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The Way of a Demon's Heart; Read and find out for yourself
Topic Started: Mar 10 2007, 04:35 PM (3,242 Views)
winget
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A women has come to Mahora academy. Her purpose? To decide the fate of Negi's teaching career. However with her time there she develops an interest in one of his students. This does not go over so well with Konoka who worries she may lose her Sec-chan to another. Is the women really out to steal Setsuna away? Or is there something else going on? Will konoka reveal deep feelings, and what will happen to negi's career? And why are tomatoes red!?


Yet another Konoka Setsuna Fic



The Way of a Demon's Heart
Proluge

It was a strange and very unique school this Mahora academy. You needed no special powers to see that. Nor need powers to notice that the students were just as strange. As they rushed by busing themselves with getting to class before that final bell ring. The halls cramped and the word chaos being to vague to explain the scene which is left for your viewing pleasure. With in 5 seconds over a hundred students must find not only their class but as well as their seats settle down and be prepared for today's lesson. No way in hell could something like that occur, but atlas you would be proven wrong. For when that bell went those suffocating halls are empty except for those escaped pieces of homework that have found themselves discarded on the shimmering floors. This was the routine for everyone at Mahora academy. However today was slightly different, at least for one class.

The students of 3A sat in their seats today but instead of finding their young teacher by the name of Negi Springfield. Instead they had been introduced to... nothing. However it was not unheard of to see the young teacher to be late to his own class. Due to his roommates dragging him behind the time. Still it was rare... As seconds turned into minutes a certain student president saw it in herself to bring order to the other students. Who saw a teacher less class room would be the ideal time to test out the aerodynamics of paper airplanes.

With a slam of her fist upon the wooden surface of her desk and her victorious voice. Ayake screamed at her fellow classmates "Stop your immature bamfoolery! What will Negi-Sensei think if he were to come in now!?" Though her voice could of woken the dead it went unheard with in the room. This however would not stop the young girl and she continue to contain control over the disaster in front of her.

The noise could be heard from out side of the class. Causing some uneasiness to two who stood in front of the door to the class.

"What on earth is going on in there...?" A women with deep navy hair asked to no one in particular. "Heh... well... uh that's normal." replayed a child who now laughed, nervously scratching the back of his head.

"If you wish to continue teaching at this school. I surely hope this will not occur DURING class time."

With that said and yet another nervous laugh later. The door was open and the two entered the begining of the storm.



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Now to see if I continue and finish this first attempt at a fic. Tell me what you think as of far and if you have any suggestions I'd love to hear them. Though note I won't neccesssarly use them.
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Well, thats a good start. There's the occasional typo (you wrote Negi-Sensai rather than Sensei)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter ^_^
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That was a nice start ^^
I'll stick around to find out what will the next chapter reveal :]
So please update soon ^_^
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Very nice so far; though there are some mispellings and such here and there, this is a good start. Can't wait to read more ^_^
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Yay! Another KonoSetsu fanfic! Nice prologue! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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I'm glad to see that you are enjoying this as of yet. I hope not to dispoint.

Also, yes I do apologize for misspelling and the such. English was never a subject I did well at. I have send this through three different spell checkers, but they can only do so much. So I hope you can live with. If some one is willing to be my editor please tell me! I'd be more then happy to accept any help!


The Way Of A Demon's Heart
Chapter 1



It started off as any other day for Negi. He awoke to Asuna lecturing him how he should really sleep in his own bed instead of sneaking into hers. While konoka prepared their morning breakfast. Soon Asuna would insist in helping konoka out and in the end would result in them needing to buy half of their kitchen... again. This was why the young child teacher was pleased that he would have to leave early for the principle office. His eyebrows would live for another day and there was nothing wrong with that!

Now though; as he stood in front of the office of the idiosyncratic ancient principle also known as Konoemon Konoe. Negi wondered if a few singe brow hairs would be more merciful then the awkward silence which filled the air.

"Morning Negi. It seems that our other guest has yet to arrive. So please make yourself at home and take a seat." said the old man finally cutting the silence.

"Thank you sir. Um... guest? Who will be joining us?" questioned the young boy as he took a seat in front of the desk. "That is if you don't mind me asking..."

