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| She Who Is Confused Comes; She questions not only her heritage... | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 4 2008, 03:58 PM (364 Views) | |
| Destiny | Jun 4 2008, 03:58 PM Post #1 |
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Destiny Awaits With The Paitence Of Time, I can But Will You?
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[size=1]Mintbreeze was standing firm on the border itself, waiting for a cat she had known of come by. She stretched her neck to see beyond what lay in front of her. some cat had to be around here! So far since she had come to the land of the ancients, no cats were around. Was this the place that cats went when they broke the rules of all their ancestors? Mintbreeze hoped that was one question that didnt have an answer of "yes" to it. "Hello?" she called out. "I need answers! Now!" Mintbreeze paws felt like they were frozen, rooted to the spot, like someone had poured ice water into her veins and let it freeze! Why couldnt she move? Had she offended the ancestors of both clans? Was this her punishment? Her place since she was half blooded, in the middle; frozen forever and ever? Part clan cat part tribe cat was wrong! Yes it was but she had left for something that was true and honest! Wasnt helping a kit good? Slowly her feet began to sink out of the sky! Mintbreeze felt like she was dying all over again, first the winds howled and she felt blind. Then she felt the ground sweep out from below her! Not again! Not again! "Help!" she called out, her voice meek yet as she called her yowls grew stronger. "I am falling!"[/size] |
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<a href="http://www.valenth.com/feed/27299"><img src="http://valenth.com/lab/27299.png"><br>Feed Me!</a><br><a href="http://www.valenth.com">Adopted from Valenth</a> Meet Apollo! Born July 8th 2008, 9:10 am! I wonder what it will become? Hopefully Good! | |
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| Amberide | Jun 9 2008, 03:23 PM Post #2 |
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[size=1]River walked through the large star light skys with ease. He had visited the river in once he had been born and almost drowned from the tears collected by th river. He gave a snort but followed the dangerous yelps he had heard coming from the section in front of him. He ran towards it and saw a figure forming in thin air easily being taken by the real world. River gave out a growl and jumped Under the body, in one swif6t motion he had jumped through the air and reached hold of her tail, the body was low in the sky, not as high as the beautiful stars. "Try chew dig vour vay out!"River said through mouthfuls of the she-cat's tail..[/size] |
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| Destiny | Jun 9 2008, 11:39 PM Post #3 |
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Destiny Awaits With The Paitence Of Time, I can But Will You?
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[size=1]"AAAHHHH!" she cried, nothing she clawed at would let her take hold. "River!" Why was she calling River? he was.... a tom she had known but wasnt that the same name she had cried when she died too? Was this death as well? Slowly the real world was calling her back. She fought and struggled like the way a Starclan warrior should but something greater began to pull her. Like maybe Forestkit needed her protection once more. Mintbreeze fell into the real world her body felt stiff like the way she had when she died. Her fur was growing back, her eyes opened like slits, the brightness was unbearable! Colors swirling around her like the sunsets and moonrises she used to watch so long ago in the tribe. "River!" she screeched not knowing where she knew the name. "River!" She knew his name mysteriously, they were about the same age from what she had known of him. Wasnt he from the same tribe as her? River..... there was a Creek...... IT WAS HIM! When she lived in her clan her name was Mint Leaves That Float In The Breeze. As she grew up a tom named Creek [where fish live] used to call her Mintbreeze, she liked that name better than Mint. He was the first to say goodbye when she decided to leave for Ivyheart! "He must have been promoted!" she mewed and closed her eyes. The memories began playing like a film without sound in her mind as she fell. Mintbreeze had grown up very different. Her mother and father were both still alive when she left, most kits parents died relatively young! She enjoyed peace not loud noises and kit squabbles. As a full fledged prey hunter she didnt want to give up her life to have kits. Mintbreeze enjoyed though spending time with the kits mothers, but she was never lonely! at least until she met River (Creek) a long lost friend from her past life. "Where did I go wrong?" she asked her ancestors in her mind, both Starclan and Tribe.[/size] |
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<a href="http://www.valenth.com/feed/27299"><img src="http://valenth.com/lab/27299.png"><br>Feed Me!</a><br><a href="http://www.valenth.com">Adopted from Valenth</a> Meet Apollo! Born July 8th 2008, 9:10 am! I wonder what it will become? Hopefully Good! | |
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| Amberide | Jun 11 2008, 02:22 AM Post #4 |
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[size=1]River had fallen backwards in a tumbling starts as the she-cat fll from the sky, but his body had been pulled half-way up before he fell from the starry skies, the she-cats body rumbling beside him. His mind rushed through with his blood as to wonder if this she-cat was really a fallen ancestor from Star Clan. He looked over and saw the beautiful form of MintBreeze, a cat from his past, it couldn't be though, almost impossible. As he tho9ught back to everything he knew he silently drifted back towards memory lane, MintBreeze, could it be? Could it be the beautiful MintBreeze he used to love to play with, the one he used to... love . He had hated when she left, being one of the first to wish her a peacefl goodbye, though dread had taken hold of his mind. His past had been but a memory to him, and now it was a memory stuck to his mind like glue. His old name, Creek, had NOT worked for him. Yes, hios original name had been River, bit he had changed it to Creek, then quickly decided that Creek was his past, River, was his life. He looked down and saw the outline of the beautiful MintBreeze. If it was her, he wouldn't let her slip away again. He walked over and steadily laid a paw on her pelt. He blinked his eyes and thye fluttered open with hope in seeing Mint's face. It came to him like in a dream and he gave a confused smile, "Mint?" he asked curiously as he looked over her back and stared into her eyes. He shook out his pelt and looked her up and down. "It is you, isn't it?" he questioned curiously as he looked at her with wonder. It was like seeing a fallen angel. His heart beat fast in his ribs and he could almost feel his body vibrate with warmth for his old friend.[/size] |
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| Destiny | Jun 11 2008, 11:31 PM Post #5 |
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Destiny Awaits With The Paitence Of Time, I can But Will You?
