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Joint Poem; The poem of many poets...
Topic Started: Jan 10 2007, 04:31 PM (878 Views)
Stargirl	Jan 10 2007, 04:31 PM Post #1
... Posts: 3,033 Group: Members Member #52 Joined: May 1, 2006	Excuse the bad title- Couldn't think of a name Ok, Everyone knows what's happening. Dela starts, then Elder, then Luna then Mirai and then me ..Two guys, two girls and an in-betweener ::Updated:: So far we have: I'm too distraught to understand why the green has become gray Nature's monoliths drowning in cold steel and venom It seems the beauty has gone astray What has been disposed, has been thrusted into a plenum The air has gone, and no birds sing The world is concrete so we look to the starlight for fertility From this man-ravaged orb of which we call ourselves king Darkness covers the land as far as the eye can see A destruction of peace and serenity- Damned from here on Where the life is taken to feed their soul's hunger And harmonious dreams have only dunes to roam upon When all once revered is torn asunder Life shattered, and no hope remains



Del	Jan 10 2007, 05:17 PM Post #2
Kami Posts: 9,079 Group: Members Member #9 Joined: April 10, 2006	I'm too distraught to understand why the green has become gray



Thrash Til' Death	Jan 10 2007, 05:57 PM Post #3
"You will love Avatar! YOU WILL LOVE AVATAR!" Posts: 5,385 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: April 9, 2006	Nature's monoliths drowning in cold steel and venom
	The Thrasher's Word: Sky Blue Video Review Thanks to Vegeta for the banner. "There's a reason backstory is backstory: it's backstory!" - Mark Kermode


Luna	Jan 10 2007, 09:46 PM Post #4
Super Saiyan Posts: 3,578 Group: Global Moderator Member #34 Joined: April 21, 2006	It seems the beauty has gone astray



teh evilz	Jan 11 2007, 05:12 PM Post #5
Kami Posts: 7,055 Group: Members Member #21 Joined: April 16, 2006	What has been disposed, has been thrusted into a plenum



Stargirl	Jan 13 2007, 10:57 AM Post #6
... Posts: 3,033 Group: Members Member #52 Joined: May 1, 2006	The air has gone, and no birds sing



Del	Jan 13 2007, 11:05 AM Post #7
Kami Posts: 9,079 Group: Members Member #9 Joined: April 10, 2006	The world is concrete so we look to the starlight for fertility



Thrash Til' Death	Jan 13 2007, 12:08 PM Post #8
"You will love Avatar! YOU WILL LOVE AVATAR!" Posts: 5,385 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: April 9, 2006	And see but a reflection of the desolation we invoked
	The Thrasher's Word: Sky Blue Video Review Thanks to Vegeta for the banner. "There's a reason backstory is backstory: it's backstory!" - Mark Kermode


Del	Jan 13 2007, 12:20 PM Post #9
Kami Posts: 9,079 Group: Members Member #9 Joined: April 10, 2006	The Elder Jan 13 2007, 01:08 PM And see but a reflection of the desolation we invoked Are we keeping to the "ababcdcdefef..." rhyme scheme or no?



Luna	Jan 13 2007, 12:25 PM Post #10
Super Saiyan Posts: 3,578 Group: Global Moderator Member #34 Joined: April 21, 2006	Destruction before my eyes, and I can't help but wonder, how can this be? I don't think we have a rhyme scheme going, I was trying to rhyme...



Del	Jan 13 2007, 12:33 PM Post #11
Kami Posts: 9,079 Group: Members Member #9 Joined: April 10, 2006	We...definitely had that rhyme scheme going... I'm too distraught to understand why the green has become gray Nature's monoliths drowning in cold steel and venom It seems the beauty has gone astray What has been disposed, has been thrusted into a plenum If we were to keep to that, The Elder's line should have rhymed with Star's and Luna's should have rhymed with mine.



Luna	Jan 13 2007, 12:49 PM Post #12
Super Saiyan Posts: 3,578 Group: Global Moderator Member #34 Joined: April 21, 2006	Ok, I edited my last line to rhyme with Del's line.



teh evilz	Jan 13 2007, 04:02 PM Post #13
Kami Posts: 7,055 Group: Members Member #21 Joined: April 16, 2006	Should I just carry on and rhyme Elder's, or is he going to have to rhyme stars? X_X



Del	Jan 13 2007, 04:13 PM Post #14
Kami Posts: 9,079 Group: Members Member #9 Joined: April 10, 2006	I call do-overs...



teh evilz	Jan 13 2007, 05:30 PM Post #15
Kami Posts: 7,055 Group: Members Member #21 Joined: April 16, 2006	... Twiddles thumbs ... I Agree. Do-Overs would be best.


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