Konoe chuckled at the nervousness of his youngest staff member, but soon displayed nothing but seriousness. "You have ever right to ask. Considering our guest will be wit- ah speaking of which. It seems she has arrived." As the words escaped his lips the door to the room opened.

Negi watched the door with great interest and instantly smiled as he watched one Takamichi entered. Though this expression was to only last for a few seconds and turn into slight confusion has a second person he did not recognized entered the room. This second person was a women whom by the looks of it was still young in age. She had deep navy hair, ocean blue eyes and at the moment was munching on a chocolate chip cookie. However the most noticeable thing was the fact that like Negi himself, this girl was obviously a foreigner.

This stranger paused with in the door way and looked towards Negi. A slightly puzzled look on her face as if she recognized the boy, and for a few seconds the two just stared at each. Before the women took the cookie away from her mouth and gave the younger of the two a wide lopsided grin and wave. Which in return caused Negi to smile.

"Here you go miss. Now don't you be getting yourself lost again." Chuckled Takamishi as he patted the women on the shoulder. Who by this time was blushing slightly and chuckling her self. "Thank you Takamishi-san very much. I can take it from here."

With a smile the tall man bid both Negi and Konoe a quick hello and goodbye before taking his exit. Once the door closed leaving the three. The women turned to the old man and gave a bow.

"Good morning. I wish to apologize for my tardiness. It... would seem that... I took a wrong turn and... got myself lost, hehehe." Nervously stated the girl as she began to scratch the back of her head obviously embarrassed by the situation.

"Fufufufu, no worries young one. This academy is very large and I must admit that I myself on my first day was a little lost with in it all. Now shall we get started. Please do sit and allow me to introduce you two." The women did as she was told. Though she seemed to have grown extremely puzzled by something the gray haired one had said.

"Negi, this here would be Kakirah. Kakirah please meet Negi." The two offered the other a small smile and quick hello. Before returning to attention too the man in front of them. "Now Negi for the next few months Kakirah will be assessing your teaching and will decide if you are fit to continue as a teacher."

When this was stated the two once again looked at each but this time no smile was offered. Instead both seemed rather pale and shocked by what they heard.

"UWAH? Continue as a teacher, but... but I thought I already passed my internship!" Nearly screamed the aghast Negi but quickly realized his mistake. Thus quickly uttered his apology, "Uh my apologies I shouldn't of spoken out like that."

"Uh, yes you have Negi. However some unavoidable controversy has occurred and thus we find ourselves in this position... Um, Ms. Kakirah are you all right?" Questioned Konoe as he looked at the paled girl. Who had yet to say anything on the matter... or for that fact move since the announcement was made.

Slowly though, she turned her head to look at the man. While her hand came up to point towards the child teacher. "Him? I... uh... I know I had to... assess a young teacher... but... I thought... 21... not..." In the same sluggish movement she turned her head back towards Negi. "How old are you? 10?"

"Actually, I'm now 12 years of age." Replied Negi with down cast eyes.

Konoe in return just chuckled at the current situation. Amused by the reaction by two in front of him. "Yes, this is the teacher you will be assessing. Don't let his age fool you. Negi is very mature for his age, and a more then excellent teacher."

Silence filled the room as both Kakirah and Negi digested the new information but forth in front of them. Negi sat in his seat fidgeting a little a slight pink tint on his cheeks from the comment the principle had stated. While Kakirah sat in deep thought. Soon though she sat back and began to frown, and began to munch on her cookie once again. This simple movement only caused Negi to fidget a little more. Worried that he might have already given the wrong impression, or perhaps somehow offended this women.

"Aw, I wish I had a cute sensei like him when I was in school" was all she mumbled. Which resulted with Negi face faulting into the ground beneath him.

That was this morning however. Now both Negi and Kakirah stood in front a class full of teenage girls. Who had decided it would be appropriate to stare at the newcomer and all knew this was the calm before the storm. Kakirah taking action before bombardment of question she knew was coming, took action. With a polite bow she began to introduce her self to the class. Not once looking up towards the girls before she finished what she had to say.

