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To Kirilee; fuking long poem
Topic Started: Aug 10 2007, 02:17 AM (124 Views)
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To Kirilee


Sorry if you think I’m a DIC
Soz I can be a prick
When mason tries to ruin my life
Trying to make me go slice and dice with a knife
On his AS*
Fuk it I will just throw his out of class
If he can’t do nothing but tell lies
Then by my hands he will die
But back to the topic I love u
And I hope u feel that way too
In the day of u I day-dream
And in the night of u I dream


Fuk it
Its time for the free verse
So I can tell u how I truly feel
I love u so much
I would go to hell and back
I would fight hell’s army by myself
I would take a bullet for u
I would die for u
I would give up my love for u
If it is what would my u happy
If u r sad
I would be there to cheer u up
If you r depressed
I would be there for u
If you need help
I would be there for u


I will be at the lover’s tree
Waiting for u
Cause I love u
And I know u like me
I understand now
The lover’s tree
It’s the heart
Its ur heart
And it’s my heart
It’s your love
And it’s my love
So
I’ll be waiting
At lover’s tree

With u I’m no cheater
Love is sweet but u r sweeter
If my love is a disease u would be its treater

You truly r perfect
Your eyes
Your hair
Your lips
Your voice
Your body
If I could change on part of you
It would be impossible
Cause there’s nothing I would change
As I said before
You’re perfect

This poem is big
But
Not as big as my love for u

Here
Take this rose
Complements of the lover’s tree
No
I’m not making for of u and ur poem
But I’ve been down to lover’s tree
So last time I was there
I got u a gift
This is not just a rose
This rose is my soul
My love
My heart

I may gamble with death
Suicide is a weapon
Life is a game to me
But u r my life
But u r no game
U r the one
So understand

It’s not over yet
I love u Kiri
How do u feel for me
I’ve only known for
8 month
Yet I’m am deeply in love
With u
This princess like person
Do we seem like a good
Pair?

Princess/warrior
Sweet/demonic
Pop/heavy metal
Sings/raps
Normal/sort of pyro
Doesn’t make sense
Y do I love u
U r the only one I truly love


Every time u look at me
I day-dream about
Asking u out
Kissing u
So on so 4th
What do u think
When I stare at u

The rest of my poems will be about love death suicide
But most will be about u
Cause I love u Kiri

Never mind what
Maddy says
No matter what
Mason says
Or what any one else
Says
I love u
And will forever

So plz forgive me
For mistake
I’m only human
And plz remember
The only
Words I’m afraid
To say to your face
I love u
So Kiri
I love u
And will never forget u
Unless u want me to
I will love u for ever
Unless u don’t want me to

So Kirilee
Ummm
It’s a bit weird
To ask in a poem
But
Will u go out with me
Just think about It
Cause I love
U
Till ur reply
Good bye

luv luv u
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kevin
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well done lol
Women might be able to fake orgasms. But men can fake a whole relationship easily
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jamaicanstud
Aug 11 2007, 12:20 AM
well done lol

lol
thx thumb up

i love her so much
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jamaicanstud
Aug 11 2007, 12:20 AM
well done lol

I really dont like this poem it makes me cry and I hope u kno y
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Jazmine
Aug 25 2007, 04:02 PM
jamaicanstud
Aug 11 2007, 12:20 AM
well done lol

I really dont like this poem it makes me cry and I hope u kno y

soz if it makes u cry but member that DIC hacked ur account and said u hated me and i thourght it was u so sorry
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