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The Burden of Charity; Greed turns men, into monsters.
Topic Started: Oct 1 2012, 08:35 PM (1,698 Views)
Clockwork
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UNCANNY VALLEY WARNING: This is what happens when people brainstorm the seven deadly sins & think of Man After Man.


Name (of creature): Covetitan, or the Mine People, Informehomo aurumetargentum (Gold-&-silver deformed man)

Height: 200 ft.
Length: 200 ft.

Weight: 250 tons.

Base DNA: Australopithecus, Blue Whale, Prehistoric Dragon, Southern Elephant Seal, Octopus, African Elephant, Terabyte, Orca, Millipede

Abilities: Low frequency sonar rumble, fire blasts

Weaknesses: Very slow, very heavy, difficulty looking directly in any direction except straight up, must mine for more metals to fuel its fire blasts

Defenses: Size, fire blasts, uncanny valley, intelligence, sonar

Special Attributes: Fire blasts, rock-boring chemicals, waste expelled through holes in hands

Description: A mountain of flesh. On its top is a giant, scarily human, & scarily blank, face, immediately under which are the lungs; digestive system is further into the core of the creature. Around the mountain, about forty feet high, are its powerful main limbs; two arms, & two very arm-like legs, about a hundred feet long a piece, each of which has a hole in the palm/sole, which are connected within to two organs; first, the digestive system, being where all forms of waste are expelled. Second, draconian flight bladders, purposed solely for flame. Under the creature are many chambers that expell chemicals identical to the kind used by Terabytes to dig their tunnels, but far larger. These are used in conjunction with low frequency sonar to locate & dig up metals underground, which are then used to fuel the fire blasted from its hands & feet. Smaller arms, about twenty feet long, are randomly placed all over the body. The reproductive system is found in slits, like dolphins & whales, at the base of the mountain, at the front; where the chest would be on a human, technically. Everything else is fat.

LOGI Info: The giant pseudo-hominids don't move around much. For the most part, they sit in one spot rich in resources, both plant life & metals. They bore down into the earth to collect metals, uproot foliage for sustenance, & move on when both are depleted. This time can, though, be extended. They will attack other animals any chance they get. Their goal is sustenance; not for meat, which they lack the hardware to ingest, but for fertilizer, used to enrich the ground & grow more plants to eat. The same goes for the fecal waste, expelled via the limbs for more control as to where it lands, &, ergo, where it fertilizes. Mating is an impressive, if unromantic, affair; though of note, being so large, Carnalugs, rather than attempting to lay eggs in them, will cut out the middle man by entering & eating the Covetitan themselves.

Other: Greed has been haunting my nightmares, my daydreams. Any time I close my eyes, there he is; blank stare skyward, unearthly moan, guttural rumble of his sonar echoing my presence back at him. I've tried enough meds that Saidi's been afraid I might be wanting to end it. With that thing around, I just might.
Monsters:
Platty
Bomb-Blaster Swarm (100)
Underworld (Blest, Elysium, & Tartarus)
Minithulu Troop (6: Alfred, Abbs, J, Bob, Todd, & the Doctor)
Bomber
Acroman
King Cobroth
Badgewrath (Wrath)
Prometheoyster (Sorrow)
Monglut (Gluttony)
Corpslumber (Sloth)
Monitoxin & Serpoison (Famine & Pestilence)
Carnalug (Lust)
Lucifer (Pride)
Battalion (War)
Covetitan (Greed)
Grieffon Pack (Death, Swords, Plague, Beasts, & the pups, collectively named Hell)
Irewood (Envy)
Formicaesar Legion (Conquest)
Apollyon (Vainglory)
Blitzlax (Discouragement)
Babylon Rose (Fornication)
The Mass (Khaos)
Uranian Floating Octopus (Ouranos)
Almater (Gaea)
Nemean Antlion (Tartaros)
Bleeding Hato (Eros)
Hadalbender (Erebos)

COMING "SOON":
Juggernaut & Dreadnought
Five doses of ???
Protogenoi
Loves- 3/8 done
Destrux, my origin story

Credits: 5282

EEC: Gazenobra, Northern Kinhound, Fraternaraptor, Chocobornis, Vibrant Minami, Kakapwn

Battle Ratio: 12/0/10
Team Ratio: 0/1/0
Mission Ratio: 3/1
Written: 23

3DS FC: 0061-0480-8311
690/693/721 Dex Completion

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DinoFlame
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I'm honestly not sure where to start with this thing. :huh:
Chris Perkins
 

Today, I'm going to be takin' these four fine folks into the biggest, meanest dungeon in the Forgotten Realms, and I don't know if they're gonna survive.
...But I'm cool with that.