"Hello, my name is Kakirah. However over the years I've obtained the nickname Kat. Which I would hope you all come to use with me. I am from Canada but recently moved to Japan. Which explains my skin color and slight accent. I will be staying with you all for the next few months. My purpose here is to observe Negi-sensei and evaluate his teaching abilities. At the end of my stay here I will decide if Negi-sensei is capable of teaching or not." Kakirah took a deep breath in and finally stood up straight. Looking towards the class she will come to know.

The class in return sat in shocked silence but abruptly broke in chaos. Asking their teacher if he was in trouble and if there was anything they could helped. Kakirah back off giving the poor boy room and not wanting to find her self trampled underneath youthful enthusiasm. Instead she thought she would close the door. That seemed like a harmless enough task. Boy would she find out how wrong she was.

She had just taken her hand off the door. When it flung opened quicker then she could blink, and she found her self on her back just as quick. Three additional girls atop of her. With pained moans lifted their heads rubbing their sore limbs. Two of the girls who went by the names of Asuna and Konoka quickly stoped though as they noticed their class staring at them, and they looked down at whom they bull dozed to the ground and jaws dropped.

On the floor laid one Setsuna Sakurazaki and Kakirah entangled in a rather... interesting position
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Interesting, huh? Well, I wonder where all this is leading to...
Nice chapter, though.

And if you need an editor, I'd be happy to comply!
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Interesting, huh? Well, I wonder where all this is leading to...
Nice chapter, though.

And if you need an editor, I'd be happy to comply!

That would be great! ^.^ Once I type up the next part I'll send it to you :dance:
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Nice chapter! I love it... Write some more! :lol:
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NOOOOOO, Secchan can't be in an 'interesting' postion with anyone but Kono-chan! ;-;-;-;
though I can only think of how Kono-chan will react LOL :P

This was an interesting chapter ^_^ please continue! ^_^
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Big thanks goes out to Manori who edited this chapter. SHE IS GOD BOW TO HER! Or not up to you *shrugs*

Glad to hear that every one is enjoying this so far. I truly hope as I continue to write this I will not disapoint. Anywho next chapter!

The Way of a Demon's heart
Chapter 2


Setsuna was unsure of what exactly just happened. All she knew was that this morning she had arrived at Ojou-sama's room as she did every morning, more then ready to escort her lady to class. However as she arrived she had smelt something burning which meant only one thing: Asuna had managed to sneak into the kitchen, which in return meant she would see something that just wasn't right and wrong in every possible way.

Covering her mouth with her hand she opened the door and faced the horror which awaited her in the black smoke filled room. It was for that reason the three had been late that morning, and for some cruel joke of an unholy higher power, it was the same reason Setsuna found her self on top of a women she did not recognize.

Only inches away sat Konoka Konoe who held a rather disturbed expression on her face. It wasn't because Setsuna landed straddling Kakirah's hips, nor was it because their faces were only inches away from one another. Though true she was not pleased with the idea of seeing her Secchan in such a position with another (still a twinge of discomfort gripped at her heart due to the sight which slightly confused her as to why she felt such a strong emotion), it wasn't the main cause of the annoyance that burned through her veins. After all accidents do happen and it just seem it was only Setsuna's turn to face misfortune today. No what was bothering her the most was the fact that they lingered in that position just staring at each other.

"Excuse me... but um... do you mind?" the question came from Kakirah, which caused Setsuna to snap back to reality and realize exactly what position she had gotten herself into.

With her face burning, Setsuna instantly stood from her position and apologized for the situation, but only received a lopsided grin and a "Don't worry, just an accident" from the women she plowed to the ground.

It was at this time did the shock vanish from Negi's features, and he was at Kakirah's side instantly offering his assistance. The rest of the class looking on with a quiet uncertainty of what just occurred. As for Konoka she followed toot-suit to her body guards side. "Secchan! Are you all right? Uh... Secchan?"

For a change Setsuna's eyes where not on the brown haired girl. No her attention stayed on Kakirah; something was different about that women, and her aura was not normal. She didn't seem to be threatening but still a curious thing that Setsuna should keep a close eye on so she can insure her Kono-chan's safety.

Konoka mean while continued unsuccessfully to obtain the swordwoman's attention, and as she followed Setsuna's gaze she grew more irritated at where it landed. Narrowing her eyes she grabbed hold of Setsuna's arm and leaned in towards her ear, a slight evil glint shimmering in her eyes. "Se-cchaaan What are you looking at? Have you found something more interesting then me?" Konoka huskily whispered into the other girls ear, being sure to emphasize each syllable of the warrior's name.

