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Lystrapenops mcharaensis; My first... Creature? Heh.
Topic Started: Nov 9 2012, 11:15 PM (344 Views)
Logan_McHara
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Name (of creature): Lystrapenops

Height: 1 meter at the shoulder, and another 8 centimeters for it's crest

Length: 3 metres long from nose to tail

Weight: 242 kg

Base DNA: Lystrosaurus murrayi, Tapejara wellnhoferi, Gorgonops whaitsi

Abilities: Strong Bite, Tusk Jabbing, Pointy beak, sharp teeth(can cause profuse bleeding?), teeth curve back to hold prey, claws, size and weight(I feel like throwing my weight around like Manfred the mammoth.)

Weaknesses: Short-sighted, can only keep up a fight for ten hours in best conditions.

Defenses: Tough hide, stench of old flesh coming from breath, good reflexes, flexible

Special Attributes: Olfactory sense is specially attuned to the smell of calcium and iron.

Description: A Gorgonops whaitsi with the head of a Tapejara wellnhoferi, with the nasal passages of the Gorgonops, as well as the teeth, posterior torso of Lystrosaurus murrayi, thick, muscled limbs, claws of the Gorgonops, Lystrosaurus murrayi tusks, Tapejara's tail, Tapejara's fluff covering anterior torso, fluff also covering the skin of the head, base of the beak is like the Lystrosaur's, but tapering to the point of a Tapejara bill, Gorgonops 'ears', eyes are a deep rust color, skin is olive brown, fur is white, darker olive brown marbling on the skin, black claws. males possess iridescent emerald green crests, while the females just have a small brown horn-like crest. Females tend to be slightly smaller than males.

LOGI Info: Lystrapenops mcharaensis spends most of it's time loping through the bush in fairly protected, quiet places, where they live and hunt in pairs, their strategy is much like the modern african bush dogs, one individual giving chase, while leading the prey right to an ambush at the hands of the male.

Other: Did I do this right?
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Legalosaurus
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Welcome to the site. I'm definitely one of the newer members, but ill tey to do my best to give you advice-First off, it looks really good. For your free creature, I wish I'd realized that bigger is better, because bigger is more expensive. The profuse bleeding was a nice touch. But...

It will need a picture to be approved, I'm not too sure anout the 'ten hours at best' deal. While, generally, battles dont last that long, that phrase goves your behemoth quite the Achilles heel. Also,perhaps it be easier to read and write if you didn't use their scientific/Latin names.
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Ties-1

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Credits- 2.900

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Coca-killa, Sugar, Manticock, Mokele-mbembe, Spider Monkey, postponed

Battles I'm Somewhere in the Process of Writing
Regentica v. Magnoterratherium (Rocky Valley w/ river)

Creatures-
Hytrasaurus , Manchiceradon, Bugbuzz, Dolfina, Felocephalous , Afeloro, Peaceck, Arctivia, Lupura and Chastia, Blooderfly,Velocidactyl & Pteraraptor ,Venuslug,Bookworm,Latriosuchus
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Dinosaurs become Saidi.
Saidi makes Saidi.
Saidi kills Saidi.
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Logan_McHara
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I like to be precise, Mr(?). Legalosaurus.
Cheap kitchens in the sun, yay!

My Personal Hero: DinoFlame. He banned me the first time I was here, when I kept starting arguments, breaking rules, and generally being a d***. Unfortunately, I survived and came back in this form. But once again, my fiery angle, the great DinoFlame, put me out of my misery. So thank you, DinoFlame. Thank you. You are truly a gift to all of Genome Inc., and the entire world, too.
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Legalosaurus
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Yes, it's mister. I'm pretty sure most of us on here are mister. And if I could direct your attention to any of the other creatures, you would soon realize that while a Latin name is cool and accepted, we generally use basic names(ie Kangaroo Rat, Velociraptor) for simplicity sake.
Most people inexplicably call me A-pat...

