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VenomStalker; My first imperfect entry
Topic Started: Apr 30 2017, 02:27 PM (691 Views)
The Fluffy Raptor
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DarkGricer,May 2 2017
07:11 PM
Generally, tail length has to be added to the profile (As was the case with Mega Gerbil). For my estimate of how long it would be in total including the tail (Based of the picture), well, see my previous post. :P

Also, it'd still need some added weight, Something like 140-180 lbs should be good.

I don't want to make em too heavy since they have hollow bones :P

But yeah I'll add the tail length and all that
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DarkGricer
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Well, bones aren't a super big part of the body weight, so even just the lower end of that weight should be good.
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Over the hills I go~
Smashing into trees!
Now the snow is red~
And I'm almost dead~
Now I'm in the hospital~
With stitches in my head! :rolleyes:  :P
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The Fluffy Raptor
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Added more details in defense, descriptions and changed up the sizings ;)
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DarkGricer
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Well now it's too big to be in a pack (Total length is what matters for pack size as well as how expensive a creature is, though the latter isn't very relevant in this case). Plus that puts it in the range of too light again. Not to mention the height to length ratio is rather skewed again (The 8.6 feet estimate I gave was for the total length of a 3 foot tall individual, not the body length).
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@DG:
Dashing through the snow~
On a broken ski~
Over the hills I go~
Smashing into trees!
Now the snow is red~
And I'm almost dead~
Now I'm in the hospital~
With stitches in my head! :rolleyes:  :P
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The Fluffy Raptor
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Welp, I'm confused now, do you want me to include the 8.5 ft length with the tail as well?
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DarkGricer
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Basically, if it was 3 feet tall and had a 5 foot body length, its tail would be about 3.6 feet by my calculation, which would make its total length 8.6 feet.

As for the weight, thinking about it again, yes it does have hollow bones, but on the other hand it's also armored. So I'd stick with a weight of 150-180 pounds if it's body length were to be 5 feet. If it's larger, than the weight would have to be higher.
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------- Dragonborn Paladin -------

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--------- Oddball Wizard ---------

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--------- Fafnir Goldheart ---------
------- Hill Dwarf Barbarian -------

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-------- Shayle Amberwood --------
------- Human Psycho Binder -------

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Wins: 21
Loses: 13
Ties: 4

Writer of the Battle of the Maze.
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Missions written: 3
Number of battles/missions featuring Tyrannotank written: 7
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Legion, Vucub Caquix, Zipacna, Cabrakan, Thanatos

EEC critters:
Dragon's Den
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Vrachotherium



Me
 
A LITTLE PAIN NEVER HURT ANYBODY!


DinoFlame
 
@DG:
Dashing through the snow~
On a broken ski~
Over the hills I go~
Smashing into trees!
Now the snow is red~
And I'm almost dead~
Now I'm in the hospital~
With stitches in my head! :rolleyes:  :P
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The Fluffy Raptor
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Thanks for the clarification, I'll edit it right away :D
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DarkGricer
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Just a minor thing, but it still says "(Not counting tail length)" next to the total length. Besides that, the only problem I see is the minor misphrasing CS and Legalo already mentioned.
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--------- Goliath Fighter ----------

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------- Dragonborn Paladin -------

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--------------- Alson ---------------
--------- Oddball Wizard ---------

-----------------Posted Image-----------------
--------- Fafnir Goldheart ---------
------- Hill Dwarf Barbarian -------

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-------- Shayle Amberwood --------
------- Human Psycho Binder -------

3DS Friend code: 0447-6294-9656

Wins: 21
Loses: 13
Ties: 4

Writer of the Battle of the Maze.
Battles written: 36
Missions written: 3
Number of battles/missions featuring Tyrannotank written: 7
Number of battles/missions featuring Carnotherisaurus written: 7

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Upcoming Creatures:

Legion, Vucub Caquix, Zipacna, Cabrakan, Thanatos

EEC critters:
Dragon's Den
Gigantoctopodus
Vrachotherium



Me
 
A LITTLE PAIN NEVER HURT ANYBODY!


DinoFlame
 
@DG:
Dashing through the snow~
On a broken ski~
Over the hills I go~
Smashing into trees!
Now the snow is red~
And I'm almost dead~
Now I'm in the hospital~
With stitches in my head! :rolleyes:  :P
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The Fluffy Raptor
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I can't change the topic name, but I changed the creature's name to the Ostriotor.
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DarkGricer
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You should probably put the creature's name at the top of its profile. Kind of a customary thing here.
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--------- Goliath Fighter ----------

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---------- Thorin Kirreval ----------
------- Dragonborn Paladin -------

-----------------Posted Image-----------------
--------------- Alson ---------------
--------- Oddball Wizard ---------

-----------------Posted Image-----------------
--------- Fafnir Goldheart ---------
------- Hill Dwarf Barbarian -------

-----------------Posted Image-----------------
-------- Shayle Amberwood --------
------- Human Psycho Binder -------

3DS Friend code: 0447-6294-9656

Wins: 21
Loses: 13
Ties: 4

Writer of the Battle of the Maze.
Battles written: 36
Missions written: 3
Number of battles/missions featuring Tyrannotank written: 7
Number of battles/missions featuring Carnotherisaurus written: 7

Credits: 18550
Creature Coupons: 0

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Inherited/Bought:

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Upcoming Creatures:

Legion, Vucub Caquix, Zipacna, Cabrakan, Thanatos

EEC critters:
Dragon's Den
Gigantoctopodus
Vrachotherium



Me
 
A LITTLE PAIN NEVER HURT ANYBODY!


DinoFlame
 
@DG:
Dashing through the snow~
On a broken ski~
Over the hills I go~
Smashing into trees!
Now the snow is red~
And I'm almost dead~
Now I'm in the hospital~
With stitches in my head! :rolleyes:  :P
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Considering it's required by the creation form it's a bit more than a custom.
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Im going to make this creature tiger-sized later but is there anything else that needs to be changed or added?
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A picture has been added ;)
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