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[size=1]Mintbreeze wasnt sure where she was, it was a dark and brutally cracked wasteland. Dark pine trees stood out against black rocks. The only place like this had to be..... the border between the tribe cats and the clan cats! She pointed her nose in the direction of a new scent and voice. A hazy figure of the tom stood still. "R-R-River?" she stuttered staring at her old friend. "T-T-This cant be real! W-W-We are dead! Or atleast should be!" Mintbreeze stared at him and then felt water brush her paws, a puddle swished gently with her relfections, she cried out in horror! "I-I-I am real!!!!" she cried out with joy her heart fluttering in her chest like a trapped bid. "But how?" she stared at her once familar pelt brown pelt with dark sandy paws and stripes stood out like a proud banner. "Your real too!" she pranced around like a kit for a minute or two then stopped abruptly remembering that her old friend was still satnding there. Mintbreeze turned to him and stared for a long time; he still looked the same since she last saw him. "Wow! River, you havent changed at all! Well.... except you know, the name thing!" she purred. "Do you still remember me? Does anyone from the clan cats know I died? are you the only one who died after i left? By the way how did you die?" she bombarded him with questions and paused for a breath. "Whew! Sorry! I havent seen anyone since I came to the ancestors, I thought I was alone cause of my heritige." she smiled, her sea foam colored eyes shining in the dark landscape like two beacons of hope in the dreary sea of darkness. ooc: green is for Mintbreeze![/size] |
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<a href="http://www.valenth.com/feed/27299"><img src="http://valenth.com/lab/27299.png"><br>Feed Me!</a><br><a href="http://www.valenth.com">Adopted from Valenth</a> Meet Apollo! Born July 8th 2008, 9:10 am! I wonder what it will become? Hopefully Good! | |
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| Amberide | Jun 15 2008, 01:17 AM Post #6 |
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[size=1]River stood speechless. Then he raced over and hugged her up in a tight round house of licking. He licked her around the ears, the nose, even the cheecks, and softly patted her with his tail. "Mint! This is almost impossible! You... you died!" he screamed out. "I, I hate to break it to you... but I never died." he said sadley, his joy becoming slightly disenfigured. "I... I wasn't even aware you died. After leaving... I lost you." he said sadley. He walked a few steps away and sat down. "You left us, nobody knew youi died. I have still been alive on this sad stump of dirt... how did you die?" he questioned with a raised brow. [/size] |
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| Destiny | Jun 15 2008, 01:33 AM Post #7 |
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Destiny Awaits With The Paitence Of Time, I can But Will You?
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[size=1]She purred and pressed up against him, "Do you remember why I left? there was a she cat, Ivyheart of the Clan Cats, her mate saved me when I was a kit! I nearly died from the bear attack you know two New leafs ago and she came to me! She asked if I would take her only daughter to another Clan! She would be safe in Stormclan cause well... their medicine cat proclaimed Forestkit would die an early death." she shook her head wearily. Mintbreeze continued stareing out at her old home. "No one believed she would until an over rock hanging almost crushed her! Then I left and settled in with a new name in Stormclan! We lived in peace but death was simply waiting, Forestkit got sick and I came back to the Tribe for the herbs to heal her. Cherry gave it to me and some extra just in case. I was coming home along the cliffs by the sea, the wind blew hard and I fell and drowned." she sighed and rested her head on his shoulder. Mintbreeze felt so happy to be by her old loves side, River was so comforting. "Anyone die since I did?" she asked. "I thought I was alone...."[/size] |
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<a href="http://www.valenth.com/feed/27299"><img src="http://valenth.com/lab/27299.png"><br>Feed Me!</a><br><a href="http://www.valenth.com">Adopted from Valenth</a> Meet Apollo! Born July 8th 2008, 9:10 am! I wonder what it will become? Hopefully Good! | |
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| Amberide | Jun 16 2008, 03:52 AM Post #8 |
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[size=1]He listened intenly. Sad by her heart breaking story. He gave a weary little nod and laid his head on top of hers, her head already lying on his shoulder. The warmth healed his cold pelt in the breeze and he gave a smile for her to be back in his paws. "A few, like Dawn, she died in a hunting patrol, badger. Branch, he died... the branch he was sitting on broke and he fell into the river and drowned. Then, Light, she died while giving birth... everyone missed you os much, it's unbelievable that you're here!" he yepled as he licked her forehead. "I...I still love you." he purred quietly hoping that she still had feelings for him.[/size] |
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| Destiny | Jun 16 2008, 06:29 PM Post #9 |
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Destiny Awaits With The Paitence Of Time, I can But Will You?
