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| Fairy Tales; this is it | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 8 2008, 05:39 PM (658 Views) | |
| Dauthi | Feb 8 2008, 05:39 PM Post #1 |
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GUITAR HEROOOOO.
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Hello, folks. Some of you have read my writing, and some of you haven't. I have been writing for an unbearably long time, almost 9 years to this day. My writing first began in a Pokemon-cover notebook, but that is irrelevant. This is to make a point. I have written a story at last that I am satisfied with. It is a story that I have invested much time and effort into, and one that I feel finally shows my progression in writing skills. Thus, I am imploring you to read it and leave me feedback. Please. Even if you've never read anything I've written before, even if you don't like the premise, I would really love it if you would read at least this story and give it a shot, and tell me how you like it. Even if you don't finish it, because it is a whopper, please leave a comment. This is like the opus magnum of my fanfiction. Anyway, now that the grandiose introduction is over, I present: Title: Fairy Tales Author: Dauthi Rating: PG-13 Word Count: 7,323 Summary: They lived like ghosts in cities, with no future and an extinct past. Setsuna dreamt of flying and Evangeline dreamt of blood, but it was all over. Magic was dead. Link: on Fanfiction.net A final note. I would like to thank Alucard and trizh tupas for being my awesome betas. Since Alucard actually frequents these boards... Alucard you rock. Thank you thank you so much. |
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| Okami | Aug 11 2008, 09:51 PM Post #2 |
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Middle Schooler
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Right I'm going to review here, since I rarely ever review at FF.net (don't ask). First off, I must say, at first I wasn't much for Setsuna/Evangeline, but you managed to make me like the couple, (I really like Blood Traitor) Now I'm interested for more. But anyhow, the only problem with the fic (in my opinion) is that it was a tad bit confusing at parts, but hey that's what happens when you write AU. Also the ending made me feel extremely sad for Setsuna, but I guess that just adds to the beauty of the fic. |
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