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| Topic Started: Mar 22 2012, 07:13 PM (1,053 Views) | |
| IsaacNewton101 | Mar 22 2012, 07:13 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Komodo snail Height: 3 inches Length: 1 inch Tentacle Span: 3 foot radius Number is pack: 6 Weight: 10 oz. Base DNA: Komodo Dragon, Cone Snail, Barnacle, Box Jellyfish Abilities: Numbing sting, instantly adhering tentacles, pointy shell, deadly venom, sucks blood, tentacles cannot be ripped off, camouflage (usually completely concealed in shell.) Weaknesses: Easily crushable, can’t move Defenses: Pointy shell, camouflage. Special Attributes: Venom can spread through an enemy is 30 minutes. Description: A normal sized cone snail with its 20 tentacles spread out around it. They live close enough to each other that they can make their tentacles cover an area of about 170 square feet. The tentacles are stinging on the outside half, but going to the inside half, the tentacles become super sticky and creatures can’t remove themselves. When they catch a creature, they shoot their super long tooth out twenty feet to where the creature is and inject it with venom or suck its blood. Then, it removes its tooth and sucks it back into its mouth, where it collapses (like how the toy light sabers close). LOGI Info: The Komodo snail lives in small groups of six near any water with a beach. It eats small bacteria that it finds beneath it. The creature’s tentacles are doled out around it, so thin they are almost unnoticeable by larger creatures. The outsides of the tentacles deliver a numbing sting that temporarily shocks the creature, causing them to collapse. The creature regains their senses after five seconds, but by then, they have been injected by venom and/or are stuck. Other: *When a komodo snail is crushed, if the creature is stuck, it can move again in 3 minutes, and the dead snail’s tentacles stop stinging. The venom of one snail can kill a small creature between 4-8 feet tall or long. Larger creatures can survive the venom of one cone snail, but, if attacked by multiple snails, is lethal. **These creatures lay an egg in the beach one month after they are born. When the snail dies, it decomposes, and the baby burrows up into the old shell and grow they out their tentacles and adhere to the ground. ![]() (If the picture isn't good enough, tell me what i can do to improve it.) This will cost 1700 credits, right? |
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Creatures: Rhimerine, Monctopus, Kulculcan, Komodo Snail, Jedwhal, Canispike, Blooderfly, Mucalofungusaurus Credits: 6000
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| IsaacNewton101 | Mar 24 2012, 08:04 AM Post #2 |
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Can someone give me some feedback on this??? |
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Creatures: Rhimerine, Monctopus, Kulculcan, Komodo Snail, Jedwhal, Canispike, Blooderfly, Mucalofungusaurus Credits: 6000
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| DarkGricer | Mar 24 2012, 08:06 AM Post #3 |
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That's Captain Gricer to you, lad!
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How come it's 3 inches long and 1 inch long when the pic clearly shows it's longer that it's tall. |
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Proud player of: ----------------- ------------------ Mazeer Swiftfoot Beikarahenki - --------- Goliath Fighter ---------- ---------------- -------------------------- Thorin Kirreval ---------- ------- Dragonborn Paladin ------- ----------------- -------------------------------- Alson --------------- --------- Oddball Wizard --------- ----------------- -------------------------- Fafnir Goldheart --------- ------- Hill Dwarf Barbarian ------- ----------------- ------------------------- Shayle Amberwood -------- ------- Human Psycho Binder ------- 3DS Friend code: 0447-6294-9656 Wins: 21 Loses: 13 Ties: 4 Writer of the Battle of the Maze. Battles written: 36 Missions written: 3 Number of battles/missions featuring Tyrannotank written: 7 Number of battles/missions featuring Carnotherisaurus written: 7 Credits: 18550 Creature Coupons: 0 Creatures: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Inherited/Bought: ![]() Upcoming Creatures: Legion, Vucub Caquix, Zipacna, Cabrakan, Thanatos EEC critters: Dragon's Den Gigantoctopodus Vrachotherium
