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| Topic Started: Jan 24 2008, 08:26 PM (317 Views) | |
| Luna | Jan 24 2008, 08:26 PM Post #1 |
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Your lonely soul wanders in the night, No longer do you know the difference between wrong and right. You are so close, yet so far away, The path before you seems lost, and you can't find your way. Your back has turned on me, Everyone around seems to agree. You are the only one who can't see. You've lost all sense of direction, What happened to my hero, my protection. I can no longer turn to you, for you are no longer the person I knew. I am no longer one of your top priorities. I am only in your way. I wonder if things will ever be what they used to be. From the pain and doubt I want to be free. I want our lives back on track, I want my hero back, I want my daddy back. |
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| Cro | Jan 25 2008, 02:50 AM Post #2 |
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Now that was deep... Goodjob!
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| Luna | Jan 25 2008, 08:01 AM Post #3 |
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Thank you. |
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| Cro | Jan 25 2008, 10:18 AM Post #4 |
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You should put up more!
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| Luna | Jan 25 2008, 10:43 AM Post #5 |
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I have many up already, they are probably a few pages back by now. This is like the first poem I've written in awhile, so the flow isn't to good. But the emotion is real. Well thank you anyway! I take it as a compliment. And I'm glad someone enjoys my poetry. I'll try to put more up. |
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| Cro | Jan 25 2008, 11:18 AM Post #6 |
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Hehe.
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| SuperSaiyan3Goku | Jan 27 2008, 01:51 PM Post #7 |
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Deep, insightful, and touching. Very good!
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| Cro | Jan 27 2008, 03:56 PM Post #8 |
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It's very heavy, man... |
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| Luna | Jan 27 2008, 04:20 PM Post #9 |
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Thanks guys. Really. I didn't think it was the great... |
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| Cro | Jan 27 2008, 05:35 PM Post #10 |
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Well.. I like dark poetry.. thats why i was drawn to it.
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| Luna | Jan 28 2008, 08:44 AM Post #11 |
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Well, I tend to be only able to write 'dark poetry'. As hard as I've tried to write happy ones, they sound like a two year old with a box of crayons just wrote it. |
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| Cro | Jan 28 2008, 09:01 AM Post #12 |
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lol - happiness is over-rated. |
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| Nannerpus | Jan 28 2008, 10:31 PM Post #13 |
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So is despair. But it was a good poem. Nice work Luna :kakashi: |
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| Otaku_Kawaii86 | Feb 7 2008, 12:11 PM Post #14 |
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Heather, what's a rubber?
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Oh I can so relate...
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