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| Would You Rather? ; Azoth vs Burrier | |
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| Topic Started: Apr 17 2012, 09:10 PM (862 Views) | |
| Oyster Man | Apr 17 2012, 09:10 PM Post #1 |
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(ง ͠° ᗝ ° )ง "Fite me!"
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Dear Genome Incorporated, First and foremost; I owe an apology regarding the Random Tournament. It has been indeffinitly been put on hold; effectively canceling it. However, I have every intention to continue the battles it promised, in the form of short stories. I'm nearly done with the outline phase of the first short story; involving Azoth and Burrier. I've realized however that the short story is breaking away from its original purpose, a fight between two monsters, and is becoming more plot focused. It has occoured to me that this may annoy some members, and so I thought to ask what my audience would prefere? As the audience, would you prefere a short story, or a typical battle. A short story would include a number of characters, and a simple plot. It would be closer in nature to a "Genome Story" in the show and tell section. A battle would include some characters, and a very minimal plot. It would be similar to the "Burried in Sand" battle that I wrote during the Random Tournament. It can be found here. I look forward to your feedback. Thank you. |
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| Kingpin | Apr 17 2012, 09:59 PM Post #2 |
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Well I won't lie, I'd like to see Azoth in action, but the story sounds interesting. Would a battle still happen? A winner and all that? |
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| Clockwork | Apr 17 2012, 10:21 PM Post #3 |
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DEUS VULT
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Really, it's impossible to choose when all the information we have is 'one is a normal battle & one is an ST'. |
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Monsters: Platty Bomb-Blaster Swarm (100) Underworld (Blest, Elysium, & Tartarus) Minithulu Troop (6: Alfred, Abbs, J, Bob, Todd, & the Doctor) Bomber Acroman King Cobroth Badgewrath (Wrath) Prometheoyster (Sorrow) Monglut (Gluttony) Corpslumber (Sloth) Monitoxin & Serpoison (Famine & Pestilence) Carnalug (Lust) Lucifer (Pride) Battalion (War) Covetitan (Greed) Grieffon Pack (Death, Swords, Plague, Beasts, & the pups, collectively named Hell) Irewood (Envy) Formicaesar Legion (Conquest) Apollyon (Vainglory) Blitzlax (Discouragement) Babylon Rose (Fornication) The Mass (Khaos) Uranian Floating Octopus (Ouranos) Almater (Gaea) Nemean Antlion (Tartaros) Bleeding Hato (Eros) Hadalbender (Erebos) COMING "SOON": Juggernaut & Dreadnought Five doses of ??? Protogenoi Loves- 3/8 done Destrux, my origin story Credits: 5282 EEC: Gazenobra, Northern Kinhound, Fraternaraptor, Chocobornis, Vibrant Minami, Kakapwn Battle Ratio: 12/0/10 Team Ratio: 0/1/0 Mission Ratio: 3/1 Written: 23 3DS FC: 0061-0480-8311 690/693/721 Dex Completion
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| albinoraptor | Apr 18 2012, 05:30 PM Post #4 |
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ST. or would I get money for it? |
Creatures: Valen Rex , Rabbat, Burrier, Secretary Griffin, Virusaurs, Demonis, Genohunter, Lizarians, Cetus, Snow Snakes, Ouroboros, Yggdrasil, Pyro Wasps, Wraith, Lagervo, Wolfworm, Iridesca, Stagroach, Aspidasaurus, Fulgetus, Mathogo, NoepeCredits: 7096
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| Oyster Man | Apr 18 2012, 08:02 PM Post #5 |
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(ง ͠° ᗝ ° )ง "Fite me!"
