is something wrong?”

Snapping back to her senses so abruptly it was almost audible, Asuna made a horrified face. “NOTHING AT ALL! BYE!” And then she was off, running down the hall at ludicrous speed and leaving roommates and friends staring at the spot she had just vacated.

“D-did she just...?” Ayaka found her voice finally and made a shaky gesture towards her mouth, to which Konoka smiled kindly and nodded slightly, leaving it at that. Ayaka’s blush deepened and she moved as if to follow the fleeing girl.

“I-I wish you a speedy recovery, Sakurazaki-san.” She said, clearly distracted. “Excuse me.”

And then she was gone. Laughing Konoka closed the door and walked over to sit by her Secchan. Temporarily forgetting to be shy and awkward around Konoka Setsuna had to ask “What is going on?”

“Oh...” Konoka giggled and lightly brushed her arm up against Setsuna’s. “I think Asuna has just realized she wants to find out what it is like to kiss a girl.”

There wasn’t strictly speaking any particular reason why Setsuna should feel embarrassed by the statement as it did not directly pertain to her – or at least she thought it did not, though with Kono-chan one couldn’t always tell – but she blushed all the same. It did not help matters any that warm fingers moved lightly over her own on top of the blanket, or that Kono-chan’s giggle had changed pitch to something soft that made the little hairs at the nape of Setsuna’s neck stand on end.

“Secchan...” That warm, lilting voice sent involuntary shivers down Setsuna’s spine and made her stomach do acrobatic things that staid, steadfast warrior stomachs really were not meant to do. “Secchan, I...”

“Hey, was that Iincho I saw running in the hallway just now?” Haruna’s voice seemed much too loud and too harsh as she barged in with her usual aplomb, most of Asuna and Konoka’s friends somehow long since broken of the habit of actually knocking before entering the room.

On the bed Setsuna and Konoka flew apart, or rather, the blushing Setsuna moved as far away from Konoka as the restricting blanket allowed, creating a more normal space between them, and Konoka merely moved to face the sudden guest instead of leaning towards her adorable warrior like she wanted.

“Hello Paru... are you stopping by to check on Secchan?” If there was any irritation over the interruption it quickly disappeared and was not particularly noticeable to begin with as Konoka smiled towards the ever-curious artist.

Haruna grinned strangely insolently and flopped down on the edge of the bed. “Yeah, I am... and I also thought I might as well get to hear the scoop from the horse’s mouth, so to speak.” She eyed Setsuna. “Feeling better? And... from what, exactly?”

“Scoop?” Setsuna repeated dumbly, not quite understanding what Haruna was getting at and frankly feeling somewhat disturbed by the dangerous gleam in her eyes and that almost wicked smile. Whatever it was, Setsuna would bet it did not bode well, at least not for her.

“Yeah, you know, Asakura has the special edition all fixed up for printing, it’ll be all over the school by morning.” Haruna grew animated, excitedly waving a large envelope around as she spoke. “It’s fully illustrated by yours truly, of course, though there are some photographs as well... and eyewitness accounts, back-story from informed sources, the whole deal. I even made a small comic to run in it, just for you.” A victory sign with her free hand. “You know I don’t usually do the yuri thing, but what can I say, you two are inspiring.”

“The... yuri thing.” Konoka said quietly, taking hold of Setsuna’s hand without noticing it herself. “I think I know where this is going.”

“Oh! Almost forgot!” Haruna jumped back to her feet and held the envelope up in front of Setsuna and Konoka. “Here, I made this to be the front-page illustration, but Asakura went with a photo instead, plus you have the original of one of the pages of the comic in there too. You can have it.” She beamed rather proudly and handed the envelope to Konoka.

Somewhat slowly Konoka opened the envelope, letting Setsuna scoot closer to watch, and took out the drawings. The reaction to the first one was immediate, Setsuna blushing a fiery crimson and Konoka squealing in delight.

“Paru! Thank you!” Carefully putting the drawings aside Konoka launched herself at her pleased and somewhat smirking friend, hugging her. “It is perfect! I will frame it and put it on the wall!”

Setsuna on the other hand said nothing, fully occupied by pressing herself into the wall and staring at the surprisingly realistic pencil drawing of herself and Kono-chan kissing passionately. She wondered distantly if it was ok to faint right there, or if Kono-chan would be upset with her for smudging the drawings when she fell on them.

Konoka resumed admiring the drawing before taking a look at the other one. It was an inked comic page sans any text, featuring a very dramatic and flowery version of a somewhat taller and more androgynous-looking Setsuna sweeping a doe-eyed Konoka off her feet with a sparkle or two, and then some fairly detailed kissing. Setsuna saw darkness edge in on the outer rim of her suddenly tunnel-shaped vision.

“This was very... nice too.” Konoka said, inwardly terribly amused by how boyish Paru had made her beautiful Secchan out to be, and the error in height difference between them. She gave the grinning Haruna a knowing look. “And the next couple of pages wouldn’t happen to have us doing anything... well... naughty, do they?”

The extremely guilty look facing her was answer enough really. “Err, Asakura said not to do anything that involved loosing clothing, so it will be innocent really... yeah, quite tame.”

“And...?” Konoka smirked, knowing the mangaka a bit too well to buy that. “If I were to look at your desk, would I happen to see anything un-clothed in Paru’s personal collection?”

Hearing this Sakurazaki Setsuna died... or so she thought, she was not entirely sure yet, but she suspected out-of-the-body experiences at any rate, the kind she had once overheard Yue talk about, and any moment now the school ghost would come floating in to welcome her into the club. Setsuna nodded.

Haruna blushed slightly and fidgeted under Konoka’s look, cursing herself for not being able to come up with a lie quickly enough to cover her little... experimental foray into the non-yaoi side of things. It was important for her artistic development, darn it, could she help it if she found them to be an intriguing motif?

A knock on the door interrupted Haruna’s squirming, replacing her guilty look with a wide smile and an obvious look of relief. “Saved by the knock!” She blurted. “You have other guests, I’ll just head on back to my place, feel better, going now!” And so Haruna was out the door so fast she nearly ran over the person standing in front of it as she did so.

In the doorway, one hand still raised as if to knock, Tatsumiya Mana looked slightly surprised. “Is this a bad time?”

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Chigusa
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Just... YAY!

I'm loving this fic so much. You're a seriously good writer, Ryuchan. This has to be one of the best characterised KonoSetsu fics that I've ever read. I've always seen Kono-chan as a bit of a flirt too, so it's fab to see that side of her really brought out. I feel kinda sorry for Secchan to be honest, but it's all in a good cause after all... ;)

Can't wait for the next one as always, but don't rush yourself. Health before art! ^_^
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Ryûchan,Mar 3 2007
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Baka no Jitsu,
:) You think it might be an ok idea? Heh, I'd love to write it... I guess I'll have to see how things go after finishing this. And thanks for the praise! ^__^

whee funny as always >_<. wha haruna nervous? who'da thunk it? anyways i don't think it would be an ok idea it's a f***in awesome idea
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