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| Topic Started: Nov 6 2015, 09:40 PM (400 Views) | |
| Splitwirez | Nov 6 2015, 09:40 PM Post #1 |
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It abbreviates to Splitty, not Splitz.
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Name (of creature): Gigaculex Tyrannus Height: 15ft Length: 35ft Weight: 3.5 tonnes Base DNA: Tyrannosaurus, Utahraptor, Some kind of Mosquito, Meganeura, Cuttlefish, Firefly Abilities: -Can run at speeds up to 35mph. -Moderately intelligent, sufficiently so to follow simple gestural instructions and infer intent to a limited degree, but not likely to be making axes or spears anytime soon. Weaknesses: -Exoskeleton does have seams, which could probably be exploited somehow. -Eyes glow and scroll through a spectrum of colour, which can often blow its location in a dark setting. Defenses: -Exoskeleton provides fair protection from physical attacks as well as its own corrosive attack method. Special Attributes: -Can spew a barrage of fragments of crystallized stomach acid, which revert to liquid state on impact, before causing mass corrosion. This occurs by blending the acid with crystallizing saliva, which is similar to that of the Edible-nest Swiftlet. -Eyes emit enough light to allow it to see quite well in otherwise low-light conditions. -Eye colour change can mesmerise/hypnotize some adversaries. Description: Large theropod-like form, plated in a black exoskeleton. Hands and feet are somewhat reminiscent of the feet of a Spider. Head is shaped somewhat like an arrow, with the front most half possessing a left and right jaw, rather than the vertical arrangement we’ve come to expect. Four slit-like eyes can be seen on the top surface of its head, which glow, and scroll through a spectrum of colours at a variable speed. LOGI Info: Usually prefer to scavenge or feed on plant matter, but will kill if necessary to sustain itself, or if threatened. When doing so, typically prefers to outrun adversaries while corroding them to death, but will not hesitate to engage physically if necessary. Conflicted instincts (“Am I a T. Rex or a Mosquito?”) produce odd behaviours at times, such as typically draining a corpse of blood completely, before proceeding to consume the solid flesh which remains. They form mating pairs, and raise their young for an extended period of time. Other: Nothing to say here ![]() EDIT: To anyone who reads this, I'd really like to hear your thoughts on it! Be it positive or negative, I want to know ![]() (Yes, I know about the "like" feature, but I'd also like to know why, or why not.) |
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| Tyltalis | Nov 6 2015, 10:15 PM Post #2 |
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Heir of No Humor
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Wow, I am enthralled to see a new creation here! Also, in the event that I haven't said so before, welcome to Genome Incorporated, Splitwirez,
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Creatures: Greater Leatherwing Mii Animiavis Speedaroo Quetzalimimus Carnotherisaurus Osteolorodermus Hytrasaurus Money: 24900
R.I.P Legalosaurus, my younger brother, a dearest of friends, and beloved charge. "The Heir will tear down the walls & reveal the truth of our hearts." Dragon Flying type, mind you.
The best thing that's happened to me in a long long time. Welcome back bro, I've missed you. Descendant of the mighty Juan-Juan Empire, Legacy of Nobody, Kin of Blixia | |
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| Splitwirez | Nov 6 2015, 10:28 PM Post #3 |
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It abbreviates to Splitty, not Splitz.
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:33333333 Well if you like the vector piece, then here, have a 3D rendition of it: ![]() xD Ugh...I guess this means I need to figure out how stomach acid can crystallize? ._. |
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| Tyltalis | Nov 6 2015, 10:54 PM Post #4 |
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Heir of No Humor
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Nice piece! I look forward to seeing this monster in action! And yes, your guess is indeed correct. |
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Creatures: Greater Leatherwing Mii Animiavis Speedaroo Quetzalimimus Carnotherisaurus Osteolorodermus Hytrasaurus Money: 24900
R.I.P Legalosaurus, my younger brother, a dearest of friends, and beloved charge. "The Heir will tear down the walls & reveal the truth of our hearts." Dragon Flying type, mind you.
The best thing that's happened to me in a long long time. Welcome back bro, I've missed you. Descendant of the mighty Juan-Juan Empire, Legacy of Nobody, Kin of Blixia | |
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| DarkGricer | Nov 7 2015, 06:43 AM Post #5 |
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That's Captain Gricer to you, lad!
