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| VenomStalker; My first imperfect entry | |
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| Topic Started: Apr 30 2017, 02:27 PM (691 Views) | |
| The Fluffy Raptor | May 2 2017, 08:50 PM Post #16 |
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I don't want to make em too heavy since they have hollow bones ![]() But yeah I'll add the tail length and all that |
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| DarkGricer | May 2 2017, 08:52 PM Post #17 |
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That's Captain Gricer to you, lad!
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Well, bones aren't a super big part of the body weight, so even just the lower end of that weight should be good. |
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| The Fluffy Raptor | May 2 2017, 09:06 PM Post #18 |
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Added more details in defense, descriptions and changed up the sizings
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| DarkGricer | May 2 2017, 09:10 PM Post #19 |
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That's Captain Gricer to you, lad!
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Well now it's too big to be in a pack (Total length is what matters for pack size as well as how expensive a creature is, though the latter isn't very relevant in this case). Plus that puts it in the range of too light again. Not to mention the height to length ratio is rather skewed again (The 8.6 feet estimate I gave was for the total length of a 3 foot tall individual, not the body length). |
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Proud player of: ----------------- ------------------ Mazeer Swiftfoot Beikarahenki - --------- Goliath Fighter ---------- ---------------- -------------------------- Thorin Kirreval ---------- ------- Dragonborn Paladin ------- ----------------- -------------------------------- Alson --------------- --------- Oddball Wizard --------- ----------------- -------------------------- Fafnir Goldheart --------- ------- Hill Dwarf Barbarian ------- ----------------- ------------------------- Shayle Amberwood -------- ------- Human Psycho Binder ------- 3DS Friend code: 0447-6294-9656 Wins: 21 Loses: 13 Ties: 4 Writer of the Battle of the Maze. Battles written: 36 Missions written: 3 Number of battles/missions featuring Tyrannotank written: 7 Number of battles/missions featuring Carnotherisaurus written: 7 Credits: 18550 Creature Coupons: 0 Creatures: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Inherited/Bought: ![]() Upcoming Creatures: Legion, Vucub Caquix, Zipacna, Cabrakan, Thanatos EEC critters: Dragon's Den Gigantoctopodus Vrachotherium
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| The Fluffy Raptor | May 2 2017, 09:17 PM Post #20 |
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Welp, I'm confused now, do you want me to include the 8.5 ft length with the tail as well? |
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| DarkGricer | May 2 2017, 09:21 PM Post #21 |
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That's Captain Gricer to you, lad!
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Basically, if it was 3 feet tall and had a 5 foot body length, its tail would be about 3.6 feet by my calculation, which would make its total length 8.6 feet. As for the weight, thinking about it again, yes it does have hollow bones, but on the other hand it's also armored. So I'd stick with a weight of 150-180 pounds if it's body length were to be 5 feet. If it's larger, than the weight would have to be higher. |
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Proud player of: ----------------- ------------------ Mazeer Swiftfoot Beikarahenki - --------- Goliath Fighter ---------- ---------------- -------------------------- Thorin Kirreval ---------- ------- Dragonborn Paladin ------- ----------------- -------------------------------- Alson --------------- --------- Oddball Wizard --------- ----------------- -------------------------- Fafnir Goldheart --------- ------- Hill Dwarf Barbarian ------- ----------------- ------------------------- Shayle Amberwood -------- ------- Human Psycho Binder ------- 3DS Friend code: 0447-6294-9656 Wins: 21 Loses: 13 Ties: 4 Writer of the Battle of the Maze. Battles written: 36 Missions written: 3 Number of battles/missions featuring Tyrannotank written: 7 Number of battles/missions featuring Carnotherisaurus written: 7 Credits: 18550 Creature Coupons: 0 Creatures: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Inherited/Bought: ![]() Upcoming Creatures: Legion, Vucub Caquix, Zipacna, Cabrakan, Thanatos EEC critters: Dragon's Den Gigantoctopodus Vrachotherium
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| The Fluffy Raptor | May 2 2017, 09:22 PM Post #22 |
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Thanks for the clarification, I'll edit it right away
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| DarkGricer | May 2 2017, 09:29 PM Post #23 |
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That's Captain Gricer to you, lad!
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Just a minor thing, but it still says "(Not counting tail length)" next to the total length. Besides that, the only problem I see is the minor misphrasing CS and Legalo already mentioned. |
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Proud player of: ----------------- ------------------ Mazeer Swiftfoot Beikarahenki - --------- Goliath Fighter ---------- ---------------- -------------------------- Thorin Kirreval ---------- ------- Dragonborn Paladin ------- ----------------- -------------------------------- Alson --------------- --------- Oddball Wizard --------- ----------------- -------------------------- Fafnir Goldheart --------- ------- Hill Dwarf Barbarian ------- ----------------- ------------------------- Shayle Amberwood -------- ------- Human Psycho Binder ------- 3DS Friend code: 0447-6294-9656 Wins: 21 Loses: 13 Ties: 4 Writer of the Battle of the Maze. Battles written: 36 Missions written: 3 Number of battles/missions featuring Tyrannotank written: 7 Number of battles/missions featuring Carnotherisaurus written: 7 Credits: 18550 Creature Coupons: 0 Creatures: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Inherited/Bought: ![]() Upcoming Creatures: Legion, Vucub Caquix, Zipacna, Cabrakan, Thanatos EEC critters: Dragon's Den Gigantoctopodus Vrachotherium
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| albinoraptor | May 2 2017, 09:36 PM Post #24 |
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Incredibly off-discussion, but; Holy crap that is one in-depth 'weakness' section. |
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| The Fluffy Raptor | May 4 2017, 09:41 PM Post #25 |
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I can't change the topic name, but I changed the creature's name to the Ostriotor. |
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| DarkGricer | May 4 2017, 09:46 PM Post #26 |
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That's Captain Gricer to you, lad!
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You should probably put the creature's name at the top of its profile. Kind of a customary thing here. |
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Proud player of: ----------------- ------------------ Mazeer Swiftfoot Beikarahenki - --------- Goliath Fighter ---------- ---------------- -------------------------- Thorin Kirreval ---------- ------- Dragonborn Paladin ------- ----------------- -------------------------------- Alson --------------- --------- Oddball Wizard --------- ----------------- -------------------------- Fafnir Goldheart --------- ------- Hill Dwarf Barbarian ------- ----------------- ------------------------- Shayle Amberwood -------- ------- Human Psycho Binder ------- 3DS Friend code: 0447-6294-9656 Wins: 21 Loses: 13 Ties: 4 Writer of the Battle of the Maze. Battles written: 36 Missions written: 3 Number of battles/missions featuring Tyrannotank written: 7 Number of battles/missions featuring Carnotherisaurus written: 7 Credits: 18550 Creature Coupons: 0 Creatures: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Inherited/Bought: ![]() Upcoming Creatures: Legion, Vucub Caquix, Zipacna, Cabrakan, Thanatos EEC critters: Dragon's Den Gigantoctopodus Vrachotherium
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| Fleeshstar | May 4 2017, 09:51 PM Post #27 |
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What did Flish Shake Even Mean
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Considering it's required by the creation form it's a bit more than a custom. |
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| The Fluffy Raptor | May 9 2017, 08:52 AM Post #28 |
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Im going to make this creature tiger-sized later but is there anything else that needs to be changed or added? |
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| DinoFlame | May 9 2017, 07:29 PM Post #29 |
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God-King of Eldorado
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From when I had looked through the other day I think the only thing I was waiting on was the picture. |
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| The Fluffy Raptor | May 10 2017, 08:30 PM Post #30 |
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A picture has been added
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