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| Topic Started: Nov 12 2007, 08:52 PM (363 Views) | |
| Envoy Of The End | Nov 12 2007, 08:52 PM Post #1 |
and you believe
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Name: Saburou Gender: Male Starter Pokemon:  (Tsubaksi Male Level 5 Sonicboom, Growl, Water Sport, Quick Attack ) Alliance: Nightstar Alliance Description of self/other: Son of King Naksiti. Saburou was cast out as an outlaw from birth when being born with a curse marking. He was left on a hill to die. As a mirical, this 'curse' protected him from wild animals, diease and kept him nourished. Taken in by a sheperding family and christaned Saborou. He was taught English as a first language. This sheperding family happened to be part of the Nightstar Alliance. Upon stumbling on the truth one day when hearing his 'parents' overtalking, he dressed into a large brown robe and fled. That night was a stormy night. He was knocked down by lightning by chance, and fell into a river, where a Buizel saved him from drowning. He is still part of the Nightstar Alliance, but will never be true to it. Fancsinated by trainers, he strived to become one and chose his Buizel, nicknamed Tsubaski, to be his partner. --- Long, white hair reaching down to chest. Bangs over pale face. Black eyes. Pale skin (as mentioned before). Around 5"9' in height. Long, black robe. --- Sorry that it's kind of brief. |
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| Zephyr | Nov 12 2007, 09:49 PM Post #2 |
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That's not at all brief. It's excellent. ^^ Nice job-- feel free to create your Trainer card and begin your journey. |
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| Shadow | Nov 12 2007, 09:50 PM Post #3 |
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xD It could have been briefer. You have a physical description, a history, and a personality, that's pretty good. Though, does the "curse" affect how he lives today? As long as it doesn't give him any supernatural powers, I think it's fine, but I'll let Kronakitty have the final say in that. Otherwise, everything looks good, you're accepted! =) Edit: Ahaha, Zephyr beat me to it. =P |
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| Envoy Of The End | Nov 13 2007, 05:49 PM Post #4 |
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Thankyou. About the curse; no, it seems to be unactive at the moment. Can I do the TC later? I'm pretty tired at the moment. ^^ |
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| Kronakitty | Nov 13 2007, 10:56 PM Post #5 |
shining gate!
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Sure~ You can start whenever you'd like :3 |
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