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Fanfic Help; Potential writer in need of guidance
Topic Started: Jul 30 2007, 08:57 AM (222 Views)
Hellsender
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Hello, I'm a member of FF.net and I'm in the process of writing my own Negima fiction. I'm developing a storyline that centers around my specially made OC. So far, I have the first chapter partially finished, but I keep having stumps in my way when I try to expand the plot.

Some important notes of my story:
*It's based somewhere in the First anime continuity.
*The characters will all be speaking plain ENGLISH. (The entire world should just speak one language or not speak at all)
*I will not be using the Japanese suffixes. (I don't know about the rest of you, but they absolutely drive me crazy, I'm sick and tired of seeing them in almost every anime fanfic I read.
*The genre will be all-around: Action/Adventure, Supernatural/Fantasy, Horror, Drama, Sci-Fi, and a few comedic elements.
*My character would be the enamored romantic interest of one VERY unlikely member of Class 2A.

If you're interested here's the outline of the plot:

Negi receives a letter from his "sister" in Wales regarding newfound information on his long-lost father, when he has to go on a prolonged leave he recieves word that a friend of his (whom he looks up to as a brother sort of figure) is on his way to Japan, completely unaware that he's there to substitute for Negi in his teaching job for the next few months. When the OC arrives and meets Negi he reluctantly agrees to take over for Negi's work. As the class of overly-exuberant girls sees him as an incredibly handsome 17-year old academic prodigy, there is much, much, much more to him than meets the eye. As he spends more time in Mahora Academy, the more scary and unusual things will occur at the school.

Info on my OC:
He's a Catholic Chinese-American mystic, magus, exorcist, alchemist (yes, I borrowed some elements from FMA to expand his character), computer technician (what? I like computers), and all-around occultist. He traverses parallel worlds (generally Animeverses) using his psychic senses, cunning prowess, graced human abilities, and plethora of blessed relics and weapons to combat the forces of Hell and at the same time, gain as much wisdom as he can to add to his eternity of arcane knowledge. In most modern worlds he visits, he poses as a high-school dropout who somehow possesess legal adult rights and makes a living in the working class. He is burdened with a past people definitely wouldn't want to have and spends his life living in loneliness because of it. As a result, he's less than interested in having friends, let alone have a girlfriend. Through his endless experience of going to Hell and back (literally) and seeing things anybody would never see nor hear of, he faces up to any challenge without a sliver of fear nor nervousness, (except when it comes to fraternizing with girls).

So that's the plot of my character and Negima story so far. As I've said before, I'm running into a few stumps along the way, and I'd certainly appreciate it if I can be given some guidance as if how to move the story along like I would for a novel. Thank you.
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Samiel
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Hey man GMTA. I was making one too. So if you think of anything mabe you should leave it here and Ill do the same and we can help each other out? ^_^
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Hey man GMTA. I was making one too. So if you think of anything mabe you should leave it here and Ill do the same and we can help each other out?


Alright, you got a deal, bud!

*Sticks hand out for a handshake*
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Shinmeiryuu
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I'll just move this to the Fan Fiction area. You might get even more help over there.
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Hellsender
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I've finished the first chapter on my story and it's already up on Fanfiction.Net

If you want go there, go to the Mahou Sensei Negima section, look for the title Hell Over Mahora and give it a read. I'd also appreciate reviews as well.

I'm beginning the second chapter but I'm running into stumps of HOW to move the story along.
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