ToD Level-Up Status: 7/8
3DS FC: 4356-0410-5185

Credits:
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Monsters:
Pachysailosaurus, Sadaptoren, Raptagian, Carnosaurus, Gastoxic, Paladonstrum, Molick, Floraptor, Politisk, Goragon, Balalisto, Autoris, Wintarcus, Aquavenus, Torvofelis, Chelonosuchus, Dazzlewurm, Drakhaos, Insequs, Dracoceras, Mercury, Terra, Chess Spider, Venus, Mars, Saturn, Stonewrecker, Jupiter,
EEC:
Pterohynus, Vulakat,

Creature Concepts:
The Planets/Roman Gods (Mercury*, Venus*, Terra*, Mars*, Jupiter*, Saturn*, Uranus, Neptune, Pluto)
The Norse Gods(Thor, Loki, Odin)
Ultimate Leviathan, Mammalian Dragon, Black Hunter Whale(Venatorcetus), Summanus,
Remakes (Klog, Komodoking)
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I think I just shot myself after I read this. Hold on, let me check. Yep. There's a hole in my head.
Creatures: Valen Rex Posted Image, Rabbat, Burrier, Secretary Griffin, Virusaurs, Demonis, Genohunter, Lizarians, Cetus, Snow Snakes, Ouroboros, Yggdrasil, Pyro Wasps, Wraith, Lagervo, Wolfworm, Iridesca, Stagroach, Aspidasaurus, Fulgetus, Mathogo, Noepe

Credits: 7096

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250 tons? Really?

I originally wanted to make Entelotherium 200 tons, but I figured that would just be to heavy. For something of 200 feet tall, 100 feet of which is legs, 250 tons is way, way, WAY to much. In fact, with 100 feet legs, it probably couldn't support more than a total weight of 150 tons. And because it's legs are armlike, probably less than 130 tons.

By the way, there is a much bigger problem. This thing has 2 legs. You might think "Why is that bad?". Here's the answer:

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any creatures larger then 70 feet must be quadripedal and herbivorous


Either you're gonna need to change this thing's appearance a bit, or this thing can't even be half the height and length of what it is now.
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Dashing through the snow~
On a broken ski~
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It doesn't walk on two legs. It doesn't walk on two legs & two arms, either. It lays on its stomach, dragging itself along/flopping like a seal for movement.
I know the creation rules like the back of my hand by this point, at least the ones regarding basic creatures.
Monsters:
Platty
Bomb-Blaster Swarm (100)
Underworld (Blest, Elysium, & Tartarus)
Minithulu Troop (6: Alfred, Abbs, J, Bob, Todd, & the Doctor)
Bomber
Acroman
King Cobroth
Badgewrath (Wrath)
Prometheoyster (Sorrow)
Monglut (Gluttony)
Corpslumber (Sloth)
Monitoxin & Serpoison (Famine & Pestilence)
Carnalug (Lust)
Lucifer (Pride)
Battalion (War)
Covetitan (Greed)
Grieffon Pack (Death, Swords, Plague, Beasts, & the pups, collectively named Hell)
Irewood (Envy)
Formicaesar Legion (Conquest)
Apollyon (Vainglory)
Blitzlax (Discouragement)
Babylon Rose (Fornication)
The Mass (Khaos)
Uranian Floating Octopus (Ouranos)
Almater (Gaea)
Nemean Antlion (Tartaros)
Bleeding Hato (Eros)
Hadalbender (Erebos)

COMING "SOON":
Juggernaut & Dreadnought
Five doses of ???
Protogenoi
Loves- 3/8 done
Destrux, my origin story

Credits: 5282

EEC: Gazenobra, Northern Kinhound, Fraternaraptor, Chocobornis, Vibrant Minami, Kakapwn

Battle Ratio: 12/0/10
Team Ratio: 0/1/0
Mission Ratio: 3/1
Written: 23

3DS FC: 0061-0480-8311
690/693/721 Dex Completion

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Clocky, you have an amazingly bizarre yet amazingly brilliant mind. Would it be wrong to compare you to Tim Burton?
Genome Inc. Creatures
Speedspitter, the Zephyr Streak
Skulltank, the Ultimate Behemoth
Nessi, the Hidden Horror

Credits
13,200

Old Battle Stats
Won: 20
Lost: 27
Ties: 1
Undecided: 4
Titan Brawls: 5

New Battle Record
Wins:
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WINNER OF TOTAL GENOME ISLAND 2!

