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Cyber cards
Topic Started: Jul 18 2008, 05:45 PM (67 Views)
Ryan Rion
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Cyber Lord
******(6)
Machine/ Effect
This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, by paying 600 LP, you can destroy any monster on the Field.
2100/1800

Cyber Worm
***(3)
This monster is allowed to attack directly, however if you use this effect, and it is destroyed it is removed from play.
1000/800

Cyber Warrior
****(4)
Machine/Effect
If this card is attacked in face-down defense mode, before it is sent to the graveyard it attacks directly. If it is removed from play, it attacks it's owner directly.
1800/1400


Cyber Token - Trap
By activating this trap, it gives you 1-5 cyber tokens. The tokens can only be destroyed by a normal monster with an attack of 500 or less

Cyber Gate - Field Spell
By boosting Machine monsters attack by 1000 with this card, it's defense lowers it's defense by 500. This field spell also boosts fusion mosters attack by 500

Cyber Triplet Phoenix
**********(10)
Machine/effect
Cyber Phoenix+Cyber Phoenix+Cyber Phoenix
This monster can attack twice in it's battle Phase. If it is destroyed by battle destroy the monster that destroyed it.

Cyber armor- equip spell
Any machine monster equiped with this gains 600 attack points, but loses 300 defense points.

Eletroshock
******(6)
Thunder/Machine
By paying 2000LP, this monster can attack directly.
2500/1500

Cyber Fantasy- Quick-play Spell
Destroy 1 monster on your field and pay 500LP. You can now special summon 1 *****(5) monster or higher to the field. This monster may not attack on the turn it is summoned.

Cyber taxes (sucky name I know) - Continuous Trap
by paying 800LP,if you have 2 or more monsters with Cyber in their name, you can attack with the weakest monster.


How's that?
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Zap
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Try improving the wordings... you know, yugioh cards have their own "rules" as to how they are spelt.

Whenever you want to create a nww card, try looking for cards that have similar effects, so you get an idea how they should be worded. After a while, you get used to it.

For instance:

Cyber Lord******
2500/1800
This monster is allowed to destroy any monster on the field, if the user agrees to paying 600LP.

Would be:

Cyber Lord
******(6) <----- this makes it easier to know the lvl w/o having to count, which can become quite annoying
DARK/Machine/ Effect <----- you totally forgot this one.... try not to, as it is quite important
By paying 600 LP, you can destroy any monster on the Field<---- this is what I meant. It says the same, but using Yugioh terminology
2500/1800<----I like to put the ATK/DEF stats at the bottom, since its where they are in the real cards

Still this is quite broken. What is broken? A broken card is one that either:

-has too much ATK/DEF for it's lvl. for example a lvl *(1) that has 2300 ATK
-has an effect too good to be true, like: You win the duel
Obv, this is an exageration, but you get it. Mainly, most broken cards fall in this category. They have good-to-godly effects for almost nothing.

In your case, its a combination of both: the best ATK a lvl 6 or lower has is 2600, and its a vanilla monster (meaning, normal monster). This card has 100 less ATK, but a broken effect.

Lets analyze the effect;(I use my own version of the effect as it is clearer)

By paying 600 LP, you can destroy any monster on the Field

It says we can destroy ANY monster, w/o distinguishing between F/U's and F/D's. That's cheap, as only a few cards can do this.

Then, can have to pay 600 LP. That's OK I guess...

However, the main problem of this effect is what is not written For example, we can use the effect as many times as we want in a turn. AND, it has no requeriments to be summoned. <_<

I can think of a card that's not even close to this and is banned... Chaos Sorcerer. It had the ability to destroy only one monster per turn, and lost its ability to attack if it did. AND it could only be summoned one way.

Still, its banned.


Anyway, if I had to make my own version of the card, it'd be:

Cyber Lord
******(6)
DARK/Machine/ Effect
This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, by paying 600 LP, you can destroy any monster on the Field.
2100/1800


Hope this rather long post helped at all
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Isaac
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I love those kind of posts Zapico makes with colour, and other things like that :D
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Zap
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You know, I may be lazy... but when I get down to it, be sure it'll be great!!!


BTW, it took me like 1 hour to get all that down in words... But I think it was worth it. I guess that post is clear enough, and has lots of useful info for anyone trying to make their first few cards ^_^


BTW, Im a seasoned card maker, so I know what Im talking about... even though my lazyness makes it impossible to finish anything I begin -_-
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Saturn
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Not to gripe, but shouldnt this go in the Fan-Fiction cards area?
BTW, i like the pwetty colors too.
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Zap
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You know, not necessarily, but you have a point there... IDK, and Im too lazy to do any Modding like that. Im only temp here, and never asked for this position... :huh:

Anyway, it does seem like everyone likes the colors but no one cares to actually read what I write.... :( So I may stop making those long posts you so much love because of the colors. Or may just remove the colors :D
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