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Courage; KonoSetsu Fic - Who else?
Topic Started: Feb 24 2007, 08:25 PM (7,305 Views)
Suraki
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You might want to wait a couple of days with the FF.net authorization. Occasionally, their email system goes down, and I think that's what's been happening now. I'm thinking it'll be two to four days before they're up and at it again. But anyway, on to the review.

AMAZING! I've waited a long time for someone to write Setsuna while in a rage (in fact, I'm trying to write something that includes that) and you did it perfectly! I can't wait to see the next chapter. The fight scenes were pretty good - not the best I've seen, but then again, fight scenes are one of the hardest things to write in fanfiction.
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Manori
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Wow, what a chapter though, damn, Konoka got hurt. But then again, this is what to expect sometimes; Setsuna won't always be there to protect Konoka. She's going to have to get hurt sometimes, no matter how painful it is to admit it; but that's life [unfortunately] :fist:.

However, Setsuna's fury was wonderfully portrayed. And it's to be expected, of course, since that demon made a HUGE mistake by hurting Konoka. Hopefully, she'll heal along with everyone else :).

So all in all, another well written chapter. You're doing a fantastic job so far, and I can't wait until the next one.
Ja ne! :domo:
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kid386
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eagerly waiting for the next chapter :dance:
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takuyar
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ManaxKaede?
Me <3's!!
The way you wrote the berserker rage was really great, especially since fight scenes are extremely hard to write out.
But in the fics I've read which included those rage scenes, most times when I see them, the berserker just rips through all the enemies no matter the opposing numbers. Still, your fic is much more real than the others with the limitations.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter too! ;)

edit : What happened to Negi's personal shielding? He should have it up while in combat..
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Nekane Asahina
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Wow. Such a satisfying story..
You should publish it :P lol Keep the konosetsu writing up!!
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Yuki
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DURRR I mean, DURARARARA
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Chigusa-san's got more time on her hands now,
there was much less a while ago, cause she was just so busy !!

Ganbannakya, Chigusa-san!
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takuyar
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ACK! It's been TWO MONTHS already?!

Chigusa-sama, where have you been?
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Jessie
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I don't remember anything already :X
Even if there will be a new chapter I won't remember anything that happenned 'till now :X
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icha-kun
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Chigusa where are you?
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BrutalSpoon
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*gasp* no more konosetsu? noooo D: and I was really getting into it too T_T

Chigusa, you are an amazing writer :D keep up the awesome work ^_^ Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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kid386
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hey just a heads up if anyone has a fanfiction user account. Courage has been posted up by a user name Haruchin. I ono if Haruchin is Chigusa but check it out just in case i suppose. I wouldn't want someone else taking credit for something that isnt their work.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3790961/1/Courage
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Manori
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kid386,Sep 20 2007
04:17 AM
hey just a heads up if anyone has a fanfiction user account. Courage has been posted up by a user name Haruchin. I ono if Haruchin is Chigusa but check it out just in case i suppose. I wouldn't want someone else taking credit for something that isnt their work.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3790961/1/Courage

It's not the same story actually; it just has the same title.
It's still awesome though ^_^
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kid386
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Manori,Sep 20 2007
07:27 PM
kid386,Sep 20 2007
04:17 AM
hey just a heads up if anyone has a fanfiction user account. Courage has been posted up by a user name Haruchin. I ono if Haruchin is Chigusa but check it out just in case i suppose. I wouldn't want someone else taking credit for something that isnt their work.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3790961/1/Courage

It's not the same story actually; it just has the same title.
It's still awesome though ^_^

really? cuz i skimed the first chapter of Courage on fanfic and then i skimed it here and its the same, maybe im just seeing things
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thedeath93
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no, it's seem the same for me, really it is, who is this Haruchin @_@
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Manori
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No, it isn't. The plot line so far may be similar to this Courage, but it doesn't exactly mean she plagiarized it.

kid386
 
really? cuz i skimed the first chapter of Courage on fanfic and then i skimed it here and its the same, maybe im just seeing things

Mm, I see where you're coming from. When I too read the first chapter actually, I got the same thought that that story was similar to this one.
But trust me, I've read it word for word and while it may have some of the same concepts, it isn't the same story.

Who knows, maybe she was inspired by reading this Courage?

[If people still want to make sure this story wasn't plagiarized, I'll PM Haruchin and get her say on the matter.]
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