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| IsaacNewton101 | Mar 24 2012, 08:18 AM Post #4 |
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Good point. When i was thinkng about it when i was making, i measured the shell standing up, because that's how it usually is for defense purposes. |
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Creatures: Rhimerine, Monctopus, Kulculcan, Komodo Snail, Jedwhal, Canispike, Blooderfly, Mucalofungusaurus Credits: 6000
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| Kingpin | Mar 24 2012, 02:19 PM Post #5 |
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Kronos
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I'm thinking no to that picture, however. |
![]() Creatures Hermagler, Triceramole, Pyrog swarm Mammoboar, Mantine , Marrow Rigabamboo, Bastia and Angelwing, Nerospitter Fiery Harvestblax, Megatooth, Shadowcat Solkor, Triloferous, Shade Pararaptor, Condorian, Hippiddler Chargerfish, Tentaculas, Azoth Pullusmors, Shroomshi and Sporpli, Derops Kraken, Zeus/Thunderbird, Biocell Piscis, Taurus, Leo Gemini, Aries, Cancer Halloween, Christmas, JFourth Fools Pack, Thanksgiving, Valentine Philhog, NewYear, Easter, Saint Chungo & Medrith, Abassi Credits 100640
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| IsaacNewton101 | Mar 24 2012, 05:18 PM Post #6 |
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DF said the same. But i'd like to use it. can i get some advice for how to improve it? |
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Creatures: Rhimerine, Monctopus, Kulculcan, Komodo Snail, Jedwhal, Canispike, Blooderfly, Mucalofungusaurus Credits: 6000
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| Kingpin | Mar 24 2012, 07:30 PM Post #7 |
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Kronos
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The tentacles are very confusing. I didn't realize they were supposed to be tentacles at first. |
![]() Creatures Hermagler, Triceramole, Pyrog swarm Mammoboar, Mantine , Marrow Rigabamboo, Bastia and Angelwing, Nerospitter Fiery Harvestblax, Megatooth, Shadowcat Solkor, Triloferous, Shade Pararaptor, Condorian, Hippiddler Chargerfish, Tentaculas, Azoth Pullusmors, Shroomshi and Sporpli, Derops Kraken, Zeus/Thunderbird, Biocell Piscis, Taurus, Leo Gemini, Aries, Cancer Halloween, Christmas, JFourth Fools Pack, Thanksgiving, Valentine Philhog, NewYear, Easter, Saint Chungo & Medrith, Abassi Credits 100640
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| IsaacNewton101 | Mar 24 2012, 08:39 PM Post #8 |
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So, should i bolden them? |
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Creatures: Rhimerine, Monctopus, Kulculcan, Komodo Snail, Jedwhal, Canispike, Blooderfly, Mucalofungusaurus Credits: 6000
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| Kingpin | Mar 24 2012, 09:47 PM Post #9 |
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Kronos
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Well the whole thing is very two dimensional. I don't know where these tentacles are coming from on the body. |
![]() Creatures Hermagler, Triceramole, Pyrog swarm Mammoboar, Mantine , Marrow Rigabamboo, Bastia and Angelwing, Nerospitter Fiery Harvestblax, Megatooth, Shadowcat Solkor, Triloferous, Shade Pararaptor, Condorian, Hippiddler Chargerfish, Tentaculas, Azoth Pullusmors, Shroomshi and Sporpli, Derops Kraken, Zeus/Thunderbird, Biocell Piscis, Taurus, Leo Gemini, Aries, Cancer Halloween, Christmas, JFourth Fools Pack, Thanksgiving, Valentine Philhog, NewYear, Easter, Saint Chungo & Medrith, Abassi Credits 100640
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| IsaacNewton101 | Mar 25 2012, 08:05 AM Post #10 |
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They're coming from the flanks of the snail. They appear from, say, thie middle of its side. How can i make it clearer? |
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Creatures: Rhimerine, Monctopus, Kulculcan, Komodo Snail, Jedwhal, Canispike, Blooderfly, Mucalofungusaurus Credits: 6000
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| DarkGricer | Mar 25 2012, 09:18 AM Post #11 |