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[size=1]"Your silly!" she purred. "Of course I still love you!" she almost voiced his thoughts. "Any she cats catch your eye after I left?" she joked and purred. "None for me! i was busy looking after Forestkit, she is almost an apprentice now! Did you know that?" She kept near him for a few moments. Letting his heart join in a drum beat with hers, after she died and came back all her knowledge of the future and stuff was still with her. Even if she came back to her original mind. "Who was Lights mate?" she asked quietly. "I haven't seen any of the cats you mentioned in Starclan or in the Tribe!" she mewed quietly. "I haven't seen any cats! I thought i was alone!" she purred. "But... I don't know why I came back!" she took her head off his shoulder and stared out at the clans directions. "Was I meant to be here for Forestkit?" she asked herself shaking her head. There was no way Forestkit would want to move to the tribes! No way! She had to have some friends! Her mother would kill her, well technically no since she was dead, all of Forestkits family was dead! Maybe she wouldn't mind coming back to the tribe! "River?" she asked. "Do you think Forestkit would want to come back to my home tribe with me? The only problem is the Stormclan leader. Will she let her go? from what I have seen they are short on apprentices and warriors these days." she didn't want to leave River but she had a promise to keep, she hung her head. "What should I do? I cant choose between love and duty!" Mintbreeze sent a prayer of guidance to Starclan and the Tribe! Her message was for acceptance on Forestkits leader and Tribe cats accepting the new kit![/size] |
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<a href="http://www.valenth.com/feed/27299"><img src="http://valenth.com/lab/27299.png"><br>Feed Me!</a><br><a href="http://www.valenth.com">Adopted from Valenth</a> Meet Apollo! Born July 8th 2008, 9:10 am! I wonder what it will become? Hopefully Good! | |
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| Amberide | Jun 17 2008, 06:42 PM Post #10 |
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[size=1]River had listened quietly until the end, then he thought over what she had said. "I... Mint, I will always love you more than anything out there. But... ForestKitt NEEDS you. I believe it would be best to try to persuade her to join your home tribe. She would gladley come I believe, to be with you. Their leader can not stop her from following her heart. You'll always be in mine, but a promise is a promise... just.... promise me, that I';ll see you again." he whispered as he licked her cheeck and rubbed into her with affection. A tear slid down his cheeck, he was going to set his love free once more... he would never forgive himself, but for her to be happy... he would. [/size] awwww, I'm having a moment! -sniffles- lol |
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| Destiny | Jun 17 2008, 10:45 PM Post #11 |
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Destiny Awaits With The Paitence Of Time, I can But Will You?
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[size=1]"Thank you!" Mintbreeze purred leting some tears flow freely down her cheeks. "I will be back!" With that she stood up and looked toward the clan cats home. The Reborn Warrior was ready to do her duty! Mintbreeze nodded good bye to her love and trotted toward the Stormclan camp. Even though she had been dead for 5 moons she still remembered the way to go. Carefully she scooted around the edges of the cliffs where she had fallen to her death. The oceans looked calm enough but that was the thing about oceans: one moment calm and beautiful the next as angry and wild as a scorned she cat. It took several hours of hard work and determination to cross the wide chasms but in the end she stood on the backside of Flameclan territory. Her heart thumped in her chest, Mintbreeze hoped there would be no patrol this earl in the night! The Reborn Warrior swiftly crossed the back forests and stood some moments later atop the steep waterfall that fed the river in Stormclan territory! From here she could see every camp, every cat and every body of water in the valley! "I am gonna make it!" she cried in her mind and started down the slope of another hill. Along the way Mintbreeze caught a rabbit and two wood mice. She carried them into the Stormclan camp, Mintbreeze saw the kit she hoped would never die alone for the first time in 5 moons! "Forestkit!" she creid and dropped her catches on the forest floor![/size] |
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<a href="http://www.valenth.com/feed/27299"><img src="http://valenth.com/lab/27299.png"><br>Feed Me!</a><br><a href="http://www.valenth.com">Adopted from Valenth</a> Meet Apollo! Born July 8th 2008, 9:10 am! I wonder what it will become? Hopefully Good! | |
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| Amberide | Jun 21 2008, 12:34 AM Post #12 |
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[size=1]River gave a sigh and turned away, a single tear dropped form the corner o his eye, "I will see her again." he purred silently. He turned and arched his back, in one quick jump he sprung through the air and landed neatly about a yard away. He ran towards the camp, excitement over-whelming in his chest, now that he thought to himself, "Oh my Star Clan, a dead cat just came back to life!" He turned and gave one last look at the direction MintBreeze had taken, and followed through into camp.[/size] |
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