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Broken Threads; A story in progress
Topic Started: May 15 2008, 04:42 PM (1,148 Views)
Meep
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Title: Broken Threads
Author: Meep/Meepleton
Summary: It is said that love an overcome any obstacle. But when said obstacle is yourself, it's a different story.
Pairing: KonoSetsu, what else?

That's right, Meep has tried her hand at fanfiction. It may be time to run for cover. Please read and review, any feedback is much appreciated, and may make me write faster XD

I should note that the following chapters are darker in tone. I tried to write fluff...but I just can't do it...

Chapter 2
Chapter 3
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Jessie
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Oh! So you're the one who wrote that?! ^___^ I enjoyed very much reading the first chapter so far! Please continue!
I will add a review as well once I'll get back home! ^^


KonoSetsu BANZAII!
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Nagase Imai
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KonoSetsu fic!? OMG!!
I enjoy reading KonoSetsu fics^^
It's a very nice fic there ^_^
Can't wait to read the rest ^_^

Reminds me, how many chaps there's gonna be? Just askin' :scratch:




KAEDE-NEE!!!!XDD
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Nagase Imai,May 16 2008
10:40 AM
KonoSetsu fic!? OMG!!
I enjoy reading KonoSetsu fics^^
It's a very nice fic there ^_^
Can't wait to read the rest ^_^

Reminds me, how many chaps there's gonna be? Just askin' :scratch:




KAEDE-NEE!!!!XDD

The more the better! 8D

Kaede nee?


KonoSetsu BANZAII! (ne! MUWAHAHAHA!)
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Nagase Imai
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Jessie,May 16 2008
03:09 PM
Nagase Imai,May 16 2008
10:40 AM
KonoSetsu fic!? OMG!!
I enjoy reading KonoSetsu fics^^
It's a very nice fic there  ^_^
Can't wait to read the rest  ^_^

Reminds me, how many chaps there's gonna be? Just askin'  :scratch:




KAEDE-NEE!!!!XDD

The more the better! 8D

Kaede nee?


KonoSetsu BANZAII! (ne! MUWAHAHAHA!)

Lol Jess. That's me own quote(if it call quote). Like yours, KonoSetsu BANZAII!
Is it suppose to be nee? o_O
Correct me if I'm wrong.
CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MOAR!!!!XD
KONOSETSU IS THE BEST YO!!XD





KAEDE-NEE!!!!XDD
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Nagase Imai,May 16 2008
10:40 AM
KonoSetsu fic!? OMG!!
I enjoy reading KonoSetsu fics^^
It's a very nice fic there  ^_^
Can't wait to read the rest  ^_^

Reminds me, how many chaps there's gonna be? Just askin'  :scratch:




KAEDE-NEE!!!!XDD

Thanks guys! Ehe, I really didn't think I'd get many good reviews, because to be honest, I don't think my writing is at its best for the first few chapters, and I think it seems very generic (that's why I intend to re-do some parts when I finish).

I'm not a hundred percent how long this story will be yet, but I'm currently working on the sixth part, and am approaching what I'm seeing as the climax of it all.

I do have to warn though, although I tried to write fluffy stuff for the first few chapters, I let myself go wild later on...um...whoops?
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Jessie
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Meep,May 18 2008
02:20 PM
Nagase Imai,May 16 2008
10:40 AM
KonoSetsu fic!? OMG!!
I enjoy reading KonoSetsu fics^^
It's a very nice fic there  ^_^
Can't wait to read the rest  ^_^

Reminds me, how many chaps there's gonna be? Just askin'  :scratch:




KAEDE-NEE!!!!XDD

Thanks guys! Ehe, I really didn't think I'd get many good reviews, because to be honest, I don't think my writing is at its best for the first few chapters, and I think it seems very generic (that's why I intend to re-do some parts when I finish).

I'm not a hundred percent how long this story will be yet, but I'm currently working on the sixth part, and am approaching what I'm seeing as the climax of it all.

I do have to warn though, although I tried to write fluffy stuff for the first few chapters, I let myself go wild later on...um...whoops?