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Perhaps the acid is mixed with saliva crystalizing saliva, sort of like that of the Edible-nest Swiftlet. |
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Proud player of: ----------------- ------------------ Mazeer Swiftfoot Beikarahenki - --------- Goliath Fighter ---------- ---------------- -------------------------- Thorin Kirreval ---------- ------- Dragonborn Paladin ------- ----------------- -------------------------------- Alson --------------- --------- Oddball Wizard --------- ----------------- -------------------------- Fafnir Goldheart --------- ------- Hill Dwarf Barbarian ------- ----------------- ------------------------- Shayle Amberwood -------- ------- Human Psycho Binder ------- 3DS Friend code: 0447-6294-9656 Wins: 21 Loses: 13 Ties: 4 Writer of the Battle of the Maze. Battles written: 36 Missions written: 3 Number of battles/missions featuring Tyrannotank written: 7 Number of battles/missions featuring Carnotherisaurus written: 7 Credits: 18550 Creature Coupons: 0 Creatures: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Inherited/Bought: ![]() Upcoming Creatures: Legion, Vucub Caquix, Zipacna, Cabrakan, Thanatos EEC critters: Dragon's Den Gigantoctopodus Vrachotherium
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| DinoFlame | Nov 7 2015, 09:27 AM Post #6 |
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God-King of Eldorado
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There's the crystallized acid thing Ty already brought up, but I think DG might have a decent solution there for you. I doubt the crystallized saliva mixed in would hold its structure for too long with the acid, but it should create the effect you're looking for of having a semi-solid projectile that liquefies on impact. Other than that there is nothing wrong with it to my eyes. Literally the only thing I'd mention just for future reference is that as far as details/describing it goes, you're only just within the minimum threshold. You've hit all my criteria so I've got no problem with it, I just mean this as a heads up that it wouldn't hurt to add more than that if you wanted to.
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ToD Level-Up Status: 7/8 3DS FC: 4356-0410-5185 Credits: 89,500 Monsters: Pachysailosaurus, Sadaptoren, Raptagian, Carnosaurus, Gastoxic, Paladonstrum, Molick, Floraptor, Politisk, Goragon, Balalisto, Autoris, Wintarcus, Aquavenus, Torvofelis, Chelonosuchus, Dazzlewurm, Drakhaos, Insequs, Dracoceras, Mercury, Terra, Chess Spider, Venus, Mars, Saturn, Stonewrecker, Jupiter, EEC: Pterohynus, Vulakat, Creature Concepts: The Planets/Roman Gods (Mercury*, Venus*, Terra*, Mars*, Jupiter*, Saturn*, Uranus, Neptune, Pluto) The Norse Gods(Thor, Loki, Odin) Ultimate Leviathan, Mammalian Dragon, Black Hunter Whale(Venatorcetus), Summanus, Remakes (Klog, Komodoking) | |
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| Splitwirez | Nov 7 2015, 10:13 AM Post #7 |
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It abbreviates to Splitty, not Splitz.
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Oh, how I'd love to be able to improve the physical description. TBH, though, I'm beyond horrible at translating pictures to words >.< |
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| DinoFlame | Nov 7 2015, 01:55 PM Post #8 |
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I meant more in regards to it's abilities and behavior/LOGI. Those two things are especially important information for the person writing a battle to have, and for the monsters' owner to include to get the intended performance out of their critter. The physical description is important too, but the fact that you already have an accurate picture picks up some of the slack there. |
ToD Level-Up Status: 7/8 3DS FC: 4356-0410-5185 Credits: 89,500 Monsters: Pachysailosaurus, Sadaptoren, Raptagian, Carnosaurus, Gastoxic, Paladonstrum, Molick, Floraptor, Politisk, Goragon, Balalisto, Autoris, Wintarcus, Aquavenus, Torvofelis, Chelonosuchus, Dazzlewurm, Drakhaos, Insequs, Dracoceras, Mercury, Terra, Chess Spider, Venus, Mars, Saturn, Stonewrecker, Jupiter, EEC: Pterohynus, Vulakat, Creature Concepts: The Planets/Roman Gods (Mercury*, Venus*, Terra*, Mars*, Jupiter*, Saturn*, Uranus, Neptune, Pluto) The Norse Gods(Thor, Loki, Odin) Ultimate Leviathan, Mammalian Dragon, Black Hunter Whale(Venatorcetus), Summanus, Remakes (Klog, Komodoking) | |
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| Splitwirez | Nov 7 2015, 02:06 PM Post #9 |
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It abbreviates to Splitty, not Splitz.
