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| Topic Started: Feb 16 2017, 01:00 AM (278 Views) | |
| Kiryu2012 | Feb 16 2017, 01:00 AM Post #1 |
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My first critter to be made for this site. Please let me know what you think. Name: Biosaurus Height: 10 feet when standing upright, 5 feet when on all fours Length: 10 feet Weight: 1000 pounds Base DNA: Quinkana Fortirostrum, American Alligator, Bengal Tiger, Jurassic Park Raptor, Tyrannosaurus Rex, Allosaurus fragilis, Pakasuchus, Postosuchus Abilities: Fast and agile, sharp teeth and claws, superhuman strength and stamina, adept swimmer, cunning, strong jaws and muscles Weaknesses: No sort of ranged attacks, can attack recklessly at times Defenses: Thick scaly skin lined with osteoderms, outer layer of scales doesn’t have pain receptors or blood vessels, robust body structure built to handle large stress, reinforced skeleton with heavy bones, underside as well armored as the rest of the body, with thick ribs protecting its insides, strong resistance to poisons and diseases Special Attributes: Cunning, able to set up ambushes, can run up to 40 MPH, at home on both land and in water, enhanced senses Description: A typical Biosaurus has a semi-bipedal body structure with a robust and muscular build. The animal’s head is boxlike in shape, with large jaws filled with serrated bladelike teeth. These teeth are not visible when the Biosaurus’s jaws are closed, being covered with fleshy lips. The arms are long and strong, tipped with four curved claws on each hand. Its digitigrade legs are much like a theropod’s, ending in three curved talons and a small inner dewclaw on each foot. The Biosaurus’s tail is strong and flexible, as well as laterally flattened somewhat similar to a crocodile’s to help with swimming. The entire body is covered in dark turquoise scaly skin lined with osteoderms, with even the underbelly well-protected. The Biosaurus’s eyes are much like a crocodile’s, being green or yellowish-green with black slit pupils. The animal’s flesh and blood are purple in color. With the Biosaurus’s arms almost as long as its legs, and with the design of its body, it can just as easily walk on all fours as it can on its hind legs. Its hands and feet are somewhat webbed to aid in swimming. LOGI Info: Biosaurus tend to vary in socialism depending on the individuals in question, with some integrating themselves into decently sized packs, while others are loners. Those living in packs can be compared to wolves in that they share a similar social order, and those living alone are more like other solitary predators like tigers. Males tend to be brighter in color than females and are more aggressive, especially during the breeding season. Females give birth to live young, carrying them for 5 months before birthing up to 6 offspring. Biosaurus are opportunistic carnivores, feeding off of carrion as well as hunting live prey. When it comes to hunting, stealth is unnecessary as they have the stamina to chase their prey for miles. In the midst of combat, Biosaurus make great use of their jaws and claws, slashing and lacerating flesh to cause shock and blood loss. They can grapple rather well thanks to their tiger DNA, all while biting away at their face's head or neck. In the water, they'll try restraining their prey and prevent them from reaching the surface to breath; against any creature that can breath underwater, they'll just inflict as much damage as possible with their teeth and claws. A Biosaurus typically targets a foe's head/neck region, mainly to end the fight as quickly as possible. Other: N/A
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Monsters: Biosaurus Horned Tyrant Allidrake Credits: 4050 | |
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| Clockwork | Feb 16 2017, 03:29 AM Post #2 |
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DEUS VULT
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NOPEnopenopenopenopenopenope Velociraptor antirrhopus sornaensis/nublarensis? Totally fine, used semifrequently. Gwangi? Literally just an allosaurus from a bad stop motion movie, their DNA specifically can't be used but allosaurus can be without issue. But sergal? No freaking way, for the love of all that is good and holy. |
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| DinoFlame | Feb 16 2017, 10:44 AM Post #3 |
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I would have to agree with Clocky's assessment here. Quickly researching this subject, I would have to say that Sergals are not an applicable DNA at the very least due to their level of intelligence. I do apologize for the lack of clarity on this in the rules that I've noticed just now; although the topic of creature intelligence has came up and been discussed many times in regards to Human DNA (and why Human DNA isn't allowed), it doesn't appear anyone thought it necessary to specify that such applies to fictional species as well. |
