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Topic Started: Mar 7 2008, 08:10 PM (229 Views)
Luna	Mar 7 2008, 08:10 PM Post #1
Super Saiyan Posts: 3,578 Group: Global Moderator Member #34 Joined: April 21, 2006	ai betsuriku (for Inuyasha) - Vegetasgirl Lost Paradise - Luna The Crow Flys Again - Cro Otakon Sonnet - Otaku_Kawaii86 WINNER! ___________________________ Congrats Otaku, you won by a landslide! Haha! :yayzorz: Mine was predictable, and my ending was super rushed, I pushed out the last half in a hurry, and I don't like it at all.



Cro	Mar 7 2008, 09:44 PM Post #2
Autobot Posts: 965 Group: Members Member #1,079 Joined: October 16, 2007	Way to go, Otaku_Kawaii86!! =D For the only one that voted for me.. Thank you lol
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superdedon	Mar 8 2008, 12:03 PM Post #3
Autobot Posts: 619 Group: Members Member #1,139 Joined: November 6, 2007	Totally knew it was her poem. Congrats O_K, you deserve it. [EDIT] Your welcome crow.



Vegetasgirl	Mar 9 2008, 01:20 AM Post #4
Kami Posts: 5,113 Group: Members Member #283 Joined: December 10, 2006	I knew it too! Congrats Otaku!!



Del	Mar 9 2008, 08:47 AM Post #5
Kami Posts: 9,079 Group: Members Member #9 Joined: April 10, 2006	All of the poems were actually pretty decent this time around. ai betsuriku had some cute diction but to be honest I can't take a poem about Inuyasha seriously. Some advice to Luna. It's not my place to tell you how to write, but the basic aabbcc rhyme scheme is killing you. Don't limit yourself as much next time. Cro's had some potential. I was really liking it. Especially the first stanza. But then it kinda turned into a story. Like a memoriam to a superhero lol. And trying to tell a contemporary story through poetry without it sounding cheesy is very hard to do. I voted for Otaku's. It was clever and original, and it made good use of the ababab rhyme scheme.



Luna	Mar 9 2008, 09:06 AM Post #6
Super Saiyan Posts: 3,578 Group: Global Moderator Member #34 Joined: April 21, 2006	Del Mar 9 2008, 08:47 AM Some advice to Luna. It's not my place to tell you how to write, but the basic aabbcc rhyme scheme is killing you. Don't limit yourself as much next time. I know, I know.. 1) My in depth two year long writers block. 2) I was never really taught any other way. I could read and figure it out, and I should. I think I'm just making excuses for myself. I fancy myself a good poet, and I'm starting to think it isn't my thang. Never was. I was in denial, and now I think I'm starting to see.



Del	Mar 9 2008, 09:44 AM Post #7
Kami Posts: 9,079 Group: Members Member #9 Joined: April 10, 2006	Well, I don't mean to pick a different or more complex scheme. It could be in fact no scheme at all.



Otaku_Kawaii86	Mar 9 2008, 10:05 PM Post #8
Heather, what's a rubber? Posts: 3,058 Group: Global Moderator Member #22 Joined: April 16, 2006	@_@!!! They love me, they really love me!!! Thank you so much everyone! I didn't think I'd win really! :peanutbutterjellytime:



Cro	Mar 10 2008, 03:56 PM Post #9
Autobot Posts: 965 Group: Members Member #1,079 Joined: October 16, 2007	I never lost a poetry contest to a girl.... This is a very weird feeling.. There's always next time. Maybe I should have used a more recent poem. lulz. Yes, they really love you. I was just trying to be nice.. j/k :saiyanpower:
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Member No. 483	Mar 10 2008, 04:24 PM Post #10
Super Saiyan Posts: 1,010 Group: Members Member #735 Joined: August 11, 2007	Cro Mar 10 2008, 03:56 PM I never lost a poetry contest to a girl.... This is a very weird feeling.. A girl defeating a man? Impossible! What next? Women's suffrage!? But seriously. Congratulations Otaku_Kawaii, I voted for your poem. It reminded me of my times at Otakon with my friends.



Cro	Mar 10 2008, 06:08 PM Post #11
Autobot Posts: 965 Group: Members Member #1,079 Joined: October 16, 2007	I hope theres another one of these, soon. :kakashi:
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