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To Kingpin: There will be a battle, with just as much action as anything else I've written, but the battle may not be the main part of the story. There will be no winner/looser mentioned, or a "battle review" written at the end. To Clockwork: A battle would be similar to the "Blanketed in Sand" battle I wrote. A short story would include several characters, backstory, and a forward plot and resolution. To Albinoraptor: No credits will be awarded for this battle, as I am no longer doing the Random Tournament. |
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| Kingpin | Apr 18 2012, 09:18 PM Post #6 |
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Well might as well do the ST then. |
![]() Creatures Hermagler, Triceramole, Pyrog swarm Mammoboar, Mantine , Marrow Rigabamboo, Bastia and Angelwing, Nerospitter Fiery Harvestblax, Megatooth, Shadowcat Solkor, Triloferous, Shade Pararaptor, Condorian, Hippiddler Chargerfish, Tentaculas, Azoth Pullusmors, Shroomshi and Sporpli, Derops Kraken, Zeus/Thunderbird, Biocell Piscis, Taurus, Leo Gemini, Aries, Cancer Halloween, Christmas, JFourth Fools Pack, Thanksgiving, Valentine Philhog, NewYear, Easter, Saint Chungo & Medrith, Abassi Credits 100640
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| Clockwork | Apr 18 2012, 10:29 PM Post #7 |
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DEUS VULT
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Well, you've already said that. It's the exact same thing, for all intents & purposes, as what I said in my previous post. I mean specifics, ie. a blurb/blurbs. |
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Monsters: Platty Bomb-Blaster Swarm (100) Underworld (Blest, Elysium, & Tartarus) Minithulu Troop (6: Alfred, Abbs, J, Bob, Todd, & the Doctor) Bomber Acroman King Cobroth Badgewrath (Wrath) Prometheoyster (Sorrow) Monglut (Gluttony) Corpslumber (Sloth) Monitoxin & Serpoison (Famine & Pestilence) Carnalug (Lust) Lucifer (Pride) Battalion (War) Covetitan (Greed) Grieffon Pack (Death, Swords, Plague, Beasts, & the pups, collectively named Hell) Irewood (Envy) Formicaesar Legion (Conquest) Apollyon (Vainglory) Blitzlax (Discouragement) Babylon Rose (Fornication) The Mass (Khaos) Uranian Floating Octopus (Ouranos) Almater (Gaea) Nemean Antlion (Tartaros) Bleeding Hato (Eros) Hadalbender (Erebos) COMING "SOON": Juggernaut & Dreadnought Five doses of ??? Protogenoi Loves- 3/8 done Destrux, my origin story Credits: 5282 EEC: Gazenobra, Northern Kinhound, Fraternaraptor, Chocobornis, Vibrant Minami, Kakapwn Battle Ratio: 12/0/10 Team Ratio: 0/1/0 Mission Ratio: 3/1 Written: 23 3DS FC: 0061-0480-8311 690/693/721 Dex Completion
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| Oyster Man | Apr 19 2012, 09:53 PM Post #8 |
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Battle: The battle would be very similar to any other battle posted in the battle-dome. The two monsters would battle one another for a determined reason. There would be no back story leading up to this event, and no story to continue once the battle has taken place. A victor and looser may or may not be officially announced. The battle would be short, sweet, action filled, and straight to the point. At the most, the battle would only be a few Microsoft Word pages long. (I.E. Blanketed in Sand is four pages long.) Short Story: The story would focus less on the battle that is sure to ensue, and more on plot and characters. A host of characters, including Azoth; the Burrier; and several other characters; would be fleshed out, and given a path to follow. Most characters will have a back story before the battle, and insight may be given to what happens to the characters after the battle has taken place. No winner or looser will be officially announced. The short story would be longer, more in depth, but still have roughly the same amount of action; but more spaced out. The short story would be, in the least, several Microsoft Word pages long. (The outline is already roughly two pages long.) I hope that clears anything up, but please let me know if you want more info. I didn't include a blurb persey, because I want it to be a surprise. |
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Combatant Entries: Slegripper Bombarding Beetles Savage Ichthoid & Slicer Luquenoun Ecosystem Expansion Entries: Peppered Sunfish Credits: 4300 | |
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| Clockwork | Apr 20 2012, 12:29 AM Post #9 |
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DEUS VULT
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Well going purely by that, I'd lean towards battle. Non-sentient characters tend to not be nearly as interesting when given a plot compared to sentients given plot. |
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Monsters: Platty Bomb-Blaster Swarm (100) Underworld (Blest, Elysium, & Tartarus) Minithulu Troop (6: Alfred, Abbs, J, Bob, Todd, & the Doctor) Bomber Acroman King Cobroth Badgewrath (Wrath) Prometheoyster (Sorrow) Monglut (Gluttony) Corpslumber (Sloth) Monitoxin & Serpoison (Famine & Pestilence) Carnalug (Lust) Lucifer (Pride) Battalion (War) Covetitan (Greed) Grieffon Pack (Death, Swords, Plague, Beasts, & the pups, collectively named Hell) Irewood (Envy) Formicaesar Legion (Conquest) Apollyon (Vainglory) Blitzlax (Discouragement) Babylon Rose (Fornication) The Mass (Khaos) Uranian Floating Octopus (Ouranos) Almater (Gaea) Nemean Antlion (Tartaros) Bleeding Hato (Eros) Hadalbender (Erebos) COMING "SOON": Juggernaut & Dreadnought Five doses of ??? Protogenoi Loves- 3/8 done Destrux, my origin story Credits: 5282 EEC: Gazenobra, Northern Kinhound, Fraternaraptor, Chocobornis, Vibrant Minami, Kakapwn Battle Ratio: 12/0/10 Team Ratio: 0/1/0 Mission Ratio: 3/1 Written: 23 3DS FC: 0061-0480-8311 690/693/721 Dex Completion
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| Oyster Man | Apr 20 2012, 07:36 PM Post #10 |
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Thank you for the feedback. To be clear, had you voted before leaning toward the battle? I just want to make sure that two for battle and five for story is the final verdict. (P.S. I have not, and will not, vote on this.) I'm going to write based upon what the verdict is tonight. I'm not going to say when to expect the story, because last time things changed from a few days, to a few months, to finally being canceled. |
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Combatant Entries: Slegripper Bombarding Beetles Savage Ichthoid & Slicer Luquenoun Ecosystem Expansion Entries: Peppered Sunfish Credits: 4300 | |
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| Superdude327 | Apr 20 2012, 07:40 PM Post #11 |
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I roll to insult!