This caught the swordwoman's attention, though at the same time causing the hairs on the back of her neck to stand on end and her face to burn. And as she whipped her head to go quite literally face to face with Konoka, her face only glowed more crimson as she instantly took note of just how close they exactly were. "O-ojou-sama!W-w-what are you do-"

"WAIT A SECOND HERE!!" Setsuna's babbling was cut short by the voicetruss Asuna who after coming too from her dazed state, bounded up towards the stranger in her class who had been insisting the she was okay to Negi. "Who are you, and what exactly are you doing here?"

"My name is Kakirah, and I'm here to observe Negi-sensei; to determine if he is fit to continue teaching."

"What do you mean to see if he is fit to continue teaching!?" Screamed Asuna completely shocked by the shear notion. "Who ordered such a thing!?"

"Uh... well you see. Due to Negi's age, there are some people higher up that want to insure that he is indeed capable to be a teacher."

"Wait... how old are you?"

"Um..." Kakirah looked at the red haired girl infront of her a little dumbfounded by the question she had asked, unsure how her age had anything to do with the current discussion. "I... well that is... um... I'd guess that technically I would be around 20 year old now." She replied scratching the back of her head sheepishly.

Asuna crossed her arms leaning towards the other women, a dangerous gleam in her eyes. "What do you mean 'you guess'? Besides... aren't you a little young to be doing a job like this?"

"..." Kakirah had no idea how to respond to this and was growing nervous in the position she seemed to have been placed in. Oh how she wished that something would come to her rescue and distract this curious girl. After all, wasen't she supposed to be the one doing the investigation?

"Asuna! You over sized monkey! How dare you treat our guest with such discourtesy!?" And from some part of the class a blonde haired angel came to the rescue.

Kakirah paused in her train of thought and scrunched her eyebrows together. 'Wait did my angel just call that other girl a monkey?'

"What did you call me you baboon!?" Asuna was never one to sit back and take an insult from Ayake. Before Kakirah knew it the two where butting heads and the last of the class seemed to be taking bets on who would win.

With a sigh Kakirah turned towards Negi who at the time was attempting to calm his class down, though failing horribly at it. Feeling slight pity towards the young boy, Kakirah felt she should intervene and calm the class down and she knew exactly how to do so.

"I must say this is not a very good first impression. From what I can see your class is hectic and out of control. Generally I would have to take note of this and in doing so it would not look too good on your part, Negi." When that was said the whole class stopped just as she predicted, fear starting to show on some of their faces. Kakirah couldn't help but grin inwardly at the loyalty the child obtained from his students, something she would definantly be sure to take note of when she got the chance.

"However I'm not one to make conclusions based on a first impression, and under the current circumstances of it being my first day here I'm willing to let it slide this one time, but I do believe it best to start class now." She gave a smile and wink at the young boy. Before turning and smiling at the rest of the class, putting most of them at ease and satisfying one Asuna.

Then something hit her and she quickly dug into her back pocket pulling out a piece of paper. "Oh! Before I forget. Um could a Sakurazaki Setsuna raise her hand?"

Slowly the girl mentioned did as she was requested. "The principle has requested that after school lets out, that both of us are to appear before him." Kakirah smiled at the girl and couldn't help but chuckle at the slightly ironic situation. "It's seems to have been fate that brought us together this morning."

Setsuna's face flushed as she looked down at her hands due to the bold statement made. The rest of the class either grinned or chuckled, having obtained yet another thing to tease of their class mates about.

Sadly though there was one student who did not take too kindly to what Kakirah had said. At the back of the class Konoka crossed her arms and huffed, her eyes tracing back and forth between Setsuna and Kakirah. Though her eyes always narrowed has her vision landed on Kakirah.

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As the day went on, Negi finally managed to get a chance to teach his class and Kakirah finally got a chance to start doing her job. After making the announcment that the first week she would only observe before she started to write anything down. She hoped that would ease Negi and get him feeling more comfortable with her presence. After all, Kakirah wanted to see Negi at his best and worst. She wouldn't be able to see either if the poor boy was always so nervous around her.

