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Black Sky
Topic Started: Feb 16 2009, 03:54 PM (47 Views)
Frankie Feb 16 2009, 03:54 PM Post #1
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 Ok, this came out as you read it, i only changed two or three words, but it's not built or something.

i was doing some math homework today, and i got sleepy (as always) and this vision flashed in my mind.


-Black Sky-

A dark day.
The sky is black.
A dark day.
The air is still.
A dark day,
moisture in the air.
Dark Day -

There's people with me
in a dark place
in my mind

i imagine
i see

A vision of black sky
And still air.

A still world after the end.

The vision fades-

I'm here again
And inside me,
A black sky
and still air

And i wonder
if it's future or past

That dark day
With lost souls,
in a still air.
Edited by Frankie, Feb 16 2009, 03:55 PM.
Omnia enim stolidi magis admirantur amantque,
inversis quae sub verbis latitantia cernunt,
veraque constituunt quae belle tangere possunt
auris et lepido quae sunt fucata sonore.

Indeed, the stupid most admire and love all
that is scarcely discernible, hidden by abstruse words,
and accept as true all things that sweetly caress
the ear, and that are masked by a pleasant sound.

--Titus Lucretius, De Rerum Natura, circa 80 B.C.--
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Vegetasgirl Feb 18 2009, 08:07 PM Post #2
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 I like it. It has a nice flow. I think some of the best poetry comes out of nowhere when your not really thinking about it or trying too hard.
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