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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 10 2008, 11:31 AM (39 Views) | |
| Jed | Mar 10 2008, 11:31 AM Post #1 |
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Sweety Pie
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Chapter 1:A New Career Vegeta Jr. stood atop the large stone building, nobody came here, it was a forgotten place, it was the entrance to the Crypt. it was due for demolition in a couple of days, Vegeta Jr felt that everything deserved a goodbye, no matter how trivial. Then a slow rumbling shook up Vegeta Jr's legs. He was not worried, now at only eight years of age he was most likely the strongest child on Earth. Then a hole formed in the mossy ground far below, fire licked the edges of the hole and a skeletal hand dug its fingertips into the ground around the hole, a second hand appeared, clawing its way up, then a head appeared. A skull, a hooded skull, its eyes were blood red, its mouth a rotting gaping mess. Then it hoisted itself up and looked around, as soon as it spotted Vegeta Jr it held out its hand and in a small dark flame a scythe appeared. It was ornately carved, dragons, their eyes glowing purple were wound around it, and to Vegeta Jr's surprise they were moving. The blade of the scythe itself was a wicked silver, expertly sharpened for one sole purpose, and it sure wasn't cutting cornstalks. Vegeta Jr dropped down off the stone building, landing on all fours, Vegeta Jr slowly raised his head, "Your going back where you came from ugly" Vegeta Jr remarked. The Demon charged swinging its scythe aiming to severe Vegeta Jr's head from his body, Vegeta Jr rolled then sprang up kicking the Demon in the back then flipping over on to his feet, "Dodonpa!" Vegeta shouted, the Demon was blown backwards, Vegeta began pounding it relentlessly with Ki charged punches, the Demon began to retreat back down into the pit from which it came, but the Prince cut it off, "I changed my mind, the only way you are going back there is in pieces!" Vegeta Jr teased. The Demon swung again but the young Saiyan caught the scythe by the long wooden handle and ripped it from the Demons grasp, Vegeta Jr gripped the scythe tightly then swung down with all his might splitting the Demon in two with a large CRACK! Vegeta Jr threw the Scythe aside and picked up what was left f the Demon, the boy cast it into the flaming pit, sending it home, if you could call that home. The pit was still open, more Demons would come and he would not always be there to stop them, but get rid of them, you get rid of the problem. There was only one choice, good thing since Vegeta Jr wasn't good at choices, he leaped into the hole. Chapter 2:Guardians of the Gate Vegeta Jr landed on a hard rocky ground, fire danced up through the cracks in the ground licking at his toes, Vegeta Jr looked around himself, he was in a dead end hallway that curved off around a wall of brimstone. The smell was overpowering, it snaked its way up his nostrils like tiny little invisible eels, he held a gloved hand over his face to ward off the disgusting aroma and began to walk round the curving bend of the hall way. It opened out into a large room, at the other end was a large gate made out of some black metal, the metal gleamed despite the lack of a sun. A large three headed dog sat on its haunches, fire was forever hanging out of its mouth and its drool bubbled and frothed because of its boiling temperature, two Demons stood beside the large dog, obviously waiting to give it the orders. Vegeta Jr charged two Beam Balls then lobbed then leaned out into the doorway and lobbed the balls at the two Demons, he then darted back behind the doorway, he could hear the Demons scurry towards his hiding place, as soon as they came near he grabbed them and hurled them further back down the corridor away from the dog. Vegeta Jr drew the small sword around his waist and began to advance upon the two Demons, they charged in unison both their scythes coming down at the exact moment, he easily caught them both on the breathe of his sword and shoved them backwards, he ran jumping and twirling upwards, slashing his sword as he did so, the Demons brought up their scythes to stop the blow but his sword slashed right through their uniquely carved handles. The Demons looked at their broken scythes with a look of pure terror on their faces, a loud moaning escaped their closed rotting mouths and echoed right down the hallway, Vegeta Jr grabbed one of the Demons by the throat, smashing him into the wall, "WHAT DID YOU DO!?" he screamed at the Demon, The only reply he got was a low screeching sound, Vegeta Jr threw him into the opposite wall smashing him to pieces, he grabbed the other one and smashed a Beam Ball into his face, shattering its skull. A large roaring reverberated down the hallway, the dog was coming, Vegeta Jr sure did not want to be caught in its path without anywhere to dodge. He Power flew right out into the large room with the gate and skidded to a halt just before the dog closed off the hallway with its immense size. The young Saiyan pointed his index and middle finger at the dog and shouted, "Dodonpa!", The