Wins-6
Losses-8
Ties-1

Mission Wins-0
Losses-0
Ties-0

Battles Written: 16
Missions Written: 2

Credits- 2.900

Drawing Board
Coca-killa, Sugar, Manticock, Mokele-mbembe, Spider Monkey, postponed

Battles I'm Somewhere in the Process of Writing
Regentica v. Magnoterratherium (Rocky Valley w/ river)

Creatures-
Hytrasaurus , Manchiceradon, Bugbuzz, Dolfina, Felocephalous , Afeloro, Peaceck, Arctivia, Lupura and Chastia, Blooderfly,Velocidactyl & Pteraraptor ,Venuslug,Bookworm,Latriosuchus
Clockwork's Words of Wisdom
 
God creates dinosaurs.
Dinosaurs become Saidi.
Saidi makes Saidi.
Saidi kills Saidi.
Saidi inherits the Earth.
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Tyltalis
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A very good looking creature, I like it! Though you could make it bigger if you so choose. I also see you've met my brother. Anyways, I think the names are fine, certainly help us artists distinguish what type of creature we should use.
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Hytrasaurus
Money: 24900
Dedicated to my beloved spouse
with love ~<3
Touch the wind. Catch my love as it goes sailing
Touch the wind and I'll be close to you
I'll be easy to find
on the winds of the morning I'll come sailing
I'll be easy to find
and, baby, I'll be close to you
Touch the wind... [/SIZE]

R.I.P Legalosaurus, my younger brother, a dearest of friends, and beloved charge.
"The Heir will tear down the walls & reveal the truth of our hearts."
Dragon Flying type, mind you.
albinoraptor,May 4 2014
07:21 PM
MLS is, and always will be, slightly more intelligent than Ayn Rand.

GD
 
I like how you’ve crossed out the actually sensible thing, in favor of being Smaug.

The best thing that's happened to me in a long long time. Welcome back bro, I've missed you.
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Legalosaurus
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Well, mi hermano, (probably said that wrong) not all of us are a whiz at Latin and Sapnish and English and Italian and.....etc.
Most people inexplicably call me A-pat...

Wins-6
Losses-8
Ties-1

Mission Wins-0
Losses-0
Ties-0

Battles Written: 16
Missions Written: 2

Credits- 2.900

Drawing Board
Coca-killa, Sugar, Manticock, Mokele-mbembe, Spider Monkey, postponed

Battles I'm Somewhere in the Process of Writing
Regentica v. Magnoterratherium (Rocky Valley w/ river)

Creatures-
Hytrasaurus , Manchiceradon, Bugbuzz, Dolfina, Felocephalous , Afeloro, Peaceck, Arctivia, Lupura and Chastia, Blooderfly,Velocidactyl & Pteraraptor ,Venuslug,Bookworm,Latriosuchus
Clockwork's Words of Wisdom
 
God creates dinosaurs.
Dinosaurs become Saidi.
Saidi makes Saidi.
Saidi kills Saidi.
Saidi inherits the Earth.
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Logan_McHara
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But is it not best to use the scientific name of the species when it comes to prehistoric life, if you're trying for a specific species, as they don't really have common names to use.

For instance, with Velociraptor, you could be meaning V. mongoliensis, or V. osmolskae.
Cheap kitchens in the sun, yay!

My Personal Hero: DinoFlame. He banned me the first time I was here, when I kept starting arguments, breaking rules, and generally being a d***. Unfortunately, I survived and came back in this form. But once again, my fiery angle, the great DinoFlame, put me out of my misery. So thank you, DinoFlame. Thank you. You are truly a gift to all of Genome Inc., and the entire world, too.
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He can call it whatever he wants. GD has a few monsters with scientific names.
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Which are, in essence, one and the same. Velociraptor. They look similar, probably acted similar, so on. I have nothing against scientific names, I'm just making a suggestion.
Most people inexplicably call me A-pat...

Wins-6
Losses-8
Ties-1

Mission Wins-0
Losses-0
Ties-0

Battles Written: 16
Missions Written: 2

Credits- 2.900

Drawing Board
Coca-killa, Sugar, Manticock, Mokele-mbembe, Spider Monkey, postponed

Battles I'm Somewhere in the Process of Writing
Regentica v. Magnoterratherium (Rocky Valley w/ river)

Creatures-
Hytrasaurus , Manchiceradon, Bugbuzz, Dolfina, Felocephalous , Afeloro, Peaceck, Arctivia, Lupura and Chastia, Blooderfly,Velocidactyl & Pteraraptor ,Venuslug,Bookworm,Latriosuchus
Clockwork's Words of Wisdom
 
God creates dinosaurs.
Dinosaurs become Saidi.
Saidi makes Saidi.
Saidi kills Saidi.
Saidi inherits the Earth.
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Logan_McHara
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Praeterea, ego certum facundus in multis lingua.
Cheap kitchens in the sun, yay!

My Personal Hero: DinoFlame. He banned me the first time I was here, when I kept starting arguments, breaking rules, and generally being a d***. Unfortunately, I survived and came back in this form. But once again, my fiery angle, the great DinoFlame, put me out of my misery. So thank you, DinoFlame. Thank you. You are truly a gift to all of Genome Inc., and the entire world, too.
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Legalosaurus
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I, however, am currently only fluent in English, although, sigo siendo un estudiante en español.
Most people inexplicably call me A-pat...