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One way to do it is by making it a bit more 3D. Or at least shade it. |
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Proud player of: ----------------- ------------------ Mazeer Swiftfoot Beikarahenki - --------- Goliath Fighter ---------- ---------------- -------------------------- Thorin Kirreval ---------- ------- Dragonborn Paladin ------- ----------------- -------------------------------- Alson --------------- --------- Oddball Wizard --------- ----------------- -------------------------- Fafnir Goldheart --------- ------- Hill Dwarf Barbarian ------- ----------------- ------------------------- Shayle Amberwood -------- ------- Human Psycho Binder ------- 3DS Friend code: 0447-6294-9656 Wins: 21 Loses: 13 Ties: 4 Writer of the Battle of the Maze. Battles written: 36 Missions written: 3 Number of battles/missions featuring Tyrannotank written: 7 Number of battles/missions featuring Carnotherisaurus written: 7 Credits: 18550 Creature Coupons: 0 Creatures: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Inherited/Bought: ![]() Upcoming Creatures: Legion, Vucub Caquix, Zipacna, Cabrakan, Thanatos EEC critters: Dragon's Den Gigantoctopodus Vrachotherium
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| IsaacNewton101 | Mar 25 2012, 09:23 AM Post #12 |
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Never mind. I'm not good enough with paint to do it. I'll ask GD. *Sigh.* |
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Creatures: Rhimerine, Monctopus, Kulculcan, Komodo Snail, Jedwhal, Canispike, Blooderfly, Mucalofungusaurus Credits: 6000
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| albinoraptor | Mar 25 2012, 10:50 AM Post #13 |
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5CHAR
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No offense,but I'm with KP on this. I thought it was the weird sunray things like on Memes at first. But also the quality isn't the best. And weird white spots everywhere. GD is a good choice. And he's,like,the last artist on the site aside from DG. Wait,does anybody else notice DG and GD? Last artists on the site,names are pallindromes? |
Creatures: Valen Rex , Rabbat, Burrier, Secretary Griffin, Virusaurs, Demonis, Genohunter, Lizarians, Cetus, Snow Snakes, Ouroboros, Yggdrasil, Pyro Wasps, Wraith, Lagervo, Wolfworm, Iridesca, Stagroach, Aspidasaurus, Fulgetus, Mathogo, NoepeCredits: 7096
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| DarkGricer | Mar 25 2012, 12:23 PM Post #14 |
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That's Captain Gricer to you, lad!
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Well, I knew about our names, but not about the artist thingy. We have more in common then we taught, GD. |
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Proud player of: ----------------- ------------------ Mazeer Swiftfoot Beikarahenki - --------- Goliath Fighter ---------- ---------------- -------------------------- Thorin Kirreval ---------- ------- Dragonborn Paladin ------- ----------------- -------------------------------- Alson --------------- --------- Oddball Wizard --------- ----------------- -------------------------- Fafnir Goldheart --------- ------- Hill Dwarf Barbarian ------- ----------------- ------------------------- Shayle Amberwood -------- ------- Human Psycho Binder ------- 3DS Friend code: 0447-6294-9656 Wins: 21 Loses: 13 Ties: 4 Writer of the Battle of the Maze. Battles written: 36 Missions written: 3 Number of battles/missions featuring Tyrannotank written: 7 Number of battles/missions featuring Carnotherisaurus written: 7 Credits: 18550 Creature Coupons: 0 Creatures: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Inherited/Bought: ![]() Upcoming Creatures: Legion, Vucub Caquix, Zipacna, Cabrakan, Thanatos EEC critters: Dragon's Den Gigantoctopodus Vrachotherium
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| IsaacNewton101 | Mar 25 2012, 01:43 PM Post #15 |
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The tentacles are a bit...luminescent. I tried to show that by puting the dots around the tentacles. I guess i went overboard. |
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Creatures: Rhimerine, Monctopus, Kulculcan, Komodo Snail, Jedwhal, Canispike, Blooderfly, Mucalofungusaurus Credits: 6000
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