yellow beam speared its way towards the dog and exploded into its backside, the dog howled in pain and turned around to face Vegeta Jr, the Prince drew his sword and leaped into the air bringing his sword down straight into the dogs paw, the dog whimpered and rolled over, sucking its paw. Vegeta Jr instantly felt guilty, "Poor guy, you don't want to fight", Then he noticed a big red ball sitting the corner in a large fire proof cage, a key was needed, "Stay right here", Vegeta Jr pleaded and ran down the hall way, e searched among the remains of the Demons and found a small purple key, it had its on mystical glow about it, Vegeta Jr snatched it up and ran down the hallway. He leaped over the dog and shoved the key into the cages padlock, the lock gave a soft click and the door swung open, Vegeta Jr grabbed the big red ball and held it high in triumph. All three of the dogs heads rose into the air, ears raised. Then it sat up wagging its massive tail, making the ground shake. Vegeta Jr tossed the ball into the air, high above the dogs head, the dog leaped into the air catching the ball in one of its mouthes. It scampered over to the the Prince and placed the ball at his feet and backed up eagerly, this continued for quite a few hours. ~ ~ ~ Eventually Vegeta Jr's arms got tired and he sat down exhausted, "I am sorry, I can't play anymore, I have to get something done today." The dog whimpered and tipped all of its heads on its side, showing off its winning puppy dog face, "I will come back I promise" He tossed the ball one last time at the dog who caught it in one of its mouthes and began chewing it greedily. Vegeta walked up to the gate and placed both his hands upon the bottom bar, he hoisted with all this strength, then realizing there was no way he could get through, but the large dog came up beside him, and with its tongue it lifted the gate high. Vegeta Jr walked through patting one of the heads as he went. Chapter 3:Tartarus Vegeta Jr gazed at the humongous hall, blue spirits hovered about searching for their bodies, a large line was forming at a stall, a large metal safe was behind the stall, the spirits lined up, then one after the other they went into the safe, each time flame exploded out of the small cracks in the safe and the spirits came out as Demons, Vegeta Jr just stood watching the horrific process, they gave up their souls just to have a body again, it sickened him, down to the very core. He spotted a large door at the end of the hall and smaller doors leading off into the other places, Vegeta Jr choose a door and walked through it, he emerged out onto the edge of a lake, but no normal lake, it was a lake of lava. Islands were dotted round it, to his horror he could see the blue ghostly spirits writhing in the lava, large wraiths circled the lake, they held large swords, the hilts were covered in dark onyx stones which reflected the colour of the lava. The blade itself was serrated, the spikes a hairs breadth wide and the latter apart, when the spirits emerged from the lava the dark Wraiths struck them down with flashing hot lightning. The Wraiths themselves were completely cloaked in black, they didn't appeared to have legs, their long black cloaks just hung down sweeping the ground as they hovered, looking to cause pain and death. Their hands were black, similar to human hands, dexterous but large black and wicked. The nails were curved and lethal and their fingers much longer than normally seen. One hovered there, it was surrounded by a dark yellow aura, its sword hilt was embedded with rubies, their colour was magnified by the lavas eerie glow. A flashing hot white light caught the Saiyans eye, he turned to see a Wraith strike a spirit with white hot lightning from the tips of its spindly fingers, he saw more Wraiths do this, each time a spirit emerged they struck. The spirits screamed but no sound came out, their bodies writhed amongst the white electricity, pain filling their eyes. "I have to get out of here!" Vegeta shouted inside his head... Chapter 4:Escape All of a sudden the wraiths spotted him, they shrieked in delight and having a live specimen to torture, white hot lightning exploded right beside Vegeta Jr, he didn't wait to see where the next one hit, he sprinted out the door, momentarily disoriented he looked around for the entrance, he didn't get time as the door behind him exploded open, Wraiths poured out heading straight for him. Vegeta Jr took off into the air zooming straight towards the gate, the large three headed dog opened the gate for him, Vegeta Jr blasted through it and skidded to a halt. The dog let the gate shut just as the Wraiths reached it, they tried to blast it away with their lightning but it had no effect, then the Wraith with the dark yellow aura stepped up to the gate, he flung it upwards with incredible strength, he stepped through, glaring at the dog, then he raised its hand and fired a lightning charge at the dog, it yelped in pain, the Wraith Leader continued to flow the electricity through its fingertips at the dog, this was the perfect time to get away, he could just slip out. Vegeta Jr made to walk away, he made one last look back, he caught the