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| Sasaki Makie: Baka Attorney!; this one is more amusing than my other | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Feb 20 2008, 04:22 AM (412 Views) | |
| book of life | Feb 20 2008, 04:22 AM Post #1 |
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I'd like to think this is more amusing... My other fanfic, Mahora Royale, is going though the works, doing as I go is not working. So I usually work on that in class so I don't fall asleep, planing it all out. Got an outline for it all, adding details and such, a plot, meaning, etc... Anyway, first, this idea originated from this it's a one shot, but this is only the first fourth of it. I would like to get people's opinions of the intro first. Feel free to be as brutally honest as you need to be. Just want to make sure this isn't something people aren't going to like or something like that. I want to post it all at once FanFiction.net. Sasaki Makie: Baka Attorney! by book of life rated T Humor Pairings: Various Crossover with the game: Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney Sasaki Makie: Baka Attorney! It was her first trial…. and after today…. it would also be her last. (Sort of) Episode 0. The Start and End of a Turnabout Month/01/Year 9:00 am “Makie, what were you thinking? Were you even thinking?” asked Okouchi Akira, who sounded rather troubled. “Do you even realize what’s going on?” “Don’t be so worried Akira, I’ll be fine. Asuna’s going to be with me,” Sasaki Makie said cheerfully, smiling the whole way. Akira frowned, “That wasn’t the answer I’m looking for, Makie. Do you know what you’re supposed to be doing?” “Helping someone called the ‘Defendant’” “Well, yes, that is true. Do you know who the defendant is? No, scratch that,” Akira pulled out a folder. “Do you know what this is?” “Hmmm….. nope, never seen it before in my life!” Akira sighed, “Alright, come here and I’ll explain….” But just then, Akashi Yuuna and Izumi Ako burst out of nowhere running over with excited looks on their faces. “Hey Makie, (pant) Asuna… can’t make it. (deep breath) She got sick (pant) and is the infirmary… now,” said a nearly breathless Yuuna. “Yeah, (pant) we just… took (pant) her there,” Ako added. “She’ll be fine, though she… has a fever.” “Yes, it’s a shame that Sasaki-san won’t have someone to help her, since she’s Baka Pink…. Though Asuna is Baka Red, I don’t really think it would have made too much of a difference,” said a voice snidely. The four girls turned to see a smug Chao Rinshen and Tatsumiya Mana, who looked as though she rather not be there. “Chao,” Mana started, “Perhaps an arrogant attitude is too much for the situation….” “Enough Mana,” Chao interrupted, “This is more than just a trial; this is revenge for a fallen friend.” She walked towards Makie. “Know this Sasaki-san: I will prove today you are a failure.” And with that Chao walked off, Mana already elsewhere. Makie had now stop moving and looked as though she was in a state of shock. “Ah, no… Makie, you’re not a failure!!!.... Right, Yuuna?” said Ako quickly and nervously. “That’s right, Makie! You’ll kick Chao’s butt all the way to China or even to Mars!” Yuuna exclaimed. “Yeah!! All the way back to Mars!!!” shouted Makie, who recovered. “Never mind, Chao-san,” stressed Akira, “Makie, you need to look over the case file.” “What case file?” Makie asked. “Ok, listen up, this file holds everything you need know about what is going on. Give me a moment to explain it,” Akira took a deep breath, “First, Makie, you are in court. You are the defense attorney. You are helping someone named the defendant, who has been accused of a crime of some sort. Chao-san is the prosecuting attorney. She’s trying to prove that the defendant is guilty of doing the crime. Tatsumiya-san is there probably because she’s Chao’s assistant,” she explained, trying to sound clear, but not slow. “Wait, Makie is partner-less…..” Yuuna began. “Yuuna, wait, I’m not done explain…..” “So, which one of us are you going to take?” “Hmmm… I can’t just take all of you?” Ako looked away a little, “You’re not allowed more than one person with you in court. Take Chao-san, for example: she has only Mana, not say, her, Mana and Hakase. I think Akira should go with you, she seems to know what’s going on.” Yuuna looked shocked and offended, “No way, I wanted to go into court too, Makie, you agree with me, right?!” “Seriously, Yuuna, I really need to fin….” Akira started. “No, we’re going to decide this, here and now, and what better way is there than Jan-ken-pon!!!!!!” Makie shouted along with, “Yeah! Jan-ken-pon is great way to decide this!” Ako interrupted, “Isn’t it rocks-pap…?” “Where do you think we are, Los Angeles in the United States?! NO!! We are in Japan! Japan! Get it right, Ako!” Akira sighed, “All right, Yuuna, let’s do this.” “Heh, glad you came to your senses and accepted the challenge.” “LET’S GO! JAN-KEN-PON!!!!” Yuuna had let out a rock and Akira led out scissors. “What gives?!” Yuuna let loose the fury, “The term is ‘Gu’ and ‘Choki’ and there’s supposed to be a line over ‘Gu,’ making it ‘Gū’!!!! Who the hell is doing this?!!! “Calm down Yuuna,” Akira said, “You’ve won, can I now explain…” “Oh I did, Isn’t that great, Makie?” “Yep, having hyperactive Yuuna with me makes this all the more fun!” Ako, who had paying attention to something else, asked, “Hey isn’t that Sacchan over there?” Makie looked, “It is, and maybe she’ll sell or even give us some food if we asked.” She and Yuuna ran off towards Satsuki. “There, there, Akira,” Ako said, patting Akria’s shoulder, “Do you want me to get you anything?” “Maybe when they’re done; both Makie and Yuuna are in for a bit of surprise,” She held up a folder, “Should have read the case file.” “Thanks Sacchan,” Makie said, now piled with food, “Are you here to support Chao? I know the two of you are close.” “Ah, Makie-san, I’m here for personal business,” Satsuki said, though it sounded evasive, “You’re welcome, would the two of you also like some more meatbuns?” “Would we ever!” exclaimed Yuuna, “Thank you, Sacchan!” There was a look of pain and worry on Satsuki’s face. She took Makie’s hand and held it with hers, “Please, believe in her and take care of her,” and Satsuki, “I believe in you…. Now, then, if you would please excuse me,” and she walked off. Makie and Yuuna slowly looked at each other and rushed over to Akira, dropping bits of food on the way, asking questions of wonder and confusion. “Now are the two of you ready to hear about the case file?” Akira asked. Yuuna, Makie and Ako all nodded. “Ok, deep breath,” Akira took a deep breath, “Here, this is…” “It’s 9:57 am,” Ako said, looking up at a clock. “What!? It’s almost 10:00 am!!! Yuuna, we have to get going!!!” Makie said in a panic. “It is?” Yuuna said; she took the file from Akira, “We’ll brief ourselves in the opening statements, Akira!!! Don’t worry!!!!” Yuuna and Makie soon disappeared from sight. Ako and Akira just stood in their spots for a moment. Ako then looked up at Akira slowly. Akira looked back, “Popcorn, lightly buttered.” “You got it,” Ako said, and she took off. My apologizes if some of the references throw you off. There is a reference to myself, a cookie to the person who can figure out what it is and why it's there. I actually wonder if I should get rid of it... If anyone wants me to explain them, I could do that. Again, anyone's help is appreciated. |
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