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Oh, wait, what?? Oh god...just when I thought this couldn't be any harder to finish...AUGH. DANGIT. Just when I thought I couldn't be any worse at this...I was Dx |
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| DinoFlame | Nov 7 2015, 03:46 PM Post #10 |
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God-King of Eldorado
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Well, I'm saying that you have provided enough of the relevant details that I'm okay with it, just giving you a warning that you are cutting it a little close. As far as this creature goes, at this point in time, I don't think I require you to add/go into further detail unless you want to. And trust me, for being a new member and this being your first monster you're doing pretty decent. I've seen a LOT worse over the years. |
ToD Level-Up Status: 7/8 3DS FC: 4356-0410-5185 Credits: 89,500 Monsters: Pachysailosaurus, Sadaptoren, Raptagian, Carnosaurus, Gastoxic, Paladonstrum, Molick, Floraptor, Politisk, Goragon, Balalisto, Autoris, Wintarcus, Aquavenus, Torvofelis, Chelonosuchus, Dazzlewurm, Drakhaos, Insequs, Dracoceras, Mercury, Terra, Chess Spider, Venus, Mars, Saturn, Stonewrecker, Jupiter, EEC: Pterohynus, Vulakat, Creature Concepts: The Planets/Roman Gods (Mercury*, Venus*, Terra*, Mars*, Jupiter*, Saturn*, Uranus, Neptune, Pluto) The Norse Gods(Thor, Loki, Odin) Ultimate Leviathan, Mammalian Dragon, Black Hunter Whale(Venatorcetus), Summanus, Remakes (Klog, Komodoking) | |
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| Splitwirez | Nov 7 2015, 03:49 PM Post #11 |
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It abbreviates to Splitty, not Splitz.
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...really? What kind of worse? O.o |
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| DinoFlame | Nov 7 2015, 03:59 PM Post #12 |
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http://z9.invisionfree.com/Genome_Incorpor...wtopic=249&st=0 Bear in mind that the general standards back in those days were VERY low, but still... EDIT: @Everyone else: Yes, you already know which monster I linked to without having to check.
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ToD Level-Up Status: 7/8 3DS FC: 4356-0410-5185 Credits: 89,500 Monsters: Pachysailosaurus, Sadaptoren, Raptagian, Carnosaurus, Gastoxic, Paladonstrum, Molick, Floraptor, Politisk, Goragon, Balalisto, Autoris, Wintarcus, Aquavenus, Torvofelis, Chelonosuchus, Dazzlewurm, Drakhaos, Insequs, Dracoceras, Mercury, Terra, Chess Spider, Venus, Mars, Saturn, Stonewrecker, Jupiter, EEC: Pterohynus, Vulakat, Creature Concepts: The Planets/Roman Gods (Mercury*, Venus*, Terra*, Mars*, Jupiter*, Saturn*, Uranus, Neptune, Pluto) The Norse Gods(Thor, Loki, Odin) Ultimate Leviathan, Mammalian Dragon, Black Hunter Whale(Venatorcetus), Summanus, Remakes (Klog, Komodoking) | |
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| Splitwirez | Nov 7 2015, 04:05 PM Post #13 |
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It abbreviates to Splitty, not Splitz.
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Right, that. DarkGricer told me about it shortly before I joined ._. k |
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| DarkGricer | Nov 7 2015, 04:13 PM Post #14 |
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That's Captain Gricer to you, lad!
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Ah. That thing never gets old. |
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Proud player of: ----------------- ------------------ Mazeer Swiftfoot Beikarahenki - --------- Goliath Fighter ---------- ---------------- -------------------------- Thorin Kirreval ---------- ------- Dragonborn Paladin ------- ----------------- -------------------------------- Alson --------------- --------- Oddball Wizard --------- ----------------- -------------------------- Fafnir Goldheart --------- ------- Hill Dwarf Barbarian ------- ----------------- ------------------------- Shayle Amberwood -------- ------- Human Psycho Binder ------- 3DS Friend code: 0447-6294-9656 Wins: 21 Loses: 13 Ties: 4 Writer of the Battle of the Maze. Battles written: 36 Missions written: 3 Number of battles/missions featuring Tyrannotank written: 7 Number of battles/missions featuring Carnotherisaurus written: 7 Credits: 18550 Creature Coupons: 0 Creatures: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Inherited/Bought: ![]() Upcoming Creatures: Legion, Vucub Caquix, Zipacna, Cabrakan, Thanatos EEC critters: Dragon's Den Gigantoctopodus Vrachotherium
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| DinoFlame | Nov 21 2015, 04:41 PM Post #15 |
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Just as a reminder, you still need to make the change/add the explanation regarding the crystallized stomach acid before we can approve this.
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ToD Level-Up Status: 7/8 3DS FC: 4356-0410-5185 Credits: 89,500 Monsters: Pachysailosaurus, Sadaptoren, Raptagian, Carnosaurus, Gastoxic, Paladonstrum, Molick, Floraptor, Politisk, Goragon, Balalisto, Autoris, Wintarcus, Aquavenus, Torvofelis, Chelonosuchus, Dazzlewurm, Drakhaos, Insequs, Dracoceras, Mercury, Terra, Chess Spider, Venus, Mars, Saturn, Stonewrecker, Jupiter, EEC: Pterohynus, Vulakat, Creature Concepts: The Planets/Roman Gods (Mercury*, Venus*, Terra*, Mars*, Jupiter*, Saturn*, Uranus, Neptune, Pluto) The Norse Gods(Thor, Loki, Odin) Ultimate Leviathan, Mammalian Dragon, Black Hunter Whale(Venatorcetus), Summanus, Remakes (Klog, Komodoking) | |
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