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| Kiryu2012 | Feb 16 2017, 11:26 AM Post #4 |
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My apologies. The rules for making creatures said that we could use any fictional species as long as they didn't have any supernatural powers, and I assumed Sergals would thus be okay to use. But I will remove the Sergal from the base DNA and fix up the Aborania. |
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Monsters: Biosaurus Horned Tyrant Allidrake Credits: 4050 | |
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| Clockwork | Feb 16 2017, 11:57 AM Post #5 |
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"Realistic and scientifically correct" is not the same thing as "doesn't have supernatural powers". Other than other creatures created using genetic manipulation like ours, and creatures from documentaries ala Dragons: A Fantasy Made Real, fictional species are generally not used. |
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| Kiryu2012 | Feb 16 2017, 12:40 PM Post #6 |
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Alright, I get what you're saying. Fixed up the Aborania and removed the Sergal DNA. |
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| Kiryu2012 | Feb 16 2017, 10:52 PM Post #7 |
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Fixed up the Aborania's height to a definitive 10 feet and added some weight to it, if that's okay. |
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| Kiryu2012 | Mar 3 2017, 04:23 PM Post #8 |
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Renamed the Aborania, if that's okay. |
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| Kiryu2012 | Mar 6 2017, 05:48 PM Post #9 |
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Uploaded pic. |
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| albinoraptor | Mar 6 2017, 07:43 PM Post #10 |
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i saw this thing's name and thought 'why would somebody just make an arboreal alligator lizard' then i realized that i'm just stupid and/or dyslexic on some level probably stupid you've played me for a fool, new guy. Well played. |
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| Kiryu2012 | Mar 6 2017, 07:48 PM Post #11 |
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Victory is mine! \(•̀ω•́ )/ |
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| DinoFlame | Mar 13 2017, 10:57 AM Post #12 |
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Ah, didn't notice you'd added a picture. I've done a final look over and there are just a few minor things I saw to quickly address before I approve the creature. -Gwangi DNA needs to be switched for regular Allosaurus DNA. -Confirmation of the size; in the picture, Biosaurus definitely appears longer than it is tall. I assume the 10 feet by 10 feet measurement is based on a standing posture? If so, notation to indicate that would be recommended, as would a measurement of its height when in a quadrupedal stance as depicted in your picture. -It would probably be good to add even a brief description of its usual hunting tactics to the LOGI section. In a battle, that information is very important for writers to help them determine how the creature would act. |
ToD Level-Up Status: 7/8 3DS FC: 4356-0410-5185 Credits: 89,500 Monsters: Pachysailosaurus, Sadaptoren, Raptagian, Carnosaurus, Gastoxic, Paladonstrum, Molick, Floraptor, Politisk, Goragon, Balalisto, Autoris, Wintarcus, Aquavenus, Torvofelis, Chelonosuchus, Dazzlewurm, Drakhaos, Insequs, Dracoceras, Mercury, Terra, Chess Spider, Venus, Mars, Saturn, Stonewrecker, Jupiter, EEC: Pterohynus, Vulakat, Creature Concepts: The Planets/Roman Gods (Mercury*, Venus*, Terra*, Mars*, Jupiter*, Saturn*, Uranus, Neptune, Pluto) The Norse Gods(Thor, Loki, Odin) Ultimate Leviathan, Mammalian Dragon, Black Hunter Whale(Venatorcetus), Summanus, Remakes (Klog, Komodoking) | |
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| Kiryu2012 | Mar 14 2017, 01:04 PM Post #13 |
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Alright, thanks for the input. Fixed up the Biosaurus' bio slightly. |
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| DinoFlame | Mar 15 2017, 10:10 AM Post #14 |
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Alright, if you're happy with what you've got and no one sees anything that I've missed, I believe we're all set to approve this. |
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| Kiryu2012 | Mar 15 2017, 10:53 AM Post #15 |
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Go right ahead. |
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