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| Darkstar707 | Jun 1 2009, 12:41:40 AM Post #1 |
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Missing In Action, Assumed Killed.
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Meh, figured I would add some of my poems here. I personally favor this one atm: “Fire” D. Renewing world with life, D. Yet causing much strife, E. Coursing through earth’s veins, F. A hunger nothing can sate, F. Burning with an unstoppable hate, E. Fire’s iron will reigns, A. Eternal embers so bright, A. Like flames of pure light, B. Burning as the sun, C. Flaming tongues of fire, C. Purging thief and liar, B. Burning flames run, G. Flowing through the ages, G. Consuming historic pages, H. Never ceasing to rest, I. Spanning the endless years, I. Sparking all our fears, H. Fire, putting the world to the test, L. Ravaging destroyer of all things, L. How the burning flame sings, K. Causing all to flee. J. All consuming ancient power, J. Burning field and flower, K. Alighting all you see, Note the 1337 rhyming scheme. |
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If MySpace had a system failure and completely crashed, 90% of today's teens would die. 9% would laugh untill they no longer could and 1% would die from laughing. If you are part of the 1% that would die from laughing so hard, copy and paste the whole thing into your signature. MJ IS DEAD!!. | |
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| Jubal | Jun 1 2009, 03:51:15 PM Post #2 |
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Nice, I like it. |
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| Darkstar707 | Jun 20 2009, 04:50:45 AM Post #3 |
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Missing In Action, Assumed Killed.
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Thanks. Here is another one I wrote up hastily, hope you like it. We are the guardians of a Empire. Selected out of millions for a need most dire. We pledged ourselves to our sire. Bred for protecting our people. Now all alone under the star-filled sky. Listening to the night go by. Peace's perfection broken by a screeching cry! They are awake. Like shadows in the dark they crept. For centuries they had slept. A secret that has long been kept. Creatures as terrifying as death itself Now the dreaded ones are here. Destroying all that we once held dear. Unleashing an age of hate and fear. Our time has finally come. Wake the warriors from bed. Let the storm crows fly overhead! Let the skys and fields run red! Our time is here! I dislike the feel of this one at the moment, going to add a better rhyming scheme with better rhymes and more coherence. I actually have many other better poems, but they are all of a personal make
Edited by Darkstar707, Jun 20 2009, 05:20:46 AM.
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If MySpace had a system failure and completely crashed, 90% of today's teens would die. 9% would laugh untill they no longer could and 1% would die from laughing. If you are part of the 1% that would die from laughing so hard, copy and paste the whole thing into your signature. MJ IS DEAD!!. | |
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