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Broken Threads; A story in progress
Topic Started: May 15 2008, 04:42 PM (1,147 Views)
Meep
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Thank you! Even if it's just a "You did good", or even "needs moar s3xx0rz" (don't ask), I'm very grateful for every form of feedback I get!

Most kinds of review give me motivation to write faster. Positive reviews make me want to make sure I don't let anyone down, and 'meh' and bad reviews make me want to improve faster.
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Meep,Jun 2 2008
04:34 PM
Thank you! Even if it's just a "You did good", or even "needs moar s3xx0rz" (don't ask), I'm very grateful for every form of feedback I get!

Most kinds of review give me motivation to write faster. Positive reviews make me want to make sure I don't let anyone down, and 'meh' and bad reviews make me want to improve faster.

Meh... In that case then... Your writing is very good and fun to read, You did very good and hope we can see more of it. Don't worry about letting anyone down because... well... meh keep writing :D
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PhoenixEgg,Jun 3 2008
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Meh... In that case then... Your writing is very good and fun to read, You did very good and hope we can see more of it. Don't worry about letting anyone down because... well... meh keep writing :D

Eheh, thank you very much! I can't really help but worry, it's just in my nature, but hearing that people like what I'm doing here is an absolutely fantastic feeling ^^

Anyway, I've now added Chapter 4, now with added implied naughtiness!
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It's just get better and more better!
Awesome job mate! Can't wait for the next!



KAEDE-NEE!!!!XDD
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Just a quick status report, because you guys deserve to know what's going on.

I've run into a few troubles recently, the main one being my lack of time. as you might know, I was struggling with keeping up with college, so that is partly why I had no time to keep writing. I'm finished with college now, so that's no longer a problem.

However, I've got a summer placement at npower, working 8 til 5, Monday to Friday, and I finish every day feeling tired, hungry and just plain demotivated.

Another however...The IT department has made a bit of a mistake and deleted the sowftware I was working with, so I haven't been able to do the work I'm supposed to be doing since Wednesday. So, you know what that means >:D

Yet another however...because it's been so long since I updated (yeah, I know there've been longer waits), I want to make it worth your while. So what I'm proposing I do is this: seeing as I am so close to the end, I intend to give you a mammoth update. I will post the new chapters in one big chunky update (they're big), and maybe sort out the issues I have with the first couple of chapters while I'm at it, and add more delicious ecchi.

I now have access to a computer and Internet 24 hours a day in my room, so I'm willing and able to spend ridiculous amounts of time at the weekends sitting and staring at a screen and hopefully doing my imagination justice.

I've written out a plan for myself to do all this, and have all the events of the last chapter in place, they just need writing, and then I can get right down to fixing anything.

Let me know what you think though, I'm just as happy to post the next part as soon as I'm done editing if you like, but it will mean a longer wait for the final and revised chapters.

Wow...that's a lot of typing for a 'quick status report'.

I'm feeling kinda generous, so here, have an excerpt from the beginning of chapter 5.

Chapter 5
 
As those words echoed in her mind, the young half-demon awoke sharply to find herself alone. I knew it. If I had just… a torrent of insults directed at herself spun through her mind. Her hands balled into fists on the sheets, preventing her nails from digging in to the tissue of her palms.

She fought back tears, biting into the pillow to muffle her sobs, not wanting to hear them. Still, she felt wetness upon her cheeks. Bringing her fists down on the mattress in frustration, she could not help but feel disappointed at herself. If she had just done as she had practiced, then none of this would have happened. She would be free to continue with the mission that consumed her life if she had just listened to her own mind, had her heart not stopped her every time those puppy brown eyes had caught her own.
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