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To an extent. Though we both may be bizarre yet brilliant, we are both different types of the former, if not both.

Also, I doodled up some anatomy sketches during English today so I could get down how its internal structure would work. This includes basic outline, resperatory, digestive, & combustion systems in one picture, then on the other side of the paper, an overhead view & reproductive system. I'll probably post at least the former, though I hesitate, understandably, to post the latter, even as much as I like the top hat I put on the M & the cozy little house inside the F, complete with a little girl playing Frisbee with her dog.

I have problems.
Monsters:
Platty
Bomb-Blaster Swarm (100)
Underworld (Blest, Elysium, & Tartarus)
Minithulu Troop (6: Alfred, Abbs, J, Bob, Todd, & the Doctor)
Bomber
Acroman
King Cobroth
Badgewrath (Wrath)
Prometheoyster (Sorrow)
Monglut (Gluttony)
Corpslumber (Sloth)
Monitoxin & Serpoison (Famine & Pestilence)
Carnalug (Lust)
Lucifer (Pride)
Battalion (War)
Covetitan (Greed)
Grieffon Pack (Death, Swords, Plague, Beasts, & the pups, collectively named Hell)
Irewood (Envy)
Formicaesar Legion (Conquest)
Apollyon (Vainglory)
Blitzlax (Discouragement)
Babylon Rose (Fornication)
The Mass (Khaos)
Uranian Floating Octopus (Ouranos)
Almater (Gaea)
Nemean Antlion (Tartaros)
Bleeding Hato (Eros)
Hadalbender (Erebos)

COMING "SOON":
Juggernaut & Dreadnought
Five doses of ???
Protogenoi
Loves- 3/8 done
Destrux, my origin story

Credits: 5282

EEC: Gazenobra, Northern Kinhound, Fraternaraptor, Chocobornis, Vibrant Minami, Kakapwn

Battle Ratio: 12/0/10
Team Ratio: 0/1/0
Mission Ratio: 3/1
Written: 23

3DS FC: 0061-0480-8311
690/693/721 Dex Completion

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Ooh, I can't wait for the picture. Will probably help me and others see it better. ^_^
Genome Inc. Creatures
Speedspitter, the Zephyr Streak
Skulltank, the Ultimate Behemoth
Nessi, the Hidden Horror

Credits
13,200

Old Battle Stats
Won: 20
Lost: 27
Ties: 1
Undecided: 4
Titan Brawls: 5

New Battle Record
Wins:
Losses:
Ties:

WINNER OF TOTAL GENOME ISLAND 2!

Friend Code: 0731 - 4814 - 6166

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Clockwork
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Or bring your lives to an abrupt, self-inflicted end like Pinkie.
Monsters:
Platty
Bomb-Blaster Swarm (100)
Underworld (Blest, Elysium, & Tartarus)
Minithulu Troop (6: Alfred, Abbs, J, Bob, Todd, & the Doctor)
Bomber
Acroman
King Cobroth
Badgewrath (Wrath)
Prometheoyster (Sorrow)
Monglut (Gluttony)
Corpslumber (Sloth)
Monitoxin & Serpoison (Famine & Pestilence)
Carnalug (Lust)
Lucifer (Pride)
Battalion (War)
Covetitan (Greed)
Grieffon Pack (Death, Swords, Plague, Beasts, & the pups, collectively named Hell)
Irewood (Envy)
Formicaesar Legion (Conquest)
Apollyon (Vainglory)
Blitzlax (Discouragement)
Babylon Rose (Fornication)
The Mass (Khaos)
Uranian Floating Octopus (Ouranos)
Almater (Gaea)
Nemean Antlion (Tartaros)
Bleeding Hato (Eros)
Hadalbender (Erebos)

COMING "SOON":
Juggernaut & Dreadnought
Five doses of ???
Protogenoi
Loves- 3/8 done
Destrux, my origin story

Credits: 5282

EEC: Gazenobra, Northern Kinhound, Fraternaraptor, Chocobornis, Vibrant Minami, Kakapwn

Battle Ratio: 12/0/10
Team Ratio: 0/1/0
Mission Ratio: 3/1
Written: 23

3DS FC: 0061-0480-8311
690/693/721 Dex Completion

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Oh god what am I reading.
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And he said the emptiness
"Show me your moves."
And so the universe exploded
He saw this and said YES!
He saw this and it was good.
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Hermagler, Triceramole, Pyrog swarm
Mammoboar, Mantine , Marrow
Rigabamboo, Bastia and Angelwing, Nerospitter
Fiery Harvestblax, Megatooth, Shadowcat
Solkor, Triloferous, Shade
Pararaptor, Condorian, Hippiddler
Chargerfish, Tentaculas, Azoth
Pullusmors, Shroomshi and Sporpli, Derops
Kraken, Zeus/Thunderbird, Biocell
Piscis, Taurus, Leo
Gemini, Aries, Cancer

Halloween, Christmas, JFourth

Fools Pack, Thanksgiving, Valentine
Philhog, NewYear, Easter, Saint
Chungo & Medrith, Abassi
Credits
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Although when Walrus said there was a madscientist within us all I kind of got freaked out. I don't really want a triggerhappy weapons genius living in my stomach...
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You can see some of the horror on the other side too!