pain in the dogs eyes, suddenly the dogs thoughts were his own, "Help me" it pleaded "Why aren't you helping me?" Vegeta Jr turned back, charging two yellow beams at the end of his fingers, he raised his hands and pointed the beams like a makeshift gun at the Wraith Leader, "TAKE THIS YOU FUCKING COWARD!!!" Vegeta yelled firing both beams at once straight into the Wraiths unprotected chest, the lightning stopped but his blast didn't seem to do anything. The Wraith Leader laughed and clicked his long spindly fingers, the Wraiths advanced on him, Vegeta Jr readied himself then ran forward swinging out catching the Wraith in the face, he kicked backwards pushing a Wraith backwards, he drew his sword and slashed out at a Wraith revealing its horrid face beneath the hood, there was no word to describe what it was, it was certainly faceless, no doubt a face, a mass of darkness, sadness and depression, screaming souls drifted around inside the dark entity. Vegeta Jr stabbed his sword straight into the dark entity that was its face, holes sprung about the Wraith, white light pouring out of the holes, then he imploded exploding from the outside in, the fire sent him crashing back into a wall, he could feel his skin begin to peel, then it ceased he could see the Wraiths not even slightly affected by it, they were about to strike him, Vegeta Jr parried and flipped to his feet behind them, he went to strike another but they overwhelmed him pinning his arms to his side. They brought him struggling to their leader. "You have put up quite a fight little one, but you will not be permitted to leave here alive, we can't let you live with the knowledge you have gained, we cannot let you ready the humans for our invasion." "What invasion?" Vegeta Jr asked, "The invasion that will bring your people to your knees, the invasion that will wipe you and your kind off the face of the Earth, we have done the calculations, we will succeed, you will not." The Leader replied, "And as punishment for wasting our time little one, you will watch your pet die, slowly." The Leader smirked and held out his hand, fingertips extended towards the dog, the Lightning was terrible, it lit the whole room in blinding white light, the light subsided but the lightning continued, the dog writhed in pain, the dog began to scream, Vegeta Jr screwed his eyes shut but found he could not, the dog writhed and struggled, blood began to form at the corner of its mouth, tears formed in Vegeta Jr's eyes, they rolled down his cheeks, "No leave him, don't hurt him, hurt me!" Vegeta Jr pleaded, But the Leader just put in more lightning, "YOU FUCKING BASTARD!" Vegeta screamed, The Leader just kept on going, Vegeta Jr's muscles tensed, he bent his head forward, his pupil and irises disappeared, he clenched his fists. "STOP THIS RIGHT NOW!!!" Vegeta Jr raised his head and stared directly into the Leaders hood face, a look of pure hatred formed on his face, "You...you...YOU WILL DIE!!!" he screamed, Lightning engulfed Vegeta Jr, zapping on then disappearing, his eyes returned, turning from blue to green, blue to green, his veins stood out on his hair flashed from black to gold, black to gold, then with an almighty roar he was engulfed in golden Ki, the Wraiths around him were thrown backwards, his hair rigid and golden, his eyes deep, dark and merciless projecting his hatred for the Wraiths, his eyes now Emerald Green. "There was one factor you missed in your calculation...ME!" Vegeta Jr lunged forward paying no heed to the lightning blasting into him, he grabbed the Leaders throat and smashed him into the wall, "You never fucking mess with a Saiyan, now you shall witness the true power of justice, in its purest form, I am now a Super Saiyan, I am Law, I am Justice, I will be your undoing." A Yellow Beam Ball was ready in his hands, it steadily grew larger, and larger, Vegeta Jr stepped back, and gently tossed the ball at the Wraith, the light was outstandingly bright, the light lasted for for three minutes, when it receded there was only piles of dust where the Wraiths had been, and Vegeta Jr, his eyes now blue, his hair now black was on the ground, his heart had stopped beating, he had stopped breathing, silence, blindness, nothing, just dead. His eyes forever open, gazing it nothing. ~ ~ ~ The dog gazed sadly at Vegeta Jr, what a tragedy, he died saving him, nobody had even cared about him before, nobody had ever helped him, played with him, his only companions had been the two Demons who would not let him have his ball, ever. The dog picked him up in one of its mouthes and carried him back up to Earth. The dog stood over him, he licked the small limp figure and stepped back and sat down, Vegeta Jr's heart stirred, it started to slowly beat, slowly at first but then faster, and faster, his lungs started to work and he coughed up blood, he lay down again, exhausted but alive. Chapter 5:It Begins... Vegeta gazed into the eyes of the dog that had saved him, he slowly sat up and struggled to his feet, "Come on dog, you can come to my house" Vegeta Jr told the dog, The dog reached up with one of its large heads and snapped a branch off a tree, it held the branch firmly in its mouth and