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What Used To Be.
Topic Started: Jan 24 2008, 08:26 PM (317 Views)
Luna
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Your lonely soul wanders in the night,
No longer do you know the difference between wrong and right.
You are so close, yet so far away,
The path before you seems lost, and you can't find your way.
Your back has turned on me,
Everyone around seems to agree.
You are the only one who can't see.
You've lost all sense of direction,
What happened to my hero, my protection.
I can no longer turn to you,
for you are no longer the person I knew.
I am no longer one of your top priorities.
I am only in your way.
I wonder if things will ever be what they used to be.
From the pain and doubt I want to be free.
I want our lives back on track,
I want my hero back,
I want my daddy back.
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Now that was deep...
Goodjob! :)
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Luna
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Thank you.
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You should put up more! :)
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Luna
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I have many up already, they are probably a few pages back by now. This is like the first poem I've written in awhile, so the flow isn't to good. But the emotion is real.

Well thank you anyway! I take it as a compliment. And I'm glad someone enjoys my poetry. I'll try to put more up.
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Hehe. ;)
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The Saiyan of hope
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Deep, insightful, and touching. Very good! :)
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It's very heavy, man...
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Luna
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Thanks guys. Really. I didn't think it was the great...
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Well.. I like dark poetry.. thats why i was drawn to it. :D

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Luna
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Well, I tend to be only able to write 'dark poetry'. As hard as I've tried to write happy ones, they sound like a two year old with a box of crayons just wrote it.
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lol - happiness is over-rated.
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Jan 28 2008, 09:01 AM
lol - happiness is over-rated.

So is despair. ;)

But it was a good poem. Nice work Luna :kakashi:

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Oh I can so relate... :(
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