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Epilogue; Post NXT Promo
Topic Started: Jan 15 2011, 03:44 PM (87 Views)
Picture Perfect 572
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Shortly after the tag tournament, Mitch Green and Razor Sharp are in the locker room discussing the recent events

MG: Sharp, we did really good. Even though we didn't beat Fish Boy and his less than talented rookie, We made it to the finals. Let's keep an eye on those two.
As MG is about to leave the locker room he stops he looks at his pro. MG:Next week I gotta do an interview. You mind if I heard some of your secrets?
MG waits for an answer from Razor
0p3n t0 Razor


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Razor Sharp
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OOC: Ok we need to talk soon to help expand on your promos.

First off space out your lines. Don't clump everything in one paragraph. Makes it easier to read.

Secondly, pick a color to represent dialogue from your character. For example this looks better.

Sharp, we did really good. Even though we didn't beat Fish Boy and his less than talented rookie, We made it to the finals. Let's keep an eye on those two.

It also makes your dialogue stick out more to the readers.

Third, you should add more detail to the non-dialogue part. Explain what Mitch is doing post match. His actions, his feelings, his body language. I'm sure he's gonna be a little pissed off in not getting a 2-win advantage over the competition. Emote it in the writing. It doesn't have to be as long as mine or some of the other pros, but a good start is a nice 2-3 paragraphs.

Lastly stay within your gimmick. I'm a cocky self-annointed chosen one. I try to act like that in my promos. I'm not sure what your gimmick is in the promo, and the readers need to see this.

If you have anymore questions, PM me.
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Chris Cryptic
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Very good advice Razor, its obvious why you were chosen to be a pro. Like he said man, you have a great pro so I suggest you take his advice and If you do youll improve greatly. Good luck on nextgen hope to see some promos in the near future!
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