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Joint Poem; The poem of many poets...
Topic Started: Jan 10 2007, 04:31 PM (877 Views)
Del	Feb 4 2007, 05:36 PM Post #46
Kami Posts: 9,079 Group: Members Member #9 Joined: April 10, 2006	Uh...somebody gather all the lines together. I'm on the verge of ending this poem, though we may need only one or two or so conclusion lines. We've pretty much pulled out all there is pertaining to this subject. We can start a another joint poem again in the future with more order and less confusion.
Luna	Feb 4 2007, 05:46 PM Post #47
Super Saiyan Posts: 3,578 Group: Global Moderator Member #34 Joined: April 21, 2006	I'm too distraught to understand why the green has become gray Nature's monoliths drowning in cold steel and venom It seems the beauty has gone astray What has been disposed, has been thrusted into a plenum The air has gone, and no birds sing The world is concrete so we look to the starlight for fertility From this man-ravaged orb of which we call ourselves king Darkness covers the land as far as the eye can see A destruction of peace and serenity- Damned from here on Where the life is taken to feed their soul's hunger And harmonious dreams have only dunes to roam upon When all once revered is torn asunder Life shattered, and no hope remains Hopefully that is all right, this topic, only about 3 pages long... is sheer confusion.
Del	Feb 5 2007, 03:38 PM Post #48
Kami Posts: 9,079 Group: Members Member #9 Joined: April 10, 2006	Who's next? If we're doing a Sonnet, then there's only one line left. And it MUST rhyme with "Life shattered, and no hope remains"
Luna	Feb 5 2007, 04:25 PM Post #49
Super Saiyan Posts: 3,578 Group: Global Moderator Member #34 Joined: April 21, 2006	I believe Mirai, but he already stated he is leaving, and he gave up his turn. So who ever is after Mirai, which I thought was you Del, would have the last line. Edit: Nope it's Stargirl, but didn't she say she is leaving too? Unless Stargirl makes another line, Del you finish it.
Stargirl	Jun 20 2007, 03:22 PM Post #50
... Posts: 3,033 Group: Members Member #52 Joined: May 1, 2006	Life now gone is left for the healing of the rain. I decided to end it there, unless someone wants to continue, if so, then my line will be [Fresh space left for more malice and spite] Vamos a continuar? Sí o no? Si sí, continuaremos a z. Jeez such lazy lazy people tut tut..

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