-The heart shape is the heart.
-The lung shapes around the heart are the lungs.
-The big science vial is the stomach.
-On either side of the stomach are the 'flight' bladders, with the connecting passages, for lack of a better word, to the arms/legs & under the body, where the metals are collected.
-The three circles with X's in them are the chambers containing the chemicals for boring underground.
-The squiggly lines are all the rest of the digestive track that we don't care about.
-The XY designates where the genitals would be. See the two sketches on the other side of the paper visible to the left of the drawing for basic images including the whole, simplified, being, while the two visible to the right of the drawing have detail. Or you can ignore them, which is what I recommend.
-DAT FACE.
-Human being to the side for rough, likely inaccurate, scale.


Keep in mind that I know this is horrid & it's just to get an idea for the anatomy.
(If you looked at the drawings on the other side & wonder why it's shaped like that, all I have to say is that that part of the anatomy is taken from the Orca DNA.)
Monsters:
Platty
Bomb-Blaster Swarm (100)
Underworld (Blest, Elysium, & Tartarus)
Minithulu Troop (6: Alfred, Abbs, J, Bob, Todd, & the Doctor)
Bomber
Acroman
King Cobroth
Badgewrath (Wrath)
Prometheoyster (Sorrow)
Monglut (Gluttony)
Corpslumber (Sloth)
Monitoxin & Serpoison (Famine & Pestilence)
Carnalug (Lust)
Lucifer (Pride)
Battalion (War)
Covetitan (Greed)
Grieffon Pack (Death, Swords, Plague, Beasts, & the pups, collectively named Hell)
Irewood (Envy)
Formicaesar Legion (Conquest)
Apollyon (Vainglory)
Blitzlax (Discouragement)
Babylon Rose (Fornication)
The Mass (Khaos)
Uranian Floating Octopus (Ouranos)
Almater (Gaea)
Nemean Antlion (Tartaros)
Bleeding Hato (Eros)
Hadalbender (Erebos)

COMING "SOON":
Juggernaut & Dreadnought
Five doses of ???
Protogenoi
Loves- 3/8 done
Destrux, my origin story

Credits: 5282

EEC: Gazenobra, Northern Kinhound, Fraternaraptor, Chocobornis, Vibrant Minami, Kakapwn

Battle Ratio: 12/0/10
Team Ratio: 0/1/0
Mission Ratio: 3/1
Written: 23

3DS FC: 0061-0480-8311
690/693/721 Dex Completion

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Superdude327
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BWAHAHAHA!

I'm sorry clockwork, I'm pretty sure you thought long and hard on this, but this isn't all that scary to me. And yes, I think I will challenge it.

I actually had nightmares about what it could be, mainly little gremlin monsters stealing eyeballs, teeth, organs, anything they could get their paws on, and they could mimic speech.
Curious as the Chicken
Superdude, big brother to Happyred

Duk A weird duck called Duk.
Lewis My angry British voice.

Monsters:

Gerranous GERBIL-CHICKEN-GRIFFON/The Sun Lord
Waterunner Jesusaur
Hill Turtle Detonator
Sand Shark Tremors
Tyrager Brainirex
Madcow Mad Cow Disease
Woolly Caterpillar Murderous Rage
Skullmunkey & Skullker Starvation and Vampirism
Lesser Gerranous Dwarf
Bassius Thunder
Tadrannah Tadpole Sharks
Greater Gerranous Goliath
Cryptolepidavenator desmondiiThe Hidden Blade
Keelhead Grond
Heikani Titanshell & Dannouran Yureel Ghost in the Shell

Pet Monsters:

Barred Hawk Wolves of the Sky
Pidganha Sky Terror/Love Dove
Dermintine Blur Wolves
Mega-Gerbil Powerhouse
Roosterock Apocalypse
Shepardax Quickdraw

Acronym Monsters:

Excalibur The Sword
Mjölnir The Hammer
Gungnir The Spear
Aegis The Sheild

The Four Lords:

Zotzotherium Lord of the Sky/Zotz
Setotherium Lord of the Earth/Set
Oceaos Lord of the Water/Typhoon
Vulcanis Lord of the Fire/Surtr

Creature Concepts

Monsters:
Trontine, Turkolophus, SwordLions, Compurster & Fungorst, Snapperwhip, Creeping Death, Saber-tooth Camel, Casteroids, Endokorus, 'Dementia


Credits:
7,900
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Superdude327,Oct 2 2012
06:42 AM
BWAHAHAHA!