When finally the bell chimed indicating the end of the school day the class stampeded out of the class. Some in a race to get the best seat on the bus or train, while others just wished to escape the confinements of the four walls and out into doing something they enjoyed. Aside from these ambitious teens, a few exceptions took their time and stayed behind in no real hurry.

And it just so happens that the three students who stayed later then the majority of the class where also the same ones who arrived later then the rest of the students to class.

After this morning bruising and confrontation to a very scary red head, slowly approaching the three Kakirah was unsure of what to expect. Part of her told her that this was a very bad idea, while the other part kept insisting this had to be done. Or at least had to be done if she wished to survive the next few months here.

"Hello, I don't believe we've yet to be... properly introduced." The navy hair women gave what must of been her millionth bow that day.

However in return she only received a slight nod of the head from the girl who's hair was tied to the side, one narrowed pair of eyes from the usual cheerful brown hair princess, and one look of slight confusion at the same time perhaps a bit of a glare from the girl who wore bells in her hair. Yep bad idea, but Kakirah wasn't one who would back down from something she had started.

Timidly Kakirah brought her hands up and began... tapping her index fingers together. With her eyes down cast in a slightly pathetic gesture, she continued to speak just praying that they were the kind who gave mercy to their fallen adversaries.

"Um... I first want to say that I'm sorry for any discomfort and or any ill feelings I might have caused you. Due to me being here... in your class. I also wish to apologize for this morning and what... happened."

The three looked on at the person who stood there, sympathy seeping through all of them by the sight of an obviously uncomfortable women. It was Setsuna first to speak as she too gave a small bow in greeting, who was followed by Asuna and soon Konoka.

"Number 15 Sakurazaki Setsuna."

"Number 8 Kagurazaka Asuna."

"Number 13 Konoe Konoka."

"Why are you apologizing for this morning. It was us who fell on to you." It was Asuna who said this and was now patting Kakirah on the back. "We should be the one apologizing to you for the way we treated you."

Looking up and being met with a sheepish smile on Asuna's face, the matter was waived off and told the past was the past. Kakirah looked at the three determined to be sure that she remembered the face to the name. After a few seconds of this she finally came to a realization.

"Wait... Konoe Konoka? As in... that creepy old principle guy?"

This caused both Konoka and Asuna to giggle, and chuckle at how Kakirah had addressed their dean all the while nodding as their answer to the question. Though Setsuna was stunned at how this women could speak with such audacity, she herself being taught to show as much respect to those who she believed to hold a higher status then she.

"Oh... I see, I see. Ah! Talking of which shall we get going Sakurazaki-san? Would you two like to join us? It would be nice if we got to know each other better," was the cheerful response of Kakirah which cleared away all uneasiness and discouraging feelings.

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It wasn't that long after they left the class room did Kakirah take note of Asuna's shirt which lead to her revealing that she too was a fellow Chupacubra believer. This instantly of course jump starting the beginning of what Kakirah could only hope to be a friendship.

Of course during the conversation they become oblivious to the world around them, which suited Konoka just fine due to the fact that at the beginning of their stroll to her grandfathers Setsuna kept glancing in the navy hair women's direction. And that caused the feeling of jealously slowly slipping back into the pit of her stomach.

(Once again only confused her as to why she felt jealous but she decided to put this train of thought aside for the time being.)

As the four of them walked down the hall Konoka made sure to stay by Setsuna's side, Clinging tightly to the girls arm and joyfully talking about their child hood. All the while Setsuna wore her well known blush due to their close proximity, while Asuna and Kakirah walked a few feet behind deep in deep conversation about Chupacubra sightings, and possible traps that could be set up.

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With their arrival into the office of Konoe Konoemon, an exchange of greetings where made which had him slightly surprised at first at the arrival of two additional people. However he was never one to not welcome a visit from his beloved granddaughter.

"Ah I'm glad that you're getting along with the students, and especially my granddaughter, Kakirah." Koneomon nodded towards the girl before shifting his attention towards Setsuna. "Setsuna-kun, I would like to talk to you about possibly sharing your room with Kakirah during her stay here."

What he got wasn't a response from Setsuna but that from his granddaughter which shocked every one in the room. Konoka's back had gone ridged and she hadn't noticed that she now stood standing infront of her grandfathers desk, the palms of her hands landing on the hard wooden surface rather forcefully.