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I voted for battle, simply because a battle is nature uncut, predator vs. predator, or prey vs predator. Also, I challenged Sleggy. |
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Curious as the Chicken Superdude, big brother to Happyred Duk A weird duck called Duk. Lewis My angry British voice. Monsters: Gerranous GERBIL-CHICKEN-GRIFFON/The Sun Lord Waterunner Jesusaur Hill Turtle Detonator Sand Shark Tremors Tyrager Brainirex Madcow Mad Cow Disease Woolly Caterpillar Murderous Rage Skullmunkey & Skullker Starvation and Vampirism Lesser Gerranous Dwarf Bassius Thunder Tadrannah Tadpole Sharks Greater Gerranous Goliath Cryptolepidavenator desmondiiThe Hidden Blade Keelhead Grond Heikani Titanshell & Dannouran Yureel Ghost in the Shell Pet Monsters: Barred Hawk Wolves of the Sky Pidganha Sky Terror/Love Dove Dermintine Blur Wolves Mega-Gerbil Powerhouse Roosterock Apocalypse Shepardax Quickdraw Acronym Monsters: Excalibur The Sword Mjölnir The Hammer Gungnir The Spear Aegis The Sheild The Four Lords: Zotzotherium Lord of the Sky/Zotz Setotherium Lord of the Earth/Set Oceaos Lord of the Water/Typhoon Vulcanis Lord of the Fire/Surtr Creature Concepts Monsters: Trontine, Turkolophus, SwordLions, Compurster & Fungorst, Snapperwhip, Creeping Death, Saber-tooth Camel, Casteroids, Endokorus, 'Dementia Credits: 7,900 | |
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| albinoraptor | Apr 21 2012, 02:26 PM Post #12 |
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So,OM,when should we be expecting this and in what forum? |
Creatures: Valen Rex , Rabbat, Burrier, Secretary Griffin, Virusaurs, Demonis, Genohunter, Lizarians, Cetus, Snow Snakes, Ouroboros, Yggdrasil, Pyro Wasps, Wraith, Lagervo, Wolfworm, Iridesca, Stagroach, Aspidasaurus, Fulgetus, Mathogo, NoepeCredits: 7096
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| Oyster Man | Apr 21 2012, 03:21 PM Post #13 |
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I do not want to give an exact date, or promise to have it out anytime soon. Last time I made release dates, things changed from "later today" to "tomorrow for sure" to "maybe in a month" and finally "its cancled." I apparently work on Microsoft time. As far a forums go, it will be in the Genome Journals and Stories section of the Show and Tell section. Based on the voting results, short story won the majority's favor. I don't want to give a release date; but I will humor you with a blurb. Chompers are a race of small ferret like people, who inhabit the trading settlement of Cherradahn. Though Cherradahn is generally peaceful and welcoming, it comes under attack by a giant named Azoth. After suffering a terrible loss, “Bitty”, the smallest chomper in his village, vows he will not rest until Azoth is dead, and his village safe. To save his village however, Bitty must make a decision that will change the rest of his life. |
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| albinoraptor | Apr 21 2012, 04:03 PM Post #14 |
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Ooh,looks good. Can't wait! |
Creatures: Valen Rex , Rabbat, Burrier, Secretary Griffin, Virusaurs, Demonis, Genohunter, Lizarians, Cetus, Snow Snakes, Ouroboros, Yggdrasil, Pyro Wasps, Wraith, Lagervo, Wolfworm, Iridesca, Stagroach, Aspidasaurus, Fulgetus, Mathogo, NoepeCredits: 7096
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| Kingpin | Apr 22 2012, 12:11 AM Post #15 |
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Well Bitty is in for a surprise, because Azoth's a badarse. |
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