Wild..?
You mean M rated KonoSetsu fic? 8D
I say GO FOR IT! XD


KonoSetsu BANZAII!
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Nagase Imai
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Seriously. Exactly how many ratings in fics? I always get confused @_@
Oh dear. I can't imagine when it DOES goes wild. I mean, it's hard to know since we're just readers.
Jess dear, I think waiting is all we can do. Well, I can wait.
Just tell us when you're done with the next chap 'kay? ^_^



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Jessie,May 19 2008
12:33 AM
Meep,May 18 2008
02:20 PM
Nagase Imai,May 16 2008
10:40 AM
KonoSetsu fic!? OMG!!
I enjoy reading KonoSetsu fics^^
It's a very nice fic there  ^_^
Can't wait to read the rest  ^_^

Reminds me, how many chaps there's gonna be? Just askin'  :scratch:




KAEDE-NEE!!!!XDD

Thanks guys! Ehe, I really didn't think I'd get many good reviews, because to be honest, I don't think my writing is at its best for the first few chapters, and I think it seems very generic (that's why I intend to re-do some parts when I finish).

I'm not a hundred percent how long this story will be yet, but I'm currently working on the sixth part, and am approaching what I'm seeing as the climax of it all.

I do have to warn though, although I tried to write fluffy stuff for the first few chapters, I let myself go wild later on...um...whoops?

Wild..?
You mean M rated KonoSetsu fic? 8D
I say GO FOR IT! XD


KonoSetsu BANZAII!

Uh...maybe...I've written a section that can be considered a 'clean' version that I sent out to a few friends a while back. But it's probably not going to stay like that for this one. >:D We'll see, but there are a number of things that I...no...must refain from spoilers.

I've already made some changes to part two, which hopefully should be up on Friday sometime, when I'm done checking things through.

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Meep,May 19 2008
01:24 PM
Jessie,May 19 2008
12:33 AM
Meep,May 18 2008
02:20 PM
Nagase Imai,May 16 2008
10:40 AM
KonoSetsu fic!? OMG!!
I enjoy reading KonoSetsu fics^^
It's a very nice fic there  ^_^
Can't wait to read the rest  ^_^

Reminds me, how many chaps there's gonna be? Just askin'  :scratch:




KAEDE-NEE!!!!XDD

Thanks guys! Ehe, I really didn't think I'd get many good reviews, because to be honest, I don't think my writing is at its best for the first few chapters, and I think it seems very generic (that's why I intend to re-do some parts when I finish).

I'm not a hundred percent how long this story will be yet, but I'm currently working on the sixth part, and am approaching what I'm seeing as the climax of it all.

I do have to warn though, although I tried to write fluffy stuff for the first few chapters, I let myself go wild later on...um...whoops?

Wild..?
You mean M rated KonoSetsu fic? 8D
I say GO FOR IT! XD


KonoSetsu BANZAII!

Uh...maybe...I've written a section that can be considered a 'clean' version that I sent out to a few friends a while back. But it's probably not going to stay like that for this one. >:D We'll see, but there are a number of things that I...no...must refain from spoilers.

I've already made some changes to part two, which hopefully should be up on Friday sometime, when I'm done checking things through.

Yey! will wait for next chapter! ^___^
*waits*
Well..? Is it Friday already? ^_^ what? no? SHIKAKU?!?!?!?
GUUUHHHHH! :red card:


KonoSetsu BANZAII!
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Jessie,May 19 2008
02:57 PM

Yey! will wait for next chapter! ^___^
*waits*
Well..? Is it Friday already? ^_^ what? no? SHIKAKU?!?!?!?
GUUUHHHHH! :red card:


KonoSetsu BANZAII!

I think she's busy or sumthin'
Just give her more time.
As I said before, all we can do is wait==
Honestly, I can't wait myself....
But what can we do?



KAEDE-NEE!!!!XDD
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Meep
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Okay, part 2 is up, as promised...I still have 20 minutes before Saturday


*dies*
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OH VERY NICE!!!!XD
Can't wait for the next chap! :wave:
Oh just have your rest mate. We didn't mean to rush you.
Gomen ne!
*bows*



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Chapter three is now up, and I'm not quite as dead as last time. Hopefully, this shows in my writing ^_^

Enjoy!
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It's just get better every time!! Well done mate!! :clap: :clap:
I'm so bad at commenting. All I can say are random stuffs ==
Sorry!



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