began drawing in the sand, the dog backed away once it had finished, the dog had written a word, "Cerberus" Vegeta read out loud, "Oh your Cerberus", The dog nodded happily, "Well come on then Cerberus" Vegeta Jr began to limp back to his house with Cerberus trailing behind. Vegeta Jr's mum was not happy when she saw that he had brought a three headed dog home that breathed fire and came home looking like a train had run over him, eventually though she accepted that her son would not give up the dog and let him keep it. Vegeta Jr slept in the tree that night, Cerberus happily slept underneath the tree. The next day Vegeta Jr began to build a tree house with the help of Cerberus who helped him bring the wood needed up to the tree, over the next week Vegeta Jr had finished the Tree House, he had added a punching bag, a couch and a magazine rack for his comic's plus a small mattress for him to sleep on. Late one night Vegeta Jr was awoken by Cerberus barking at something, Vegeta Jr leaned out of the window in his Tree House, he reached for his scouter which he just realized was beeping, many different Power Levels were drawing near to his location, Vegeta Jr reached for his sword and sprang out of the tree sword infront of him guarding Cerberus. The Demons came into view first, a long line of them, then the Wraiths driving the Demons onwards, some of the Wraiths held leads which were connected to what Vegeta Jr recognized as Hell Hounds, they pulled the Wraiths along after the Demons. The invasion had begun... Chapter 6:Hunters become the Hunted The Invasion had begun... The invasion had begun and their first target was Vegeta Jr, they were the hunters, and he was being Hunted, but his favorite saying gave him hope, his light in the darkness, "The hunters become the Hunted", he repeated in his mind, He smiled at this, he would win, he had to, he would stop at nothing, they would fall before him. ~ ~ ~ They will fall, They will beg, They will plead, They will be heard, But there will be no mercy. ~ ~ ~ Vegeta charged sword held high, he ducked under the scythe of a Demon and brought his shoulder crashing into its chest shattering it completely, he slashed down severing the Demon in half, he swept the legs out from another and stabbed down into its skinless ribcage, he threw a Beam Ball into the midst of all the Demons, then he clashed swords with a Wraith kicking the Hell Hound away, he stepped back slashing again at the Wraith who expertly caught the blade on his own, the Wraith used his free hand to blast Vegeta Jr back with a jolt of lightning, he flipped back to his feet and charged again, this time he feinted the blow and ducked low stabbing up into where the Wraiths groin should of been. It had no effect whatsoever, the Cerberus charged at the Demons, full well knowing he couldn't take on the Wraiths and their terrible lightning attacks. So Cerberus began crunching and clawing away at the Demons, but the Wraiths began to close in, Vegeta Jr punched then off but they tied his arms behind his back, then a Wraith, wielding the Leaders sword prepared to drive it through his heart. "You could of chosen a better date" Vegeta Jr said, The Wraith with the sword looked at him puzzled, Vegeta Jr nodded up to the sky, a cloud, a massive cloud moved out of the way revealing a full moon. Vegeta Jr smiled, "Goodbye Demons!" Vegeta Jr began to grow, his muscles grew, hair formed all over his body, a tail sprouted out from his tail bone, soon he was a giant ape, it would be complete simplicity to just crush them all, he formed a Beam Ball in his hand, but instead of the usual tiny ball it was massive, city sized, he scooped Cerberus up in his large hand then he dropped the Beam Ball, the ground lit up blue, vaporizing every Demon, Hell Hound and Wraith, the Blast reached up to Vegeta' waist. The Invasion had been faced, The Hunters had been Hunted. |
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| Alex | Mar 11 2008, 08:39 AM Post #2 |
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Someone has a bit too much time on his hands.... |
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| Jed | Mar 13 2008, 09:14 AM Post #3 |
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Writing is one of my hobbies...like your's is Photoshop. Mine are: writing and wanking xD. |
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| Alex | Mar 13 2008, 10:30 AM Post #4 |
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You must have very strong wrists lol |
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| Jed | Mar 14 2008, 02:53 AM Post #5 |
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I'm a Ninja. Strength means nothing. Speed means everything...64WPM FTW! |
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| Alex | Mar 14 2008, 04:51 AM Post #6 |
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Turn your hax off then do it =p |
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| Jed | Mar 14 2008, 05:23 AM Post #7 |
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Well then, if we turned your's off you would be cruising along at a steady 5WPM. |
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