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Stella.
Topic Started: Feb 4 2008, 07:03 PM (101 Views)
Star	Feb 4 2008, 07:03 PM Post #1
Newbie Posts: 3 Group: Members Member #42 Joined: February 4, 2008	Name: Stella Gliama Age: 17 Gender: Female. Race: Human Description: Hair: Silvery Blond, about mid length to her back. Eyes: Crystal blue Skin: Creamy white, porcelain. Build: Lithe. Stella is both quick and fast acting. Weight: Around 8st - Stella is extremely thin. Personality: Stella is mature for her age, but can be childlike when threatened, or put in difficult situations. Likes: Stars. Dislikes: Evil people, wishing to do others harm. Fighting Style: Stella is more for ranged combat. Strengths: Ranged. Weaknesses: Hand to hand combat. Stella's physique comes as a disadvantage during it. Stats: Power- 4 - Stella isn't too strong, her physical attributes and lack of muscle being a point. Speed- 7 - Her small lithe form helps her to move fast. Endurance- 8 - dispite her small frame and appearance, Stella has a incredible high endurance. She will rise from most hits dispite physical pain inflicted. Senses- 3 Psychic- 7 - Stella has always had a strange connection when it comes to supernatural forces. She hears it's in her family connections, but not much is known. Stealth- 6 - She's good at fitting into small spaces. Abilities- Shoot - Stella has a good aim, and most ranged blows meet their maker. Hide - She is good at fitting into abnormally small places, and become unseen. Sight - she has excellent vision, and can see in most darkness. Tone - Stella's voice is alluring, making her seen more innocent then she really is. History: When Stella was younger, her mother and father left to go to some other planet to battle, leaving Stella alone at the age of 9. She learned to be independent, and soo got employment on a ship as a helper. She became friends with some pilot, and her dream is to become one. She was raised on the ships, doing small tasks such as cleaning, helping out the crew. Many ships she has been on has been attacked, so she know how to handle herself combat wise. Other:



Saeryn	Feb 6 2008, 02:45 AM Post #2
Level 2 Posts: 39 Group: Members Member #43 Joined: February 5, 2008	I think the list of spells = abilities



Sapphire Flame	Feb 6 2008, 11:16 PM Post #3
Administrator Posts: 307 Group: Co-owner Member #1 Joined: August 20, 2006	Let's see, where to begin. Well, first of all, this is a fairly realistic RP. True, there's psychic powers and future technology involved, but nothing too farfetched. Second, your profile is really vague. What exactly would she protect the stars from? How exactly is she childlike? Who gave her human form? This profile needs a lot of work, not the least of which is the fact that stars are just flaming balls of hydrogen in this setting. I think this character would be much more suited to fantasy, personally.



Star	Feb 8 2008, 03:22 AM Post #4
Newbie Posts: 3 Group: Members Member #42 Joined: February 4, 2008	Okay. Edited.



Sapphire Flame	Feb 9 2008, 12:45 AM Post #5
Administrator Posts: 307 Group: Co-owner Member #1 Joined: August 20, 2006	Sorry it took so long. This profile is much better-suited for this setting, though. You're approved. Post when ready.



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