"WAIT! Grandfather are you sure that this is a good idea?" she questioned.

"Hmmm? I see no problem with this decision," replayed the man in a calm and collected manor.

Konoka didn't like the idea of this women staying with her Secchan one bit, especially after today's events. Part of her knew that she was over reacting, but she wasn't listening to that part right now. All she knew was that she felt a strong surge of jealously again, and fear? What she was afraid of she didn't know at the moment but she did not like feeling it.

"Why not keep Kakirah in our room?"

"Nonsense! Your room is already crowded as it is with you, Asuna and Negi. A fourth person would only make a bad situation."

"Then allow me to stay with Secchan and Kakirah can take my place. After all she's here to evaluate Negi-sensei is she not?"

This caused Setsuna's stomach to do flip flops and she ended up blushing. While at the same time the idea of staying with her Secchan caused Konoka's heart to flutter, she hoped that her grandfather would allow it. However sadly it seemed it would not be so.

"I'm sorry but Setsuna-kun is the ideal person for Kakirah-san to stay with due to the fact that this year she has no other room mate, and it is easier to move one person into a room than trying to move two people around. Besides, I believe it would be best to give Negi boy a break from feeling watched all the time, neh?."

Both girls couldn't help but feel slightly disappointed by the decision. Konoka however felt more disappointment due to the fact she knew she had lost this argument and would have to face the fact that Setsuna would be living with this women.

She held nothing against Kakirah; in fact if circumstances where different she would of liked her but she felt unsure with the way the women looked at Setsuna. And she felt even more insecure by the fact the Setsuna through out the day had kept glancing at the women out of the corner of her eye. For what reason Konoka didn't know. All she knew was that she didn't like the idea of her Secchan's eyes being on someone other than herself.

"Do either of you have a problem with this decision?" Konoemon was speaking again but had set his attention towards Setsuna and Kakirah at this point.

It took a little while before Setsuna said anything. In all truth and honesty she was hesitant to do so. Her eyes kept trailing over to Konoka in worry, since Konoka had made it obvious she did not like the idea and because of this Setsuna was unsure of it. Not wishing to see her princess in such distress but it was also obvious that the decision had been made.

"I will respect the decision you have made. I do not mind sharing my room with Kakirah."

Kakirah too felt hesitant before answering. She wasn't sure what just had happened but it would seem she had crossed a invisible line with out knowing it. Which perhaps damaged any chance of her getting along with at least one of the students. However the damage was done and she could only hope she would find a way to fix it during her stay.

"If this is the decision made then I too will accept it." With a pause she turned towards Setsuna and gave a weak smile. "and please... call me Kat."

Setsuna stared at the women, unsure of what she should do but finally she decided she would offer a small smile of her own. She would after all be sharing a room with this women for a little while.

"All right Kat-san.You may call me Setsuna."

With the exchange of familiarity between the two girls, it caused Konoka's heart to sink a little and the feeling of fear to grow and grow. Earlier she decided the women was all right, but now she couldn't help but feel a bit of resentment.
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Awww Kono-chan ;-;
It's really hard for me to read, with all the honesty ;-;

But it's too good for me to stop ;-; I want to know how it will end ^^"
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I must say that I'm a little confused by what you mean "hard to read, with all the honesty." :sweat:
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winget,Mar 24 2007
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I must say that I'm a little confused by what you mean "hard to read, with all the honesty." :sweat:

'Hard to read', as for It's painful(for me lol :P ) to imagine Kono-chan being jealous from seeing Secchan and Kakirah.

Though I still like this story, don't get the wrong idea ^^"
As Kono-chan's jealousy will grow, there will be an even bigger happy ending at the end, no? ^^ (so I hope ^^" )
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Ah! I see I see. Well in that case your just going to have to continue reading and find out yourself. However I will tell you this I don't have a clear set mind on how I wish to end this, yet. Don't get me wrong I got a few ideas of how I want to end this. Some of which are happy while the other are rather... tragic. It really depends on how I continue to write this and the responses I get on the story.

That of course doesn't mean that you'll get your happy ending simply because many state they want one. After all I've been known to be very very cruel at times. :P
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