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A Suicide Note
Topic Started: Aug 12 2007, 09:12 PM (103 Views)
the-queen-of-pain
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Dear officer

For you’ll be the only one who might care
probably just because you got stuck with the paper work
Sorry about that.
Well what should I say?
They sure don’t teach you how to write a suicide note in school, now do they?
I’d say I’m sorry,
but I’m not.
I would like to ask you but one favor,
if that is all right.
Can you ask her (my mother) if she knew I was depressed:
If she says yes ask her why she didn’t do anything.
If she says no that ask her how she didn’t notice my last 5 suicide attempts,
its pretty hard to miss stuff like that.
I’ve been suicidal since grade 6 or 7.

Thank you for your time, officer.
Once again sorry about the paper work.
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pinkk_pinkk
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this is sooo troubled
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Kissiq
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is this for real.. of just a past time thing. if its real.. u need some help still.. been there.
if its a pass time thing... keep up the good work. funny poem
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demongirl416
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do you have a poemhunter account and if so, is this poem on it, it sounds very familiar

If you do have a poemhunter account, check my poems out

http://poemhunter.com/rebecca-lee/
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Lady G
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A little dark I must say, but pretty close to reality.
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Venomous
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the-queen-of-pain
Aug 12 2007, 09:12 PM
Dear officer

For you’ll be the only one who might care
probably just because you got stuck with the paper work
Sorry about that.
Well what should I say?
They sure don’t teach you how to write a suicide note in school, now do they?
I’d say I’m sorry,
but I’m not.
I would like to ask you but one favor,
if that is all right.
Can you ask her (my mother) if she knew I was depressed:
If she says yes ask her why she didn’t do anything.
If she says no that ask her how she didn’t notice my last 5 suicide attempts,
its pretty hard to miss stuff like that.
I’ve been suicidal since grade 6 or 7.

Thank you for your time, officer.
Once again sorry about the paper work.

thats a poem??

look like a little note to me
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mz_big_booty07
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I DID A NOTE LIKE THAT BEFORE.SO I CAN UNDERSTAND WHERE THAT POEM IS COMING FROM
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Venomous
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mz_big_booty07
Aug 16 2007, 12:00 PM
I DID A NOTE LIKE THAT BEFORE.SO I CAN UNDERSTAND WHERE THAT POEM IS COMING FROM

y u did that note??
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mz_big_booty07
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Venomous
Aug 16 2007, 07:22 PM
mz_big_booty07
Aug 16 2007, 12:00 PM
I DID A NOTE LIKE THAT BEFORE.SO I CAN UNDERSTAND WHERE THAT POEM IS COMING FROM

y u did that note??

CAZU I WA HURT AND NO ONE WANTED TO BELIVER ME AND IT HAD HURT SO BAD THAT I DIDN'T KNO WHAT ELSE OR WHO ELSE I COULD OF TELL OR WHO WOULD HAVE BELIVE ME.
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