I'm sorry clockwork, I'm pretty sure you thought long and hard on this, but this isn't all that scary to me. And yes, I think I will challenge it.

I actually had nightmares about what it could be, mainly little gremlin monsters stealing eyeballs, teeth, organs, anything they could get their paws on, and they could mimic speech.

...(backs away slowly)
Creatures: Valen Rex Posted Image, Rabbat, Burrier, Secretary Griffin, Virusaurs, Demonis, Genohunter, Lizarians, Cetus, Snow Snakes, Ouroboros, Yggdrasil, Pyro Wasps, Wraith, Lagervo, Wolfworm, Iridesca, Stagroach, Aspidasaurus, Fulgetus, Mathogo, Noepe

Credits: 7096

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Uh, where are you going? What part are you afraid of?
Curious as the Chicken
Superdude, big brother to Happyred

Duk A weird duck called Duk.
Lewis My angry British voice.

Monsters:

Gerranous GERBIL-CHICKEN-GRIFFON/The Sun Lord
Waterunner Jesusaur
Hill Turtle Detonator
Sand Shark Tremors
Tyrager Brainirex
Madcow Mad Cow Disease
Woolly Caterpillar Murderous Rage
Skullmunkey & Skullker Starvation and Vampirism
Lesser Gerranous Dwarf
Bassius Thunder
Tadrannah Tadpole Sharks
Greater Gerranous Goliath
Cryptolepidavenator desmondiiThe Hidden Blade
Keelhead Grond
Heikani Titanshell & Dannouran Yureel Ghost in the Shell

Pet Monsters:

Barred Hawk Wolves of the Sky
Pidganha Sky Terror/Love Dove
Dermintine Blur Wolves
Mega-Gerbil Powerhouse
Roosterock Apocalypse
Shepardax Quickdraw

Acronym Monsters:

Excalibur The Sword
Mjölnir The Hammer
Gungnir The Spear
Aegis The Sheild

The Four Lords:

Zotzotherium Lord of the Sky/Zotz
Setotherium Lord of the Earth/Set
Oceaos Lord of the Water/Typhoon
Vulcanis Lord of the Fire/Surtr

Creature Concepts

Monsters:
Trontine, Turkolophus, SwordLions, Compurster & Fungorst, Snapperwhip, Creeping Death, Saber-tooth Camel, Casteroids, Endokorus, 'Dementia


Credits:
7,900
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Clockwork,Oct 1 2012
09:02 PM
It doesn't walk on two legs. It doesn't walk on two legs & two arms, either. It lays on its stomach, dragging itself along/flopping like a seal for movement.

In that case, weight is even more of a problem. A beached Whale crushes itself because of its own weight. If they had legs suited for walking, they could probably walk around of land. Now this thing is twice as heavy as the average Blue Whale. The best it could do is try to support itself for a few seconds before it collapses.
But even if that wasn't a problem, it still suffers from a lack of realism. With legs like that, it would be stationary. It would probably take months before it could move a mile, and by then, it's likely already eaten by a swarm of Xitos. There's a good reason why belly-crawlers don't manage to reach Whale sizes. And personally, I can easily see a Seal outrun this thing as the same size. The maximum weight for this this thing to be mobile its probably something like 100 tons, though I can't see this thing being that light at such sizes. The leg just aren't suited for moving something that big. You know, I have an idea for a belly-crawling creature. Just like this thing, it's very slow on land. But, it's only 19 tons and has short, but highly muscular legs, four of them. And it's also semi-aquatic.
I also cannot see how so much fat could make it make Skulltank look like a feather. Skulltank is a walking shield. This? Just some wobbling fat. A plausible weight for this would be 150 tons. But then again, it would still have problems.

To sum up the problems:
1: Would die under its own weight.
2: Would be unable to walk around.
3: Is WAAAAAAY heavier than it should be.

Also, seeing as this thing is not quadrupedal (Because it pushes itself forward with 2 legs.), wouldn't is break the
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rule? I could be wrong about this, though.

To be honest, the easiest solution is probably to decrease its size to something like 50 feet.
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