Wins-6
Losses-8
Ties-1

Mission Wins-0
Losses-0
Ties-0

Battles Written: 16
Missions Written: 2

Credits- 2.900

Drawing Board
Coca-killa, Sugar, Manticock, Mokele-mbembe, Spider Monkey, postponed

Battles I'm Somewhere in the Process of Writing
Regentica v. Magnoterratherium (Rocky Valley w/ river)

Creatures-
Hytrasaurus , Manchiceradon, Bugbuzz, Dolfina, Felocephalous , Afeloro, Peaceck, Arctivia, Lupura and Chastia, Blooderfly,Velocidactyl & Pteraraptor ,Venuslug,Bookworm,Latriosuchus
Clockwork's Words of Wisdom
 
God creates dinosaurs.
Dinosaurs become Saidi.
Saidi makes Saidi.
Saidi kills Saidi.
Saidi inherits the Earth.
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Tyltalis
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It's fine bro, I'll teach you some day ^_^ .

Also, I kind of like it that he calls them by their scientific names, it helps me know what to base it off of if I were to draw it. Also, will you make your own picture, or would you like me (or GD or DG or Leggy[?]) to make one for you? Multis in linguis loquor etiam si non satis.
Si hermano, sigue practicando, pronto mejoraras :).
Creatures:
Greater Leatherwing Mii Animiavis Speedaroo Quetzalimimus Carnotherisaurus Osteolorodermus
Hytrasaurus
Money: 24900
Dedicated to my beloved spouse
with love ~<3
Touch the wind. Catch my love as it goes sailing
Touch the wind and I'll be close to you
I'll be easy to find
on the winds of the morning I'll come sailing
I'll be easy to find
and, baby, I'll be close to you
Touch the wind... [/SIZE]

R.I.P Legalosaurus, my younger brother, a dearest of friends, and beloved charge.
"The Heir will tear down the walls & reveal the truth of our hearts."
Dragon Flying type, mind you.
albinoraptor,May 4 2014
07:21 PM
MLS is, and always will be, slightly more intelligent than Ayn Rand.

GD
 
I like how you’ve crossed out the actually sensible thing, in favor of being Smaug.

The best thing that's happened to me in a long long time. Welcome back bro, I've missed you.
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I'm sure I would find this cool if I knew latin names. :P
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To Legalosaurus: Yo tenía tres años de que en la escuela secundaria.

To Tyltalis: Satis credo loqui linguis, tamen nescio, ad emendationem fratris tui de manu.

To Kingpin: Mar sin, is dóigh leat a bheith go maith a labhraítear i dteangacha éagsúla is rud maith thart anseo?

Αν και πιστεύω κανείς την κατάρτιση μια εικόνα του αυτό το πλάσμα πρέπει να είναι ικανοποιητική.
Cheap kitchens in the sun, yay!

My Personal Hero: DinoFlame. He banned me the first time I was here, when I kept starting arguments, breaking rules, and generally being a d***. Unfortunately, I survived and came back in this form. But once again, my fiery angle, the great DinoFlame, put me out of my misery. So thank you, DinoFlame. Thank you. You are truly a gift to all of Genome Inc., and the entire world, too.
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Tyltalis,Nov 10 2012
12:13 AM
(or GD or DG or Leggy[?])

Seguramente usted bromeando. ¡Mis habilidades de dibujo no son comparables a la suya, cualquiera de los otros maestros de ésta página!

I'd like to thank google translate for all the words I didn't know.
Most people inexplicably call me A-pat...

Wins-6
Losses-8
Ties-1

Mission Wins-0
Losses-0
Ties-0

Battles Written: 16
Missions Written: 2

Credits- 2.900

Drawing Board
Coca-killa, Sugar, Manticock, Mokele-mbembe, Spider Monkey, postponed

Battles I'm Somewhere in the Process of Writing
Regentica v. Magnoterratherium (Rocky Valley w/ river)

Creatures-
Hytrasaurus , Manchiceradon, Bugbuzz, Dolfina, Felocephalous , Afeloro, Peaceck, Arctivia, Lupura and Chastia, Blooderfly,Velocidactyl & Pteraraptor ,Venuslug,Bookworm,Latriosuchus
Clockwork's Words of Wisdom
 
God creates dinosaurs.
Dinosaurs become Saidi.
Saidi makes Saidi.
Saidi kills Saidi.
Saidi inherits the Earth.
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